Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



A True Broken Heart is not from Love
Cassie58 said:

For something that is relatively small in size, the heart can certainly dish out some pain. Heart break canโ€™t be eased either with a dose of paracetamol. I havenโ€™t come across anyone yet who has died from a broken heart, though I know many who have suffered real heartache through loss and grief. A poem dear Teddy which is truly relatable. Beautifully penned ๐ŸŒน

January 12th, 2025 17:37

A True Broken Heart is not from Love
Cloie said:

This is raw, heartfelt, and beautifully reflective. Your journey from heartbreak to empowerment is deeply moving, and the endingโ€”reminding us of the heart\'s resilienceโ€”is pure brilliance.

January 12th, 2025 15:57

A True Broken Heart is not from Love
Thomas W Case said:

Genius. Great work, sweet Teddy.

January 12th, 2025 12:27

A True Broken Heart is not from Love
Bella Shepard said:

Dearest Teddy, this poem is a wonderful conversation with the reader. It is an outpouring of feelings that culminates in a simple truth, and so beautifully said.

January 12th, 2025 12:06

A True Broken Heart is not from Love
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed it is and it pumps that life giving fluid to the brain that interprets all giving us those feelings. A poem that speaks of those feeling present and past and lessons learned. A most heartfelt work

January 12th, 2025 06:33

A True Broken Heart is not from Love
arqios said:

What an intriguing title! But it all makes sense as well. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

January 12th, 2025 05:43

A Poet\'s True Worth (2)
Accidental Poet said:

Have you looked in the mirror lately? ๐Ÿ˜‰๐ŸŒน

January 11th, 2025 20:20

A Poet\'s True Worth (2)
Goldfinch60 said:

So true Teddy.

Andy

January 11th, 2025 02:54

A Poet\'s True Worth (2)
Thad Wilk said:

A great senryu
and message too!! ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ
\"Artfully penned\"
and a pleasure
to read poetess, thank you!! ๐Ÿคฉ
Best wishes ๐Ÿ€๐Ÿค—๐ŸŒน Thad

January 10th, 2025 22:41

One Windy Morn
Cassie58 said:

The loss of a beautiful tree can leave us grieving. Nature works in mysterious ways. She can give and take and can do so either slowly or at speed. She can offer heavenly beauty and can leave devastation in her wake. Never underestimate her power. Beautiful poetry dear Teddy. ๐ŸŒน

January 10th, 2025 13:37

A Poet\'s True Worth (2)
Bella Shepard said:

Truer words were never spoken dear friend. Concise and incredible!

January 10th, 2025 10:26

A Poet\'s True Worth (2)
arqios said:

word painted pictures
along with each seasonโ€™s change
colour-splashed meanings


January 10th, 2025 07:57

A Poet\'s True Worth (2)
Cassie58 said:

Dear Teddy I have seen your response to Sorenbarrettโ€™s visit. I am really touched by your generosity. My first love as a child was painting, far before I started to write poetry. I read and write in pictures. Imagery is an important feature of my work. I love your senryu, dearest of poets and thrilled that my name is mentioned alongside Sorenbarrett and Melvin๐ŸŒน

January 10th, 2025 07:45

A Poet\'s True Worth (2)
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful senryu with meaning that transforms words to art. Lovely my poetic friend

January 10th, 2025 05:56

One Windy Morn
Goldfinch60 said:

The loss of parts of Nature in our lives can bring such sadness Teddy but we should also remember that Nature will arise for us all.

Andy

January 10th, 2025 02:15

One Windy Morn
Thomas W Case said:

You paint this scene beautifully sweet Teddy.

January 9th, 2025 18:11

One Windy Morn
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This poem can be read both literally and metaphorically. It is brilliant dear Teddy. On the literal side, it always saddens me to see a fallen tree. There\'s so much history to them and they tell so much of a story...part of which is ours and our own relationship with it. Again, a brilliant and beautiful poem. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

January 9th, 2025 10:05

One Windy Morn
RSM0812 said:

The imagery was great. The weeping skeleton. I love it.

January 9th, 2025 07:38

One Windy Morn
arqios said:

Loving this! An enjoyable read. And an intriguing interplay between the strawberries ๐Ÿ“ and the pine tree ๐ŸŒฒ ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

January 9th, 2025 06:48

One Windy Morn
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful write my friend a poetic acknowledgement of the protection that one recieves and how the seasons take from all. Lovely

January 9th, 2025 06:14

Measures
Goldfinch60 said:

May that love go on for eternity Teddy,

Andy

January 8th, 2025 03:25

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Michael Edwards said:

A lyrical joy - great to read out loud.

January 8th, 2025 01:53

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Thad Wilk said:

A lovely,
touching and
romantic write!! ๐ŸŽˆ๐Ÿ˜๐ŸŽˆ
Delightfully woven
and a treat to recite!!๐Ÿ˜Š
Thanks for sharing poetess!!
Best wishes ๐Ÿ€ ๐Ÿค—๐ŸŒน Thad

January 7th, 2025 21:24

Measures
Dan Williams said:

Perhaps indeed. All too often left in limbo. Nice work.

January 7th, 2025 20:46

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Thomas W Case said:

This is beautiful, sweet Teddy. Philosophical too. Fantastic work.

January 7th, 2025 18:54

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arqios said:

Love that floaty feeling. And when there is art out there that exudes the same feeling there is a sense of unity in the cosmos. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

January 7th, 2025 18:03

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sorenbarrett said:

Carefully worded this poem speaks the truth in deep wisdom. Our love takes us up and down not the one loved. It is such a great metaphor the balloon. Love we do float on in its ups and downs. Wonderfully brilliant!

January 7th, 2025 17:07

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Caring dove said:

Lovely writing like how you used picture to inspire your poem .

A lovely poem

January 7th, 2025 16:14

A Storms Gonna Come My Way
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work. The eyes are the window to the soul.

January 6th, 2025 19:55

A Storms Gonna Come My Way
Goldfinch60 said:

That storm is only clearing your way for brighter future Teddy.

Andy

January 6th, 2025 02:26



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