Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Karmasutra
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, I think I’ll have some of what you are eating. Did you know there is an Indian restaurant in Hammersmith called the Karmasutra? Biryani’s are on the menu. This is a hot and spicy fun write for the weekend. Love it. 😂🌹
September 13th, 2024 09:22
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, I think I’ll have some of what you are eating. Did you know there is an Indian restaurant in Hammersmith called the Karmasutra? Biryani’s are on the menu. This is a hot and spicy fun write for the weekend. Love it. 😂🌹
September 13th, 2024 09:22
Karmasutra
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m mercifully ignorant in that I\'m not even sure quite what a pretzel is.....😇!!!🙃
September 13th, 2024 06:00
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m mercifully ignorant in that I\'m not even sure quite what a pretzel is.....😇!!!🙃
September 13th, 2024 06:00
Karmasutra
sorenbarrett said:
Highly sensual Teddy in a very tasteful way. Short but quite sensuous. Loved it
September 13th, 2024 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
Highly sensual Teddy in a very tasteful way. Short but quite sensuous. Loved it
September 13th, 2024 04:57
Dreamers Quilt
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Teddy, Nature has a way of curing many troubles.
Andy
September 13th, 2024 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Teddy, Nature has a way of curing many troubles.
Andy
September 13th, 2024 01:52
Dreamers Quilt
Cheeky Missy said:
Were it merely a photo, it\'d be lovely, however, knowing tis Italy itself and taken by you, to boot, I cannot get my fill. Mum said rain was allus good for sleeping and ah, how you illustrate this charmingly to effect with an exquisite and irresistible sense of gaity. Superb. Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 12th, 2024 19:27
Cheeky Missy said:
Were it merely a photo, it\'d be lovely, however, knowing tis Italy itself and taken by you, to boot, I cannot get my fill. Mum said rain was allus good for sleeping and ah, how you illustrate this charmingly to effect with an exquisite and irresistible sense of gaity. Superb. Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 12th, 2024 19:27
Dreamers Quilt
Cassie58 said:
We have a sky light in our bedroom Teddy, so I know exactly what you mean here. That pitter patter certainly aids sleep. I like the thought that rainfall can cleanse all the bad dreams. A beautifully calming and visual poem. Have a happy Thursday. 🌹
September 12th, 2024 10:06
Cassie58 said:
We have a sky light in our bedroom Teddy, so I know exactly what you mean here. That pitter patter certainly aids sleep. I like the thought that rainfall can cleanse all the bad dreams. A beautifully calming and visual poem. Have a happy Thursday. 🌹
September 12th, 2024 10:06
Dreamers Quilt
sorenbarrett said:
The sound of falling rain on the roof is the best and induces slumberalmost instantaniously. Peaceful and calm are the feelings I get from this poem.
September 12th, 2024 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
The sound of falling rain on the roof is the best and induces slumberalmost instantaniously. Peaceful and calm are the feelings I get from this poem.
September 12th, 2024 05:29
When Everything Glows but Me
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that light is there in your life Teddy, I will give you a match to light that candle:
Andy
September 12th, 2024 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that light is there in your life Teddy, I will give you a match to light that candle:
Andy
September 12th, 2024 01:50
When Everything Glows but Me
sorenbarrett said:
To find anything in the dark is difficult. If you are lucky enough to step on it or trip over it you may but otherwise you need light,. I hope you crack that shell and find the light.
September 11th, 2024 18:59
sorenbarrett said:
To find anything in the dark is difficult. If you are lucky enough to step on it or trip over it you may but otherwise you need light,. I hope you crack that shell and find the light.
September 11th, 2024 18:59
It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, abbaabbacdcdcd lost their way as rhymed couplets took the crown in a gorgeous piece I can\'t but LOVE. My, my, you took 3 years with blood and sweat? Aww, it\'s easier than that, by far.
It\'d definitely be a different creature if it wasn\'t this beauty. Treat the ideas like a horse whose reins you yield up while you flow with him wherever he wants to run, only guiding him gently here and there.
That aside, oh! But the passion so vibrantly thrilling through this like to bleed itself on the page is poignantly alive as the rhymed couplets chase the living thought down the page to its happy conclusion. Delightfully infused and detailed, I love it. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 15:15
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, abbaabbacdcdcd lost their way as rhymed couplets took the crown in a gorgeous piece I can\'t but LOVE. My, my, you took 3 years with blood and sweat? Aww, it\'s easier than that, by far.
It\'d definitely be a different creature if it wasn\'t this beauty. Treat the ideas like a horse whose reins you yield up while you flow with him wherever he wants to run, only guiding him gently here and there.
That aside, oh! But the passion so vibrantly thrilling through this like to bleed itself on the page is poignantly alive as the rhymed couplets chase the living thought down the page to its happy conclusion. Delightfully infused and detailed, I love it. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 15:15
When Everything Glows but Me
Cassie58 said:
Lost in yourself dear Teddy. In the depths of soul searching. When you get that far down, the only way is up. Keep searching for the light. Beautiful poetry dear poet. 🌹
September 11th, 2024 14:48
Cassie58 said:
Lost in yourself dear Teddy. In the depths of soul searching. When you get that far down, the only way is up. Keep searching for the light. Beautiful poetry dear poet. 🌹
September 11th, 2024 14:48
When Everything Glows but Me
Cheeky Missy said:
Stop digging down. If you won\'t brew and sip a heartening cuppa tea, then pull an espresso or brew a cup from your moka pot. It\'s easier than you realize. You will find yourself when you stop looking. Look up. Listen. It\'s all around you.
I love this beautiful tribute to dredging the depths of one\'s soul in search for what is either not there or else remains invisible until the candle splashes light on it. I love the aching poignancy and details. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 14:32
Cheeky Missy said:
Stop digging down. If you won\'t brew and sip a heartening cuppa tea, then pull an espresso or brew a cup from your moka pot. It\'s easier than you realize. You will find yourself when you stop looking. Look up. Listen. It\'s all around you.
I love this beautiful tribute to dredging the depths of one\'s soul in search for what is either not there or else remains invisible until the candle splashes light on it. I love the aching poignancy and details. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 14:32
In Silence and Disbelief
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy about an horrendous episode in history.
I was working that day in an open plan office with a dozen of us in there. That afternoon our normally busy \'phones did not ring at all.
Andy
September 11th, 2024 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy about an horrendous episode in history.
I was working that day in an open plan office with a dozen of us in there. That afternoon our normally busy \'phones did not ring at all.
Andy
September 11th, 2024 01:28
In Silence and Disbelief
Dan Williams said:
Sorry, but this is entirely about terrorism, that scourge of modern times. What demented beliefs justify this grief? Nice write though.
September 11th, 2024 00:31
Dan Williams said:
Sorry, but this is entirely about terrorism, that scourge of modern times. What demented beliefs justify this grief? Nice write though.
September 11th, 2024 00:31
In Silence and Disbelief
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and moving tribute, sweet Teddy. Tremendous work.
September 10th, 2024 19:04
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and moving tribute, sweet Teddy. Tremendous work.
September 10th, 2024 19:04
In Silence and Disbelief
Doggerel Dave said:
Hateful time if you were personally involved, Teddy......
But...innocent people die in war.
\'World peace\' is absolutely right.
September 10th, 2024 08:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Hateful time if you were personally involved, Teddy......
But...innocent people die in war.
\'World peace\' is absolutely right.
September 10th, 2024 08:59
In Silence and Disbelief
sorenbarrett said:
A most heartfelt commemoration of a trajic day. I too remember where I was as I watched in disbelief as the second plane dove into the towers A very appropriate write for the day
September 10th, 2024 05:46
sorenbarrett said:
A most heartfelt commemoration of a trajic day. I too remember where I was as I watched in disbelief as the second plane dove into the towers A very appropriate write for the day
September 10th, 2024 05:46
Home
Doggerel Dave said:
Might have changed by the time you get there....I may have mentioned...... before....60\'s and 70\'s London......
But I do understand, Teddy.
September 9th, 2024 08:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Might have changed by the time you get there....I may have mentioned...... before....60\'s and 70\'s London......
But I do understand, Teddy.
September 9th, 2024 08:22
Home
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy I feel your longing for your home. There is a feeling of loss in this poem. The pool of the dirt from which we were born, his magnetically strong. Find memories of the past drawers, as if they were the currents in the sea . “Your sea of lights But a memory “ A beautiful line. I feel your longing. Hopefully you will see home soon. Nicely written friend.
September 9th, 2024 06:42
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy I feel your longing for your home. There is a feeling of loss in this poem. The pool of the dirt from which we were born, his magnetically strong. Find memories of the past drawers, as if they were the currents in the sea . “Your sea of lights But a memory “ A beautiful line. I feel your longing. Hopefully you will see home soon. Nicely written friend.
September 9th, 2024 06:42
Rainbow
Goldfinch60 said:
May that smile always be with us Teddy, fine Haiku.
Andy
September 9th, 2024 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
May that smile always be with us Teddy, fine Haiku.
Andy
September 9th, 2024 01:42
Rainbow
aDarkerMind said:
a cheer-me-up on a cold wet day here on the south coast Teddy.
much needed
and very much enjoyed my friend.
September 8th, 2024 11:36
aDarkerMind said:
a cheer-me-up on a cold wet day here on the south coast Teddy.
much needed
and very much enjoyed my friend.
September 8th, 2024 11:36
Rainbow
MendedFences27 said:
A terrific haiku, \"a smiley face upside down\" is brilliant. Loved this one. - Phil A.
September 8th, 2024 11:32
MendedFences27 said:
A terrific haiku, \"a smiley face upside down\" is brilliant. Loved this one. - Phil A.
September 8th, 2024 11:32
Rainbow
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful brevity dear Teddy. Sun and rain combined gift us rainbows. What an uplifting sight they are with their arc of splendid colour. Yes, they can make an unhappy day smiley.🌹🙂
September 8th, 2024 10:29
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful brevity dear Teddy. Sun and rain combined gift us rainbows. What an uplifting sight they are with their arc of splendid colour. Yes, they can make an unhappy day smiley.🌹🙂
September 8th, 2024 10:29
Rainbow
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely Teddy just what I needed a smilely face and since I`m down under, how appropriate it be upside down. A great haiku my friend.
September 8th, 2024 06:17
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely Teddy just what I needed a smilely face and since I`m down under, how appropriate it be upside down. A great haiku my friend.
September 8th, 2024 06:17
A Very Poetic Finish
Doggerel Dave said:
Came to this late, Teddy - sorry. Your surrealistic nonsense made me larf.
Not a rhyme in sight..... couldn\'t be a poet didn\'t see or hear a thing.....
September 6th, 2024 23:12
Doggerel Dave said:
Came to this late, Teddy - sorry. Your surrealistic nonsense made me larf.
Not a rhyme in sight..... couldn\'t be a poet didn\'t see or hear a thing.....
September 6th, 2024 23:12
A Very Poetic Finish
Thomas W Case said:
So funny, sweet Teddy. I needed a good laugh.
September 6th, 2024 16:58
Thomas W Case said:
So funny, sweet Teddy. I needed a good laugh.
September 6th, 2024 16:58
A Very Poetic Finish
Cheeky Missy said:
La! Poetic indeed! What on earth was so \"sweet\" about eating his owner?! And Brits yielding behind doors to the indulgence of strip poker netted them an ungodly end?!!! Poetic to the extreme.
September 6th, 2024 15:49
Cheeky Missy said:
La! Poetic indeed! What on earth was so \"sweet\" about eating his owner?! And Brits yielding behind doors to the indulgence of strip poker netted them an ungodly end?!!! Poetic to the extreme.
September 6th, 2024 15:49
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