Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



If I was A Mirror
Thad Wilk said:

Exhilarating
awesomeness poetess!! ๐Ÿ‘
Very evocative,
superbly expressed!
My pleasure to read indeed!
Best wishes ๐Ÿ™๐ŸŒน. Thad

July 15th, 2024 19:14

If I was A Mirror
Doggerel Dave said:

Nothing like some positive self talk, Teddy. A strong foundation with which to relate to others . Well poemed.

July 15th, 2024 17:31

A Gentlemanโ€™s Secret
sorenbarrett said:

This poem says a lot about human nature. Who do we know, how much do we know about them and how much do we want to know. A name is the entryway to intimacy without it we can keep our distance while still observing. A great write.

July 15th, 2024 11:29

No Regrets
sorenbarrett said:

A great message said so poetically. I think we would all be better off if we lived it.

July 14th, 2024 13:48

The Visitor (my Raven )
sorenbarrett said:

\"dreamer\'s quilt\" a beautiful image and the overall image of a raven as a harbinger of the lifting of grief is very nice and quite counter to that of Poe\'s

July 14th, 2024 05:45

When Two Roads Diverge
Bella Shepard said:

You hit the vunnerable spot in all of us in this poem, the mystery of life that we can never solve. Que sera, que sera as the song goes. I just loved this!

July 13th, 2024 11:06

On The Very Edge of Passion
Bella Shepard said:

This is stunning my friend. You made my day, I really needed this. A million starry fav\'s to you.

July 13th, 2024 10:59

On The Very Edge of Passion
sorenbarrett said:

I think you captured this one with the title, picture and words. As is so often true in poetry less is more and this one proves it. Well said my friend.

July 13th, 2024 05:44

On The Very Edge of Passion
Thomas W Case said:

So very true. Do you need a match? Lol. You are the best, sweet Teddy.

July 12th, 2024 18:22

On The Very Edge of Passion
Doggerel Dave said:

Fire ignited years ago - I don\'t think it\'s magnificent, but is definitely present, now you have reminded me, Teddy. Thanks for that.

July 12th, 2024 17:45

On The Very Edge of Passion
Accidental Poet said:

The brighter the fire, the stronger the passion Teddy. And every poet feels that passion. ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ‘

July 12th, 2024 17:24

On The Very Edge of Passion
Cassie58 said:

Without passion how boring life would be. We all need to feel that fire. Beautiful brevity dear Teddy. Love your posted image . A perfect match for your words. Happy Friday. ๐ŸŒน

July 12th, 2024 12:55

On The Very Edge of Passion
aDarkerMind said:

love the title Teddy.

and so much in so few words.

most impressed.

July 12th, 2024 12:21

When Two Roads Diverge
Goldfinch60 said:

In one of the infinite number of parallel Universes you would have trod both paths in one to them Teddy.

Andy

July 12th, 2024 01:16

When Two Roads Diverge
Thomas W Case said:

I have a feeling, nothing is wasted on you, dear Teddy.

July 11th, 2024 23:00

When Two Roads Diverge
MendedFences27 said:

Well as the great Yogi Berra once said, \"When you come to a fork in the road, take it.\" Not making light of your poem, but when confronted with a choice that must be made, do not hesitate. Choose to the best of your abilities. Loved your poem. It made me think, \"What would I do?\" - Phil A.

July 11th, 2024 21:45

When Two Roads Diverge
Cassie58 said:

Choices dear Teddy can cause such problems. Which pathway to take? Once decided, no looking back. Well, thatโ€™s what I try to do lol, Not saying I am successful, but I know reflections on decisions can be unsettling. Loved this read and hope you have had a perfect Thursday.dear poet ๐ŸŒน

July 11th, 2024 14:40

When Two Roads Diverge
sorenbarrett said:

Choices, there is the illusion. Maybe it doesn\'t matter which road is chosen they may all end up at the same place. It all depends on whether you believe in determinism or free will. Green or blue are fine with me in that I like them both and actually I like red and orange yellow purple and even black and white. I feel the loss in this poem and hope it will heal in a joining of roads and colors

July 11th, 2024 13:12

When Two Roads Diverge
Accidental Poet said:

Every road a journey, every path a lesson. May you always be happy with your chosen paths Teddy. ๐ŸŒน

July 11th, 2024 10:21

When Two Roads Diverge
aDarkerMind said:

a very interesting and complex question Teddy.
and one deserving of a story to share, if that\'s ok with you?
it won\'t answer your question, but it might suggest life\'s conundrums are a part of life.through poetry or otherwise.

July 11th, 2024 09:58

When Two Roads Diverge
Tony36 said:

Amazing

July 11th, 2024 09:52

Floating thoughts
Goldfinch60 said:

Those decisions are with us all our life Teddy and I am sure the best ones will always be the ones you take.

Andy

July 11th, 2024 01:25

Floating thoughts
Accidental Poet said:

The skies belong to you Teddy. ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ‘

July 10th, 2024 21:28

Floating thoughts
Doggerel Dave said:

No, do stay anchored hereabouts, Teddy. We (me) need you in all your colourful variety.

July 10th, 2024 19:48

Floating thoughts
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant imagery, you could float over here. lol Great work, sweet Teddy.

July 10th, 2024 14:12

Floating thoughts
aDarkerMind said:

a very nice thought Teddy.

if only wishes came true my friend.

July 10th, 2024 14:09

Rose Garden
sorenbarrett said:

I can not only feel this but feel I have lived it. It is you last stanza that stands out the most. It is from the buried corps of love that new growth emerges. May yours sprout and grow with the birth of the new sun of spring.

July 10th, 2024 12:34

Forget Me Not
Cassie58 said:

Amazing how children think. I love this poem Teddy. It is stunning and forget me nots have special significance for me too. Lovely work. ๐ŸŒน

July 9th, 2024 15:54

Rose Garden
Cassie58 said:

Hello darkness my old friend. You reminded me of Simon and Garfunkel dear Teddy. Such wonderful lyrics they wrote and performed. Where love goes to die is surely a sad tale of all sunlight being eclipsed from life. I guess the rose garden would soften the blow by a degree or two. Heartfelt writing, beautifully composed.

July 9th, 2024 14:49

Rose Garden
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work dear Teddy.

July 9th, 2024 10:07



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