Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
No beef
dusk arising said:
Sometimes certain mens actions can lead you to believe you are a quite different animal, or they are the sub-species. I\'ve been lucky in similar situations having the appearance of looking like a lot more trouble than i actually am. Respect to you Dan... walk away every time. you are above such low-brow activity. A clear and thoughtful piece showing your frustration at the madness of the street corner for it does not bade well for our goal of peace on earth.
September 3rd, 2017 06:45
dusk arising said:
Sometimes certain mens actions can lead you to believe you are a quite different animal, or they are the sub-species. I\'ve been lucky in similar situations having the appearance of looking like a lot more trouble than i actually am. Respect to you Dan... walk away every time. you are above such low-brow activity. A clear and thoughtful piece showing your frustration at the madness of the street corner for it does not bade well for our goal of peace on earth.
September 3rd, 2017 06:45
I have the power
FredPeyer said:
While I did not have the challenges you had, your writing resonates with me as well. Life is a journey of self-discovery and you are fortunate to have arrived at the point where you now are. But the journey goes on and we never stop learning!
September 2nd, 2017 13:30
FredPeyer said:
While I did not have the challenges you had, your writing resonates with me as well. Life is a journey of self-discovery and you are fortunate to have arrived at the point where you now are. But the journey goes on and we never stop learning!
September 2nd, 2017 13:30
I have the power
poetboy123 said:
Regardless of when you were lost, you found yourself again, not within a system, but within yourself. Immense respect bro and please do keep up the writing.
September 2nd, 2017 11:20
poetboy123 said:
Regardless of when you were lost, you found yourself again, not within a system, but within yourself. Immense respect bro and please do keep up the writing.
September 2nd, 2017 11:20
I have the power
dusk arising said:
Good writing. The self healing within your writing is profound. There are those here who do believe this earthly existence is only a part of the whole as you suggest, and we will move on into the spirit world to be reborn to tread another lesson path. Very good writing and with clarity here. Please comment on some of my stuff
September 2nd, 2017 05:55
dusk arising said:
Good writing. The self healing within your writing is profound. There are those here who do believe this earthly existence is only a part of the whole as you suggest, and we will move on into the spirit world to be reborn to tread another lesson path. Very good writing and with clarity here. Please comment on some of my stuff
September 2nd, 2017 05:55
How do you play
dusk arising said:
Little gems of wisdom brought together to make an impactful read sir. Good thought and writing.
September 1st, 2017 19:40
dusk arising said:
Little gems of wisdom brought together to make an impactful read sir. Good thought and writing.
September 1st, 2017 19:40
How do you play
FredPeyer said:
And you did exactly what you wrote in the last stanza! Perfectly done, great poem, great subject, full of meaning and thought provoking.
September 1st, 2017 12:09
FredPeyer said:
And you did exactly what you wrote in the last stanza! Perfectly done, great poem, great subject, full of meaning and thought provoking.
September 1st, 2017 12:09
How do you play
poetboy123 said:
An inspiring and thought-provoking piece, as great as always!
September 1st, 2017 10:06
poetboy123 said:
An inspiring and thought-provoking piece, as great as always!
September 1st, 2017 10:06
Son from another ragguan
FredPeyer said:
A beautiful poem and a beautiful message from father to son.
Well done, PD!
August 30th, 2017 14:14
FredPeyer said:
A beautiful poem and a beautiful message from father to son.
Well done, PD!
August 30th, 2017 14:14
To all out there
FredPeyer said:
Great writing, P D! Now if only everybody in this world would think like you, we would have a much better place!
August 29th, 2017 11:50
FredPeyer said:
Great writing, P D! Now if only everybody in this world would think like you, we would have a much better place!
August 29th, 2017 11:50
To all out there
lasergraph said:
The world has become our family these days. Good write.
August 29th, 2017 09:11
lasergraph said:
The world has become our family these days. Good write.
August 29th, 2017 09:11
Shoulder exercises
FredPeyer said:
Just keep on giving them all that love! My kids are now married, have children themselves and told me that only now do they realize how much love they got when they were teenagers.
August 29th, 2017 02:35
FredPeyer said:
Just keep on giving them all that love! My kids are now married, have children themselves and told me that only now do they realize how much love they got when they were teenagers.
August 29th, 2017 02:35
Shoulder exercises
dusk arising said:
Your honesty here shows such love and care for the fragile wellbeing of all three of you.Clearly theres soo much love here. Will this much caring and goodwill you\'ll have every chance of success and i hope youre going to be writing about your grandchildren with as much care and love in future years. Truly an excellent write with so much feeling within.
August 28th, 2017 11:30
dusk arising said:
Your honesty here shows such love and care for the fragile wellbeing of all three of you.Clearly theres soo much love here. Will this much caring and goodwill you\'ll have every chance of success and i hope youre going to be writing about your grandchildren with as much care and love in future years. Truly an excellent write with so much feeling within.
August 28th, 2017 11:30
Ubuntu
FredPeyer said:
After reading your incredible poem, PD, I looked up the meaning (dictionary) of Ubuntu: \'a quality that includes the essential human virtues; compassion and humanity\'.
I just wish everybody would see the light!
August 27th, 2017 21:55
FredPeyer said:
After reading your incredible poem, PD, I looked up the meaning (dictionary) of Ubuntu: \'a quality that includes the essential human virtues; compassion and humanity\'.
I just wish everybody would see the light!
August 27th, 2017 21:55
Ubuntu
poetboy123 said:
Wonderful flow and meaning everyone should hear, another great write.
August 27th, 2017 14:24
poetboy123 said:
Wonderful flow and meaning everyone should hear, another great write.
August 27th, 2017 14:24
Ubuntu
Louis Gibbs said:
I love, \"I am because we are\"! A true expression of our human identity. Kudos, PD!
August 27th, 2017 10:43
Louis Gibbs said:
I love, \"I am because we are\"! A true expression of our human identity. Kudos, PD!
August 27th, 2017 10:43
Ubuntu
malubotelho said:
Awesome writing Dan. Very deep coming straight from the heart.
August 27th, 2017 08:58
malubotelho said:
Awesome writing Dan. Very deep coming straight from the heart.
August 27th, 2017 08:58
One part of the fractal
FredPeyer said:
A very powerful, well written poem, PD! You are touching on some very deep truths and how anything (hands, words, etc.) can be used for destruction or for good. If we would use our strengths to compensate for others weaknesses, instead of loading it over them, the world would be a much better place.
This is a definitive favorite.
August 26th, 2017 13:14
FredPeyer said:
A very powerful, well written poem, PD! You are touching on some very deep truths and how anything (hands, words, etc.) can be used for destruction or for good. If we would use our strengths to compensate for others weaknesses, instead of loading it over them, the world would be a much better place.
This is a definitive favorite.
August 26th, 2017 13:14
One part of the fractal
dusk arising said:
Super sentiment expressed here with clarity and soul. If only every man could turn to his fellow man and say let us build together instead fighting one another. Heroically thought provoking.
August 26th, 2017 12:45
dusk arising said:
Super sentiment expressed here with clarity and soul. If only every man could turn to his fellow man and say let us build together instead fighting one another. Heroically thought provoking.
August 26th, 2017 12:45
One part of the fractal
Louis Gibbs said:
\"When we are one, we are whole.\" A powerful philosophical statement! Fine poem, Dan.
August 26th, 2017 09:42
Louis Gibbs said:
\"When we are one, we are whole.\" A powerful philosophical statement! Fine poem, Dan.
August 26th, 2017 09:42
One part of the fractal
Michael Edwards said:
A great message so well expressed.
August 26th, 2017 02:53
Michael Edwards said:
A great message so well expressed.
August 26th, 2017 02:53
Love is just a name away
FredPeyer said:
Very beautifully said, PD, and absolutely true! Getting goosebumps reading it.
August 25th, 2017 12:00
FredPeyer said:
Very beautifully said, PD, and absolutely true! Getting goosebumps reading it.
August 25th, 2017 12:00
Love is just a name away
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Love is the strongest of emotions.
August 25th, 2017 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Love is the strongest of emotions.
August 25th, 2017 01:12
Love is just a name away
dusk arising said:
In its purest love is just as you suggest. Nicely put.
August 24th, 2017 22:47
dusk arising said:
In its purest love is just as you suggest. Nicely put.
August 24th, 2017 22:47
Saudade
FredPeyer said:
Do I ever know where you are coming from! All my kids and grand-kids are in California and I am sitting on this rock here!
Great writing PD!
August 21st, 2017 16:29
FredPeyer said:
Do I ever know where you are coming from! All my kids and grand-kids are in California and I am sitting on this rock here!
Great writing PD!
August 21st, 2017 16:29
Saudade
malubotelho said:
Beautiful writing. Saudade, this word is found only on the Portuguese language. I love your poem. Full of feeling of saudades.
August 21st, 2017 10:20
malubotelho said:
Beautiful writing. Saudade, this word is found only on the Portuguese language. I love your poem. Full of feeling of saudades.
August 21st, 2017 10:20
Will not give up
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good positive write, we must all keep trying.
August 16th, 2017 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good positive write, we must all keep trying.
August 16th, 2017 00:56
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