Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Yin to my yang
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Dan for this beautiful way of saying \'I love you\'!
July 31st, 2017 12:33
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Dan for this beautiful way of saying \'I love you\'!
July 31st, 2017 12:33
Who are you?
FredPeyer said:
Awesome poem Dan! Yes, sometimes it feels as if we were naked, letting it all hang out, letting the world see much too deep into our interior.
.....and the music ain\'t bad either!
July 31st, 2017 11:40
FredPeyer said:
Awesome poem Dan! Yes, sometimes it feels as if we were naked, letting it all hang out, letting the world see much too deep into our interior.
.....and the music ain\'t bad either!
July 31st, 2017 11:40
Yin to my yang
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful verse of assurance for some lucky lady - such a delight to read.Dan - - keep that romantic ink flowing my friend.
July 31st, 2017 05:36
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful verse of assurance for some lucky lady - such a delight to read.Dan - - keep that romantic ink flowing my friend.
July 31st, 2017 05:36
Yin to my yang
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving write. I am sure that your heaven will always be there.
July 31st, 2017 04:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving write. I am sure that your heaven will always be there.
July 31st, 2017 04:13
Who are you?
Heather T said:
Thank you for giving your honest, open self. I appreciate that from friends unendingly. A double gift, your words and video.
July 30th, 2017 12:09
Heather T said:
Thank you for giving your honest, open self. I appreciate that from friends unendingly. A double gift, your words and video.
July 30th, 2017 12:09
Who are you?
poetboy123 said:
Wow, this was incredible, both the video and the poem!
July 30th, 2017 10:53
poetboy123 said:
Wow, this was incredible, both the video and the poem!
July 30th, 2017 10:53
I see what I\'m doing
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes the mind goes its own way but it always comes back.
July 29th, 2017 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes the mind goes its own way but it always comes back.
July 29th, 2017 00:19
I see what I\'m doing
FredPeyer said:
For your sake I hope too that you are listening!!! :-)
Sometimes the brain has its own mysterious ways, sometimes it does not want to let go even though it should. That is where our subconscious, our gut-feeling is needed to set the brain straight!
Good writing Dan!
July 28th, 2017 15:10
FredPeyer said:
For your sake I hope too that you are listening!!! :-)
Sometimes the brain has its own mysterious ways, sometimes it does not want to let go even though it should. That is where our subconscious, our gut-feeling is needed to set the brain straight!
Good writing Dan!
July 28th, 2017 15:10
I see what I\'m doing
Louis Gibbs said:
I love it when our split personalities converse with each other, as you describe so well herein. Mine have quite lively conversations ... it\'s fun to listen in. Oops, Did I just reveal a third one? I\'m in trouble. Did so appreciate your excellent poem, Dan!
July 28th, 2017 10:16
Louis Gibbs said:
I love it when our split personalities converse with each other, as you describe so well herein. Mine have quite lively conversations ... it\'s fun to listen in. Oops, Did I just reveal a third one? I\'m in trouble. Did so appreciate your excellent poem, Dan!
July 28th, 2017 10:16
Decoding
Poetic Dan said:
Best way to learn I do agree, think I\'d try to enjoy my hole though
July 27th, 2017 16:00
Poetic Dan said:
Best way to learn I do agree, think I\'d try to enjoy my hole though
July 27th, 2017 16:00
Decoding
onepauly said:
follow the unknown. I learn most things by trial and error. sometimes what we mean may not mean the same thing to another. and we don\'t want to dig a hole we cant climb out of.if I ask you to see a house on a hill and you do so. I also see a house on a hill. but they are different houses on different hills. so there
July 27th, 2017 15:37
onepauly said:
follow the unknown. I learn most things by trial and error. sometimes what we mean may not mean the same thing to another. and we don\'t want to dig a hole we cant climb out of.if I ask you to see a house on a hill and you do so. I also see a house on a hill. but they are different houses on different hills. so there
July 27th, 2017 15:37
Decoding
Goldfinch60 said:
We each see different things in others words. Good write.
July 27th, 2017 08:04
Goldfinch60 said:
We each see different things in others words. Good write.
July 27th, 2017 08:04
What did I see
malubotelho said:
You are a daring man. Very brave. What you did as you described was trying to clean your mind from any thought but concentrate in the moment. Beautiful way of doing so. Dangerous though. I enjoyed to read you.
July 27th, 2017 07:47
malubotelho said:
You are a daring man. Very brave. What you did as you described was trying to clean your mind from any thought but concentrate in the moment. Beautiful way of doing so. Dangerous though. I enjoyed to read you.
July 27th, 2017 07:47
Decoding
kevin browne said:
you are pobably mostly right about decoding but like FredPeyer has mentioned, you may be able to decode the pattern of your life but decoding a human maybe a task too much. unless we can superchip the brain and download all the information onto a screen so we can see how everything is put together and how it works then I think it may never be done in the physical realm. thought provoking none-the-less.
July 27th, 2017 05:40
kevin browne said:
you are pobably mostly right about decoding but like FredPeyer has mentioned, you may be able to decode the pattern of your life but decoding a human maybe a task too much. unless we can superchip the brain and download all the information onto a screen so we can see how everything is put together and how it works then I think it may never be done in the physical realm. thought provoking none-the-less.
July 27th, 2017 05:40
Decoding
FredPeyer said:
Dan, no matter how much you decode, you cannot decode the soul or essence of a man.
July 27th, 2017 04:48
FredPeyer said:
Dan, no matter how much you decode, you cannot decode the soul or essence of a man.
July 27th, 2017 04:48
Can\'t believe where my life is going
Christina8 said:
I hope life gets better for you. Sorry your life is so tough right now.
July 26th, 2017 21:49
Christina8 said:
I hope life gets better for you. Sorry your life is so tough right now.
July 26th, 2017 21:49
Can\'t believe where my life is going
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Man....So many of us can relate to your dismay here...I also dropped out of high school because I wanted to grow up and mae money and be on my own terribly...I regretted it way down the road. Back in those days , you could get a job at entry level and work your way all the way up....Mid Life I took a few years off after a couple of traumatic events that too place and when I went back into the workforce, I was absolutely stunned at how hard it was to find a decent job....Currently, I have been job hunting now for 3 months...But, I went back to school online and got my Associate\'s degree...turns out they want a Bachelors but my point is that its never too late to turn your entire life around. Nobody can do it but YOU! Take care
July 26th, 2017 19:42
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Man....So many of us can relate to your dismay here...I also dropped out of high school because I wanted to grow up and mae money and be on my own terribly...I regretted it way down the road. Back in those days , you could get a job at entry level and work your way all the way up....Mid Life I took a few years off after a couple of traumatic events that too place and when I went back into the workforce, I was absolutely stunned at how hard it was to find a decent job....Currently, I have been job hunting now for 3 months...But, I went back to school online and got my Associate\'s degree...turns out they want a Bachelors but my point is that its never too late to turn your entire life around. Nobody can do it but YOU! Take care
July 26th, 2017 19:42
Can\'t believe where my life is going
kevin browne said:
and now I feel the need for you to expand this into another piece which has more insight towards the under current pattern of your life. that is your decision however and only you can decide what to reveal. lives we read about in poetry capture almost every feeling of emotion there is, yet, described in such ways that you wouldn\'t think impossible. new ideas are always welcome in poetry and that\'s the beauty of it I find. devote what you think is right for your character and your personality and let it shine through your work. then hopefully you will even see for yourself the insight of your own mind and that\'s a very beautiful thing my friend.
July 26th, 2017 18:26
kevin browne said:
and now I feel the need for you to expand this into another piece which has more insight towards the under current pattern of your life. that is your decision however and only you can decide what to reveal. lives we read about in poetry capture almost every feeling of emotion there is, yet, described in such ways that you wouldn\'t think impossible. new ideas are always welcome in poetry and that\'s the beauty of it I find. devote what you think is right for your character and your personality and let it shine through your work. then hopefully you will even see for yourself the insight of your own mind and that\'s a very beautiful thing my friend.
July 26th, 2017 18:26
Music in my head
willyweed said:
you sing\' you dance you touch the soul life is a cabaret my friend, nicely done! ww
July 25th, 2017 17:53
willyweed said:
you sing\' you dance you touch the soul life is a cabaret my friend, nicely done! ww
July 25th, 2017 17:53
Every word I see or hear
FredPeyer said:
Dan, wonderful writing, straight from the heart or even the gut. It is uncanny how your poem here and my \"just around the corner\" say kind of the same thing in different words.
And you are so right that it is the people around you who care who will help you up that mountain called life.
July 25th, 2017 17:51
FredPeyer said:
Dan, wonderful writing, straight from the heart or even the gut. It is uncanny how your poem here and my \"just around the corner\" say kind of the same thing in different words.
And you are so right that it is the people around you who care who will help you up that mountain called life.
July 25th, 2017 17:51
Every word I see or hear
kevin browne said:
you take it in and let it out like a volcanic eruption with your words on fire my friend.a great percentage of the population are far too ignorant to understand what you have written here. it holds the truth and you write it well. having faith in your fellow man is truly a beautiful thing, just like you.
July 23rd, 2017 16:54
kevin browne said:
you take it in and let it out like a volcanic eruption with your words on fire my friend.a great percentage of the population are far too ignorant to understand what you have written here. it holds the truth and you write it well. having faith in your fellow man is truly a beautiful thing, just like you.
July 23rd, 2017 16:54
What did I see
kevin browne said:
wow, wow and another wow! this one is about the the weather and how it effects you. you have packed as much into thought about writing this and it\'s a very different style towards how you normally write. your work is always thought provoking and interesting to say the least. great write from a very cool writer.
July 23rd, 2017 15:29
kevin browne said:
wow, wow and another wow! this one is about the the weather and how it effects you. you have packed as much into thought about writing this and it\'s a very different style towards how you normally write. your work is always thought provoking and interesting to say the least. great write from a very cool writer.
July 23rd, 2017 15:29
Lois Bernadette
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the loss of a loved one is so sad, I know how you feel.
Great tribute to Robert.
July 21st, 2017 03:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the loss of a loved one is so sad, I know how you feel.
Great tribute to Robert.
July 21st, 2017 03:50
Lois Bernadette
Michael Edwards said:
Having had a couple of scares with my wifes health (one of which was truly touch and go - 20% chance of pulling through) this poem meant so much to me - not ashamed to say my eyes watered as I read it.
July 21st, 2017 03:30
Michael Edwards said:
Having had a couple of scares with my wifes health (one of which was truly touch and go - 20% chance of pulling through) this poem meant so much to me - not ashamed to say my eyes watered as I read it.
July 21st, 2017 03:30
Testimonial of my healing session
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
This was a pleasure to read! I really liked the picture too. Writing has helped so many to cope. It\'s amazing!
July 20th, 2017 17:33
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
This was a pleasure to read! I really liked the picture too. Writing has helped so many to cope. It\'s amazing!
July 20th, 2017 17:33
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