Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
A Grand Photo of Matrimony
sorenbarrett said:
It is in the variety and the extremity of such differences that the depth of love is measured. Someone once told me that a person can not love deeper than one hates. It makes sense that there must be balance. A wonderful write that many of us can identify with.
April 26th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
It is in the variety and the extremity of such differences that the depth of love is measured. Someone once told me that a person can not love deeper than one hates. It makes sense that there must be balance. A wonderful write that many of us can identify with.
April 26th, 2025 04:57
A Writer\'s Dream
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all meet in infinity Teddy and it will be wonderful.
Andy
April 26th, 2025 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all meet in infinity Teddy and it will be wonderful.
Andy
April 26th, 2025 01:14
A Writer\'s Dream
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful sweet Teddy. You paint this scene well.
April 25th, 2025 11:24
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful sweet Teddy. You paint this scene well.
April 25th, 2025 11:24
A Writer\'s Dream
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Teddy. Children of the universe we all are.
April 25th, 2025 08:12
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Teddy. Children of the universe we all are.
April 25th, 2025 08:12
A Writer\'s Dream
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the dream of all poets to peer into the unseen, to write of the unknown extremes of the infinite. Oh to write of where no footstep has fallen to tread the paths of the universe outside and inside to touch that that has never been touched. To express the pain of the damned and sorrow of the lost. What joy to dive to the depths of the human soul and mate with nature in a glorious song of love. A most beautiful poem of desire Teddy.
April 25th, 2025 07:02
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the dream of all poets to peer into the unseen, to write of the unknown extremes of the infinite. Oh to write of where no footstep has fallen to tread the paths of the universe outside and inside to touch that that has never been touched. To express the pain of the damned and sorrow of the lost. What joy to dive to the depths of the human soul and mate with nature in a glorious song of love. A most beautiful poem of desire Teddy.
April 25th, 2025 07:02
Triumph
sorenbarrett said:
Such a good message stated in such few words. I love the setup for the punch line it sounds good and looks good. Set up like two triangle one above the other
the bottom being the foundation. You said secret so I look to symbolism. Two to three to four to five words balanced on two and four words. I\'m reaching but the greater weight balanced on the lesser. When we feel like nothing it is a great weight when we are everything there is less weight. The triangle to me represents balance and that is what we have when we have everything. Certainly I have reached too far. A lovely write.
April 24th, 2025 17:58
sorenbarrett said:
Such a good message stated in such few words. I love the setup for the punch line it sounds good and looks good. Set up like two triangle one above the other
the bottom being the foundation. You said secret so I look to symbolism. Two to three to four to five words balanced on two and four words. I\'m reaching but the greater weight balanced on the lesser. When we feel like nothing it is a great weight when we are everything there is less weight. The triangle to me represents balance and that is what we have when we have everything. Certainly I have reached too far. A lovely write.
April 24th, 2025 17:58
Mind’s Great Ocean
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Teddy, I agree with what soren has said, causing harm to others is not the way to go.
Andy
April 24th, 2025 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Teddy, I agree with what soren has said, causing harm to others is not the way to go.
Andy
April 24th, 2025 01:20
Mind’s Great Ocean
Thoughtless said:
I don\'t understand such people. I\'m in my eighties, and believe the world is better when a kinder place. I enjoyed your composition.
April 23rd, 2025 15:53
Thoughtless said:
I don\'t understand such people. I\'m in my eighties, and believe the world is better when a kinder place. I enjoyed your composition.
April 23rd, 2025 15:53
Mind’s Great Ocean
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write about people that are sorry enough to have such anger, greed, or envy to cause harm to others. I feel sorry for them. Good write
April 23rd, 2025 12:27
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write about people that are sorry enough to have such anger, greed, or envy to cause harm to others. I feel sorry for them. Good write
April 23rd, 2025 12:27
When the Caged Bird is Set Free
Goldfinch60 said:
Love will always be my freedom Teddy, it has been all my life and I cannot see it being any other way. Good write.
Andy
April 23rd, 2025 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Love will always be my freedom Teddy, it has been all my life and I cannot see it being any other way. Good write.
Andy
April 23rd, 2025 01:46
Soul 2
NafisaSB said:
if the person is innately good, the aura is bound to be bright
may yours always shine...
April 22nd, 2025 23:44
NafisaSB said:
if the person is innately good, the aura is bound to be bright
may yours always shine...
April 22nd, 2025 23:44
When the Caged Bird is Set Free
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great read, Teddy. I have never been able to separate the two.
April 22nd, 2025 08:12
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great read, Teddy. I have never been able to separate the two.
April 22nd, 2025 08:12
When the Caged Bird is Set Free
sorenbarrett said:
Turning things on their head is a good way of mixing what is inside. Love the concept the word love is the common ingredient listed on the label of most bottled passions. A most fun read but also mind provoking once one got past the smile.
April 22nd, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Turning things on their head is a good way of mixing what is inside. Love the concept the word love is the common ingredient listed on the label of most bottled passions. A most fun read but also mind provoking once one got past the smile.
April 22nd, 2025 04:46
After my Sweet Moment of Hush
Goldfinch60 said:
That silence and beauty calms our mind Teddy so that we can move on in life.
Andy
April 22nd, 2025 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
That silence and beauty calms our mind Teddy so that we can move on in life.
Andy
April 22nd, 2025 01:14
Perfumes of a Summer’s Day
Kevin Hulme said:
You could say it\'s the Bad as well as Good Memories that make up the Person. The same as we have
Night as well as Day
Good Poem.
April 21st, 2025 20:14
Kevin Hulme said:
You could say it\'s the Bad as well as Good Memories that make up the Person. The same as we have
Night as well as Day
Good Poem.
April 21st, 2025 20:14
After my Sweet Moment of Hush
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant work, sweet Teddy.
April 21st, 2025 12:46
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant work, sweet Teddy.
April 21st, 2025 12:46
After my Sweet Moment of Hush
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy we grow so accustomed to what we are used to that even a headache one misses when it is gone. A wonderful poem that posits this idea and we long for what we don\'t have, covet others peace, are jealous of others gilded goods, sell our souls to obtain them and find that they are not what we wanted. We return to the familiar. Very nicely written
April 21st, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy we grow so accustomed to what we are used to that even a headache one misses when it is gone. A wonderful poem that posits this idea and we long for what we don\'t have, covet others peace, are jealous of others gilded goods, sell our souls to obtain them and find that they are not what we wanted. We return to the familiar. Very nicely written
April 21st, 2025 04:15
Perfumes of a Summer’s Day
Goldfinch60 said:
I always put my bad memories in a box in my mind so all I have is the good memories Teddy.
Andy
April 21st, 2025 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
I always put my bad memories in a box in my mind so all I have is the good memories Teddy.
Andy
April 21st, 2025 01:52
An Amazing Fact About Us Humans
NafisaSB said:
wow - what a small and yet powerful message - dread to think what can happen if left unchecked
April 20th, 2025 23:15
NafisaSB said:
wow - what a small and yet powerful message - dread to think what can happen if left unchecked
April 20th, 2025 23:15
Perfumes of a Summer’s Day
Thomas W Case said:
Wouldn\'t that be fantastic? Great work, sweet Teddy.
April 20th, 2025 08:57
Thomas W Case said:
Wouldn\'t that be fantastic? Great work, sweet Teddy.
April 20th, 2025 08:57
Perfumes of a Summer’s Day
teardrop said:
That would be awesome but then what would us writers pen? Love your metaphor, Perfumes Of A Summer Day.
April 20th, 2025 04:31
teardrop said:
That would be awesome but then what would us writers pen? Love your metaphor, Perfumes Of A Summer Day.
April 20th, 2025 04:31
Perfumes of a Summer’s Day
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful analogy and metaphor that draws up fun images and serious thoughts. Some use bleach in their memory wash some use paint. I find that bleach deteriorates the fabric and paint makes it stiff when dried and sometimes rubs off on the skin. A most light hearted and upbeat poem with a serious meaning to it. That is what poetry is all about. Loved it.
April 20th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful analogy and metaphor that draws up fun images and serious thoughts. Some use bleach in their memory wash some use paint. I find that bleach deteriorates the fabric and paint makes it stiff when dried and sometimes rubs off on the skin. A most light hearted and upbeat poem with a serious meaning to it. That is what poetry is all about. Loved it.
April 20th, 2025 04:28
Soul 2
teardrop said:
Sounds like a beautiful soul. Thanks for the great read this morning.
April 19th, 2025 06:42
teardrop said:
Sounds like a beautiful soul. Thanks for the great read this morning.
April 19th, 2025 06:42
Soul 2
Goldfinch60 said:
Your soul is there to bring light to your life Teddy.
An dy
April 19th, 2025 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Your soul is there to bring light to your life Teddy.
An dy
April 19th, 2025 01:44
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