Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Minion Lisa
aDarkerMind said:
the lady herself would have enjoyed this I\'m sure.
almost as much as me!
June 11th, 2024 12:20
aDarkerMind said:
the lady herself would have enjoyed this I\'m sure.
almost as much as me!
June 11th, 2024 12:20
Minion Lisa
Thomas W Case said:
Lol. Hysterical and very creative, sweet Teddy.
June 11th, 2024 11:29
Thomas W Case said:
Lol. Hysterical and very creative, sweet Teddy.
June 11th, 2024 11:29
Minion Lisa
Doggerel Dave said:
Have you, as tickle duster got the resilience to change the world, Teddy? You’ve volunteered, my golly gosh, the task ahead….. But first, I anticipate lengthy counselling with orchi….. 😂
PS: how you can find out anything about Mona L, when she is surrounded by a plexiglass bullet proof cabinet and Massed Tourism, I have no idea. She could be a randy adolescent for all an examination of her in real time might reveal…….
June 11th, 2024 06:08
Doggerel Dave said:
Have you, as tickle duster got the resilience to change the world, Teddy? You’ve volunteered, my golly gosh, the task ahead….. But first, I anticipate lengthy counselling with orchi….. 😂
PS: how you can find out anything about Mona L, when she is surrounded by a plexiglass bullet proof cabinet and Massed Tourism, I have no idea. She could be a randy adolescent for all an examination of her in real time might reveal…….
June 11th, 2024 06:08
The Holiday
Goldfinch60 said:
We are going tom the Isle of Wight at the end of this month Teddy, then August, then October, then January and then March at least that is all we have booked so far!
Enjoy yourselves, we always do.
Andy
June 11th, 2024 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
We are going tom the Isle of Wight at the end of this month Teddy, then August, then October, then January and then March at least that is all we have booked so far!
Enjoy yourselves, we always do.
Andy
June 11th, 2024 01:46
The Holiday
Cassie58 said:
I don’t know what a luxury caravan looks like inside, dear Teddy, but I do know that February on the IOW is going to be pretty chilly. I wouldn’t fancy the crossing by boat in choppy seas either:) Was this the first prize? Lol. Made me smile anyway. 🌹
June 10th, 2024 15:46
Cassie58 said:
I don’t know what a luxury caravan looks like inside, dear Teddy, but I do know that February on the IOW is going to be pretty chilly. I wouldn’t fancy the crossing by boat in choppy seas either:) Was this the first prize? Lol. Made me smile anyway. 🌹
June 10th, 2024 15:46
The Holiday
sorenbarrett said:
Looks like a nice place but February?
A poem that in its brevity still is able to bring a surprise ending that brings a sense of joy to the soul in its comic appeal.
June 10th, 2024 12:37
sorenbarrett said:
Looks like a nice place but February?
A poem that in its brevity still is able to bring a surprise ending that brings a sense of joy to the soul in its comic appeal.
June 10th, 2024 12:37
A Very Special Journey
Goldfinch60 said:
Your muse will never fail you Teddy.
Andy
June 10th, 2024 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Your muse will never fail you Teddy.
Andy
June 10th, 2024 01:40
A Very Special Journey
Doggerel Dave said:
Now you’ve pondered, I’d suggest putting out tenders for a replacement muse if she (he or whomsoever) isn’t coming up with the goods…. 😂
For me, all that imagery was fun…… (you are of the liberal school who believes the reader may interpret…….. aren’t you, Teddy…..?) 😇
June 9th, 2024 19:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Now you’ve pondered, I’d suggest putting out tenders for a replacement muse if she (he or whomsoever) isn’t coming up with the goods…. 😂
For me, all that imagery was fun…… (you are of the liberal school who believes the reader may interpret…….. aren’t you, Teddy…..?) 😇
June 9th, 2024 19:59
A Very Special Journey
Sunita said:
Very moving, I absolutely love it.
Hoping to read more of your work
June 9th, 2024 13:09
Sunita said:
Very moving, I absolutely love it.
Hoping to read more of your work
June 9th, 2024 13:09
A Very Special Journey
aDarkerMind said:
and how lucky I am to be here reading your delighful words Teddy;
or even my raven greeting the scarecrow....
wonderful;
June 9th, 2024 11:45
aDarkerMind said:
and how lucky I am to be here reading your delighful words Teddy;
or even my raven greeting the scarecrow....
wonderful;
June 9th, 2024 11:45
Palms Spring
Bella Shepard said:
Coming from an Italian family, I know that there seem to be no boundaries when it comes to physical expression, it\'s in the genes. This poem is too much fun and too true.
June 9th, 2024 10:28
Bella Shepard said:
Coming from an Italian family, I know that there seem to be no boundaries when it comes to physical expression, it\'s in the genes. This poem is too much fun and too true.
June 9th, 2024 10:28
Poor Poet
Bella Shepard said:
I think that when your fossilized remains are unearthed thousands of years in the future, there will be clasped within your bony fingers the last and most perfect poem you\'ve written. It will be barely legible, but enough to know that here lies the charm and wit of one who deserves to be remembered. Love this poem!
June 9th, 2024 10:24
Bella Shepard said:
I think that when your fossilized remains are unearthed thousands of years in the future, there will be clasped within your bony fingers the last and most perfect poem you\'ve written. It will be barely legible, but enough to know that here lies the charm and wit of one who deserves to be remembered. Love this poem!
June 9th, 2024 10:24
A Leap In The Dark
Bella Shepard said:
The tug on the heart strings resonates in a way that the head cannot resist. Beautifully and eloquently written, accompanied by the perfect pic. Exquisite in every way!
June 9th, 2024 10:18
Bella Shepard said:
The tug on the heart strings resonates in a way that the head cannot resist. Beautifully and eloquently written, accompanied by the perfect pic. Exquisite in every way!
June 9th, 2024 10:18
senryu to Gaza
sorenbarrett said:
One that I missed back when that still applies today and seems that it will not go away soon. Nicely done.
June 9th, 2024 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
One that I missed back when that still applies today and seems that it will not go away soon. Nicely done.
June 9th, 2024 04:47
Sheep in Uniform
Thomas W Case said:
Such atrocity in the world. This is a moving and powerful piece. I\'m speechless.
June 7th, 2024 11:41
Thomas W Case said:
Such atrocity in the world. This is a moving and powerful piece. I\'m speechless.
June 7th, 2024 11:41
My Tapestry
peto said:
Extremely visual and descriptive
Enjoyed the stroll
The Mexican. wave took me back to that glorious world cup
And the hand of God goal by Maradona v England
As a Scot
The best goal ever
June 7th, 2024 08:12
peto said:
Extremely visual and descriptive
Enjoyed the stroll
The Mexican. wave took me back to that glorious world cup
And the hand of God goal by Maradona v England
As a Scot
The best goal ever
June 7th, 2024 08:12
My Tapestry
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words Teddy, the beauty of life as you pass through it is so inspiringly beautiful.
Andy
June 7th, 2024 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words Teddy, the beauty of life as you pass through it is so inspiringly beautiful.
Andy
June 7th, 2024 01:18
My Tapestry
sorenbarrett said:
I took this a couple of ways but the one I like best is that all life is the same in value and worth. We tend as humans to aggrandize ourselves above all other forms. Here anthropomorphized they are on the same level. I hope that at the end when you return to reality this is not lost. A fun and enjoyable write Teddy
June 6th, 2024 18:48
sorenbarrett said:
I took this a couple of ways but the one I like best is that all life is the same in value and worth. We tend as humans to aggrandize ourselves above all other forms. Here anthropomorphized they are on the same level. I hope that at the end when you return to reality this is not lost. A fun and enjoyable write Teddy
June 6th, 2024 18:48
My Tapestry
Cassie58 said:
Teddy, your words are uplifting and thankful. I enjoyed your journey. And Kew Gardens I know so very well. Have visited many times. So close to where I once lived as a child. My grandparents used to take me there. A lovely nostalgic post for ne. Hope your day has been a good one.
June 6th, 2024 11:28
Cassie58 said:
Teddy, your words are uplifting and thankful. I enjoyed your journey. And Kew Gardens I know so very well. Have visited many times. So close to where I once lived as a child. My grandparents used to take me there. A lovely nostalgic post for ne. Hope your day has been a good one.
June 6th, 2024 11:28
My Tapestry
aDarkerMind said:
how very true Teddy...and how lucky we are.
stunning;
June 6th, 2024 11:02
aDarkerMind said:
how very true Teddy...and how lucky we are.
stunning;
June 6th, 2024 11:02
My Tapestry
Thomas W Case said:
I love the joy and gratitude in this poem sweet Teddy.
June 6th, 2024 07:29
Thomas W Case said:
I love the joy and gratitude in this poem sweet Teddy.
June 6th, 2024 07:29
Sheep in Uniform
Goldfinch60 said:
An extremely raw period in life Teddy and something like that will neer be forgotten in our lives.
Andy
June 6th, 2024 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
An extremely raw period in life Teddy and something like that will neer be forgotten in our lives.
Andy
June 6th, 2024 01:43
Sheep in Uniform
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid and style true to a child writing it portrays a horrendous picture of loss in a world of pain and sadness. A tribute to a time many would wish to forget but none of us should. Nicely done Teddy
June 5th, 2024 17:22
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid and style true to a child writing it portrays a horrendous picture of loss in a world of pain and sadness. A tribute to a time many would wish to forget but none of us should. Nicely done Teddy
June 5th, 2024 17:22
Sheep in Uniform
aDarkerMind said:
as powerful as I have ever read from you Teddy;
a write that shows us how lucky we are.
June 5th, 2024 11:23
aDarkerMind said:
as powerful as I have ever read from you Teddy;
a write that shows us how lucky we are.
June 5th, 2024 11:23
Sheep in Uniform
Accidental Poet said:
Your heart is of gold
Your heart is sincere
She may be gone now
But she knows you are here
Feel her embrace
As she holds you tight
The words she leaves in your heart
Are your guiding light
May she live on in you
Share your smile everyday
For she believes in you
Because you have touched her this way 🌹
June 5th, 2024 07:58
Accidental Poet said:
Your heart is of gold
Your heart is sincere
She may be gone now
But she knows you are here
Feel her embrace
As she holds you tight
The words she leaves in your heart
Are your guiding light
May she live on in you
Share your smile everyday
For she believes in you
Because you have touched her this way 🌹
June 5th, 2024 07:58
Sheep in Uniform
Doggerel Dave said:
Jewish Museum, Berlin – same or similar feelings, although I was inundated with images after the war, as an adolescent which left me with nightmares which took a long time to abate.
Those sheep? Far too many still around, invested in nefarious causes today. (never understood why some women love a man in uniform…?)
This piece , I can see you put your heart and soul into; so while I could make some black humour around this Teddy, I’m not going to, and fully acknowledge the thought and pain you put into it. Take care.
June 5th, 2024 07:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Jewish Museum, Berlin – same or similar feelings, although I was inundated with images after the war, as an adolescent which left me with nightmares which took a long time to abate.
Those sheep? Far too many still around, invested in nefarious causes today. (never understood why some women love a man in uniform…?)
This piece , I can see you put your heart and soul into; so while I could make some black humour around this Teddy, I’m not going to, and fully acknowledge the thought and pain you put into it. Take care.
June 5th, 2024 07:42
Sheep in Uniform
peto said:
I once visited belsen Teddy
So understand these emotions
one of the most personal I\'ve seen from you
Hammer blow of a write
June 5th, 2024 06:31
peto said:
I once visited belsen Teddy
So understand these emotions
one of the most personal I\'ve seen from you
Hammer blow of a write
June 5th, 2024 06:31
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