Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
My Very Own Nevada
sorenbarrett said:
You are right Teddy I remember this poem well from the last posting and this ending is much better indeed (not that the other was bad but rather that this one is better) it gives a whole different feel to the poem. Brilliant!!
January 20th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
You are right Teddy I remember this poem well from the last posting and this ending is much better indeed (not that the other was bad but rather that this one is better) it gives a whole different feel to the poem. Brilliant!!
January 20th, 2025 04:33
An impossible Quest
Dan Williams said:
Not sure we can survive with it. Not sure whether living with it is anu harder than living without it. I\'ve been on both sides, grass is not greener either way. Nice.
January 20th, 2025 01:11
Dan Williams said:
Not sure we can survive with it. Not sure whether living with it is anu harder than living without it. I\'ve been on both sides, grass is not greener either way. Nice.
January 20th, 2025 01:11
An impossible Quest
Cloie said:
Itโs a simple yet powerful reminder that love is just as vital as our brain and heart. Loved it!
January 19th, 2025 13:37
Cloie said:
Itโs a simple yet powerful reminder that love is just as vital as our brain and heart. Loved it!
January 19th, 2025 13:37
An impossible Quest
Thomas W Case said:
But what kind of life without it? You are the best sweet Teddy.
January 19th, 2025 13:26
Thomas W Case said:
But what kind of life without it? You are the best sweet Teddy.
January 19th, 2025 13:26
An impossible Quest
Bella Shepard said:
Such an enigmatic question my friend. We may be able to physically live without it, but in order to survive we must have it, for it fosters empathy and compassion, without which we would live in a cold and uncaring world. An excellent write Dear Teddy!!!
January 19th, 2025 11:28
Bella Shepard said:
Such an enigmatic question my friend. We may be able to physically live without it, but in order to survive we must have it, for it fosters empathy and compassion, without which we would live in a cold and uncaring world. An excellent write Dear Teddy!!!
January 19th, 2025 11:28
An impossible Quest
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy. What a question. There are many types of love. We love people in different ways. I canโt imagine going through life without ever loving anyone at all. Youโd have to be completely heartless, completely dead inside. Just existing, no joy. Have a beautiful Sunday ๐น
January 19th, 2025 09:29
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy. What a question. There are many types of love. We love people in different ways. I canโt imagine going through life without ever loving anyone at all. Youโd have to be completely heartless, completely dead inside. Just existing, no joy. Have a beautiful Sunday ๐น
January 19th, 2025 09:29
An impossible Quest
sorenbarrett said:
Live like love has many definitions. We can exist without love but is that living? A wonderful question put in such a poetic touch. Lovely
January 19th, 2025 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
Live like love has many definitions. We can exist without love but is that living? A wonderful question put in such a poetic touch. Lovely
January 19th, 2025 05:12
An impossible Quest
arqios said:
So many things just to function normally and mostly undervalued or even ignored. Sad truth and state of affairs.
January 19th, 2025 04:32
arqios said:
So many things just to function normally and mostly undervalued or even ignored. Sad truth and state of affairs.
January 19th, 2025 04:32
An impossible Quest
Michael Edwards said:
Well I guess we can but without it it would a dour sad world - loadsa luv Teddy xx
January 19th, 2025 03:51
Michael Edwards said:
Well I guess we can but without it it would a dour sad world - loadsa luv Teddy xx
January 19th, 2025 03:51
Wild Horses
arqios said:
Brought to mind the song: โyou and me against the world.โ A kind of feeling where only 2 are in the know. Special! ๐๐ป๐๐ป๐
January 19th, 2025 03:03
arqios said:
Brought to mind the song: โyou and me against the world.โ A kind of feeling where only 2 are in the know. Special! ๐๐ป๐๐ป๐
January 19th, 2025 03:03
Wild Horses
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope that has happened Teddy as it has for me.
Andy
January 19th, 2025 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope that has happened Teddy as it has for me.
Andy
January 19th, 2025 02:17
Wild Horses
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful thought written wonderfully with great verse.
January 18th, 2025 14:10
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful thought written wonderfully with great verse.
January 18th, 2025 14:10
A Rose Without Thorns (senryu)
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful senryu Teddy.
Andy
January 18th, 2025 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful senryu Teddy.
Andy
January 18th, 2025 02:16
A Rose Without Thorns (senryu)
Thomas W Case said:
Beauty, sweet Teddy. Reminds me of My English Rose by The Jam. Good memories.
January 17th, 2025 18:42
Thomas W Case said:
Beauty, sweet Teddy. Reminds me of My English Rose by The Jam. Good memories.
January 17th, 2025 18:42
Rosy Lea
arqios said:
I was ruthlessly taught never to let the water boil but extract the kettle the moment just before the boiling ensues.. still brisk and bubbly hot to burn. ๐ซ
January 17th, 2025 18:29
arqios said:
I was ruthlessly taught never to let the water boil but extract the kettle the moment just before the boiling ensues.. still brisk and bubbly hot to burn. ๐ซ
January 17th, 2025 18:29
A Rose Without Thorns (senryu)
Cassie58 said:
You dear Teddy are so very generous and thoughtful. This is a beautiful senryu. I am touched that you wrote this for me. A lovely kindness. This red rose has no thorns which has some symbolism. A rose without thorns shows some vulnerability. The thorns are there for protection. I can own up to feeling vulnerable at times. A huge thank you dear friend. ๐น
January 17th, 2025 12:49
Cassie58 said:
You dear Teddy are so very generous and thoughtful. This is a beautiful senryu. I am touched that you wrote this for me. A lovely kindness. This red rose has no thorns which has some symbolism. A rose without thorns shows some vulnerability. The thorns are there for protection. I can own up to feeling vulnerable at times. A huge thank you dear friend. ๐น
January 17th, 2025 12:49
A Rose Without Thorns (senryu)
arqios said:
Oh nice! Cassie is one such English rose ๐น ! Quite succinct but packed with so much, abounding beautiful grace. ๐๐ป๐๐๐ป
January 17th, 2025 06:47
arqios said:
Oh nice! Cassie is one such English rose ๐น ! Quite succinct but packed with so much, abounding beautiful grace. ๐๐ป๐๐๐ป
January 17th, 2025 06:47
A Rose Without Thorns (senryu)
sorenbarrett said:
This could be any one of many but I think I know who. Well written and very clever Teddy
January 17th, 2025 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
This could be any one of many but I think I know who. Well written and very clever Teddy
January 17th, 2025 05:28
A Rose Without Thorns (senryu)
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one Teddy - one of my favourite forms x
January 17th, 2025 03:31
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one Teddy - one of my favourite forms x
January 17th, 2025 03:31
Rosy Lea
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Teddy, I drink more tea than anything else, I like Kenya tea in the morning and in the afternoon I drink Lapsang Souchon or Ceylon Orange Pekoe.
Andy
January 17th, 2025 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Teddy, I drink more tea than anything else, I like Kenya tea in the morning and in the afternoon I drink Lapsang Souchon or Ceylon Orange Pekoe.
Andy
January 17th, 2025 02:18
Rosy Lea
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, this is both a fun and clever write. A fabulous metaphor. Made me smile. Being very English, I love my cuppa tea. (donโt drink coffee). I like the different varieties, can add milk and I donโt mind a slice of lemon now and again either. As to your final line, absolutely right. As long as you are happy with you, thatโs all that matters. S*d, the naysayers๐. Have a beautiful evening my friend. ๐น๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ซ๐
January 16th, 2025 14:55
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, this is both a fun and clever write. A fabulous metaphor. Made me smile. Being very English, I love my cuppa tea. (donโt drink coffee). I like the different varieties, can add milk and I donโt mind a slice of lemon now and again either. As to your final line, absolutely right. As long as you are happy with you, thatโs all that matters. S*d, the naysayers๐. Have a beautiful evening my friend. ๐น๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ซ๐
January 16th, 2025 14:55
Rosy Lea
Thomas W Case said:
You are my cup of tea, sweet Teddy. Great work, just right.
January 16th, 2025 14:47
Thomas W Case said:
You are my cup of tea, sweet Teddy. Great work, just right.
January 16th, 2025 14:47
Rosy Lea
sorenbarrett said:
Clever use of words in this Teddy. A most fun read
January 16th, 2025 13:58
sorenbarrett said:
Clever use of words in this Teddy. A most fun read
January 16th, 2025 13:58
A Touch of Class
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work, Teddy. You are a rock star.
January 14th, 2025 18:07
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work, Teddy. You are a rock star.
January 14th, 2025 18:07
A True Broken Heart is not from Love
aDarkerMind said:
another true-to-life poem from the pen of Teddy;
every line breathes as life itself.
January 14th, 2025 10:29
aDarkerMind said:
another true-to-life poem from the pen of Teddy;
every line breathes as life itself.
January 14th, 2025 10:29
A True Broken Heart is not from Love
Soman Ragavan said:
See the analysis by Artificial Intelligence on my poem \"The heart, that wonder\" :
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-194305
See the poem at this link :
https://allpoetry.com/poem/17035244-Poem--The-heart--that-wonder---List-of-poems-on-AllPoetry--4-March-by-Soman-Ragavan
Soman Ragavan. 14 January 2025
January 14th, 2025 00:15
Soman Ragavan said:
See the analysis by Artificial Intelligence on my poem \"The heart, that wonder\" :
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-194305
See the poem at this link :
https://allpoetry.com/poem/17035244-Poem--The-heart--that-wonder---List-of-poems-on-AllPoetry--4-March-by-Soman-Ragavan
Soman Ragavan. 14 January 2025
January 14th, 2025 00:15
A True Broken Heart is not from Love
NafisaSB said:
truly beautiful poem. liked the positivity at the end, the most
January 14th, 2025 00:05
NafisaSB said:
truly beautiful poem. liked the positivity at the end, the most
January 14th, 2025 00:05
A True Broken Heart is not from Love
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will be there for you Teddy.
Andy
January 13th, 2025 02:54
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will be there for you Teddy.
Andy
January 13th, 2025 02:54
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