Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Sometimes a Blue Moon Turns into Gold
Accidental Poet said:
A spotlight on a special girl. 😊👍
May 9th, 2024 09:17
Accidental Poet said:
A spotlight on a special girl. 😊👍
May 9th, 2024 09:17
Sometimes a Blue Moon Turns into Gold
Caring dove said:
A lovely writing , teddy 🙂
May 9th, 2024 05:17
Caring dove said:
A lovely writing , teddy 🙂
May 9th, 2024 05:17
Sometimes a Blue Moon Turns into Gold
aDarkerMind said:
beautifully written Teddy.
I felt every word.
May 9th, 2024 05:04
aDarkerMind said:
beautifully written Teddy.
I felt every word.
May 9th, 2024 05:04
Firefly
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully penned dear Teddy. Grief has, and always will touch us. It leaves a painful and profound hole in the heart that you\'ve captured so eoquently in this poem. On a warm summer\'s night, seeing the fireflys thick in the woods, I like to imagine they are the atoms of a loved one who has passed, flittering and flickering, existing unchanged until they join other fireflys to create something wonderful and new. Just loved it!
May 8th, 2024 14:23
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully penned dear Teddy. Grief has, and always will touch us. It leaves a painful and profound hole in the heart that you\'ve captured so eoquently in this poem. On a warm summer\'s night, seeing the fireflys thick in the woods, I like to imagine they are the atoms of a loved one who has passed, flittering and flickering, existing unchanged until they join other fireflys to create something wonderful and new. Just loved it!
May 8th, 2024 14:23
A Soul\'s Portrait
sorenbarrett said:
Many great lines speak from a wounded heart in this poem
a poetic heart that once bloomed
\"now in ruins spread on a gutter
black dead petals, soaking up the rain
as the sun has been taken hostage\"
Fraught with memories of past pain this paints a picture of damage and regret that has not healed touching the heart of the reader. Very touching in its sadness.
May 8th, 2024 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
Many great lines speak from a wounded heart in this poem
a poetic heart that once bloomed
\"now in ruins spread on a gutter
black dead petals, soaking up the rain
as the sun has been taken hostage\"
Fraught with memories of past pain this paints a picture of damage and regret that has not healed touching the heart of the reader. Very touching in its sadness.
May 8th, 2024 05:34
The Death of Love
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful and I feel the pain. Great work, Teddy.
May 6th, 2024 14:47
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful and I feel the pain. Great work, Teddy.
May 6th, 2024 14:47
Firefly
sorenbarrett said:
This did seem to be for one gone from this world although it could be for one just lost tp past love. The raven I took for an harbinger of death and the stars, clouds and rainbows as indications of one passed on. I always loved looking at the stars, although they have grown dimmer of late. But then many things have grown dimmer. Great imagery used here along with imagination. Such a nice flow smoothing it along as if on a drifting breeze.
May 6th, 2024 10:46
sorenbarrett said:
This did seem to be for one gone from this world although it could be for one just lost tp past love. The raven I took for an harbinger of death and the stars, clouds and rainbows as indications of one passed on. I always loved looking at the stars, although they have grown dimmer of late. But then many things have grown dimmer. Great imagery used here along with imagination. Such a nice flow smoothing it along as if on a drifting breeze.
May 6th, 2024 10:46
Firefly
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been in that situation Teddy when my wife died but I know that she is a star looking down on me and is very pleased about my new love.
Andy
May 6th, 2024 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been in that situation Teddy when my wife died but I know that she is a star looking down on me and is very pleased about my new love.
Andy
May 6th, 2024 01:11
Firefly
Cassie58 said:
Grief, is like being swamped by waves from the sea, you think you are going to drown and you never know when it is going to hit you. Dear Teddy, I am no stranger to it , having lost many family members and friends. I felt yours here. 🌹
May 5th, 2024 16:15
Cassie58 said:
Grief, is like being swamped by waves from the sea, you think you are going to drown and you never know when it is going to hit you. Dear Teddy, I am no stranger to it , having lost many family members and friends. I felt yours here. 🌹
May 5th, 2024 16:15
Firefly
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. You nailed it, Teddy. I used to crush them on my face, thinking I would glow in the dark. I was 6 lol
May 5th, 2024 13:50
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. You nailed it, Teddy. I used to crush them on my face, thinking I would glow in the dark. I was 6 lol
May 5th, 2024 13:50
Firefly
Neville said:
Good grief is just a saying .. there is no such thing ..
Grief is the most dreadful of pains that only time may heal isn\'t it ..
I could feel some of yours here my friend .. that realisation of eternal goneness .. Neville 💜🌹
May 5th, 2024 09:55
Neville said:
Good grief is just a saying .. there is no such thing ..
Grief is the most dreadful of pains that only time may heal isn\'t it ..
I could feel some of yours here my friend .. that realisation of eternal goneness .. Neville 💜🌹
May 5th, 2024 09:55
Firefly
Doggerel Dave said:
Gone. And it takes a long time to reconcile, accept. Right at the start the pain can be overwhelming. That piece could help someone in that position along, Your effort is worthwhile, Teddy.
May 5th, 2024 08:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Gone. And it takes a long time to reconcile, accept. Right at the start the pain can be overwhelming. That piece could help someone in that position along, Your effort is worthwhile, Teddy.
May 5th, 2024 08:01
Firefly
Neilton said:
I recently lost a loved one .. This poem truly touched me❤️
May 5th, 2024 06:29
Neilton said:
I recently lost a loved one .. This poem truly touched me❤️
May 5th, 2024 06:29
A Very Epic Morning
Goldfinch60 said:
It happens sometimes Teddy where we forget which day it is, luckily being retired every day in my life is Saturday!
I am sure those Angels are always there for you to write about.
Andy
May 5th, 2024 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
It happens sometimes Teddy where we forget which day it is, luckily being retired every day in my life is Saturday!
I am sure those Angels are always there for you to write about.
Andy
May 5th, 2024 01:19
A Very Epic Morning
Doggerel Dave said:
I’m with sorenbarrett above, with the following exclusions or exceptions:
- I\'ve never owned a beloved alarm clock,
- I ask where… are you going boy? it\'s Saturday, Sunday, any old day of the week,
- At 6:56 am It’s time to go back to bed…..
Rich write, Teddy.
May 4th, 2024 19:44
Doggerel Dave said:
I’m with sorenbarrett above, with the following exclusions or exceptions:
- I\'ve never owned a beloved alarm clock,
- I ask where… are you going boy? it\'s Saturday, Sunday, any old day of the week,
- At 6:56 am It’s time to go back to bed…..
Rich write, Teddy.
May 4th, 2024 19:44
A Very Epic Morning
Kylie the 8th grade female poet said:
I have to say this poem is very relatable thank you for saying the truth.
May 4th, 2024 12:25
Kylie the 8th grade female poet said:
I have to say this poem is very relatable thank you for saying the truth.
May 4th, 2024 12:25
A Soul\'s Portrait
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy I am thankful to know that this is all in the past. The darkness does not become you. However, as the saying goes it is all part of life’s rich tapestry, a learning curve and it makes excellent poetry. Have a great weekend. 🌺
May 4th, 2024 09:31
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy I am thankful to know that this is all in the past. The darkness does not become you. However, as the saying goes it is all part of life’s rich tapestry, a learning curve and it makes excellent poetry. Have a great weekend. 🌺
May 4th, 2024 09:31
A Very Epic Morning
sorenbarrett said:
Life has no joy without balance. No appreciation of the good without experiencing the bad. The muse within you is fired by the fuel of adversity and so all good art comes from extremes with the greatest octane being pain to which joy may be compared. A most poignant write friend.
May 4th, 2024 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
Life has no joy without balance. No appreciation of the good without experiencing the bad. The muse within you is fired by the fuel of adversity and so all good art comes from extremes with the greatest octane being pain to which joy may be compared. A most poignant write friend.
May 4th, 2024 04:03
A Soul\'s Portrait
Neville said:
this is quite possibly the most generous gift you have left for us here to enjoy .. and tho\' the darkness it contains is blinding .. it shines brightly🌹
May 4th, 2024 02:52
Neville said:
this is quite possibly the most generous gift you have left for us here to enjoy .. and tho\' the darkness it contains is blinding .. it shines brightly🌹
May 4th, 2024 02:52
A Soul\'s Portrait
Goldfinch60 said:
So glad that this isn\'t you nowadays Teddy. Lives do have those sad times but we all have the strength to put them aside and move into the wonderful life that is there for us.
Andy
May 4th, 2024 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
So glad that this isn\'t you nowadays Teddy. Lives do have those sad times but we all have the strength to put them aside and move into the wonderful life that is there for us.
Andy
May 4th, 2024 01:17
A Soul\'s Portrait
Accidental Poet said:
Although very well penned as always Teddy, I still can\'t see the whole picture, I think because I can\'t bare to see such pain in the heart and soul of one of my dearest friends. May this darkness leave you never to return. 🫂
May 3rd, 2024 09:09
Accidental Poet said:
Although very well penned as always Teddy, I still can\'t see the whole picture, I think because I can\'t bare to see such pain in the heart and soul of one of my dearest friends. May this darkness leave you never to return. 🫂
May 3rd, 2024 09:09
A Perfect Moment in May
Neville said:
what a perfect picture you have captured Teddy .. and get this, we share the same taste in camera 🌹
May 3rd, 2024 00:57
Neville said:
what a perfect picture you have captured Teddy .. and get this, we share the same taste in camera 🌹
May 3rd, 2024 00:57
A Perfect Moment in May
Accidental Poet said:
That used to be me Teddy, always looking for the perfect shot. But Canon was my weapon of choice. 📷
May 2nd, 2024 15:53
Accidental Poet said:
That used to be me Teddy, always looking for the perfect shot. But Canon was my weapon of choice. 📷
May 2nd, 2024 15:53
A Perfect Moment in May
aDarkerMind said:
a perfect picture for any month of year Teddy.
May 2nd, 2024 13:05
aDarkerMind said:
a perfect picture for any month of year Teddy.
May 2nd, 2024 13:05
A Perfect Moment in May
sorenbarrett said:
Your poem is a picture itself. In fact it has the advantage of portraying what film by itself can not, the the emotion of words. I can see the beauty of the iris praying before the wind and feel the cold force and wetness of the rain in the cloud like misty blanket. Lovely.
May 2nd, 2024 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
Your poem is a picture itself. In fact it has the advantage of portraying what film by itself can not, the the emotion of words. I can see the beauty of the iris praying before the wind and feel the cold force and wetness of the rain in the cloud like misty blanket. Lovely.
May 2nd, 2024 03:45
The Death Of A Poet
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Teddy, the cellphone has taken over the younger generation.
Andy
May 2nd, 2024 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Teddy, the cellphone has taken over the younger generation.
Andy
May 2nd, 2024 01:20
The Death Of A Poet
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, all I can say is that I am happy that I was born when I was. I see sliding values and lack of interest in many of the things I was brought up to love. The times are certainly changing. Kids cooped up indoors instead of in the fresh air. Only interested in social media and their mobile phones. Yuk. I am beginning to sound like an old fart:) as for poets, they will always find something to write about. You eloquently express my own thoughts here dear poet 🌹
May 1st, 2024 16:07
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, all I can say is that I am happy that I was born when I was. I see sliding values and lack of interest in many of the things I was brought up to love. The times are certainly changing. Kids cooped up indoors instead of in the fresh air. Only interested in social media and their mobile phones. Yuk. I am beginning to sound like an old fart:) as for poets, they will always find something to write about. You eloquently express my own thoughts here dear poet 🌹
May 1st, 2024 16:07
The Death Of A Poet
Neville said:
evolved or deconstructed, either way the message remains very much the same .. both this one and its predecessor are memorable .. 🌹
May 1st, 2024 09:13
Neville said:
evolved or deconstructed, either way the message remains very much the same .. both this one and its predecessor are memorable .. 🌹
May 1st, 2024 09:13
The Death Of A Poet
Doggerel Dave said:
Teddy, for once I don’ t really know to how put this, but to me you so certainly mirrored clearly the crap which exists out there, then asked for a different orientation….. Would the world be….?? Not sure, but I would hope so….. The poet either gets with it or shuts up!!!
(Can’t put an appropriate emoji, but you I hope can guess where my heart is…)
May 1st, 2024 06:55
Doggerel Dave said:
Teddy, for once I don’ t really know to how put this, but to me you so certainly mirrored clearly the crap which exists out there, then asked for a different orientation….. Would the world be….?? Not sure, but I would hope so….. The poet either gets with it or shuts up!!!
(Can’t put an appropriate emoji, but you I hope can guess where my heart is…)
May 1st, 2024 06:55
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