Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Would you believe me
Augustus said:
Will never be able to see a rainbow the same again. Light but serious. Thanks. Sending positive thoughts.
July 10th, 2017 09:50
Augustus said:
Will never be able to see a rainbow the same again. Light but serious. Thanks. Sending positive thoughts.
July 10th, 2017 09:50
Would you believe me
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we can always change our ways.
July 10th, 2017 07:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we can always change our ways.
July 10th, 2017 07:38
Would you believe me
Nicholas Browning said:
Indeed. Change is a recourse that is never too late to be obtained. The mind can definitely bring about many things unseen to the human eye.
July 10th, 2017 06:11
Nicholas Browning said:
Indeed. Change is a recourse that is never too late to be obtained. The mind can definitely bring about many things unseen to the human eye.
July 10th, 2017 06:11
Would you believe me
FredPeyer said:
Words and thought may not make things true, but they make them happen. And rainbows do appear when unicorns fart, I heard it from a reliable, but unfortunately secret source! And Poetic Dan, what if I don\'t want to change my ways? Would you still believe ME?
Sorry, it is getting late here and I had a long day, but I really enjoyed your poem!
July 10th, 2017 04:34
FredPeyer said:
Words and thought may not make things true, but they make them happen. And rainbows do appear when unicorns fart, I heard it from a reliable, but unfortunately secret source! And Poetic Dan, what if I don\'t want to change my ways? Would you still believe ME?
Sorry, it is getting late here and I had a long day, but I really enjoyed your poem!
July 10th, 2017 04:34
Would you believe me
billybob said:
Very thought provoking... Beautifully written!
July 10th, 2017 03:41
billybob said:
Very thought provoking... Beautifully written!
July 10th, 2017 03:41
Words to the younger me
Poetic Dan said:
Thank you sir, Shakespeare sort of said it first ;)
July 10th, 2017 03:14
Poetic Dan said:
Thank you sir, Shakespeare sort of said it first ;)
July 10th, 2017 03:14
Words to the younger me
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and the last two lines are very true.
July 10th, 2017 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and the last two lines are very true.
July 10th, 2017 00:41
Words to the younger me
Augustus said:
Forged in fire makes for strong iron. You my man are iron with heart.
July 9th, 2017 23:01
Augustus said:
Forged in fire makes for strong iron. You my man are iron with heart.
July 9th, 2017 23:01
For you or for me?
ron parrish aka wordman said:
i guess it`s a secret what we are really after,for you or for me,i think a little of both
July 9th, 2017 18:59
ron parrish aka wordman said:
i guess it`s a secret what we are really after,for you or for me,i think a little of both
July 9th, 2017 18:59
Words to the younger me
Nicholas Browning said:
The stage of life shuns no man. Let\'s all put on a good show. Speak the truth friend.
July 9th, 2017 17:48
Nicholas Browning said:
The stage of life shuns no man. Let\'s all put on a good show. Speak the truth friend.
July 9th, 2017 17:48
Words to the younger me
Moonflower15 said:
I think we all reflect and wish we could speak to ourselves when we were younger. I really enjoyed this.
July 9th, 2017 13:59
Moonflower15 said:
I think we all reflect and wish we could speak to ourselves when we were younger. I really enjoyed this.
July 9th, 2017 13:59
Words to the younger me
Heather T said:
Oh, I love this exhortation to your younger self! Touching and inspiring.
July 9th, 2017 11:26
Heather T said:
Oh, I love this exhortation to your younger self! Touching and inspiring.
July 9th, 2017 11:26
Words to the younger me
Louis Gibbs said:
A good poem ... made great by the last phrase! Well done, Dan!
July 9th, 2017 11:24
Louis Gibbs said:
A good poem ... made great by the last phrase! Well done, Dan!
July 9th, 2017 11:24
For you or for me?
lostgirl24 said:
This is very profound; beautiful and truthful writing, Poetic Dan.
July 5th, 2017 19:45
lostgirl24 said:
This is very profound; beautiful and truthful writing, Poetic Dan.
July 5th, 2017 19:45
For you or for me?
onepauly said:
comfort yourself, and you will find what your after.
July 5th, 2017 19:44
onepauly said:
comfort yourself, and you will find what your after.
July 5th, 2017 19:44
Reprogramming
Fay Slimm. said:
Agree wholeheartedly with these lines Dan - - loud applause for the reminder.
July 4th, 2017 09:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Agree wholeheartedly with these lines Dan - - loud applause for the reminder.
July 4th, 2017 09:22
Reprogramming
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, go forward in your life to the wonder that is ahead.
July 4th, 2017 05:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, go forward in your life to the wonder that is ahead.
July 4th, 2017 05:22
Reprogramming
FredPeyer said:
Dan, I do like your poem! We have to reprogram our lives all the time. Living on past experience just isn\'t enough. I just published a poem that has to do with comparing our life to a spreadsheet. I guess we are all computer nerds!
July 4th, 2017 05:02
FredPeyer said:
Dan, I do like your poem! We have to reprogram our lives all the time. Living on past experience just isn\'t enough. I just published a poem that has to do with comparing our life to a spreadsheet. I guess we are all computer nerds!
July 4th, 2017 05:02
Pen warriors needed!
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true, words can be so powerful.
July 4th, 2017 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true, words can be so powerful.
July 4th, 2017 00:49
Pen warriors needed!
burning-embers said:
Sadly the warriors of the world are attracted to things more exciting to them than poetry my friend.
July 3rd, 2017 07:36
burning-embers said:
Sadly the warriors of the world are attracted to things more exciting to them than poetry my friend.
July 3rd, 2017 07:36
Live, learn and figure out
kevin browne said:
And i making it not a \'maybe\' but \'a huge difference\' instead. lets mix our thoughts together. great write my friend.
July 1st, 2017 07:05
kevin browne said:
And i making it not a \'maybe\' but \'a huge difference\' instead. lets mix our thoughts together. great write my friend.
July 1st, 2017 07:05
Reap what I have sown
onepauly said:
it makes me feel sad because I have no daughter
July 1st, 2017 04:58
onepauly said:
it makes me feel sad because I have no daughter
July 1st, 2017 04:58
Reap what I have sown
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write, you must have been doing something right to get these words written for you.
July 1st, 2017 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write, you must have been doing something right to get these words written for you.
July 1st, 2017 00:46
Reap what I have sown
Christina8 said:
Your daughter sounds wonderful and what great things she had to say in honor of you! It speaks volumes of you as a dad.
June 30th, 2017 18:13
Christina8 said:
Your daughter sounds wonderful and what great things she had to say in honor of you! It speaks volumes of you as a dad.
June 30th, 2017 18:13
Timeless task
onepauly said:
we can never be the whole person we are at any one time. lets work with all these other selves.
June 29th, 2017 20:43
onepauly said:
we can never be the whole person we are at any one time. lets work with all these other selves.
June 29th, 2017 20:43
Timeless task
malubotelho said:
It is beautiful. Flowing like a ballerina on a stage.
June 29th, 2017 20:22
malubotelho said:
It is beautiful. Flowing like a ballerina on a stage.
June 29th, 2017 20:22
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