Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Listening deep down
Mugsdaddy said:
After you explained the lobster even better write.
Mugsdaddy
October 17th, 2017 13:03
Mugsdaddy said:
After you explained the lobster even better write.
Mugsdaddy
October 17th, 2017 13:03
Listening deep down
Christina8 said:
I thought it was a great write, PD! You have a great heart!
October 17th, 2017 07:09
Christina8 said:
I thought it was a great write, PD! You have a great heart!
October 17th, 2017 07:09
Listening deep down
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and like Fred got confused by the lobster lesson.
October 17th, 2017 02:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and like Fred got confused by the lobster lesson.
October 17th, 2017 02:59
Listening deep down
FredPeyer said:
PD, I get it, except for the lobster lesson. Got me stumped there! Is this an \'English\' thing? You know we \'Americans\' are sometimes a bit clueless!
October 17th, 2017 02:56
FredPeyer said:
PD, I get it, except for the lobster lesson. Got me stumped there! Is this an \'English\' thing? You know we \'Americans\' are sometimes a bit clueless!
October 17th, 2017 02:56
Know your force
Accidental Poet said:
Careful and thoughtful planning will bring desired results. Great write Dan. ; )
October 16th, 2017 20:14
Accidental Poet said:
Careful and thoughtful planning will bring desired results. Great write Dan. ; )
October 16th, 2017 20:14
Know your force
poetboy123 said:
To give it your all and end up tripping, is better than doing nothing and falling. Incredible write Dan!
October 16th, 2017 18:20
poetboy123 said:
To give it your all and end up tripping, is better than doing nothing and falling. Incredible write Dan!
October 16th, 2017 18:20
Know your force
FredPeyer said:
This one definitely does not only make sense in your head, it makes sense, period!
How many times did we use excessive force when just a little bit would have been enough. And I am not only talking physical here, the same goes for our head.
Great poem, PD!
Now you make me work, trying to rethink that awesome force inside me! :-)
October 16th, 2017 16:21
FredPeyer said:
This one definitely does not only make sense in your head, it makes sense, period!
How many times did we use excessive force when just a little bit would have been enough. And I am not only talking physical here, the same goes for our head.
Great poem, PD!
Now you make me work, trying to rethink that awesome force inside me! :-)
October 16th, 2017 16:21
Know your force
Fay Slimm. said:
An apt piece of imagery brings the right feel to this verse on using our inner force for reshaping our challenges - - good advice Dan
October 16th, 2017 14:38
Fay Slimm. said:
An apt piece of imagery brings the right feel to this verse on using our inner force for reshaping our challenges - - good advice Dan
October 16th, 2017 14:38
Living is truth
Seek said:
Good to see you will not led the digital noise stop you from seeing things as they are, especially in a world where truth from fake can be so blurred.
October 16th, 2017 05:40
Seek said:
Good to see you will not led the digital noise stop you from seeing things as they are, especially in a world where truth from fake can be so blurred.
October 16th, 2017 05:40
Living is truth
FredPeyer said:
While I agree with your message, PD, I think we should also consider information overload (tmi). By being bombarded with too many messages, one might not get to the truth anymore!
October 16th, 2017 04:49
FredPeyer said:
While I agree with your message, PD, I think we should also consider information overload (tmi). By being bombarded with too many messages, one might not get to the truth anymore!
October 16th, 2017 04:49
Living is truth
poetboy123 said:
Absolutely incredible! This is my cup of tea, wonderful write my friend!
October 15th, 2017 13:05
poetboy123 said:
Absolutely incredible! This is my cup of tea, wonderful write my friend!
October 15th, 2017 13:05
Living is truth
Christina8 said:
Very good write, Dan! Full of truth. Love the picture with the saying too.
October 15th, 2017 11:12
Christina8 said:
Very good write, Dan! Full of truth. Love the picture with the saying too.
October 15th, 2017 11:12
Days like this
Christina8 said:
May the rest of your weeks be filled with Saturdays! Fine write! Nice picture too!
October 14th, 2017 08:16
Christina8 said:
May the rest of your weeks be filled with Saturdays! Fine write! Nice picture too!
October 14th, 2017 08:16
Days like this
Accidental Poet said:
May your weeks only get better and better Dan. Great poem. ; )
October 14th, 2017 07:51
Accidental Poet said:
May your weeks only get better and better Dan. Great poem. ; )
October 14th, 2017 07:51
Days like this
Fay Slimm. said:
Love this break-down and build-up again of what most experience some time in life.......... an honest write and a good reminder to keep on remembering the good days Dan
October 14th, 2017 05:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Love this break-down and build-up again of what most experience some time in life.......... an honest write and a good reminder to keep on remembering the good days Dan
October 14th, 2017 05:39
Days like this
FredPeyer said:
Forget the week, PD, just live weekend to weekend!
October 14th, 2017 04:43
FredPeyer said:
Forget the week, PD, just live weekend to weekend!
October 14th, 2017 04:43
I don\'t believe what I believe
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. I do agree with Fred though, in my mind I am still thirty five but when I try to use this sixty nine year old body to try and do things the mind just laughs at me.
October 14th, 2017 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. I do agree with Fred though, in my mind I am still thirty five but when I try to use this sixty nine year old body to try and do things the mind just laughs at me.
October 14th, 2017 01:18
I don\'t believe what I believe
Fay Slimm. said:
A compelling read Dan - we are certainly equipped to keep on trying to find the power inside .Love that last line.
October 13th, 2017 14:49
Fay Slimm. said:
A compelling read Dan - we are certainly equipped to keep on trying to find the power inside .Love that last line.
October 13th, 2017 14:49
I don\'t believe what I believe
Louis Gibbs said:
We conceive, believe, then create. Your fine poem says it more eloquently, Dan. Well done!
October 13th, 2017 14:21
Louis Gibbs said:
We conceive, believe, then create. Your fine poem says it more eloquently, Dan. Well done!
October 13th, 2017 14:21
I don\'t believe what I believe
FredPeyer said:
Good advice, PD. The mind and belief come first, then everything else follows.
There is sometimes a problem though when you get older, when the mind says \'I can do that\' and the body answers \'Are you kidding?\'
October 13th, 2017 11:51
FredPeyer said:
Good advice, PD. The mind and belief come first, then everything else follows.
There is sometimes a problem though when you get older, when the mind says \'I can do that\' and the body answers \'Are you kidding?\'
October 13th, 2017 11:51
Thank you for the support
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and well done at the open mike night.
October 13th, 2017 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and well done at the open mike night.
October 13th, 2017 00:28
Thank you for the support
Accidental Poet said:
Way to go Dan. Congratulations. I give you much credit my friend. I went to one of these poetry nights and I did not have the courage to get up in front of everyone and recite my poetry. Good for you. You da man. Great write here too. ; )
Hey, I started a fusion poem and I\'d like your input. You can find it on my front profile page under my list of poems. ; )
October 12th, 2017 18:54
Accidental Poet said:
Way to go Dan. Congratulations. I give you much credit my friend. I went to one of these poetry nights and I did not have the courage to get up in front of everyone and recite my poetry. Good for you. You da man. Great write here too. ; )
Hey, I started a fusion poem and I\'d like your input. You can find it on my front profile page under my list of poems. ; )
October 12th, 2017 18:54
Thank you for the support
poetboy123 said:
I\'m pretty sure the thank you should be going the other way around, after all you\'re the one who writes these poems! And the open mic part was awesome, good on you!
October 12th, 2017 18:19
poetboy123 said:
I\'m pretty sure the thank you should be going the other way around, after all you\'re the one who writes these poems! And the open mic part was awesome, good on you!
October 12th, 2017 18:19
Thank you for the support
FredPeyer said:
Very, very well done PD!
I don\'t know if I had the courage to stand up in front of a crowd and read my poems. So, hat\'s off to you!
October 12th, 2017 18:02
FredPeyer said:
Very, very well done PD!
I don\'t know if I had the courage to stand up in front of a crowd and read my poems. So, hat\'s off to you!
October 12th, 2017 18:02
I\'m thinking
FredPeyer said:
A very good write, PD. We ARE experiencing ourselves through the people around us. Sometimes in a good way, sometimes in a not so good way. Then, instead of getting mad or upset, we do have to take a good look at ourselves to find the truth. I do believe that if we love somebody we give up part of ourselves and together with the other person become a new whole.
You went pretty deep here!
October 11th, 2017 11:18
FredPeyer said:
A very good write, PD. We ARE experiencing ourselves through the people around us. Sometimes in a good way, sometimes in a not so good way. Then, instead of getting mad or upset, we do have to take a good look at ourselves to find the truth. I do believe that if we love somebody we give up part of ourselves and together with the other person become a new whole.
You went pretty deep here!
October 11th, 2017 11:18
His and hers
Christina8 said:
A sad read, probably difficult to write. The childhood stuff was not your fault. Glad you are healing through this process. Good luck to you and your healing heart!
October 10th, 2017 11:28
Christina8 said:
A sad read, probably difficult to write. The childhood stuff was not your fault. Glad you are healing through this process. Good luck to you and your healing heart!
October 10th, 2017 11:28
His and hers
Fay Slimm. said:
A sad read which must have been painful to write Dan -- questions asked that have no one answer as troubles come by the score to some - yet the piece shows so clearly the results of childhood abuse. Thanks my friend for sharing such hurtful memories.
October 10th, 2017 08:24
Fay Slimm. said:
A sad read which must have been painful to write Dan -- questions asked that have no one answer as troubles come by the score to some - yet the piece shows so clearly the results of childhood abuse. Thanks my friend for sharing such hurtful memories.
October 10th, 2017 08:24
No hesitation
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we all need to write what is within us.
October 10th, 2017 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we all need to write what is within us.
October 10th, 2017 00:34
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