Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Pen warriors needed!
poetboy123 said:



July 4th, 2017 17:24

Reprogramming
Fay Slimm. said:

Agree wholeheartedly with these lines Dan - - loud applause for the reminder.

July 4th, 2017 09:22

Reprogramming
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

July 4th, 2017 07:32

Reprogramming
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, go forward in your life to the wonder that is ahead.

July 4th, 2017 05:22

Reprogramming
FredPeyer said:

Dan, I do like your poem! We have to reprogram our lives all the time. Living on past experience just isn\'t enough. I just published a poem that has to do with comparing our life to a spreadsheet. I guess we are all computer nerds!

July 4th, 2017 05:02

Pen warriors needed!
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and very true, words can be so powerful.

July 4th, 2017 00:49

Pen warriors needed!
burning-embers said:

Sadly the warriors of the world are attracted to things more exciting to them than poetry my friend.

July 3rd, 2017 07:36

Live, learn and figure out
kevin browne said:

And i making it not a \'maybe\' but \'a huge difference\' instead. lets mix our thoughts together. great write my friend.

July 1st, 2017 07:05

Reap what I have sown
onepauly said:

it makes me feel sad because I have no daughter

July 1st, 2017 04:58

Reap what I have sown
Goldfinch60 said:

What a wonderful write, you must have been doing something right to get these words written for you.

July 1st, 2017 00:46

Reap what I have sown
Christina8 said:

Your daughter sounds wonderful and what great things she had to say in honor of you! It speaks volumes of you as a dad.

June 30th, 2017 18:13

Timeless task
onepauly said:

we can never be the whole person we are at any one time. lets work with all these other selves.

June 29th, 2017 20:43

Timeless task
malubotelho said:

It is beautiful. Flowing like a ballerina on a stage.

June 29th, 2017 20:22

Timeless task
FredPeyer said:

Beautifully written poem. The last two lines reminded me of how it feels sometimes when I write, like a surfer who caught the perfect wave.

June 29th, 2017 19:21

Timeless task
kevin browne said:

I think you just proved your point very indeed. leave those unwanted on board thought well alone and get on with your life. great write with reflecting thoughts.

June 29th, 2017 14:37

Indication
onepauly said:

the direction you are going now is just fine.

June 28th, 2017 19:27

Indication
malubotelho said:

Such beautiful way of writing. Thanks

June 28th, 2017 11:02

Indication
Poetic Dan said:

Cheers buddy

June 28th, 2017 08:39

Indication
Mello said:

Good poem dude.

June 28th, 2017 08:33

Mirror mirror
RAJ NANDY said:

WELL COMPOSED ! -Raj

June 27th, 2017 22:37

Mirror mirror
onepauly said:

the mirror of truth speaks for all mankind. from way back in those days

June 27th, 2017 19:28

Mirror mirror
FredPeyer said:

You say you are \"just telling your life story\". Happy are we who can write and express ourselves. I do feel sorry for people who cannot get anything on paper and have to internalize everything.

June 27th, 2017 19:10

Mirror mirror
kevin browne said:

then allow your own reflection to shine out to others and show them the love this world needs. quite a sentimental piece with strong feelings of inner thought and expression. good work, my friend.

June 27th, 2017 14:42

Mirror mirror
malubotelho said:

Very beautiful.

June 27th, 2017 13:37

Ma
Heather T said:

Sounds like this honorable lady was often the anchor in a storm. Lovely, the way you\'ve brought her to remembrance here.

June 26th, 2017 07:43

From where I stand
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write One day we will perhaps \'Give Peace a Chance\'.

June 26th, 2017 00:06

From where I stand
malubotelho said:

It can be achieved if more than 50% of us open our eyes 👀. I have my mind open but shame on me, I close my eyes to something\'s so I cannot get hurt.

June 25th, 2017 21:34

From where I stand
Poetic Dan said:

Why thank you Squire
I believe the unattainable
Is achievable
As you delightfully put it
Homonym that is love

I\'ll keep that one ;)


June 25th, 2017 08:37

Inspired by all
Heather T said:

Awesome sauce. Many parts of a greater Whole meeting on one unique plane.

June 23rd, 2017 15:46

Balance
onepauly said:

we are still growing up

June 22nd, 2017 18:06



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