Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Soul Tracker
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy this one had such a nice appeal to it from the meter to the rhyme and the message too was quite comforting. It rolled and rocked gently like a a boat on calm seas or a mother rocking a cradle and hummed a lullaby taking me to times of safety and peace where trust was stronger than fear. Lovely
March 15th, 2025 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy this one had such a nice appeal to it from the meter to the rhyme and the message too was quite comforting. It rolled and rocked gently like a a boat on calm seas or a mother rocking a cradle and hummed a lullaby taking me to times of safety and peace where trust was stronger than fear. Lovely
March 15th, 2025 05:38
Abbundently Timeless
NafisaSB said:
i would say keep arguing and explaining why some things are felt with the heart and not the mind
enjoyed
March 12th, 2025 23:39
NafisaSB said:
i would say keep arguing and explaining why some things are felt with the heart and not the mind
enjoyed
March 12th, 2025 23:39
Lazarus a Reincarnation
Goldfinch60 said:
You are alive and always will be Teddy, keep moving forward into your wonderful life. Anyway I may not be very tasty if you devoured me. 🤣🤣🤣
Andy
March 10th, 2025 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
You are alive and always will be Teddy, keep moving forward into your wonderful life. Anyway I may not be very tasty if you devoured me. 🤣🤣🤣
Andy
March 10th, 2025 02:14
Lazarus a Reincarnation
Distant View said:
A fine, heartfelt tribute to a truly remarkable poet and novelist! A great write, my friend!
March 9th, 2025 15:12
Distant View said:
A fine, heartfelt tribute to a truly remarkable poet and novelist! A great write, my friend!
March 9th, 2025 15:12
Abbundently Timeless
spilleronsheet said:
Two hearts may be minds apart….bur where science ends, poetry begins….a priceless piece dearest teddy…those ticking touched my mind and heart
March 9th, 2025 12:24
spilleronsheet said:
Two hearts may be minds apart….bur where science ends, poetry begins….a priceless piece dearest teddy…those ticking touched my mind and heart
March 9th, 2025 12:24
Lazarus a Reincarnation
aDarkerMind said:
and you have done Sylvia proud with this true masterpiece Teddy;
every line a gem!
March 9th, 2025 07:43
aDarkerMind said:
and you have done Sylvia proud with this true masterpiece Teddy;
every line a gem!
March 9th, 2025 07:43
Lazarus a Reincarnation
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful lines asserting the power that is within all of us and the layers we all are. Lovely
March 9th, 2025 07:35
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful lines asserting the power that is within all of us and the layers we all are. Lovely
March 9th, 2025 07:35
Lazarus a Reincarnation
Cassie58 said:
The Sylvia in you is alive and kicking dear Teddy. Delivering sensationally in attitude. I’ve just bought a book of her work. You delivered a little punch here as well as some humour. I love the combination of both. Now where are those men for devouring? How about with a little chianti or maybe a vintage red lol. 💜🌹🍷
March 9th, 2025 07:06
Cassie58 said:
The Sylvia in you is alive and kicking dear Teddy. Delivering sensationally in attitude. I’ve just bought a book of her work. You delivered a little punch here as well as some humour. I love the combination of both. Now where are those men for devouring? How about with a little chianti or maybe a vintage red lol. 💜🌹🍷
March 9th, 2025 07:06
Abbundently Timeless
Goldfinch60 said:
Very fine words Teddy, time passes anyway and even if we did not realise it it would still take us to the next phase of our lives.
Andy
https://youtu.be/0QVPUIRGthI?si=wV2osIKiic-r7jXZ
March 9th, 2025 02:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Very fine words Teddy, time passes anyway and even if we did not realise it it would still take us to the next phase of our lives.
Andy
https://youtu.be/0QVPUIRGthI?si=wV2osIKiic-r7jXZ
March 9th, 2025 02:56
Abbundently Timeless
Distant View said:
This poem made me smile, Teddy! It has its own delightful kind of logic! Science doesn\'t rule everything in this world! -- especially art, poetry and music!
Sorry I\'m not around much on MPS, but I\'m busy writing and recording music much of the time.
March 8th, 2025 16:53
Distant View said:
This poem made me smile, Teddy! It has its own delightful kind of logic! Science doesn\'t rule everything in this world! -- especially art, poetry and music!
Sorry I\'m not around much on MPS, but I\'m busy writing and recording music much of the time.
March 8th, 2025 16:53
Abbundently Timeless
Cassie58 said:
You ask questions dear Teddy. I say let’s leave the physics out of poetry 😂. My own Dad’s qualifications were in that line. Let’s say he didn’t pass much science on to his daughter :) Now when it comes to poetry, it takes a poet to understand another poet. I like your ponderings and your chosen artwork is beautiful. Have a wonderful weekend dear friend. 🌹💜
March 8th, 2025 14:56
Cassie58 said:
You ask questions dear Teddy. I say let’s leave the physics out of poetry 😂. My own Dad’s qualifications were in that line. Let’s say he didn’t pass much science on to his daughter :) Now when it comes to poetry, it takes a poet to understand another poet. I like your ponderings and your chosen artwork is beautiful. Have a wonderful weekend dear friend. 🌹💜
March 8th, 2025 14:56
Abbundently Timeless
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts and more thoughts fill this poem. You are exercising my mind on a weekend, its day off. A most fun read Teddy thanks for the fun.
March 8th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts and more thoughts fill this poem. You are exercising my mind on a weekend, its day off. A most fun read Teddy thanks for the fun.
March 8th, 2025 04:20
A Secret Between Friends
Goldfinch60 said:
Great story Teddy, it is amazing how you can make good friends with strangers.
Andy
March 8th, 2025 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Great story Teddy, it is amazing how you can make good friends with strangers.
Andy
March 8th, 2025 03:01
A Secret Between Friends
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful how you can get close to people whom you meet day to day, doing the ordinary. What a lovely share Teddy. My brother and I saw the Beatles at the Astoria in Highgate. It has been one of the highlights of my younger years. Didn’t keep the ticket stubbs though. One of my neighbours I called George for years, a couple of years ago he told me his name is Hugh😂. It happens. Have a lovely weekend 🌹💜
March 7th, 2025 13:03
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful how you can get close to people whom you meet day to day, doing the ordinary. What a lovely share Teddy. My brother and I saw the Beatles at the Astoria in Highgate. It has been one of the highlights of my younger years. Didn’t keep the ticket stubbs though. One of my neighbours I called George for years, a couple of years ago he told me his name is Hugh😂. It happens. Have a lovely weekend 🌹💜
March 7th, 2025 13:03
A Secret Between Friends
Thomas W Case said:
Very cool, sweet Teddy. It\'s the little things that can really make an impact.
March 7th, 2025 11:28
Thomas W Case said:
Very cool, sweet Teddy. It\'s the little things that can really make an impact.
March 7th, 2025 11:28
A Secret Between Friends
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Teddy. I have experienced that. My mind feels guilty for not knowing, my heart doesn\'t give a damm he is my friend.
March 7th, 2025 07:48
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Teddy. I have experienced that. My mind feels guilty for not knowing, my heart doesn\'t give a damm he is my friend.
March 7th, 2025 07:48
A Secret Between Friends
sorenbarrett said:
A concert ticket of memories carried with us. A friend familiar that we do not know the name of even after nearly a lifetime of knowing them. Such a great metaphor for our inner self that carries memories of fondness and whom though we love we do not know well enough to know the name of. Such a lovely metaphor intended or not it stood out like an old friend in the dark.
March 7th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
A concert ticket of memories carried with us. A friend familiar that we do not know the name of even after nearly a lifetime of knowing them. Such a great metaphor for our inner self that carries memories of fondness and whom though we love we do not know well enough to know the name of. Such a lovely metaphor intended or not it stood out like an old friend in the dark.
March 7th, 2025 04:40
More a Supper of Jam
Goldfinch60 said:
Smile away Teddy, music will always bring that smile to our faces.
Andy
March 6th, 2025 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Smile away Teddy, music will always bring that smile to our faces.
Andy
March 6th, 2025 02:55
More a Supper of Jam
Thomas W Case said:
I love it, sweet Teddy. I can hear and see the scene.
March 5th, 2025 13:19
Thomas W Case said:
I love it, sweet Teddy. I can hear and see the scene.
March 5th, 2025 13:19
More a Supper of Jam
Cassie58 said:
Lovely to escape dear Teddy and leave the concerns behind. I have to say, your visit and the company were right up my street. A highly creative and imaginative write. Are you doing tours? Will book my flight for next time. Have a wonderful Wednesday and hope you are feeling much better. 🌹💜
March 5th, 2025 08:24
Cassie58 said:
Lovely to escape dear Teddy and leave the concerns behind. I have to say, your visit and the company were right up my street. A highly creative and imaginative write. Are you doing tours? Will book my flight for next time. Have a wonderful Wednesday and hope you are feeling much better. 🌹💜
March 5th, 2025 08:24
More a Supper of Jam
sorenbarrett said:
At first though you were speaking of a traffic jam, then how jammed up it was on earth, then bread and jam oh yes a jam session. A lovely way to remove oneself from all that is below or around and elevate heaven bound. Felt myself smiling thinking of it.
March 5th, 2025 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
At first though you were speaking of a traffic jam, then how jammed up it was on earth, then bread and jam oh yes a jam session. A lovely way to remove oneself from all that is below or around and elevate heaven bound. Felt myself smiling thinking of it.
March 5th, 2025 05:12
Sunflower
Goldfinch60 said:
That beauty that is within you Teddy shines out through your words.
Andy
March 5th, 2025 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
That beauty that is within you Teddy shines out through your words.
Andy
March 5th, 2025 02:46
Sunflower
Distant View said:
A sad but beautiful poem, Teddy! The whole world seems to be one big mess right now, with the wrong kind of people being elected to lead their countries! I seem to be saying this a lot lately, but we live id dangerous times!
March 4th, 2025 11:11
Distant View said:
A sad but beautiful poem, Teddy! The whole world seems to be one big mess right now, with the wrong kind of people being elected to lead their countries! I seem to be saying this a lot lately, but we live id dangerous times!
March 4th, 2025 11:11
Sunflower
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, you are not alone. I too am wondering with a heavy heart what will come next, but today, the sky is blue and I am concentrating on the beauty in our world. There are flowers for everyone if they care to look. Staying positive. Thank you for your beautiful poetry. 💜🌹
March 4th, 2025 08:09
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, you are not alone. I too am wondering with a heavy heart what will come next, but today, the sky is blue and I am concentrating on the beauty in our world. There are flowers for everyone if they care to look. Staying positive. Thank you for your beautiful poetry. 💜🌹
March 4th, 2025 08:09
Sunflower
Caring dove said:
Sometimes we just have to be with ourselves and realise we are ok as we are
A good writing teddy
And yeah things outside of us can upset us , at times ..
March 4th, 2025 07:16
Caring dove said:
Sometimes we just have to be with ourselves and realise we are ok as we are
A good writing teddy
And yeah things outside of us can upset us , at times ..
March 4th, 2025 07:16
Sunflower
Natalie Gladmir said:
If you are afraid to open your eyes, then sleep longer so that you don’t see the hole in your tender soul so often. The best choice!
March 4th, 2025 06:15
Natalie Gladmir said:
If you are afraid to open your eyes, then sleep longer so that you don’t see the hole in your tender soul so often. The best choice!
March 4th, 2025 06:15
Sunflower
sorenbarrett said:
A great message Teddy. When we can not bear to see what is outside us of change what is around us change and focus on what is in us. A wonderful thought in this poem.
March 4th, 2025 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
A great message Teddy. When we can not bear to see what is outside us of change what is around us change and focus on what is in us. A wonderful thought in this poem.
March 4th, 2025 06:02
Senryu ( to sunset)
NafisaSB said:
a beautiful message with an equally wonderful picture accompanying it - bravo
March 4th, 2025 00:19
NafisaSB said:
a beautiful message with an equally wonderful picture accompanying it - bravo
March 4th, 2025 00:19
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