Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
When the Caged Bird is Set Free
sorenbarrett said:
Turning things on their head is a good way of mixing what is inside. Love the concept the word love is the common ingredient listed on the label of most bottled passions. A most fun read but also mind provoking once one got past the smile.
April 22nd, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Turning things on their head is a good way of mixing what is inside. Love the concept the word love is the common ingredient listed on the label of most bottled passions. A most fun read but also mind provoking once one got past the smile.
April 22nd, 2025 04:46
After my Sweet Moment of Hush
Goldfinch60 said:
That silence and beauty calms our mind Teddy so that we can move on in life.
Andy
April 22nd, 2025 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
That silence and beauty calms our mind Teddy so that we can move on in life.
Andy
April 22nd, 2025 01:14
Perfumes of a Summer’s Day
Kevin Hulme said:
You could say it\'s the Bad as well as Good Memories that make up the Person. The same as we have
Night as well as Day
Good Poem.
April 21st, 2025 20:14
Kevin Hulme said:
You could say it\'s the Bad as well as Good Memories that make up the Person. The same as we have
Night as well as Day
Good Poem.
April 21st, 2025 20:14
After my Sweet Moment of Hush
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant work, sweet Teddy.
April 21st, 2025 12:46
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant work, sweet Teddy.
April 21st, 2025 12:46
After my Sweet Moment of Hush
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy we grow so accustomed to what we are used to that even a headache one misses when it is gone. A wonderful poem that posits this idea and we long for what we don\'t have, covet others peace, are jealous of others gilded goods, sell our souls to obtain them and find that they are not what we wanted. We return to the familiar. Very nicely written
April 21st, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy we grow so accustomed to what we are used to that even a headache one misses when it is gone. A wonderful poem that posits this idea and we long for what we don\'t have, covet others peace, are jealous of others gilded goods, sell our souls to obtain them and find that they are not what we wanted. We return to the familiar. Very nicely written
April 21st, 2025 04:15
Perfumes of a Summer’s Day
Goldfinch60 said:
I always put my bad memories in a box in my mind so all I have is the good memories Teddy.
Andy
April 21st, 2025 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
I always put my bad memories in a box in my mind so all I have is the good memories Teddy.
Andy
April 21st, 2025 01:52
An Amazing Fact About Us Humans
NafisaSB said:
wow - what a small and yet powerful message - dread to think what can happen if left unchecked
April 20th, 2025 23:15
NafisaSB said:
wow - what a small and yet powerful message - dread to think what can happen if left unchecked
April 20th, 2025 23:15
Perfumes of a Summer’s Day
Thomas W Case said:
Wouldn\'t that be fantastic? Great work, sweet Teddy.
April 20th, 2025 08:57
Thomas W Case said:
Wouldn\'t that be fantastic? Great work, sweet Teddy.
April 20th, 2025 08:57
Perfumes of a Summer’s Day
teardrop said:
That would be awesome but then what would us writers pen? Love your metaphor, Perfumes Of A Summer Day.
April 20th, 2025 04:31
teardrop said:
That would be awesome but then what would us writers pen? Love your metaphor, Perfumes Of A Summer Day.
April 20th, 2025 04:31
Perfumes of a Summer’s Day
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful analogy and metaphor that draws up fun images and serious thoughts. Some use bleach in their memory wash some use paint. I find that bleach deteriorates the fabric and paint makes it stiff when dried and sometimes rubs off on the skin. A most light hearted and upbeat poem with a serious meaning to it. That is what poetry is all about. Loved it.
April 20th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful analogy and metaphor that draws up fun images and serious thoughts. Some use bleach in their memory wash some use paint. I find that bleach deteriorates the fabric and paint makes it stiff when dried and sometimes rubs off on the skin. A most light hearted and upbeat poem with a serious meaning to it. That is what poetry is all about. Loved it.
April 20th, 2025 04:28
Soul 2
teardrop said:
Sounds like a beautiful soul. Thanks for the great read this morning.
April 19th, 2025 06:42
teardrop said:
Sounds like a beautiful soul. Thanks for the great read this morning.
April 19th, 2025 06:42
Soul 2
Goldfinch60 said:
Your soul is there to bring light to your life Teddy.
An dy
April 19th, 2025 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Your soul is there to bring light to your life Teddy.
An dy
April 19th, 2025 01:44
Soul 2
sorenbarrett said:
Dark or bright the soul is yours and in this piece it shines through. A brighter poem for a season that represents brightness and a return form the grave. Lovely my friend.
April 18th, 2025 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
Dark or bright the soul is yours and in this piece it shines through. A brighter poem for a season that represents brightness and a return form the grave. Lovely my friend.
April 18th, 2025 05:34
April\'s Senryu
NafisaSB said:
may the rainbows lead you to the pot of gold - short but sweet poem
April 8th, 2025 00:48
NafisaSB said:
may the rainbows lead you to the pot of gold - short but sweet poem
April 8th, 2025 00:48
Through Eyes of Light
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work, sweet Teddy. I felt this through and through. Excellent.
April 7th, 2025 18:12
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work, sweet Teddy. I felt this through and through. Excellent.
April 7th, 2025 18:12
Through Eyes of Light
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep dancing Teddy life is so wonderful.
Andy
April 6th, 2025 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep dancing Teddy life is so wonderful.
Andy
April 6th, 2025 01:24
Through Eyes of Light
sorenbarrett said:
I here the challenge here, meet your greatest difficulties face to face and dare to dance with them. A lovely metaphor carefully chosen. Where many would say fight dance is much better not only poetically but in philosophical metaphor as well. A Sun Tzu maneuver. Loved the poem Teddy.
April 5th, 2025 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
I here the challenge here, meet your greatest difficulties face to face and dare to dance with them. A lovely metaphor carefully chosen. Where many would say fight dance is much better not only poetically but in philosophical metaphor as well. A Sun Tzu maneuver. Loved the poem Teddy.
April 5th, 2025 05:09
Spring\'s Wish
Goldfinch60 said:
Those peaceful moments are so important in our lives Teddy but I could not live without colour in my life.
Andy
April 5th, 2025 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Those peaceful moments are so important in our lives Teddy but I could not live without colour in my life.
Andy
April 5th, 2025 01:28
Spring\'s Wish
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense in this poem of being overwhelmed by colors and stimulation of the world around us and desiring solitude, isolation from all those things that overstimulate the mind. I have been there as well and sometimes just closing ones eyes and ears is not enough. A poem well expressed.
April 4th, 2025 15:42
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense in this poem of being overwhelmed by colors and stimulation of the world around us and desiring solitude, isolation from all those things that overstimulate the mind. I have been there as well and sometimes just closing ones eyes and ears is not enough. A poem well expressed.
April 4th, 2025 15:42
Secrets of the Great Fig
Goldfinch60 said:
Thoughtful words Teddy, we all have our ways of finding the way in life.
Andy
April 4th, 2025 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Thoughtful words Teddy, we all have our ways of finding the way in life.
Andy
April 4th, 2025 01:12
April\'s Senryu
spilleronsheet said:
The much awaited senryu, and the cherry on cake, the click….adds to my imagination…dark and light really entwined….
April 3rd, 2025 15:09
spilleronsheet said:
The much awaited senryu, and the cherry on cake, the click….adds to my imagination…dark and light really entwined….
April 3rd, 2025 15:09
Painted Sky
spilleronsheet said:
I truly match your vibe…I don’t like yellow…but yet I can’t stop to agree the majestic charm it holds….and the click so superb dear Teddy….
April 3rd, 2025 14:43
spilleronsheet said:
I truly match your vibe…I don’t like yellow…but yet I can’t stop to agree the majestic charm it holds….and the click so superb dear Teddy….
April 3rd, 2025 14:43
Secrets of the Great Fig
spilleronsheet said:
Indeed a great reflection and splendid metaphor dearest Teddy…I can see many of us, including my emotions on the roots of tree….simply superb
April 3rd, 2025 14:40
spilleronsheet said:
Indeed a great reflection and splendid metaphor dearest Teddy…I can see many of us, including my emotions on the roots of tree….simply superb
April 3rd, 2025 14:40
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