Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
If I Was Just A Lonely House Upon a Hill
Bella Shepard said:
The personification here is exquisite. The house endures all kinds of weather as do we in daily life and we persist, for the rainbows will always come. Love the poem, love the pic.
August 4th, 2024 13:03
Bella Shepard said:
The personification here is exquisite. The house endures all kinds of weather as do we in daily life and we persist, for the rainbows will always come. Love the poem, love the pic.
August 4th, 2024 13:03
If I Was Just A Lonely House Upon a Hill
Thoughtless said:
Finding joy in the total outcome by accepting the good and bad. Knowing that wonder can emerge from disaster. How beautiful. Thank you for this metaphor of human nature.
August 4th, 2024 08:08
Thoughtless said:
Finding joy in the total outcome by accepting the good and bad. Knowing that wonder can emerge from disaster. How beautiful. Thank you for this metaphor of human nature.
August 4th, 2024 08:08
If I Was Just A Lonely House Upon a Hill
aDarkerMind said:
without the rain
we would never have a rainbow.
one to keep warm the hearts of all who read Teddy.
August 4th, 2024 07:09
aDarkerMind said:
without the rain
we would never have a rainbow.
one to keep warm the hearts of all who read Teddy.
August 4th, 2024 07:09
If I Was Just A Lonely House Upon a Hill
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful turning of lemons into lemonade. Such a fun read, playful and in metaphor sending lessons. If not for the rain there would be no bath either and musty houses are not nearly as pleasant as clean ones. Very nice poem or fable.
August 4th, 2024 05:54
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful turning of lemons into lemonade. Such a fun read, playful and in metaphor sending lessons. If not for the rain there would be no bath either and musty houses are not nearly as pleasant as clean ones. Very nice poem or fable.
August 4th, 2024 05:54
Nightly Theatre
sorenbarrett said:
Even good dreams can give muscle contractions. A lovely dream that seems surreal indeed.
August 3rd, 2024 09:06
sorenbarrett said:
Even good dreams can give muscle contractions. A lovely dream that seems surreal indeed.
August 3rd, 2024 09:06
A Pin Drop Moment
Thoughtless said:
I enjoyed your poem. It inspired me to write my own poor version on the same topic. a pin
suddenly
drops
and
Ping!
Beyond belief!
August 2nd, 2024 21:43
Thoughtless said:
I enjoyed your poem. It inspired me to write my own poor version on the same topic. a pin
suddenly
drops
and
Ping!
Beyond belief!
August 2nd, 2024 21:43
A Pin Drop Moment
Thomas W Case said:
You did it. Great imagery. Wonderful work, sweet Teddy.
August 2nd, 2024 17:28
Thomas W Case said:
You did it. Great imagery. Wonderful work, sweet Teddy.
August 2nd, 2024 17:28
A Pin Drop Moment
Bella Shepard said:
I think the acute ear of the poetess is atuned to the slightest sound, from which she draws inspiration and presents us with this beautiful poem dear Teddy!
August 2nd, 2024 09:06
Bella Shepard said:
I think the acute ear of the poetess is atuned to the slightest sound, from which she draws inspiration and presents us with this beautiful poem dear Teddy!
August 2nd, 2024 09:06
A Pin Drop Moment
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ll be all day thinking of this metaphor. Yes down, down, down finally it will register Ping! I hate dropping pins on the floor if I don\'t find them all I eventually will when I step on them. A fun read Teddy and yes I believe you could write a poem about anything.
August 2nd, 2024 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ll be all day thinking of this metaphor. Yes down, down, down finally it will register Ping! I hate dropping pins on the floor if I don\'t find them all I eventually will when I step on them. A fun read Teddy and yes I believe you could write a poem about anything.
August 2nd, 2024 05:43
A Pin Drop Moment
Cassie58 said:
A shape poem. Nicely done. Oh to hear a pin drop dear Teddy. I live in a house often filled with noise. Need to go to the peace of a marina to appreciate silence. How golden it can be. Have a beautiful day. 🌹
August 2nd, 2024 05:04
Cassie58 said:
A shape poem. Nicely done. Oh to hear a pin drop dear Teddy. I live in a house often filled with noise. Need to go to the peace of a marina to appreciate silence. How golden it can be. Have a beautiful day. 🌹
August 2nd, 2024 05:04
A Pin Drop Moment
Accidental Poet said:
I\'ll believe anything you say dear Teddy. 😁👍🌹
August 2nd, 2024 02:07
Accidental Poet said:
I\'ll believe anything you say dear Teddy. 😁👍🌹
August 2nd, 2024 02:07
Consequence of Love
sorenbarrett said:
We sacrifice ourselves for what we love and that is one of the meanings of life. There are far worse things than to die for love. Nicely written in such a succinct manner.
August 1st, 2024 10:56
sorenbarrett said:
We sacrifice ourselves for what we love and that is one of the meanings of life. There are far worse things than to die for love. Nicely written in such a succinct manner.
August 1st, 2024 10:56
A Battle With Irony
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work, Teddy. You have a great sense of humor. You are fantastic.
July 31st, 2024 21:29
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work, Teddy. You have a great sense of humor. You are fantastic.
July 31st, 2024 21:29
A Battle With Irony
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m still laughing over your final line as as I write. Now what would Napolean do in a circumstance such as yours? Would he counter with something totaly unexpected? Allow that Teddy imagination run wild and give them something to really talk about. One day your genius will be recognized, perhaps when you put those two old biddies in their place and write an amazing poem about it. Loved this write! P.S. I\'m still laughing.
July 31st, 2024 14:24
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m still laughing over your final line as as I write. Now what would Napolean do in a circumstance such as yours? Would he counter with something totaly unexpected? Allow that Teddy imagination run wild and give them something to really talk about. One day your genius will be recognized, perhaps when you put those two old biddies in their place and write an amazing poem about it. Loved this write! P.S. I\'m still laughing.
July 31st, 2024 14:24
A Battle With Irony
aDarkerMind said:
but Napeoleon didn\'t have a gift for poetry, did he Teddy.
a fun read.
am sure my nosey neighbours would enjoy such words.
they seem more involved when I come with a takeaway!
July 31st, 2024 14:17
aDarkerMind said:
but Napeoleon didn\'t have a gift for poetry, did he Teddy.
a fun read.
am sure my nosey neighbours would enjoy such words.
they seem more involved when I come with a takeaway!
July 31st, 2024 14:17
A Battle With Irony
Thoughtless said:
Hey. You give their lives meaning. What more can one do? They should thank you for keeping them on their toes. Oh, your poetry. It\'s good enough for some American rags. However, I think it can do better than that. I believe you have talent. It\'s just that so many people are writing it today. Keep going. I\'ve been published in a few magazines online and off. You can to.
July 31st, 2024 13:37
Thoughtless said:
Hey. You give their lives meaning. What more can one do? They should thank you for keeping them on their toes. Oh, your poetry. It\'s good enough for some American rags. However, I think it can do better than that. I believe you have talent. It\'s just that so many people are writing it today. Keep going. I\'ve been published in a few magazines online and off. You can to.
July 31st, 2024 13:37
A Battle With Irony
MendedFences27 said:
Perhaps the best thing to stop your snoopy neighbors is to send them some of your poetry. They\'ll like it and not know what to do or they\'ll be scared you\'ll write about them and start changing their ways. Win. Win. - Phil A.
July 31st, 2024 11:22
MendedFences27 said:
Perhaps the best thing to stop your snoopy neighbors is to send them some of your poetry. They\'ll like it and not know what to do or they\'ll be scared you\'ll write about them and start changing their ways. Win. Win. - Phil A.
July 31st, 2024 11:22
A Battle With Irony
Cassie58 said:
You know dear Teddy, if I were you I’d be having a little fun with those neighbors. Give them something juicy to gossip about 😀. It is so hot here. Flaking out. Give my regards to Napoleon:)🌹
July 31st, 2024 07:40
Cassie58 said:
You know dear Teddy, if I were you I’d be having a little fun with those neighbors. Give them something juicy to gossip about 😀. It is so hot here. Flaking out. Give my regards to Napoleon:)🌹
July 31st, 2024 07:40
A Battle With Irony
Doggerel Dave said:
Noooo - trouble with the neighbours, Teddy? Unprecedented...!😅😂🤣
Irony you say.....?
July 31st, 2024 07:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Noooo - trouble with the neighbours, Teddy? Unprecedented...!😅😂🤣
Irony you say.....?
July 31st, 2024 07:14
A Battle With Irony
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like a great vacation but not from the neighbors. No matter how far one goes in this world one can not escape from gossip and the nosey. A little Napoleon brandy might help. A most fun read my friend.
July 31st, 2024 06:11
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like a great vacation but not from the neighbors. No matter how far one goes in this world one can not escape from gossip and the nosey. A little Napoleon brandy might help. A most fun read my friend.
July 31st, 2024 06:11
A Battle With Irony
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Teddy, Back in the day those neighbours were the Facebook on the street.
Andy
July 31st, 2024 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Teddy, Back in the day those neighbours were the Facebook on the street.
Andy
July 31st, 2024 01:54
My Favourite Colour Is Blue
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Teddy but yellow means life when the sun rises every day.
Andy
July 31st, 2024 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Teddy but yellow means life when the sun rises every day.
Andy
July 31st, 2024 01:46
My Favourite Colour Is Blue
aDarkerMind said:
a yellow Fiat Panda running you over Teddy ?
glad you\'re ok tho o;)
a most delightful read.
July 30th, 2024 12:39
aDarkerMind said:
a yellow Fiat Panda running you over Teddy ?
glad you\'re ok tho o;)
a most delightful read.
July 30th, 2024 12:39
My Favourite Colour Is Blue
MendedFences27 said:
As I write this, I\'m sitting here in my yellow shirt, not because it\'s yellow, but because it is most comfortable.
I\'m with you on your comment about writing anything. My God, we\'re poets, we can turn the world inside out. Let\'s go easy on the color yellow though. Loved your poem. - Phil A
July 30th, 2024 12:18
MendedFences27 said:
As I write this, I\'m sitting here in my yellow shirt, not because it\'s yellow, but because it is most comfortable.
I\'m with you on your comment about writing anything. My God, we\'re poets, we can turn the world inside out. Let\'s go easy on the color yellow though. Loved your poem. - Phil A
July 30th, 2024 12:18
My Favourite Colour Is Blue
Accidental Poet said:
I never really cared either way on yellow, and like you dear Teddy, blue has always been my color of choice.
And YOU dear Teddy, can write whatever you want cause I said so. 😉👍
July 30th, 2024 10:06
Accidental Poet said:
I never really cared either way on yellow, and like you dear Teddy, blue has always been my color of choice.
And YOU dear Teddy, can write whatever you want cause I said so. 😉👍
July 30th, 2024 10:06
My Favourite Colour Is Blue
Doggerel Dave said:
I vacillate between precisely those two colours, Teddy.
“Tie a Yellow Ribbon Round the Ole Oak Tree” always gets to me, while blue with all its variants wins most of the time.
Yes, you can write about anything………
July 30th, 2024 08:17
Doggerel Dave said:
I vacillate between precisely those two colours, Teddy.
“Tie a Yellow Ribbon Round the Ole Oak Tree” always gets to me, while blue with all its variants wins most of the time.
Yes, you can write about anything………
July 30th, 2024 08:17
My Favourite Colour Is Blue
Cassie58 said:
Yellow is the colour of my true love’s hair, in the morning. Can you remember Donovan singing that Teddy. Yellow is not a colour I would ever wear, but I love buttercups and sunflowers and of course daffodils in spring. Such a lovely bright write. That yellow fiat though!!!! What a nightmare. 🌹
July 30th, 2024 07:31
Cassie58 said:
Yellow is the colour of my true love’s hair, in the morning. Can you remember Donovan singing that Teddy. Yellow is not a colour I would ever wear, but I love buttercups and sunflowers and of course daffodils in spring. Such a lovely bright write. That yellow fiat though!!!! What a nightmare. 🌹
July 30th, 2024 07:31
My Favourite Colour Is Blue
sorenbarrett said:
In the US the term yellow means cowardly, also yellow ribbons were used as tokens to express loss in war for the victims or to bring back prisoners or the lost. Although bright as the sun it is not my favorite color either I prefer blue. mLoved your write friend.
July 30th, 2024 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
In the US the term yellow means cowardly, also yellow ribbons were used as tokens to express loss in war for the victims or to bring back prisoners or the lost. Although bright as the sun it is not my favorite color either I prefer blue. mLoved your write friend.
July 30th, 2024 06:31
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