Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



Reflecting Upon One\'s Very Own Finale
sorenbarrett said:

A thought that most don\'t think of. We are two things: what we experience and feel, the joy and pain, and two what others see of us and remember of us. The first goes away in death the second remains even if just for a while. A lovely write so deep in its meaning.

May 25th, 2024 07:08

And That Has Never Changed
sorenbarrett said:

An image that conveys such a feeling so well. Short and to the point. In this case it is true, less is more.

May 24th, 2024 04:48

And That Has Never Changed
Cassie58 said:

Good morning dear Teddy. A moment in time, never forgotten. Wonderful romantic brevity. Have a beautiful Friday.

May 24th, 2024 03:39

An Exceptional Moment
Accidental Poet said:

Miracles happen everyday Teddy. 🌹

May 24th, 2024 02:14

And That Has Never Changed
Accidental Poet said:

So romantic Teddy, I remember days like this. 🌹

May 24th, 2024 01:56

And That Has Never Changed
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful.

Andy

May 24th, 2024 01:47

An Exceptional Moment
Poetic Dan said:

Look in the mirror and you\'ll see a miracle so wonderful, that makes many others happy!
Keep up the write my friend

May 23rd, 2024 23:54

And That Has Never Changed
Thomas W Case said:

Ahhhh. Beautiful.

May 23rd, 2024 17:46

And That Has Never Changed
Doggerel Dave said:

And you found me on the underside of that glittering orb. What vision Teddy.... Must\'ve been the mirrors....

Is it my imagination or are people leaving/taking a holiday? Never mind, now you\'ve seen me...... I won\'t go anywhere. 😊

May 23rd, 2024 15:38

And That Has Never Changed
theblackdahlia said:

That’s adorable

May 23rd, 2024 13:10

A Very Brief Moment 
sorenbarrett said:

What a wonderful way of stating that there are moments in time that we wish would never pass. I too have a few that are permanently branded in my mind. Your word choice is perfect for the occasion. I can only imagine that your faces substituted for the red light.

May 23rd, 2024 09:59

An Exceptional Moment
Cassie58 said:

I believe in miracles. You sexy thing.

Well Hot Chocolate sang that years ago Teddy and I remember that song so well.

Your posted artwork is so beautiful, a perfect match for your fine poetry. Of course I believe in miracles. They do happen just very occasionally. Have a lovely day. 💐

May 23rd, 2024 07:04

An Exceptional Moment
Goldfinch60 said:

Those miracles will come your way Teddy in the words that you share with us.

Andy

May 23rd, 2024 01:12

An Exceptional Moment
Doggerel Dave said:

A reflection, you reckon, Teddy? But I just cannot picture you sitting around waiting for a miracle - it just doesn\'t sound like you. Go girl, go.😉

May 22nd, 2024 19:36

An Exceptional Moment
A.H. Browning said:

Very nice writing! Love the painting.

May 22nd, 2024 19:23

An Exceptional Moment
sorenbarrett said:

They do happen indeed guaranteed. The odds of being born who you are is beyond a miracle. That all of your ancestors should have survived, met and had each next generation is beyond impossible in probability. Should one have altered you would not be you.

May 22nd, 2024 15:31

Submerged In The Canals of Venice
Cassie58 said:

Venice, on my bucket list Teddy. A dark, tragic tale you have penned here of a soulful heartbreak. Love your posted pic of the beautiful Venice canals. Such a romantic place to visit. Have a happy Wednesday dear poet. 🌹

May 22nd, 2024 11:04

Submerged In The Canals of Venice
Goldfinch60 said:

Such good sad emotive words Teddy,

Andy

May 22nd, 2024 01:59

Submerged In The Canals of Venice
sorenbarrett said:

The raven returns and a lost love from the past, now dead, haunts the present. Most interesting that your heart is on a rock, underwater, under the gondola, hidden invisible. Only through poetry does it show itself. It is only out of great pain that great art is formed. So nicely done.

May 21st, 2024 22:07

Submerged In The Canals of Venice
Doggerel Dave said:

One of my very favorite holidays – my fortnight’s stay in Venice. On leaving I’m pretty sure a piece of my heart was ripped out and stayed. I did heal eventually, but the ache still sometimes lingers.
Off beam in relation to your poem Teddy, but any mention of Venice…….


May 21st, 2024 19:14

Submerged In The Canals of Venice
aDarkerMind said:

as dark as I have ever seen from you Teddy;

an almost eerie tone....

and I\'m hooked!

May 21st, 2024 13:28

Submerged In The Canals of Venice
Thomas W Case said:

Wow. Powerful work. You paint this sad tale well.

May 21st, 2024 11:53

A Sixteen-Hour Miracle
Thomas W Case said:

What a voice Freddy had. Great work.

May 21st, 2024 11:39

A Sixteen-Hour Miracle
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words about a very meaningful occasion Teddy, that penultimate stanza says it all.
If only ....

Andy

May 21st, 2024 02:08

A Sixteen-Hour Miracle
aDarkerMind said:

a global jukebox indeed Teddy.

a write of many good memories for us all.

May 20th, 2024 12:41

A Sixteen-Hour Miracle
sorenbarrett said:

Teddy you were born the same year as my oldest son. I too, although not in London, felt that same sense and it remains in my heart to this day, a miracle of many years.
\"millions of people of all race and colour
united, simply joined together
with a wish to help others
no hate no discrimination
just love in our hearts
the day the world was united\"
A most beautifully stated sentiment.

May 20th, 2024 05:40

 Little Tommy Titbit
aDarkerMind said:

very jolly Teddy;

just what the doctor ordered ;o)

May 19th, 2024 02:39

 Little Tommy Titbit
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write Teddy.

Andy

May 19th, 2024 01:18

 Little Tommy Titbit
sorenbarrett said:

You are right Teddy there is always time for humor. Not quite sure why bigger is better but many men think so.

May 18th, 2024 14:42

 Little Tommy Titbit
Poetic Dan said:

Hello my friend and what a delightful voice I had in my head as this played out. Definitely always needed a giggle or two

May 18th, 2024 03:56



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