Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Floating thoughts
Goldfinch60 said:
Those decisions are with us all our life Teddy and I am sure the best ones will always be the ones you take.
Andy
July 11th, 2024 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Those decisions are with us all our life Teddy and I am sure the best ones will always be the ones you take.
Andy
July 11th, 2024 01:25
Floating thoughts
Doggerel Dave said:
No, do stay anchored hereabouts, Teddy. We (me) need you in all your colourful variety.
July 10th, 2024 19:48
Doggerel Dave said:
No, do stay anchored hereabouts, Teddy. We (me) need you in all your colourful variety.
July 10th, 2024 19:48
Floating thoughts
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant imagery, you could float over here. lol Great work, sweet Teddy.
July 10th, 2024 14:12
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant imagery, you could float over here. lol Great work, sweet Teddy.
July 10th, 2024 14:12
Floating thoughts
aDarkerMind said:
a very nice thought Teddy.
if only wishes came true my friend.
July 10th, 2024 14:09
aDarkerMind said:
a very nice thought Teddy.
if only wishes came true my friend.
July 10th, 2024 14:09
Rose Garden
sorenbarrett said:
I can not only feel this but feel I have lived it. It is you last stanza that stands out the most. It is from the buried corps of love that new growth emerges. May yours sprout and grow with the birth of the new sun of spring.
July 10th, 2024 12:34
sorenbarrett said:
I can not only feel this but feel I have lived it. It is you last stanza that stands out the most. It is from the buried corps of love that new growth emerges. May yours sprout and grow with the birth of the new sun of spring.
July 10th, 2024 12:34
Forget Me Not
Cassie58 said:
Amazing how children think. I love this poem Teddy. It is stunning and forget me nots have special significance for me too. Lovely work. 🌹
July 9th, 2024 15:54
Cassie58 said:
Amazing how children think. I love this poem Teddy. It is stunning and forget me nots have special significance for me too. Lovely work. 🌹
July 9th, 2024 15:54
Rose Garden
Cassie58 said:
Hello darkness my old friend. You reminded me of Simon and Garfunkel dear Teddy. Such wonderful lyrics they wrote and performed. Where love goes to die is surely a sad tale of all sunlight being eclipsed from life. I guess the rose garden would soften the blow by a degree or two. Heartfelt writing, beautifully composed.
July 9th, 2024 14:49
Cassie58 said:
Hello darkness my old friend. You reminded me of Simon and Garfunkel dear Teddy. Such wonderful lyrics they wrote and performed. Where love goes to die is surely a sad tale of all sunlight being eclipsed from life. I guess the rose garden would soften the blow by a degree or two. Heartfelt writing, beautifully composed.
July 9th, 2024 14:49
Rose Garden
Doggerel Dave said:
I feel all wrung out after that Teddy. It\'s only that I know it isn\'t true, that keeps me going.
July 9th, 2024 08:59
Doggerel Dave said:
I feel all wrung out after that Teddy. It\'s only that I know it isn\'t true, that keeps me going.
July 9th, 2024 08:59
Rose Garden
aDarkerMind said:
am deeply touched Teddy...
more than you could possibly imagine.
bless you.
July 9th, 2024 05:14
aDarkerMind said:
am deeply touched Teddy...
more than you could possibly imagine.
bless you.
July 9th, 2024 05:14
Broken Mirror
sorenbarrett said:
A reflection? A splendid story told in such entrancing form. It seems to begin as a fairytale and becomes archetypal. We all need that mirror or maybe we have it and just don\'t see being blind. A wonderful write.
July 7th, 2024 17:00
sorenbarrett said:
A reflection? A splendid story told in such entrancing form. It seems to begin as a fairytale and becomes archetypal. We all need that mirror or maybe we have it and just don\'t see being blind. A wonderful write.
July 7th, 2024 17:00
Forget Me Not
sorenbarrett said:
The innocence of a child and the honesty to say what things are in their eyes is what leads to the genius of learning. We do forget as we grow old and what I think is the greatest shame is we forget how to be a child.
July 7th, 2024 11:34
sorenbarrett said:
The innocence of a child and the honesty to say what things are in their eyes is what leads to the genius of learning. We do forget as we grow old and what I think is the greatest shame is we forget how to be a child.
July 7th, 2024 11:34
Forget Me Not
aDarkerMind said:
the innocence of a child.
beautifully written Teddy.
July 7th, 2024 07:13
aDarkerMind said:
the innocence of a child.
beautifully written Teddy.
July 7th, 2024 07:13
The Backbone of a Poem
aDarkerMind said:
word perfect and a delightful read Teddy.
as always.
July 7th, 2024 06:12
aDarkerMind said:
word perfect and a delightful read Teddy.
as always.
July 7th, 2024 06:12
Forget Me Not
Goldfinch60 said:
An intriguing write Teddy, such a wise child.
if you answered him can you please also let me know what happened to the first 74 years of my life. 🤣🌹
Andy
July 7th, 2024 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
An intriguing write Teddy, such a wise child.
if you answered him can you please also let me know what happened to the first 74 years of my life. 🤣🌹
Andy
July 7th, 2024 01:20
Forget Me Not
MendedFences27 said:
A lot of wisdom here. A poem that shows the innocent wisdom of a child
and also the wisdom of your own recognition. It\'s also sad that there is no answer to the child\'s question, not yet . Perhaps in the future. when we comprehend all the workings of a brain, we\'ll be able to answer it. A lovely poem. - Phil A.
July 6th, 2024 17:37
MendedFences27 said:
A lot of wisdom here. A poem that shows the innocent wisdom of a child
and also the wisdom of your own recognition. It\'s also sad that there is no answer to the child\'s question, not yet . Perhaps in the future. when we comprehend all the workings of a brain, we\'ll be able to answer it. A lovely poem. - Phil A.
July 6th, 2024 17:37
The Backbone of a Poem
Goldfinch60 said:
Or \"he seeps from his pen\" as well Teddy.
Very fine words .
Andy
July 5th, 2024 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Or \"he seeps from his pen\" as well Teddy.
Very fine words .
Andy
July 5th, 2024 01:22
The Backbone of a Poem
Parisab said:
We are indeed building castles sometimes from the dungeons-yours is always beautiful no matter what
July 4th, 2024 17:11
Parisab said:
We are indeed building castles sometimes from the dungeons-yours is always beautiful no matter what
July 4th, 2024 17:11
The Backbone of a Poem
sorenbarrett said:
I agree a poem is the emotion it evokes and whether it is sad or happy it matters not. You have worded it well and the poet is the pen that drips the ink of the soul onto the page. So well written this one is so true.
July 4th, 2024 14:52
sorenbarrett said:
I agree a poem is the emotion it evokes and whether it is sad or happy it matters not. You have worded it well and the poet is the pen that drips the ink of the soul onto the page. So well written this one is so true.
July 4th, 2024 14:52
The Backbone of a Poem
Thomas W Case said:
You have nailed this Teddy. Brilliant, you have drilled home the backbone of a poem. It\'s the hunger and filling. Truly superb.
July 4th, 2024 11:48
Thomas W Case said:
You have nailed this Teddy. Brilliant, you have drilled home the backbone of a poem. It\'s the hunger and filling. Truly superb.
July 4th, 2024 11:48
The Backbone of a Poem
MendedFences27 said:
Well, my belly\'s full. You\'ve defined the poem to a tee. I don\'t think there is an official definition of a poem, but you certainly hit most of the cues. So now, perhaps, I will be able to construct one. Thank you for this delightful start to my reading today. - Phil A.
July 4th, 2024 10:20
MendedFences27 said:
Well, my belly\'s full. You\'ve defined the poem to a tee. I don\'t think there is an official definition of a poem, but you certainly hit most of the cues. So now, perhaps, I will be able to construct one. Thank you for this delightful start to my reading today. - Phil A.
July 4th, 2024 10:20
Winter’s Meadow
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful sentiment and sense of temporary loss which is hoped will end in future reunification. Loved the last line that reflects the entire feeling of the poem.
July 3rd, 2024 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful sentiment and sense of temporary loss which is hoped will end in future reunification. Loved the last line that reflects the entire feeling of the poem.
July 3rd, 2024 11:30
On The Great Stage Is A Poetess And An Angel
Goldfinch60 said:
Dance with your angel at all times Teddy, she will always be with you.
Andy
July 3rd, 2024 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Dance with your angel at all times Teddy, she will always be with you.
Andy
July 3rd, 2024 01:20
Caged Hummingbird
Cassie58 said:
How beautifully poetic are your lines here Teddy. A most touching write. The mind can be truly powerful when we need it to be. Always best to be yourself. Your beautiful, unique self. 🌹
June 30th, 2024 19:20
Cassie58 said:
How beautifully poetic are your lines here Teddy. A most touching write. The mind can be truly powerful when we need it to be. Always best to be yourself. Your beautiful, unique self. 🌹
June 30th, 2024 19:20
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