Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Would you believe me
Augustus said:

Will never be able to see a rainbow the same again. Light but serious. Thanks. Sending positive thoughts.

July 10th, 2017 09:50

Would you believe me
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, we can always change our ways.

July 10th, 2017 07:38

Would you believe me
Nicholas Browning said:

Indeed. Change is a recourse that is never too late to be obtained. The mind can definitely bring about many things unseen to the human eye.

July 10th, 2017 06:11

Would you believe me
FredPeyer said:

Words and thought may not make things true, but they make them happen. And rainbows do appear when unicorns fart, I heard it from a reliable, but unfortunately secret source! And Poetic Dan, what if I don\'t want to change my ways? Would you still believe ME?
Sorry, it is getting late here and I had a long day, but I really enjoyed your poem!

July 10th, 2017 04:34

Would you believe me
billybob said:

Very thought provoking... Beautifully written!

July 10th, 2017 03:41

Words to the younger me
Poetic Dan said:

Thank you sir, Shakespeare sort of said it first ;)

July 10th, 2017 03:14

Words to the younger me
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and the last two lines are very true.

July 10th, 2017 00:41

Words to the younger me
Augustus said:

Forged in fire makes for strong iron. You my man are iron with heart.

July 9th, 2017 23:01

For you or for me?
ron parrish aka wordman said:

i guess it`s a secret what we are really after,for you or for me,i think a little of both

July 9th, 2017 18:59

Words to the younger me
Nicholas Browning said:

The stage of life shuns no man. Let\'s all put on a good show. Speak the truth friend.

July 9th, 2017 17:48

Words to the younger me
Moonflower15 said:

I think we all reflect and wish we could speak to ourselves when we were younger. I really enjoyed this.

July 9th, 2017 13:59

Words to the younger me
Heather T said:

Oh, I love this exhortation to your younger self! Touching and inspiring.

July 9th, 2017 11:26

Words to the younger me
Louis Gibbs said:

A good poem ... made great by the last phrase! Well done, Dan!

July 9th, 2017 11:24

Dear sun & moon,
Augustus said:

Very nice

July 7th, 2017 17:16

Tea with my head demon
Nicholas Browning said:

There\'s a demon within us all.

July 6th, 2017 09:58

For you or for me?
lostgirl24 said:

This is very profound; beautiful and truthful writing, Poetic Dan.

July 5th, 2017 19:45

For you or for me?
onepauly said:

comfort yourself, and you will find what your after.

July 5th, 2017 19:44

Pen warriors needed!
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July 4th, 2017 17:24

Reprogramming
Fay Slimm. said:

Agree wholeheartedly with these lines Dan - - loud applause for the reminder.

July 4th, 2017 09:22

Reprogramming
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

July 4th, 2017 07:32

Reprogramming
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, go forward in your life to the wonder that is ahead.

July 4th, 2017 05:22

Reprogramming
FredPeyer said:

Dan, I do like your poem! We have to reprogram our lives all the time. Living on past experience just isn\'t enough. I just published a poem that has to do with comparing our life to a spreadsheet. I guess we are all computer nerds!

July 4th, 2017 05:02

Pen warriors needed!
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and very true, words can be so powerful.

July 4th, 2017 00:49

Pen warriors needed!
burning-embers said:

Sadly the warriors of the world are attracted to things more exciting to them than poetry my friend.

July 3rd, 2017 07:36

Live, learn and figure out
kevin browne said:

And i making it not a \'maybe\' but \'a huge difference\' instead. lets mix our thoughts together. great write my friend.

July 1st, 2017 07:05

Reap what I have sown
onepauly said:

it makes me feel sad because I have no daughter

July 1st, 2017 04:58

Reap what I have sown
Goldfinch60 said:

What a wonderful write, you must have been doing something right to get these words written for you.

July 1st, 2017 00:46

Reap what I have sown
Christina8 said:

Your daughter sounds wonderful and what great things she had to say in honor of you! It speaks volumes of you as a dad.

June 30th, 2017 18:13

Timeless task
onepauly said:

we can never be the whole person we are at any one time. lets work with all these other selves.

June 29th, 2017 20:43

Timeless task
malubotelho said:

It is beautiful. Flowing like a ballerina on a stage.

June 29th, 2017 20:22



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