Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Submerged In The Canals of Venice
sorenbarrett said:
The raven returns and a lost love from the past, now dead, haunts the present. Most interesting that your heart is on a rock, underwater, under the gondola, hidden invisible. Only through poetry does it show itself. It is only out of great pain that great art is formed. So nicely done.
May 21st, 2024 22:07
sorenbarrett said:
The raven returns and a lost love from the past, now dead, haunts the present. Most interesting that your heart is on a rock, underwater, under the gondola, hidden invisible. Only through poetry does it show itself. It is only out of great pain that great art is formed. So nicely done.
May 21st, 2024 22:07
Submerged In The Canals of Venice
Doggerel Dave said:
One of my very favorite holidays – my fortnight’s stay in Venice. On leaving I’m pretty sure a piece of my heart was ripped out and stayed. I did heal eventually, but the ache still sometimes lingers.
Off beam in relation to your poem Teddy, but any mention of Venice…….
May 21st, 2024 19:14
Doggerel Dave said:
One of my very favorite holidays – my fortnight’s stay in Venice. On leaving I’m pretty sure a piece of my heart was ripped out and stayed. I did heal eventually, but the ache still sometimes lingers.
Off beam in relation to your poem Teddy, but any mention of Venice…….
May 21st, 2024 19:14
Submerged In The Canals of Venice
aDarkerMind said:
as dark as I have ever seen from you Teddy;
an almost eerie tone....
and I\'m hooked!
May 21st, 2024 13:28
aDarkerMind said:
as dark as I have ever seen from you Teddy;
an almost eerie tone....
and I\'m hooked!
May 21st, 2024 13:28
Submerged In The Canals of Venice
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. Powerful work. You paint this sad tale well.
May 21st, 2024 11:53
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. Powerful work. You paint this sad tale well.
May 21st, 2024 11:53
A Sixteen-Hour Miracle
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words about a very meaningful occasion Teddy, that penultimate stanza says it all.
If only ....
Andy
May 21st, 2024 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words about a very meaningful occasion Teddy, that penultimate stanza says it all.
If only ....
Andy
May 21st, 2024 02:08
A Sixteen-Hour Miracle
aDarkerMind said:
a global jukebox indeed Teddy.
a write of many good memories for us all.
May 20th, 2024 12:41
aDarkerMind said:
a global jukebox indeed Teddy.
a write of many good memories for us all.
May 20th, 2024 12:41
A Sixteen-Hour Miracle
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy you were born the same year as my oldest son. I too, although not in London, felt that same sense and it remains in my heart to this day, a miracle of many years.
\"millions of people of all race and colour
united, simply joined together
with a wish to help others
no hate no discrimination
just love in our hearts
the day the world was united\"
A most beautifully stated sentiment.
May 20th, 2024 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy you were born the same year as my oldest son. I too, although not in London, felt that same sense and it remains in my heart to this day, a miracle of many years.
\"millions of people of all race and colour
united, simply joined together
with a wish to help others
no hate no discrimination
just love in our hearts
the day the world was united\"
A most beautifully stated sentiment.
May 20th, 2024 05:40
Little Tommy Titbit
aDarkerMind said:
very jolly Teddy;
just what the doctor ordered ;o)
May 19th, 2024 02:39
aDarkerMind said:
very jolly Teddy;
just what the doctor ordered ;o)
May 19th, 2024 02:39
Little Tommy Titbit
sorenbarrett said:
You are right Teddy there is always time for humor. Not quite sure why bigger is better but many men think so.
May 18th, 2024 14:42
sorenbarrett said:
You are right Teddy there is always time for humor. Not quite sure why bigger is better but many men think so.
May 18th, 2024 14:42
Little Tommy Titbit
Poetic Dan said:
Hello my friend and what a delightful voice I had in my head as this played out. Definitely always needed a giggle or two
May 18th, 2024 03:56
Poetic Dan said:
Hello my friend and what a delightful voice I had in my head as this played out. Definitely always needed a giggle or two
May 18th, 2024 03:56
Little Tommy Titbit
Cassie58 said:
Naughty Tommy Titbit and a case of mistaken identity:) He certainly has a long tongue, and also a penchant for ladies with enormous and ample cleavage:) Now what inspired this write dear Teddy. That I would love to know:)
May 18th, 2024 03:13
Cassie58 said:
Naughty Tommy Titbit and a case of mistaken identity:) He certainly has a long tongue, and also a penchant for ladies with enormous and ample cleavage:) Now what inspired this write dear Teddy. That I would love to know:)
May 18th, 2024 03:13
Always By My Side
sorenbarrett said:
I love surprise endings and this one caught me off guard. But as all guardian angels are really just a figment of yourself the beauty and sadness become more poignant and believable. May all your sad days become happy and tears of joy. i loved the piece
May 16th, 2024 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
I love surprise endings and this one caught me off guard. But as all guardian angels are really just a figment of yourself the beauty and sadness become more poignant and believable. May all your sad days become happy and tears of joy. i loved the piece
May 16th, 2024 04:42
Always By My Side
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, we all need an Angel in our lives. Your beautiful poem also brings in the city of my birth and early childhood memories. Plenty to be thankful for. Have a happy Thursday.
May 16th, 2024 02:23
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, we all need an Angel in our lives. Your beautiful poem also brings in the city of my birth and early childhood memories. Plenty to be thankful for. Have a happy Thursday.
May 16th, 2024 02:23
Always By My Side
Goldfinch60 said:
Your Angel will be forever with you Teddy.
Andy
May 16th, 2024 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Your Angel will be forever with you Teddy.
Andy
May 16th, 2024 01:46
Fishing
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that fish is living happily after knowing you dear Teddy.
Andy
May 16th, 2024 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that fish is living happily after knowing you dear Teddy.
Andy
May 16th, 2024 01:25
Fishing
sorenbarrett said:
I love the play on words and like throwing in the towel it is over when it\'s over. This seems to be the case with fish and people as well. It reads so playful and reminds me of all the times I went fishing and all the fish I threw back and a couple of times I have caught the same fish twice. In relationships I have caught the same person more than once as well. So nicely done.
May 15th, 2024 16:35
sorenbarrett said:
I love the play on words and like throwing in the towel it is over when it\'s over. This seems to be the case with fish and people as well. It reads so playful and reminds me of all the times I went fishing and all the fish I threw back and a couple of times I have caught the same fish twice. In relationships I have caught the same person more than once as well. So nicely done.
May 15th, 2024 16:35
Raven and I
aDarkerMind said:
dark with a delicate touch of fear Teddy;
am more than impressed with this one.
May 15th, 2024 13:11
aDarkerMind said:
dark with a delicate touch of fear Teddy;
am more than impressed with this one.
May 15th, 2024 13:11
Fishing
Thoughtless said:
Not what we mean by fishing here. It\'s a different metaphor. Good one, though.
May 15th, 2024 10:48
Thoughtless said:
Not what we mean by fishing here. It\'s a different metaphor. Good one, though.
May 15th, 2024 10:48
Fishing
Accidental Poet said:
So nice the fish kept coming back to visit with you Teddy. 😉👍
May 15th, 2024 08:27
Accidental Poet said:
So nice the fish kept coming back to visit with you Teddy. 😉👍
May 15th, 2024 08:27
Raven and I
Meera Mere said:
Amazing poem Teddy.15.
\"grief will come in many forms
but the form in which you choose to see it
will be the one that stays forever \"
May 15th, 2024 00:31
Meera Mere said:
Amazing poem Teddy.15.
\"grief will come in many forms
but the form in which you choose to see it
will be the one that stays forever \"
May 15th, 2024 00:31
Raven and I
Doggerel Dave said:
You are certainly giving Edgar a run for his money Teddy.
\"but the form in which you choose to see it \" - a line which has so much truth in it, and not only with respect to grief.
May 14th, 2024 19:12
Doggerel Dave said:
You are certainly giving Edgar a run for his money Teddy.
\"but the form in which you choose to see it \" - a line which has so much truth in it, and not only with respect to grief.
May 14th, 2024 19:12
Raven and I
Accidental Poet said:
Teddy you are wise beyond your words. Keep your quill wet. ✒️
May 14th, 2024 18:44
Accidental Poet said:
Teddy you are wise beyond your words. Keep your quill wet. ✒️
May 14th, 2024 18:44
Raven and I
Thomas W Case said:
A tremendous sense of the macabre. Excellent work.
May 14th, 2024 17:21
Thomas W Case said:
A tremendous sense of the macabre. Excellent work.
May 14th, 2024 17:21
Ageless Love
Accidental Poet said:
Reflecting back to younger days of where you grew up and feeling the connection to those places is special within all of us Teddy. I have the same feelings of my hometown of Scituate, Massachusetts. Our favorite memories are always calling us to come back. 🌹
May 14th, 2024 09:52
Accidental Poet said:
Reflecting back to younger days of where you grew up and feeling the connection to those places is special within all of us Teddy. I have the same feelings of my hometown of Scituate, Massachusetts. Our favorite memories are always calling us to come back. 🌹
May 14th, 2024 09:52
Ageless Love
Neville said:
A sight to behold .. I remember when it was going up .. the Eye that is .. and of seeing it in motion from both my old mates top flat window and from the air upon landing .. for you, coming home and seeing such familiar landmarks it must be even more special ... Neville 🌹
May 14th, 2024 09:48
Neville said:
A sight to behold .. I remember when it was going up .. the Eye that is .. and of seeing it in motion from both my old mates top flat window and from the air upon landing .. for you, coming home and seeing such familiar landmarks it must be even more special ... Neville 🌹
May 14th, 2024 09:48
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