Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Breakdown to breakthrough
Goldfinch60 said:
Writing has helped you so much Dan and you have come into a good place in your life.
Andy
October 3rd, 2025 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Writing has helped you so much Dan and you have come into a good place in your life.
Andy
October 3rd, 2025 01:55
Breakdown to breakthrough
Doggerel Dave said:
A very together insightful write, Dan. In terms of vision, I feel one or your best.
October 2nd, 2025 23:11
Doggerel Dave said:
A very together insightful write, Dan. In terms of vision, I feel one or your best.
October 2nd, 2025 23:11
Breakdown to breakthrough
sorenbarrett said:
Writing is a therapy and this poem speaks of it in this way. A very interesting write of reflection
October 2nd, 2025 19:24
sorenbarrett said:
Writing is a therapy and this poem speaks of it in this way. A very interesting write of reflection
October 2nd, 2025 19:24
Alchemy of writing
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written Dan, I too have felt this and live it as well.
September 27th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written Dan, I too have felt this and live it as well.
September 27th, 2025 04:17
As it Bleeds (capturing my thoughts with Bob before they disappear into the aether)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful story Dan showing the pain that you have gone through and have found a way through into a wonderful life.
Andy
September 20th, 2025 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful story Dan showing the pain that you have gone through and have found a way through into a wonderful life.
Andy
September 20th, 2025 02:00
As it Bleeds (capturing my thoughts with Bob before they disappear into the aether)
sorenbarrett said:
A poem and story of loss and an existential search for meaning. Nicely done
September 19th, 2025 19:51
sorenbarrett said:
A poem and story of loss and an existential search for meaning. Nicely done
September 19th, 2025 19:51
Push, pause and repeat
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure your book will do well Dan, you have certainly moved on in your life and all is now wonderful.
Andy
September 18th, 2025 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure your book will do well Dan, you have certainly moved on in your life and all is now wonderful.
Andy
September 18th, 2025 01:25
Push, pause and repeat
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This piece is vivid, intense, and full of energy it reads like a metaphorical labor, blending the physical and emotional struggle of giving birth with the creative process of bringing a book to life. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 13:28
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This piece is vivid, intense, and full of energy it reads like a metaphorical labor, blending the physical and emotional struggle of giving birth with the creative process of bringing a book to life. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 13:28
Push, pause and repeat
sorenbarrett said:
Congratulations are in order for the birth of the book. What a great metaphor
September 17th, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
Congratulations are in order for the birth of the book. What a great metaphor
September 17th, 2025 04:48
The Conscious stage
sorenbarrett said:
We have to understand that the human viewpoint is not the only one or even the right one and that in fact there may be no viewpoint at all and that it is not even pertinent. A most mind provoking write.
September 2nd, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
We have to understand that the human viewpoint is not the only one or even the right one and that in fact there may be no viewpoint at all and that it is not even pertinent. A most mind provoking write.
September 2nd, 2025 04:40
When voices align
sorenbarrett said:
Voices in one\'s head or talking to oneself are not necessarily bad or uncommon as long as we realize that they are us we are hearing or talking too. A good read Dan.
August 31st, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Voices in one\'s head or talking to oneself are not necessarily bad or uncommon as long as we realize that they are us we are hearing or talking too. A good read Dan.
August 31st, 2025 04:11
Celestial Sanctuary
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully done, Dan. This piece feels like a sanctuary rebuilt…not untouched by scars, but stronger for them. The balance of fracture and harmony rings deep and true. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 30th, 2025 17:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully done, Dan. This piece feels like a sanctuary rebuilt…not untouched by scars, but stronger for them. The balance of fracture and harmony rings deep and true. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 30th, 2025 17:12
Celestial Sanctuary
sorenbarrett said:
I love the last lines of this poem that hold the secret to harmony (listen twice as much as we talk) there is the key to love that can be seen
August 30th, 2025 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
I love the last lines of this poem that hold the secret to harmony (listen twice as much as we talk) there is the key to love that can be seen
August 30th, 2025 06:30
Etched on my grave
Neville said:
Excellent ink and damned near perfectly spilt .. You may be feeling rough & in a dark place but your poetry today rocks and glows golden .. Neville
August 29th, 2025 03:11
Neville said:
Excellent ink and damned near perfectly spilt .. You may be feeling rough & in a dark place but your poetry today rocks and glows golden .. Neville
August 29th, 2025 03:11
Etched on my grave
sorenbarrett said:
Here we go again would be great on the grave of a Hindu that believed in reincarnation. A fun read
August 28th, 2025 20:11
sorenbarrett said:
Here we go again would be great on the grave of a Hindu that believed in reincarnation. A fun read
August 28th, 2025 20:11
Wordless music talks
NafisaSB said:
a good idea to try to decipher what different sounds can convey other than what they are meant to - a unique concept
August 27th, 2025 00:17
NafisaSB said:
a good idea to try to decipher what different sounds can convey other than what they are meant to - a unique concept
August 27th, 2025 00:17
Unicorns Day
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope that we can all skip and dance in puddles through the sun Dan, life would be wonderful.
Andy
August 23rd, 2025 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope that we can all skip and dance in puddles through the sun Dan, life would be wonderful.
Andy
August 23rd, 2025 01:23
Unicorns Day
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting and unusual write in tercets of rhyme. A cute story with a moral and well done
August 22nd, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting and unusual write in tercets of rhyme. A cute story with a moral and well done
August 22nd, 2025 04:54
Test of life
Neville said:
I\'m glad you added your authors note Dan it kind of reinforced what was already well formed in my own head upon reading .. I get this & Big Time .. Neville
August 20th, 2025 05:02
Neville said:
I\'m glad you added your authors note Dan it kind of reinforced what was already well formed in my own head upon reading .. I get this & Big Time .. Neville
August 20th, 2025 05:02
Test of life
sorenbarrett said:
Our children carry pieces of us some one piece and others another. Nicely written
August 20th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
Our children carry pieces of us some one piece and others another. Nicely written
August 20th, 2025 04:10
Wordless music talks
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been listening to music all my life Dan and can still surprised at the feelings it can bring to me. Keep listening.
Andy
August 20th, 2025 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been listening to music all my life Dan and can still surprised at the feelings it can bring to me. Keep listening.
Andy
August 20th, 2025 01:12
Wordless music talks
arqios said:
Music without words speaks in frequencies we forget we understand; like the gurgling hum of a washing machine once mistaken for conversation, or a tune that suddenly shapes itself into meaning. The poem captures that moment when sound transcends structure, when belief loosens its grip and the soul becomes less a definition, more a sensation. It’s a playful meditation on fluidity: of thought, of self, of sound, and a reminder too that we’re not alone in hearing the unsaid. The joy in writing it echoes the joy in listening: both are acts of quiet discovery.
August 19th, 2025 19:25
arqios said:
Music without words speaks in frequencies we forget we understand; like the gurgling hum of a washing machine once mistaken for conversation, or a tune that suddenly shapes itself into meaning. The poem captures that moment when sound transcends structure, when belief loosens its grip and the soul becomes less a definition, more a sensation. It’s a playful meditation on fluidity: of thought, of self, of sound, and a reminder too that we’re not alone in hearing the unsaid. The joy in writing it echoes the joy in listening: both are acts of quiet discovery.
August 19th, 2025 19:25
Wordless music talks
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love Bruce Lee, so that line—“Be water my friend”...really sticks with me here. It ties the whole piece together, shaping the silence into wisdom. Nicely done, Dan. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2025 07:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love Bruce Lee, so that line—“Be water my friend”...really sticks with me here. It ties the whole piece together, shaping the silence into wisdom. Nicely done, Dan. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2025 07:37
Wordless music talks
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that rings with truth. I heard the water sing in the pipes from the shower the other day and there were words that I could almost make out. Good write
August 19th, 2025 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that rings with truth. I heard the water sing in the pipes from the shower the other day and there were words that I could almost make out. Good write
August 19th, 2025 04:55
Scribed to my brain
Goldfinch60 said:
You are certainly moving on in life Dan and you will go to that good place in your life.
Andy
August 19th, 2025 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
You are certainly moving on in life Dan and you will go to that good place in your life.
Andy
August 19th, 2025 01:03
Scribed to my brain
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A great write with much to be learned
August 18th, 2025 08:50
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A great write with much to be learned
August 18th, 2025 08:50
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