Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
The Conscious stage
sorenbarrett said:
We have to understand that the human viewpoint is not the only one or even the right one and that in fact there may be no viewpoint at all and that it is not even pertinent. A most mind provoking write.
September 2nd, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
We have to understand that the human viewpoint is not the only one or even the right one and that in fact there may be no viewpoint at all and that it is not even pertinent. A most mind provoking write.
September 2nd, 2025 04:40
When voices align
sorenbarrett said:
Voices in one\'s head or talking to oneself are not necessarily bad or uncommon as long as we realize that they are us we are hearing or talking too. A good read Dan.
August 31st, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Voices in one\'s head or talking to oneself are not necessarily bad or uncommon as long as we realize that they are us we are hearing or talking too. A good read Dan.
August 31st, 2025 04:11
Celestial Sanctuary
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully done, Dan. This piece feels like a sanctuary rebuilt…not untouched by scars, but stronger for them. The balance of fracture and harmony rings deep and true. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 30th, 2025 17:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully done, Dan. This piece feels like a sanctuary rebuilt…not untouched by scars, but stronger for them. The balance of fracture and harmony rings deep and true. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 30th, 2025 17:12
Celestial Sanctuary
sorenbarrett said:
I love the last lines of this poem that hold the secret to harmony (listen twice as much as we talk) there is the key to love that can be seen
August 30th, 2025 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
I love the last lines of this poem that hold the secret to harmony (listen twice as much as we talk) there is the key to love that can be seen
August 30th, 2025 06:30
Etched on my grave
Neville said:
Excellent ink and damned near perfectly spilt .. You may be feeling rough & in a dark place but your poetry today rocks and glows golden .. Neville
August 29th, 2025 03:11
Neville said:
Excellent ink and damned near perfectly spilt .. You may be feeling rough & in a dark place but your poetry today rocks and glows golden .. Neville
August 29th, 2025 03:11
Etched on my grave
sorenbarrett said:
Here we go again would be great on the grave of a Hindu that believed in reincarnation. A fun read
August 28th, 2025 20:11
sorenbarrett said:
Here we go again would be great on the grave of a Hindu that believed in reincarnation. A fun read
August 28th, 2025 20:11
Wordless music talks
NafisaSB said:
a good idea to try to decipher what different sounds can convey other than what they are meant to - a unique concept
August 27th, 2025 00:17
NafisaSB said:
a good idea to try to decipher what different sounds can convey other than what they are meant to - a unique concept
August 27th, 2025 00:17
Unicorns Day
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope that we can all skip and dance in puddles through the sun Dan, life would be wonderful.
Andy
August 23rd, 2025 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope that we can all skip and dance in puddles through the sun Dan, life would be wonderful.
Andy
August 23rd, 2025 01:23
Unicorns Day
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting and unusual write in tercets of rhyme. A cute story with a moral and well done
August 22nd, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting and unusual write in tercets of rhyme. A cute story with a moral and well done
August 22nd, 2025 04:54
Test of life
Neville said:
I\'m glad you added your authors note Dan it kind of reinforced what was already well formed in my own head upon reading .. I get this & Big Time .. Neville
August 20th, 2025 05:02
Neville said:
I\'m glad you added your authors note Dan it kind of reinforced what was already well formed in my own head upon reading .. I get this & Big Time .. Neville
August 20th, 2025 05:02
Test of life
sorenbarrett said:
Our children carry pieces of us some one piece and others another. Nicely written
August 20th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
Our children carry pieces of us some one piece and others another. Nicely written
August 20th, 2025 04:10
Wordless music talks
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been listening to music all my life Dan and can still surprised at the feelings it can bring to me. Keep listening.
Andy
August 20th, 2025 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been listening to music all my life Dan and can still surprised at the feelings it can bring to me. Keep listening.
Andy
August 20th, 2025 01:12
Wordless music talks
arqios said:
Music without words speaks in frequencies we forget we understand; like the gurgling hum of a washing machine once mistaken for conversation, or a tune that suddenly shapes itself into meaning. The poem captures that moment when sound transcends structure, when belief loosens its grip and the soul becomes less a definition, more a sensation. It’s a playful meditation on fluidity: of thought, of self, of sound, and a reminder too that we’re not alone in hearing the unsaid. The joy in writing it echoes the joy in listening: both are acts of quiet discovery.
August 19th, 2025 19:25
arqios said:
Music without words speaks in frequencies we forget we understand; like the gurgling hum of a washing machine once mistaken for conversation, or a tune that suddenly shapes itself into meaning. The poem captures that moment when sound transcends structure, when belief loosens its grip and the soul becomes less a definition, more a sensation. It’s a playful meditation on fluidity: of thought, of self, of sound, and a reminder too that we’re not alone in hearing the unsaid. The joy in writing it echoes the joy in listening: both are acts of quiet discovery.
August 19th, 2025 19:25
Wordless music talks
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love Bruce Lee, so that line—“Be water my friend”...really sticks with me here. It ties the whole piece together, shaping the silence into wisdom. Nicely done, Dan. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2025 07:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love Bruce Lee, so that line—“Be water my friend”...really sticks with me here. It ties the whole piece together, shaping the silence into wisdom. Nicely done, Dan. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2025 07:37
Wordless music talks
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that rings with truth. I heard the water sing in the pipes from the shower the other day and there were words that I could almost make out. Good write
August 19th, 2025 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that rings with truth. I heard the water sing in the pipes from the shower the other day and there were words that I could almost make out. Good write
August 19th, 2025 04:55
Scribed to my brain
Goldfinch60 said:
You are certainly moving on in life Dan and you will go to that good place in your life.
Andy
August 19th, 2025 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
You are certainly moving on in life Dan and you will go to that good place in your life.
Andy
August 19th, 2025 01:03
Scribed to my brain
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A great write with much to be learned
August 18th, 2025 08:50
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A great write with much to be learned
August 18th, 2025 08:50
Natures life line
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I couldn\'t help myself but hit the fave. Wonderful poem. I identified myself with it from the very first stanza. Though I don\'t have a pet, the poem spoke of things which went straight to my heart...bypassing the brain
August 18th, 2025 08:48
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I couldn\'t help myself but hit the fave. Wonderful poem. I identified myself with it from the very first stanza. Though I don\'t have a pet, the poem spoke of things which went straight to my heart...bypassing the brain
August 18th, 2025 08:48
Scribed to my brain
Poetic Licence said:
Human interaction can be very difficult and frustrating for some, a pen can talk much easier than a tongue if you do not trust anyone, I relate to this write and many others will, nicely written
August 18th, 2025 06:59
Poetic Licence said:
Human interaction can be very difficult and frustrating for some, a pen can talk much easier than a tongue if you do not trust anyone, I relate to this write and many others will, nicely written
August 18th, 2025 06:59
Scribed to my brain
sorenbarrett said:
How we react to others dictates the type of person we are. Nicely written
August 18th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
How we react to others dictates the type of person we are. Nicely written
August 18th, 2025 04:29
Natures life line
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dan, good to see you back, I am sure all will be good in your life. Fabulous picture.
Andy
August 18th, 2025 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dan, good to see you back, I am sure all will be good in your life. Fabulous picture.
Andy
August 18th, 2025 01:49
Natures life line
Demar Desu said:
Wow… this might be the best poem of the day. Kudos *bows*
August 17th, 2025 08:02
Demar Desu said:
Wow… this might be the best poem of the day. Kudos *bows*
August 17th, 2025 08:02
Natures life line
sorenbarrett said:
Unconditional love the healing balm and so rare to encounter. Usually only from a mother if one is lucky enough to have one of that type. A lovely write
August 17th, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
Unconditional love the healing balm and so rare to encounter. Usually only from a mother if one is lucky enough to have one of that type. A lovely write
August 17th, 2025 04:51
Natures life line
Poetic Licence said:
A honest and nicely written write, finding nature takes the pressure off a little, to find a little piece and quiet time especially with the best friend, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 04:44
Poetic Licence said:
A honest and nicely written write, finding nature takes the pressure off a little, to find a little piece and quiet time especially with the best friend, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 04:44
Truly not built for most human interactions
Poetic Licence said:
Sense of frustration and alienation with the world, as it presents unneeded and unwarranted issues. Nicely expressed and written. You have your best friend by your side, it will turn out ok.
August 15th, 2025 08:17
Poetic Licence said:
Sense of frustration and alienation with the world, as it presents unneeded and unwarranted issues. Nicely expressed and written. You have your best friend by your side, it will turn out ok.
August 15th, 2025 08:17
Truly not built for most human interactions
Neville said:
Say it like it is mate .. I have no doubt you will feel better for it .. and remember, there\'s nowt so queer as folk .. (I use the term queer not in any historically offensive or rude way .. nor as it appears to have been corrupted and morphed which I admit I struggle to get my head around despite not having any obvious prejudices but as it was originally meant to mean .. i.e as odd .. Write on brother Dan, don\'t let em get ya down & take care 🐕😎👍
August 15th, 2025 07:38
Neville said:
Say it like it is mate .. I have no doubt you will feel better for it .. and remember, there\'s nowt so queer as folk .. (I use the term queer not in any historically offensive or rude way .. nor as it appears to have been corrupted and morphed which I admit I struggle to get my head around despite not having any obvious prejudices but as it was originally meant to mean .. i.e as odd .. Write on brother Dan, don\'t let em get ya down & take care 🐕😎👍
August 15th, 2025 07:38
Truly not built for most human interactions
Lorna said:
You\'re doing just fine - they are TOTALLY unimportant........ stop worrying......... you\'re perfectly ok.... just go your way...........dogs are better company anyway.
August 15th, 2025 07:29
Lorna said:
You\'re doing just fine - they are TOTALLY unimportant........ stop worrying......... you\'re perfectly ok.... just go your way...........dogs are better company anyway.
August 15th, 2025 07:29
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