Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



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Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful imagery. Gratitude is so important. This is superb.

February 5th, 2024 10:20

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Accidental Poet said:

And we, the lucky ones to read this masterpiece of poetry. Superb Teddy. 😉👍

February 5th, 2024 07:10

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Doggerel Dave said:

You tell us it was a bus, but i believe it might have been a carriage for you , Queen of that moment in time and a parade of your loyal senses....
Good stuff, Teddy.

February 5th, 2024 06:57

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sorenbarrett said:

It is the last line that says it so well
\"how very lucky I am just to be alive.
\"how very lucky I am just to be alive.\" like all the other beautiful things you mention, often taken for granted. A wonderful call for attention to all around us and gratitude. Very nice

February 5th, 2024 06:39

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Neville said:


now that\'s a mighty damned fine feeling isn\'t it .. I am sure I have passed this way before .. same route, same sky .. same Cyprus tree .. same peace of mind and very same dream .. that\'s what some poetry does for me Teddy .. thank you .. Neville


February 5th, 2024 06:22

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peto said:

I want a ride on that bus route
Love how you view things and your gratitude for life

February 5th, 2024 06:02

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Tom Dylan said:

Love this, Teddy. I could see those sunflowers. :-)

February 5th, 2024 04:25

Of Time and Of Love
Goldfinch60 said:

So true, that time machine can take us back to wondrous times Teddy.

Andy

February 5th, 2024 02:28

Of Time and Of Love
Christina8 said:

Wonderful poem that creates a beautiful visual.

February 4th, 2024 16:04

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Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant work, Teddy.

February 4th, 2024 12:59

Of Time and Of Love
Parisab said:

Creatively beautiful! Thanks for invite on the time machine! Bella Ciao!

February 4th, 2024 12:33

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Neville said:



there is more significance here than immediately meets the eye .. I got stuck in the late 19 somethings and feel like I am lost or left behind ..

a beautifully crafted poem nevatheless .. Neville

February 4th, 2024 11:10

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Accidental Poet said:

Beautiful write Teddy, and I\'m with you on the world being a time machine remembering the love. A bright start to my day. 😉👍

February 4th, 2024 11:04

Of Time and Of Love
sorenbarrett said:

Such a great idea seeing memory as a time machine. This may be more true than apparent. The movie \"somewhere in time\" brings this to mind. So beautifully stated by you in this wonderful piece.

February 4th, 2024 09:57

senryu to Gaza
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful senryu Teddy and so meaningful in these dreadful times.

Andy

February 4th, 2024 02:22

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Parisab said:

Great form to describe madness and chaos- I believe the nations wanted to agree, but there is no profit or power in peace- thanks for bringing attention so that we never forget, dear Teddy …

February 3rd, 2024 22:24

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Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work.

February 3rd, 2024 21:32

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Doggerel Dave said:

The contrast between the picture and the poem was a meaningful choice - an unspoken message, a statement all its own, Teddy. Thanks.


February 3rd, 2024 20:05

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peto said:

A difficult and emotional
Yet you managed to remain neutral
Very impressive

February 3rd, 2024 10:02

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Neville said:



sadly enjoyed or enjoyed sadly .. its all the same to me ..

February 3rd, 2024 09:44

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Accidental Poet said:

You make it look so easy Teddy. 👍

February 3rd, 2024 09:38

Portrait of a Poetess
sorenbarrett said:

All of us that write can feel this. Yes I too at times prefer free verse and at others rhyme. Words that flow from the heart can always be felt by others in a place where we all share commonalities. Lovely

February 3rd, 2024 06:09

Well Isn’t That Something?
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words from a young lady like you Teddy.🌹🌹🌹

Andy

February 3rd, 2024 03:23

Well Isn’t That Something?
Thomas W Case said:

Stunning. So Good Teddy.

February 3rd, 2024 00:12

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peto said:

Well if snoop dogg celebrates you
GO TREE
You have a unique style Teddy
Always interesting to read


February 2nd, 2024 17:36

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Doggerel Dave said:

Well then, a preemptive Merry Birthday (I like \'Merry\' rather than \'Happy\" for some reason)For me birthdays are for celebrating entry into this life, and numbers should be irrelevant (You\'ll never catch up to me, anyway so forget it).😆

February 2nd, 2024 17:26

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Bella Shepard said:

I shall declare February 2nd Teddy Day, and present you with the keys to our hearts. That little embryo certainly produced an amazing \"you\".

February 2nd, 2024 16:39

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Tom Dylan said:

Good on ya! We should all celebrate ourselves more than we do. Another interesting poem, Teddy. :-)

February 2nd, 2024 05:43

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sorenbarrett said:

I always have had an affinity for trees and fifty can be pretty young for a tree. Actually it is pretty young to me. A wonderful write congratulations.

February 2nd, 2024 05:13

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Accidental Poet said:

Oh boy! Can I celebrate with you Teddy? Today is Groundhog Day here in the US. I\'d much rather celebrate you my dear poet friend. 😉🌹

February 2nd, 2024 03:16



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