Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Speaking in tongue
Nicholas Browning said:
This indeed is interesting. When you said you had a new work ready, I wasn\'t expecting this. You\'re right. There\'s too many laws. Too many rules. They just keep overlapping with each other. It\'s ridiculous. Good message sir. Keep up the work!
July 14th, 2017 15:51
Nicholas Browning said:
This indeed is interesting. When you said you had a new work ready, I wasn\'t expecting this. You\'re right. There\'s too many laws. Too many rules. They just keep overlapping with each other. It\'s ridiculous. Good message sir. Keep up the work!
July 14th, 2017 15:51
Speaking in tongue
burning-embers said:
Dan my mate. You\'ve given me a headache. I\'ve read this five times.
But i know you\'re right to question what is real.
July 14th, 2017 06:31
burning-embers said:
Dan my mate. You\'ve given me a headache. I\'ve read this five times.
But i know you\'re right to question what is real.
July 14th, 2017 06:31
Speaking in tongue
Fay Slimm. said:
Rule-shifting and being our real selves is the way to freedom - well said Dan.
July 14th, 2017 06:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Rule-shifting and being our real selves is the way to freedom - well said Dan.
July 14th, 2017 06:29
Speaking in tongue
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very well written...I like that its something truly DIFFERENT
July 14th, 2017 05:58
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very well written...I like that its something truly DIFFERENT
July 14th, 2017 05:58
My boys birthday write
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and message. May your son go along his path of life knowing that you will always be there for him.
July 14th, 2017 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and message. May your son go along his path of life knowing that you will always be there for him.
July 14th, 2017 01:40
My boys birthday write
burning-embers said:
Great emotional outpouring.. Tell him that people (you) only get older on the outside and have to have responsibilities but on the inside you\'re same age as him and want to play or join in his interest/hobby or whatever
July 13th, 2017 10:23
burning-embers said:
Great emotional outpouring.. Tell him that people (you) only get older on the outside and have to have responsibilities but on the inside you\'re same age as him and want to play or join in his interest/hobby or whatever
July 13th, 2017 10:23
Drifter no longer drifting
Augustus said:
We were given children to teach us I\'ve heard. Wish I had listened more. Kudos
July 12th, 2017 16:19
Augustus said:
We were given children to teach us I\'ve heard. Wish I had listened more. Kudos
July 12th, 2017 16:19
Drifter no longer drifting
Augustus said:
We were given children to teach us I\'ve heard. Wish I had listened more. Kudos
July 12th, 2017 16:19
Augustus said:
We were given children to teach us I\'ve heard. Wish I had listened more. Kudos
July 12th, 2017 16:19
Drifter no longer drifting
Nicholas Browning said:
Just curious, is English your primary language? By the way, massive props for the title.
July 12th, 2017 12:20
Nicholas Browning said:
Just curious, is English your primary language? By the way, massive props for the title.
July 12th, 2017 12:20
Drifter no longer drifting
kevin browne said:
our children teach us the way my friend. a wonderful tribute to Jake and his father,
July 12th, 2017 09:38
kevin browne said:
our children teach us the way my friend. a wonderful tribute to Jake and his father,
July 12th, 2017 09:38
Shadow of yourself
burning-embers said:
Well written and well done for writing it. Its a theraputic outlet for me i know and often when really moved the words just fall out of my fingertips. I can tell this was a heartfelt outpouring from you and a noble plea. Good one.
July 11th, 2017 19:01
burning-embers said:
Well written and well done for writing it. Its a theraputic outlet for me i know and often when really moved the words just fall out of my fingertips. I can tell this was a heartfelt outpouring from you and a noble plea. Good one.
July 11th, 2017 19:01
Would you believe me
Augustus said:
Will never be able to see a rainbow the same again. Light but serious. Thanks. Sending positive thoughts.
July 10th, 2017 09:50
Augustus said:
Will never be able to see a rainbow the same again. Light but serious. Thanks. Sending positive thoughts.
July 10th, 2017 09:50
Would you believe me
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we can always change our ways.
July 10th, 2017 07:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we can always change our ways.
July 10th, 2017 07:38
Would you believe me
Nicholas Browning said:
Indeed. Change is a recourse that is never too late to be obtained. The mind can definitely bring about many things unseen to the human eye.
July 10th, 2017 06:11
Nicholas Browning said:
Indeed. Change is a recourse that is never too late to be obtained. The mind can definitely bring about many things unseen to the human eye.
July 10th, 2017 06:11
Would you believe me
FredPeyer said:
Words and thought may not make things true, but they make them happen. And rainbows do appear when unicorns fart, I heard it from a reliable, but unfortunately secret source! And Poetic Dan, what if I don\'t want to change my ways? Would you still believe ME?
Sorry, it is getting late here and I had a long day, but I really enjoyed your poem!
July 10th, 2017 04:34
FredPeyer said:
Words and thought may not make things true, but they make them happen. And rainbows do appear when unicorns fart, I heard it from a reliable, but unfortunately secret source! And Poetic Dan, what if I don\'t want to change my ways? Would you still believe ME?
Sorry, it is getting late here and I had a long day, but I really enjoyed your poem!
July 10th, 2017 04:34
Would you believe me
billybob said:
Very thought provoking... Beautifully written!
July 10th, 2017 03:41
billybob said:
Very thought provoking... Beautifully written!
July 10th, 2017 03:41
Words to the younger me
Poetic Dan said:
Thank you sir, Shakespeare sort of said it first ;)
July 10th, 2017 03:14
Poetic Dan said:
Thank you sir, Shakespeare sort of said it first ;)
July 10th, 2017 03:14
Words to the younger me
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and the last two lines are very true.
July 10th, 2017 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and the last two lines are very true.
July 10th, 2017 00:41
Words to the younger me
Augustus said:
Forged in fire makes for strong iron. You my man are iron with heart.
July 9th, 2017 23:01
Augustus said:
Forged in fire makes for strong iron. You my man are iron with heart.
July 9th, 2017 23:01
For you or for me?
ron parrish aka wordman said:
i guess it`s a secret what we are really after,for you or for me,i think a little of both
July 9th, 2017 18:59
ron parrish aka wordman said:
i guess it`s a secret what we are really after,for you or for me,i think a little of both
July 9th, 2017 18:59
Words to the younger me
Nicholas Browning said:
The stage of life shuns no man. Let\'s all put on a good show. Speak the truth friend.
July 9th, 2017 17:48
Nicholas Browning said:
The stage of life shuns no man. Let\'s all put on a good show. Speak the truth friend.
July 9th, 2017 17:48
Words to the younger me
Moonflower15 said:
I think we all reflect and wish we could speak to ourselves when we were younger. I really enjoyed this.
July 9th, 2017 13:59
Moonflower15 said:
I think we all reflect and wish we could speak to ourselves when we were younger. I really enjoyed this.
July 9th, 2017 13:59
Words to the younger me
Heather T said:
Oh, I love this exhortation to your younger self! Touching and inspiring.
July 9th, 2017 11:26
Heather T said:
Oh, I love this exhortation to your younger self! Touching and inspiring.
July 9th, 2017 11:26
Words to the younger me
Louis Gibbs said:
A good poem ... made great by the last phrase! Well done, Dan!
July 9th, 2017 11:24
Louis Gibbs said:
A good poem ... made great by the last phrase! Well done, Dan!
July 9th, 2017 11:24
For you or for me?
lostgirl24 said:
This is very profound; beautiful and truthful writing, Poetic Dan.
July 5th, 2017 19:45
lostgirl24 said:
This is very profound; beautiful and truthful writing, Poetic Dan.
July 5th, 2017 19:45
For you or for me?
onepauly said:
comfort yourself, and you will find what your after.
July 5th, 2017 19:44
onepauly said:
comfort yourself, and you will find what your after.
July 5th, 2017 19:44
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