Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



Senryu 2
LIZ said:

100% !!!!!! People can say what they want....but can they back up those words?? Just saying 😌 VERY nice Teddy!! πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

November 6th, 2023 03:49

Senryu 2
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Teddy.

Andy

November 6th, 2023 01:30

Senryu 2
Thomas W Case said:

Amen to that sister. Fantastic.

November 5th, 2023 19:00

Senryu 2
aDarkerMind said:

they certainly are Teddy.

nicely put.

November 5th, 2023 15:00

Senryu 2
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

β€˜Actions speak louder than words β€˜ sometimes don’t they ..

A nice writing teddy )



November 5th, 2023 14:13

In The Yesterdays Of Love Itself.
Teddy.15 said:

Isn\'t that the truth, anything but is a waste dear friend. ❀️ Thank you ❀️

November 5th, 2023 12:44

In The Yesterdays Of Love Itself.
aDarkerMind said:

I will read many times Teddy
take it all in,
and move on.
well said my friend.



November 5th, 2023 05:54

In The Yesterdays Of Love Itself.
Goldfinch60 said:

That past may be missed and may have been different if another door was opened but we all get to where we are now and I for one am very happy as I am sure that you are as well Teddy.

Andy

November 5th, 2023 01:57

A True Hollywood Woman
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful. We often judge too quickly.

November 4th, 2023 07:12

An Ode To The Coffee Bean
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful. It as though it did more for me when I was younger, it had that nice cocaine effect. Now, it just makes me pee a lot. lol. Great write.

November 3rd, 2023 12:48

In The Yesterdays Of Love Itself.
Garth Rakumakoe said:

Compelling title, seminal lines, loaded message - Blissful!

November 3rd, 2023 04:28

In The Yesterdays Of Love Itself.
MendedFences27 said:

It made me think what if? What if I could redo what happened \"In The Yesterdays Of Love Itself.\" So many chances at the real thing that went sideways for one reason or another. - Phil A.

November 2nd, 2023 19:32

In The Yesterdays Of Love Itself.
Bella Shepard said:

Dearest Teddy this is priceless. I have to keep reading it over and over, just for the joy of it. A simple truth exprtessed exquisitely. A thousand fav\'s!!!!!!!!!!

November 2nd, 2023 15:05

In The Yesterdays Of Love Itself.
Neville said:



nope .. delighted to have been pointed in the write direction .. ❀️

November 2nd, 2023 08:05

In The Yesterdays Of Love Itself.
LIZ said:

Yep....and ends up missing all the fun!!
What a fool!!! πŸ€­πŸ€­πŸ€­πŸ€­πŸ€­πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

November 2nd, 2023 05:20

In The Yesterdays Of Love Itself.
Thomas W Case said:

I think I follow lol. Excellent.

November 2nd, 2023 02:41

The Greatest Love Album Ever Written
aDarkerMind said:

an ugly pain Teddy

but a heart will always heal

eventually.

November 1st, 2023 15:35

The Greatest Love Album Ever Written
Bella Shepard said:

Your beautifully crafted second stanza is a stunner, bookended between confession, and resolution. Masterful write dear Teddy, and as always exquisite taste in pics.

November 1st, 2023 14:46

The Greatest Love Album Ever Written
MendedFences27 said:

Reading your poem and my computer plays \"Love Hurts\" by the Everly Brothers. OMG, a coincidence no doubt. A great poem. Music and wine can conquer even love\'s tribulations. Yeah, we\'ve all been there, and we\'ve all learned from it. Again, loved this one. - Phil A.

October 31st, 2023 16:42

The Greatest Love Album Ever Written
Christina8 said:

wonderful poem, teddy. I had that in high school, I can relate. But I\'ve been married so long. Anyway, I digress, it\'s a great topic and i think many people can relate.

October 31st, 2023 08:45

The Greatest Love Album Ever Written
LIZ said:

Isn\'t this the truth!!!! Makes for the best love notes. Definitely painful though......AND all the wasted makeup....just saying. πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

October 31st, 2023 04:58

The Greatest Love Album Ever Written
Neville said:


been there, done that, got the tee shirt, wore it out, wrote the book and tore it up so very many times .. now where was I .. oh\' yeah .. brilliant ❀️

October 31st, 2023 04:06

The Greatest Love Album Ever Written
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent. I relate.

October 31st, 2023 02:51

Indecent Proposal
Thomas W Case said:

I love this, superbly crafted...why wouldn\'t he consider thee? He\'d be a fool not to. Great write.

October 30th, 2023 17:53

Senryu 1
Bella Shepard said:

The picture reflects so well the beauty of your words, the pensive pose before the window of his soul, this perfect senryu. Bravo dear friend!

October 30th, 2023 15:43

Indecent Proposal
MendedFences27 said:

Perhaps in some ethereal way he already has visited you. Your writing skills must have come from someone. That\'s not to say that there will ever be another Shakespeare, but we all aspire to some form of poetic clarity. Your poem has reminded all of us why we endeavor so. A poem to make us all think. - Phil A.

October 30th, 2023 09:46

Indecent Proposal
Neville said:



Hardly bardly but the guy would be crazy to decline thee .. ❀️

October 30th, 2023 04:35

Indecent Proposal
aDarkerMind said:

after reading this Teddy, how could he possibly say no !

October 29th, 2023 09:18

Indecent Proposal
LIZ said:

Teddy!!! I think Shakespeare would fall in love with you!! I love this one!! Very straight to your face! This is what I want, kind of poetry. Oh he would definitely consider you!!!! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

October 29th, 2023 09:08

Indecent Proposal
rhmn_7 said:

Hell was always empty.. nice poem!

October 29th, 2023 07:54



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