Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



A Fish Called Wonder
Caring dove said:

Caring for a fish . Nice writing teddy .. ) we have cats that come in our house every day and it’s like they think it’s their home .. one of them has become very comfortable here

January 30th, 2025 03:40

An Ode to the Dreamer (Senryu)
NafisaSB said:

such a beautiful and awesome message
yes, we should all dare

January 29th, 2025 07:30

The Burns in Me
Cassie58 said:

Well worth the celebrating Teddy. Went to a Burns night once. They piped the haggis in and we toasted it with whiskey. Fabulous evening and I know you would have loved the bagpipes. πŸŒΉπŸ’œ

January 27th, 2025 13:54

The Eternal Miracle of a Poet
Cassie58 said:

Superb poetry dearest Teddy. Finely written and much admired. πŸŒΉπŸ’œ

January 27th, 2025 13:46

The Eternal Miracle of a Poet
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful and fitting sweet, Teddy.

January 27th, 2025 11:07

The Eternal Miracle of a Poet
aDarkerMind said:

written as only Teddy knows how...
and what a talant she is!
take a bow fine lady....and enjoy the applause my friend.

January 27th, 2025 10:35

The Eternal Miracle of a Poet
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

Beautiful

January 27th, 2025 08:47

The Eternal Miracle of a Poet
sorenbarrett said:

Ah the purpose of life my poetic friend. Lovely verse in this poem floats me down stream as a leaf carried on currents of meter and rhym to end up in the pond of meaning which is deeper than it appears. Many reflections on this pond. Beautiful!

January 27th, 2025 04:53

The Eternal Miracle of a Poet
Michael Edwards said:

My poems are held hard copy in several albums - I often wonder what my successors will make of them. Probably think I\'m a tad eccentric - wonder if they\'ll boast about their weird ancestor - great write by the way.

January 27th, 2025 03:39

The Eternal Miracle of a Poet
arqios said:

Easy Fave Teddy, liked as well... also observed that all these reach us via some sense, be it hearing or seeing, etc... and the thought of being without our senses was a brutal reality check. My latest post is about walking and I realised that not everyone does walk by choice of by circumstance. Ah well... I\'ve begun to ramble on... πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

January 27th, 2025 03:18

The Burns in Me
Goldfinch60 said:

Did you you raise a glass of whisky to him Teddy.

Andy

January 27th, 2025 02:44

The Burns in Me
Thoughtless said:

I often quoted Robert Burns to my wife when first we met. She was descended from English royalty on \"the wrong side of the bed.\" Our favorite play was the Barretts of Wimpole Street. My wife was five years my senior similar to the Barretts in the play who were six years apart. I don\'t know too much about my heritage, but supposedly some of it traced back to families in Czechoslovakia, Germany, Austria, and Scotland. The families are relatives supposedly to the Hapsburgs, and Horacek families on my mother\'s side. On my father\'s side, the Johnstons and Whittenbergs, and perhaps naturalized Cherokee? in America.
I very much enjoyed your poem. I apologize for rambling.

January 26th, 2025 17:18

The Burns in Me
sorenbarrett said:

Pride in one\'s heritage is a wonderful thing. One can not know who they are until they know where they came from. It is most interesting that traced back far enough we all are related. This poem eeks with pride of the old land and I have always admired the Scottish and loved the sound of bagpipes. Don\'t think I could do Haggis though. A most lovely poem my friend

January 26th, 2025 05:09

The Burns in Me
arqios said:

Happy birthday Robbie Burns! πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

January 26th, 2025 04:45

Old Man Winter (senryu)
Goldfinch60 said:

But strength will return
As Spring will bring us new growth
In to our New Year

Andy

January 26th, 2025 02:51

Old Man Winter (senryu)
Cassie58 said:

Reminds me how fragility can set in with advancing age. Old man winter is a fine metaphor. I visited a residential home yesterday and there were several elderly men with dementia that this fine senryu would apply to. They are certainly in the winter of their lives, getting lonelier, weaker and colder by the day. So very well composed dear Teddy πŸŒΉπŸ’œ

January 25th, 2025 12:59

Old Man Winter (senryu)
arqios said:

So many old men, it’s a wonder they haven’t totally faded away, there’s River, on the Moon, Winter, Coyote, Time, and the Sea, Willow, Yells at Cloud and old man Mountain…. And we’re all of us joining the queue… πŸ™πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ•Š

January 25th, 2025 06:04

Old Man Winter (senryu)
sorenbarrett said:

Dear Teddy in some latin based languages leaves may be pabes as well and so it seems at times that our muse grows more distant as we write more but infact our work grows stronger with more practice. Maybe not the intended interpretation but then my mind wanders. A very lovely haiku or senryu depending on who the I is.

January 25th, 2025 03:58

Soul
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive words Teddy but you will emerge into the light and find that warmth.

Andy

January 23rd, 2025 02:25

Soul
Thomas W Case said:

Wow. Scary and haunting. Powerful work, sweet Teddy.

January 22nd, 2025 12:57

Soul
Cassie58 said:

A lost soul indeed Teddy. This poem gave me the chills. You convey the darkness so well dear poet. I wanted to light a candle for her. Lovely and creative 🌹

January 22nd, 2025 12:27

Soul
arqios said:

Hauntingly powerful and deeply moving. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ•Š

January 22nd, 2025 05:52

Soul
sorenbarrett said:

Eerie and haunting this poem speaks with darkness and a sense of horror. The nonspecific nature of the presence enhances the feeling. Very nicely done

January 22nd, 2025 05:09

An Ode to the Dreamer (Senryu)
Goldfinch60 said:

I believe Teddy.

Andy

January 22nd, 2025 02:40

An Ode to the Dreamer (Senryu)
Cassie58 said:

Beautiful message of positivity dear Teddy. We all need to wish upon a star and hope our dreams come true. We all need something to look forward to, especially when the going gets tough. 🌹

January 21st, 2025 17:28

An Ode to the Dreamer (Senryu)
Michael Edwards said:

A great write bur wouldn\'t work for me - I can never remember my dreams 😁

January 21st, 2025 15:28

An impossible Quest
NafisaSB said:

love comes in various shapes, sizes and ways - so i would say, yes, it is needed so that once we care, life changes for both giver and receiver
enjoyed the read

January 21st, 2025 10:19

An Ode to the Dreamer (Senryu)
sorenbarrett said:

Another lovely senryu of a most positive nature to begin the day. Dream on I say

January 21st, 2025 04:14

An Ode to the Dreamer (Senryu)
Accidental Poet said:

To dream is believing in yourself. πŸŒΉπŸ˜‰πŸ‘

January 21st, 2025 03:56

My Very Own Nevada
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words Teddy and you have lifted into the light in your life\'s journey.

Andy

January 21st, 2025 02:49



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