Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Found my voice
Fay Slimm. said:
An understanding of other wraps itself round every line and a Dad must have been proud to read your warm response of what life was about for him too. A moving read Dan
September 26th, 2017 14:45
Fay Slimm. said:
An understanding of other wraps itself round every line and a Dad must have been proud to read your warm response of what life was about for him too. A moving read Dan
September 26th, 2017 14:45
From the unknown
FredPeyer said:
I do like the whole poem, PD, but especially the ending. If quantum theory is right about the vibrating strings, we are vibrating beings and maybe that is the reason we enjoy music so much!
September 25th, 2017 12:31
FredPeyer said:
I do like the whole poem, PD, but especially the ending. If quantum theory is right about the vibrating strings, we are vibrating beings and maybe that is the reason we enjoy music so much!
September 25th, 2017 12:31
From the unknown
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, music has always been in my soul, it is so important to me both listening, playing and singing it.
September 25th, 2017 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, music has always been in my soul, it is so important to me both listening, playing and singing it.
September 25th, 2017 00:42
From the unknown
dusk arising said:
Creating a good musical sound is a great gift and shouldnt be kept hidden for music brings joy, relaxation, acceptance and understanding. And to the player an immense reward to see others within the trance he/she creates.
Good to read.
September 24th, 2017 17:37
dusk arising said:
Creating a good musical sound is a great gift and shouldnt be kept hidden for music brings joy, relaxation, acceptance and understanding. And to the player an immense reward to see others within the trance he/she creates.
Good to read.
September 24th, 2017 17:37
From the unknown
Christina8 said:
Very nice write! I think music is very important and like you said \"is food for the soul\". I don\'t know what I would do without it. Again, enjoyed the write very much!
September 24th, 2017 13:38
Christina8 said:
Very nice write! I think music is very important and like you said \"is food for the soul\". I don\'t know what I would do without it. Again, enjoyed the write very much!
September 24th, 2017 13:38
Lucky to be what I am!
FredPeyer said:
You certainly are, PD, and that is why you write so good!
September 23rd, 2017 21:57
FredPeyer said:
You certainly are, PD, and that is why you write so good!
September 23rd, 2017 21:57
Illusions and time
poetboy123 said:
Wow, an interesting piece on our minds, this is something I occasionally think about, but you\'ve expressed it better than I could without a doubt. Brilliant piece!
September 21st, 2017 16:56
poetboy123 said:
Wow, an interesting piece on our minds, this is something I occasionally think about, but you\'ve expressed it better than I could without a doubt. Brilliant piece!
September 21st, 2017 16:56
Illusions and time
Fay Slimm. said:
Good questions of where our inner senses begin and how - - I like too the way the verse ends with a positive reminder in the final lines. Great read Dan
September 21st, 2017 04:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Good questions of where our inner senses begin and how - - I like too the way the verse ends with a positive reminder in the final lines. Great read Dan
September 21st, 2017 04:43
Illusions and time
FredPeyer said:
Good poem, PD! The mind is a curious thing. You are right, you do have to know the outside to understand the inside. Like yin and yang, good and bad. There is a balance. But can we really bend illusion and time? Gravity will bend space time, so maybe mind can bend illusion?
September 21st, 2017 03:14
FredPeyer said:
Good poem, PD! The mind is a curious thing. You are right, you do have to know the outside to understand the inside. Like yin and yang, good and bad. There is a balance. But can we really bend illusion and time? Gravity will bend space time, so maybe mind can bend illusion?
September 21st, 2017 03:14
Birthday blues, what a tune!
myself and me said:
Happy birthday. You were born and re-born.
Wonderful work.
September 20th, 2017 12:56
myself and me said:
Happy birthday. You were born and re-born.
Wonderful work.
September 20th, 2017 12:56
Birthday blues, what a tune!
Christina8 said:
Wonderful write Dan! Seems you\'ve been through a lot and now you are focusing on partner and kids. So have a happy birthday!
September 20th, 2017 10:31
Christina8 said:
Wonderful write Dan! Seems you\'ve been through a lot and now you are focusing on partner and kids. So have a happy birthday!
September 20th, 2017 10:31
Birthday blues, what a tune!
FredPeyer said:
Happy Birthday Dan! May the light of the birthday cake candles light your way and your future! You went through a lot, but triumphed, and I am sure that with your kids and your partner, and maybe a tiny little bit of us here at MPS you will have a future to look forward to and to enjoy!
September 20th, 2017 09:37
FredPeyer said:
Happy Birthday Dan! May the light of the birthday cake candles light your way and your future! You went through a lot, but triumphed, and I am sure that with your kids and your partner, and maybe a tiny little bit of us here at MPS you will have a future to look forward to and to enjoy!
September 20th, 2017 09:37
Birthday blues, what a tune!
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong write Dan, your kids and partner are there for you as we are on MPS. Happy Birthday Dan may your future take you from darkness into the light that is there for you.
September 20th, 2017 07:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong write Dan, your kids and partner are there for you as we are on MPS. Happy Birthday Dan may your future take you from darkness into the light that is there for you.
September 20th, 2017 07:54
Always know just enough
malubotelho said:
Awesome writing PD. It is sad to see the older people we live so much and sometimes they forget who we are. They begin to get like a child again. Old babies.
September 19th, 2017 20:10
malubotelho said:
Awesome writing PD. It is sad to see the older people we live so much and sometimes they forget who we are. They begin to get like a child again. Old babies.
September 19th, 2017 20:10
Always know just enough
Accidental Poet said:
Alzheimer\'s? Not a easy subject for me. My adoptive mom passed from Alzheimer\'s. If you can get past the tears, \"Still Alice\" is a great movie about the disease. I cried a river through that movie.
Excellent poem for your nan. ; )
September 19th, 2017 19:50
Accidental Poet said:
Alzheimer\'s? Not a easy subject for me. My adoptive mom passed from Alzheimer\'s. If you can get past the tears, \"Still Alice\" is a great movie about the disease. I cried a river through that movie.
Excellent poem for your nan. ; )
September 19th, 2017 19:50
Always know just enough
dusk arising said:
Older Ladies of grace. I now that serenity of which you speak. Nostalgic reading for me.
September 19th, 2017 19:16
dusk arising said:
Older Ladies of grace. I now that serenity of which you speak. Nostalgic reading for me.
September 19th, 2017 19:16
Always know just enough
FredPeyer said:
PD, this is a very tender and loving poem about a subject that many of us experience with loved ones, and one day may experience ourselves, whether we will know it or not!
September 19th, 2017 12:15
FredPeyer said:
PD, this is a very tender and loving poem about a subject that many of us experience with loved ones, and one day may experience ourselves, whether we will know it or not!
September 19th, 2017 12:15
Always know just enough
Christina8 said:
I know what you mean, I have a very old grandma too thats just starting to get confused. Wonderful write!
September 19th, 2017 09:58
Christina8 said:
I know what you mean, I have a very old grandma too thats just starting to get confused. Wonderful write!
September 19th, 2017 09:58
Always know just enough
Fay Slimm. said:
So sad that some minds come to confusion - a tender piece of caring tribute to the gracefulness always found in a well-loved Nan.
September 19th, 2017 04:04
Fay Slimm. said:
So sad that some minds come to confusion - a tender piece of caring tribute to the gracefulness always found in a well-loved Nan.
September 19th, 2017 04:04
Take it and return it
myself and me said:
Hope one day you find peace with the pain.
Beautiful music coming with this nice poem.
September 18th, 2017 19:27
myself and me said:
Hope one day you find peace with the pain.
Beautiful music coming with this nice poem.
September 18th, 2017 19:27
Take it and return it
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully said, PD! Even though we are supposed to be wordsmiths, there are times when words are not enough, or there are no words.
I like this poem!
September 18th, 2017 12:49
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully said, PD! Even though we are supposed to be wordsmiths, there are times when words are not enough, or there are no words.
I like this poem!
September 18th, 2017 12:49
Life of love
Goldfinch60 said:
Good loving write, love the sixties feel a great time in my life and now is obviously a great time in your life.
September 18th, 2017 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Good loving write, love the sixties feel a great time in my life and now is obviously a great time in your life.
September 18th, 2017 01:08
Life of love
dusk arising said:
Great poem, and wicked pic. Reading all comments before i make mine i say this. Not only do i wish you the utmost joy in your life, for like my fellow poets here i have read your heart outpourings upon my screen, but that a love that has been searched for by both parties will be a love that is cherished and nurtured by both.
Gladdens my heart to see that pic and read your words.
September 17th, 2017 17:14
dusk arising said:
Great poem, and wicked pic. Reading all comments before i make mine i say this. Not only do i wish you the utmost joy in your life, for like my fellow poets here i have read your heart outpourings upon my screen, but that a love that has been searched for by both parties will be a love that is cherished and nurtured by both.
Gladdens my heart to see that pic and read your words.
September 17th, 2017 17:14
Life of love
FredPeyer said:
Love the poem, love the picture! Brings back memories of the 60\'s.
Am really happy for both of you.
Love is a wonderful thing!!!!!!
September 17th, 2017 15:33
FredPeyer said:
Love the poem, love the picture! Brings back memories of the 60\'s.
Am really happy for both of you.
Love is a wonderful thing!!!!!!
September 17th, 2017 15:33
Life of love
Fay Slimm. said:
Agree with Ron - once love gets inside it can wreak havoc but keep ahold of what feels like the real thing Dan.
September 17th, 2017 12:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Agree with Ron - once love gets inside it can wreak havoc but keep ahold of what feels like the real thing Dan.
September 17th, 2017 12:24
Embrace the remembering
dusk arising said:
To all men i think motherhood is amazing. The unconditional love involved is amazing. Sure we see feminine motherly love and its an example mostly traditional man has cast off but it seems us poets have retained that feminine side within our psyche. Our feelings spill out. Really nicely expressed toughtful writing sir.
September 16th, 2017 21:34
dusk arising said:
To all men i think motherhood is amazing. The unconditional love involved is amazing. Sure we see feminine motherly love and its an example mostly traditional man has cast off but it seems us poets have retained that feminine side within our psyche. Our feelings spill out. Really nicely expressed toughtful writing sir.
September 16th, 2017 21:34
Embrace the remembering
F.G. Franklin said:
The duality of mankind is expressed wonderfully here in a juxtaposition of relationships and loss. Where we learn and grow as we move through life\'s joy and sorrow. Wonderful write.
September 16th, 2017 13:48
F.G. Franklin said:
The duality of mankind is expressed wonderfully here in a juxtaposition of relationships and loss. Where we learn and grow as we move through life\'s joy and sorrow. Wonderful write.
September 16th, 2017 13:48
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