Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Soul
sorenbarrett said:
Eerie and haunting this poem speaks with darkness and a sense of horror. The nonspecific nature of the presence enhances the feeling. Very nicely done
January 22nd, 2025 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
Eerie and haunting this poem speaks with darkness and a sense of horror. The nonspecific nature of the presence enhances the feeling. Very nicely done
January 22nd, 2025 05:09
An Ode to the Dreamer (Senryu)
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful message of positivity dear Teddy. We all need to wish upon a star and hope our dreams come true. We all need something to look forward to, especially when the going gets tough. 🌹
January 21st, 2025 17:28
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful message of positivity dear Teddy. We all need to wish upon a star and hope our dreams come true. We all need something to look forward to, especially when the going gets tough. 🌹
January 21st, 2025 17:28
An Ode to the Dreamer (Senryu)
Michael Edwards said:
A great write bur wouldn\'t work for me - I can never remember my dreams 😁
January 21st, 2025 15:28
Michael Edwards said:
A great write bur wouldn\'t work for me - I can never remember my dreams 😁
January 21st, 2025 15:28
An impossible Quest
NafisaSB said:
love comes in various shapes, sizes and ways - so i would say, yes, it is needed so that once we care, life changes for both giver and receiver
enjoyed the read
January 21st, 2025 10:19
NafisaSB said:
love comes in various shapes, sizes and ways - so i would say, yes, it is needed so that once we care, life changes for both giver and receiver
enjoyed the read
January 21st, 2025 10:19
An Ode to the Dreamer (Senryu)
sorenbarrett said:
Another lovely senryu of a most positive nature to begin the day. Dream on I say
January 21st, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Another lovely senryu of a most positive nature to begin the day. Dream on I say
January 21st, 2025 04:14
My Very Own Nevada
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Teddy and you have lifted into the light in your life\'s journey.
Andy
January 21st, 2025 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Teddy and you have lifted into the light in your life\'s journey.
Andy
January 21st, 2025 02:49
My Very Own Nevada
Thomas W Case said:
It is beautiful sweet Teddy. Pwerful work.
January 20th, 2025 22:52
Thomas W Case said:
It is beautiful sweet Teddy. Pwerful work.
January 20th, 2025 22:52
My Very Own Nevada
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy. An inspirational write with a superb ending. When you hit rock bottom, there’s only one way up. Naked feet tell me of the pain it takes and the struggle in climbing out of the mire. Kudos 🌹💜
January 20th, 2025 12:03
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy. An inspirational write with a superb ending. When you hit rock bottom, there’s only one way up. Naked feet tell me of the pain it takes and the struggle in climbing out of the mire. Kudos 🌹💜
January 20th, 2025 12:03
My Very Own Nevada
sorenbarrett said:
You are right Teddy I remember this poem well from the last posting and this ending is much better indeed (not that the other was bad but rather that this one is better) it gives a whole different feel to the poem. Brilliant!!
January 20th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
You are right Teddy I remember this poem well from the last posting and this ending is much better indeed (not that the other was bad but rather that this one is better) it gives a whole different feel to the poem. Brilliant!!
January 20th, 2025 04:33
An impossible Quest
Dan Williams said:
Not sure we can survive with it. Not sure whether living with it is anu harder than living without it. I\'ve been on both sides, grass is not greener either way. Nice.
January 20th, 2025 01:11
Dan Williams said:
Not sure we can survive with it. Not sure whether living with it is anu harder than living without it. I\'ve been on both sides, grass is not greener either way. Nice.
January 20th, 2025 01:11
An impossible Quest
Cloie said:
It’s a simple yet powerful reminder that love is just as vital as our brain and heart. Loved it!
January 19th, 2025 13:37
Cloie said:
It’s a simple yet powerful reminder that love is just as vital as our brain and heart. Loved it!
January 19th, 2025 13:37
An impossible Quest
Thomas W Case said:
But what kind of life without it? You are the best sweet Teddy.
January 19th, 2025 13:26
Thomas W Case said:
But what kind of life without it? You are the best sweet Teddy.
January 19th, 2025 13:26
An impossible Quest
Bella Shepard said:
Such an enigmatic question my friend. We may be able to physically live without it, but in order to survive we must have it, for it fosters empathy and compassion, without which we would live in a cold and uncaring world. An excellent write Dear Teddy!!!
January 19th, 2025 11:28
Bella Shepard said:
Such an enigmatic question my friend. We may be able to physically live without it, but in order to survive we must have it, for it fosters empathy and compassion, without which we would live in a cold and uncaring world. An excellent write Dear Teddy!!!
January 19th, 2025 11:28
An impossible Quest
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy. What a question. There are many types of love. We love people in different ways. I can’t imagine going through life without ever loving anyone at all. You’d have to be completely heartless, completely dead inside. Just existing, no joy. Have a beautiful Sunday 🌹
January 19th, 2025 09:29
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy. What a question. There are many types of love. We love people in different ways. I can’t imagine going through life without ever loving anyone at all. You’d have to be completely heartless, completely dead inside. Just existing, no joy. Have a beautiful Sunday 🌹
January 19th, 2025 09:29
An impossible Quest
sorenbarrett said:
Live like love has many definitions. We can exist without love but is that living? A wonderful question put in such a poetic touch. Lovely
January 19th, 2025 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
Live like love has many definitions. We can exist without love but is that living? A wonderful question put in such a poetic touch. Lovely
January 19th, 2025 05:12
An impossible Quest
arqios said:
So many things just to function normally and mostly undervalued or even ignored. Sad truth and state of affairs.
January 19th, 2025 04:32
arqios said:
So many things just to function normally and mostly undervalued or even ignored. Sad truth and state of affairs.
January 19th, 2025 04:32
An impossible Quest
Michael Edwards said:
Well I guess we can but without it it would a dour sad world - loadsa luv Teddy xx
January 19th, 2025 03:51
Michael Edwards said:
Well I guess we can but without it it would a dour sad world - loadsa luv Teddy xx
January 19th, 2025 03:51
Wild Horses
arqios said:
Brought to mind the song: ‘you and me against the world.’ A kind of feeling where only 2 are in the know. Special! 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 19th, 2025 03:03
arqios said:
Brought to mind the song: ‘you and me against the world.’ A kind of feeling where only 2 are in the know. Special! 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 19th, 2025 03:03
Wild Horses
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope that has happened Teddy as it has for me.
Andy
January 19th, 2025 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope that has happened Teddy as it has for me.
Andy
January 19th, 2025 02:17
Wild Horses
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful thought written wonderfully with great verse.
January 18th, 2025 14:10
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful thought written wonderfully with great verse.
January 18th, 2025 14:10
A Rose Without Thorns (senryu)
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful senryu Teddy.
Andy
January 18th, 2025 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful senryu Teddy.
Andy
January 18th, 2025 02:16
A Rose Without Thorns (senryu)
Thomas W Case said:
Beauty, sweet Teddy. Reminds me of My English Rose by The Jam. Good memories.
January 17th, 2025 18:42
Thomas W Case said:
Beauty, sweet Teddy. Reminds me of My English Rose by The Jam. Good memories.
January 17th, 2025 18:42
Rosy Lea
arqios said:
I was ruthlessly taught never to let the water boil but extract the kettle the moment just before the boiling ensues.. still brisk and bubbly hot to burn. 🫖
January 17th, 2025 18:29
arqios said:
I was ruthlessly taught never to let the water boil but extract the kettle the moment just before the boiling ensues.. still brisk and bubbly hot to burn. 🫖
January 17th, 2025 18:29
A Rose Without Thorns (senryu)
Cassie58 said:
You dear Teddy are so very generous and thoughtful. This is a beautiful senryu. I am touched that you wrote this for me. A lovely kindness. This red rose has no thorns which has some symbolism. A rose without thorns shows some vulnerability. The thorns are there for protection. I can own up to feeling vulnerable at times. A huge thank you dear friend. 🌹
January 17th, 2025 12:49
Cassie58 said:
You dear Teddy are so very generous and thoughtful. This is a beautiful senryu. I am touched that you wrote this for me. A lovely kindness. This red rose has no thorns which has some symbolism. A rose without thorns shows some vulnerability. The thorns are there for protection. I can own up to feeling vulnerable at times. A huge thank you dear friend. 🌹
January 17th, 2025 12:49
A Rose Without Thorns (senryu)
arqios said:
Oh nice! Cassie is one such English rose 🌹 ! Quite succinct but packed with so much, abounding beautiful grace. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 17th, 2025 06:47
arqios said:
Oh nice! Cassie is one such English rose 🌹 ! Quite succinct but packed with so much, abounding beautiful grace. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 17th, 2025 06:47
A Rose Without Thorns (senryu)
sorenbarrett said:
This could be any one of many but I think I know who. Well written and very clever Teddy
January 17th, 2025 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
This could be any one of many but I think I know who. Well written and very clever Teddy
January 17th, 2025 05:28
A Rose Without Thorns (senryu)
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one Teddy - one of my favourite forms x
January 17th, 2025 03:31
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one Teddy - one of my favourite forms x
January 17th, 2025 03:31
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