Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Rose Garden
Doggerel Dave said:
I feel all wrung out after that Teddy. It\'s only that I know it isn\'t true, that keeps me going.
July 9th, 2024 08:59
Doggerel Dave said:
I feel all wrung out after that Teddy. It\'s only that I know it isn\'t true, that keeps me going.
July 9th, 2024 08:59
Rose Garden
aDarkerMind said:
am deeply touched Teddy...
more than you could possibly imagine.
bless you.
July 9th, 2024 05:14
aDarkerMind said:
am deeply touched Teddy...
more than you could possibly imagine.
bless you.
July 9th, 2024 05:14
Broken Mirror
sorenbarrett said:
A reflection? A splendid story told in such entrancing form. It seems to begin as a fairytale and becomes archetypal. We all need that mirror or maybe we have it and just don\'t see being blind. A wonderful write.
July 7th, 2024 17:00
sorenbarrett said:
A reflection? A splendid story told in such entrancing form. It seems to begin as a fairytale and becomes archetypal. We all need that mirror or maybe we have it and just don\'t see being blind. A wonderful write.
July 7th, 2024 17:00
Forget Me Not
sorenbarrett said:
The innocence of a child and the honesty to say what things are in their eyes is what leads to the genius of learning. We do forget as we grow old and what I think is the greatest shame is we forget how to be a child.
July 7th, 2024 11:34
sorenbarrett said:
The innocence of a child and the honesty to say what things are in their eyes is what leads to the genius of learning. We do forget as we grow old and what I think is the greatest shame is we forget how to be a child.
July 7th, 2024 11:34
Forget Me Not
aDarkerMind said:
the innocence of a child.
beautifully written Teddy.
July 7th, 2024 07:13
aDarkerMind said:
the innocence of a child.
beautifully written Teddy.
July 7th, 2024 07:13
The Backbone of a Poem
aDarkerMind said:
word perfect and a delightful read Teddy.
as always.
July 7th, 2024 06:12
aDarkerMind said:
word perfect and a delightful read Teddy.
as always.
July 7th, 2024 06:12
Forget Me Not
Goldfinch60 said:
An intriguing write Teddy, such a wise child.
if you answered him can you please also let me know what happened to the first 74 years of my life. 🤣🌹
Andy
July 7th, 2024 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
An intriguing write Teddy, such a wise child.
if you answered him can you please also let me know what happened to the first 74 years of my life. 🤣🌹
Andy
July 7th, 2024 01:20
Forget Me Not
MendedFences27 said:
A lot of wisdom here. A poem that shows the innocent wisdom of a child
and also the wisdom of your own recognition. It\'s also sad that there is no answer to the child\'s question, not yet . Perhaps in the future. when we comprehend all the workings of a brain, we\'ll be able to answer it. A lovely poem. - Phil A.
July 6th, 2024 17:37
MendedFences27 said:
A lot of wisdom here. A poem that shows the innocent wisdom of a child
and also the wisdom of your own recognition. It\'s also sad that there is no answer to the child\'s question, not yet . Perhaps in the future. when we comprehend all the workings of a brain, we\'ll be able to answer it. A lovely poem. - Phil A.
July 6th, 2024 17:37
The Backbone of a Poem
Goldfinch60 said:
Or \"he seeps from his pen\" as well Teddy.
Very fine words .
Andy
July 5th, 2024 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Or \"he seeps from his pen\" as well Teddy.
Very fine words .
Andy
July 5th, 2024 01:22
The Backbone of a Poem
Parisab said:
We are indeed building castles sometimes from the dungeons-yours is always beautiful no matter what
July 4th, 2024 17:11
Parisab said:
We are indeed building castles sometimes from the dungeons-yours is always beautiful no matter what
July 4th, 2024 17:11
The Backbone of a Poem
sorenbarrett said:
I agree a poem is the emotion it evokes and whether it is sad or happy it matters not. You have worded it well and the poet is the pen that drips the ink of the soul onto the page. So well written this one is so true.
July 4th, 2024 14:52
sorenbarrett said:
I agree a poem is the emotion it evokes and whether it is sad or happy it matters not. You have worded it well and the poet is the pen that drips the ink of the soul onto the page. So well written this one is so true.
July 4th, 2024 14:52
The Backbone of a Poem
Thomas W Case said:
You have nailed this Teddy. Brilliant, you have drilled home the backbone of a poem. It\'s the hunger and filling. Truly superb.
July 4th, 2024 11:48
Thomas W Case said:
You have nailed this Teddy. Brilliant, you have drilled home the backbone of a poem. It\'s the hunger and filling. Truly superb.
July 4th, 2024 11:48
The Backbone of a Poem
MendedFences27 said:
Well, my belly\'s full. You\'ve defined the poem to a tee. I don\'t think there is an official definition of a poem, but you certainly hit most of the cues. So now, perhaps, I will be able to construct one. Thank you for this delightful start to my reading today. - Phil A.
July 4th, 2024 10:20
MendedFences27 said:
Well, my belly\'s full. You\'ve defined the poem to a tee. I don\'t think there is an official definition of a poem, but you certainly hit most of the cues. So now, perhaps, I will be able to construct one. Thank you for this delightful start to my reading today. - Phil A.
July 4th, 2024 10:20
Winter’s Meadow
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful sentiment and sense of temporary loss which is hoped will end in future reunification. Loved the last line that reflects the entire feeling of the poem.
July 3rd, 2024 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful sentiment and sense of temporary loss which is hoped will end in future reunification. Loved the last line that reflects the entire feeling of the poem.
July 3rd, 2024 11:30
On The Great Stage Is A Poetess And An Angel
Goldfinch60 said:
Dance with your angel at all times Teddy, she will always be with you.
Andy
July 3rd, 2024 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Dance with your angel at all times Teddy, she will always be with you.
Andy
July 3rd, 2024 01:20
Caged Hummingbird
Cassie58 said:
How beautifully poetic are your lines here Teddy. A most touching write. The mind can be truly powerful when we need it to be. Always best to be yourself. Your beautiful, unique self. 🌹
June 30th, 2024 19:20
Cassie58 said:
How beautifully poetic are your lines here Teddy. A most touching write. The mind can be truly powerful when we need it to be. Always best to be yourself. Your beautiful, unique self. 🌹
June 30th, 2024 19:20
On The Great Stage Is A Poetess And An Angel
Doggerel Dave said:
However much I refuse to consider angels Teddy, your poem forced me to suspend my disbelief and enjoy the spirit and the dance.😌
June 30th, 2024 17:53
Doggerel Dave said:
However much I refuse to consider angels Teddy, your poem forced me to suspend my disbelief and enjoy the spirit and the dance.😌
June 30th, 2024 17:53
On The Great Stage Is A Poetess And An Angel
Accidental Poet said:
Might it be dear Teddy, that it is your future and past beings come to dance and celebrate with you in your
present? 🌹🌹🌹
June 30th, 2024 15:37
Accidental Poet said:
Might it be dear Teddy, that it is your future and past beings come to dance and celebrate with you in your
present? 🌹🌹🌹
June 30th, 2024 15:37
On The Great Stage Is A Poetess And An Angel
sorenbarrett said:
At first given your last poem I thought of a humming bird then came the thought of a reflection a great thought a perfect unison in dance with one\'s reflection.
June 30th, 2024 12:50
sorenbarrett said:
At first given your last poem I thought of a humming bird then came the thought of a reflection a great thought a perfect unison in dance with one\'s reflection.
June 30th, 2024 12:50
Caged Hummingbird
sorenbarrett said:
\"I wish for the day
empathy opens my cage
and lets me fly away?\"
Ah the question mark. Would you or would you not, A great message in this poem Teddy we all need to be who we are. Very nice.
June 30th, 2024 12:44
sorenbarrett said:
\"I wish for the day
empathy opens my cage
and lets me fly away?\"
Ah the question mark. Would you or would you not, A great message in this poem Teddy we all need to be who we are. Very nice.
June 30th, 2024 12:44
On The Great Stage Is A Poetess And An Angel
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. I love the way you painted this scene with your words.
June 30th, 2024 12:30
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. I love the way you painted this scene with your words.
June 30th, 2024 12:30
On The Great Stage Is A Poetess And An Angel
aDarkerMind said:
a reflection written as only you know how Teddy.
and so we danced....
my Sunday mood now lifted.
June 30th, 2024 11:41
aDarkerMind said:
a reflection written as only you know how Teddy.
and so we danced....
my Sunday mood now lifted.
June 30th, 2024 11:41
Caged Hummingbird
Accidental Poet said:
As poets, we are all free with the gift of words that rise in the air of freedom and respect for each other. And you Teddy are the one to inspire us all. 🌹👍
June 30th, 2024 08:30
Accidental Poet said:
As poets, we are all free with the gift of words that rise in the air of freedom and respect for each other. And you Teddy are the one to inspire us all. 🌹👍
June 30th, 2024 08:30
Caged Hummingbird
aDarkerMind said:
a poem to inspire us all Teddy.
I will learn much from this....
a wonderful poem.
June 30th, 2024 05:07
aDarkerMind said:
a poem to inspire us all Teddy.
I will learn much from this....
a wonderful poem.
June 30th, 2024 05:07
Caged Hummingbird
Dan Williams said:
Amen. Who wants to be like everybody else.
June 30th, 2024 01:12
Dan Williams said:
Amen. Who wants to be like everybody else.
June 30th, 2024 01:12
Caged Hummingbird
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. A truly sad image of a hummingbird in a cage. You are the sweetest spirit.
June 29th, 2024 21:41
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. A truly sad image of a hummingbird in a cage. You are the sweetest spirit.
June 29th, 2024 21:41
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