Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
A Very Special Journey
Doggerel Dave said:
Now you’ve pondered, I’d suggest putting out tenders for a replacement muse if she (he or whomsoever) isn’t coming up with the goods…. 😂
For me, all that imagery was fun…… (you are of the liberal school who believes the reader may interpret…….. aren’t you, Teddy…..?) 😇
June 9th, 2024 19:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Now you’ve pondered, I’d suggest putting out tenders for a replacement muse if she (he or whomsoever) isn’t coming up with the goods…. 😂
For me, all that imagery was fun…… (you are of the liberal school who believes the reader may interpret…….. aren’t you, Teddy…..?) 😇
June 9th, 2024 19:59
A Very Special Journey
Sunita said:
Very moving, I absolutely love it.
Hoping to read more of your work
June 9th, 2024 13:09
Sunita said:
Very moving, I absolutely love it.
Hoping to read more of your work
June 9th, 2024 13:09
A Very Special Journey
aDarkerMind said:
and how lucky I am to be here reading your delighful words Teddy;
or even my raven greeting the scarecrow....
wonderful;
June 9th, 2024 11:45
aDarkerMind said:
and how lucky I am to be here reading your delighful words Teddy;
or even my raven greeting the scarecrow....
wonderful;
June 9th, 2024 11:45
Palms Spring
Bella Shepard said:
Coming from an Italian family, I know that there seem to be no boundaries when it comes to physical expression, it\'s in the genes. This poem is too much fun and too true.
June 9th, 2024 10:28
Bella Shepard said:
Coming from an Italian family, I know that there seem to be no boundaries when it comes to physical expression, it\'s in the genes. This poem is too much fun and too true.
June 9th, 2024 10:28
Poor Poet
Bella Shepard said:
I think that when your fossilized remains are unearthed thousands of years in the future, there will be clasped within your bony fingers the last and most perfect poem you\'ve written. It will be barely legible, but enough to know that here lies the charm and wit of one who deserves to be remembered. Love this poem!
June 9th, 2024 10:24
Bella Shepard said:
I think that when your fossilized remains are unearthed thousands of years in the future, there will be clasped within your bony fingers the last and most perfect poem you\'ve written. It will be barely legible, but enough to know that here lies the charm and wit of one who deserves to be remembered. Love this poem!
June 9th, 2024 10:24
A Leap In The Dark
Bella Shepard said:
The tug on the heart strings resonates in a way that the head cannot resist. Beautifully and eloquently written, accompanied by the perfect pic. Exquisite in every way!
June 9th, 2024 10:18
Bella Shepard said:
The tug on the heart strings resonates in a way that the head cannot resist. Beautifully and eloquently written, accompanied by the perfect pic. Exquisite in every way!
June 9th, 2024 10:18
senryu to Gaza
sorenbarrett said:
One that I missed back when that still applies today and seems that it will not go away soon. Nicely done.
June 9th, 2024 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
One that I missed back when that still applies today and seems that it will not go away soon. Nicely done.
June 9th, 2024 04:47
Sheep in Uniform
Thomas W Case said:
Such atrocity in the world. This is a moving and powerful piece. I\'m speechless.
June 7th, 2024 11:41
Thomas W Case said:
Such atrocity in the world. This is a moving and powerful piece. I\'m speechless.
June 7th, 2024 11:41
My Tapestry
peto said:
Extremely visual and descriptive
Enjoyed the stroll
The Mexican. wave took me back to that glorious world cup
And the hand of God goal by Maradona v England
As a Scot
The best goal ever
June 7th, 2024 08:12
peto said:
Extremely visual and descriptive
Enjoyed the stroll
The Mexican. wave took me back to that glorious world cup
And the hand of God goal by Maradona v England
As a Scot
The best goal ever
June 7th, 2024 08:12
My Tapestry
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words Teddy, the beauty of life as you pass through it is so inspiringly beautiful.
Andy
June 7th, 2024 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words Teddy, the beauty of life as you pass through it is so inspiringly beautiful.
Andy
June 7th, 2024 01:18
My Tapestry
sorenbarrett said:
I took this a couple of ways but the one I like best is that all life is the same in value and worth. We tend as humans to aggrandize ourselves above all other forms. Here anthropomorphized they are on the same level. I hope that at the end when you return to reality this is not lost. A fun and enjoyable write Teddy
June 6th, 2024 18:48
sorenbarrett said:
I took this a couple of ways but the one I like best is that all life is the same in value and worth. We tend as humans to aggrandize ourselves above all other forms. Here anthropomorphized they are on the same level. I hope that at the end when you return to reality this is not lost. A fun and enjoyable write Teddy
June 6th, 2024 18:48
My Tapestry
Cassie58 said:
Teddy, your words are uplifting and thankful. I enjoyed your journey. And Kew Gardens I know so very well. Have visited many times. So close to where I once lived as a child. My grandparents used to take me there. A lovely nostalgic post for ne. Hope your day has been a good one.
June 6th, 2024 11:28
Cassie58 said:
Teddy, your words are uplifting and thankful. I enjoyed your journey. And Kew Gardens I know so very well. Have visited many times. So close to where I once lived as a child. My grandparents used to take me there. A lovely nostalgic post for ne. Hope your day has been a good one.
June 6th, 2024 11:28
My Tapestry
aDarkerMind said:
how very true Teddy...and how lucky we are.
stunning;
June 6th, 2024 11:02
aDarkerMind said:
how very true Teddy...and how lucky we are.
stunning;
June 6th, 2024 11:02
My Tapestry
Thomas W Case said:
I love the joy and gratitude in this poem sweet Teddy.
June 6th, 2024 07:29
Thomas W Case said:
I love the joy and gratitude in this poem sweet Teddy.
June 6th, 2024 07:29
Sheep in Uniform
Goldfinch60 said:
An extremely raw period in life Teddy and something like that will neer be forgotten in our lives.
Andy
June 6th, 2024 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
An extremely raw period in life Teddy and something like that will neer be forgotten in our lives.
Andy
June 6th, 2024 01:43
Sheep in Uniform
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid and style true to a child writing it portrays a horrendous picture of loss in a world of pain and sadness. A tribute to a time many would wish to forget but none of us should. Nicely done Teddy
June 5th, 2024 17:22
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid and style true to a child writing it portrays a horrendous picture of loss in a world of pain and sadness. A tribute to a time many would wish to forget but none of us should. Nicely done Teddy
June 5th, 2024 17:22
Sheep in Uniform
aDarkerMind said:
as powerful as I have ever read from you Teddy;
a write that shows us how lucky we are.
June 5th, 2024 11:23
aDarkerMind said:
as powerful as I have ever read from you Teddy;
a write that shows us how lucky we are.
June 5th, 2024 11:23
Sheep in Uniform
Accidental Poet said:
Your heart is of gold
Your heart is sincere
She may be gone now
But she knows you are here
Feel her embrace
As she holds you tight
The words she leaves in your heart
Are your guiding light
May she live on in you
Share your smile everyday
For she believes in you
Because you have touched her this way 🌹
June 5th, 2024 07:58
Accidental Poet said:
Your heart is of gold
Your heart is sincere
She may be gone now
But she knows you are here
Feel her embrace
As she holds you tight
The words she leaves in your heart
Are your guiding light
May she live on in you
Share your smile everyday
For she believes in you
Because you have touched her this way 🌹
June 5th, 2024 07:58
Sheep in Uniform
Doggerel Dave said:
Jewish Museum, Berlin – same or similar feelings, although I was inundated with images after the war, as an adolescent which left me with nightmares which took a long time to abate.
Those sheep? Far too many still around, invested in nefarious causes today. (never understood why some women love a man in uniform…?)
This piece , I can see you put your heart and soul into; so while I could make some black humour around this Teddy, I’m not going to, and fully acknowledge the thought and pain you put into it. Take care.
June 5th, 2024 07:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Jewish Museum, Berlin – same or similar feelings, although I was inundated with images after the war, as an adolescent which left me with nightmares which took a long time to abate.
Those sheep? Far too many still around, invested in nefarious causes today. (never understood why some women love a man in uniform…?)
This piece , I can see you put your heart and soul into; so while I could make some black humour around this Teddy, I’m not going to, and fully acknowledge the thought and pain you put into it. Take care.
June 5th, 2024 07:42
Sheep in Uniform
peto said:
I once visited belsen Teddy
So understand these emotions
one of the most personal I\'ve seen from you
Hammer blow of a write
June 5th, 2024 06:31
peto said:
I once visited belsen Teddy
So understand these emotions
one of the most personal I\'ve seen from you
Hammer blow of a write
June 5th, 2024 06:31
Sheep in Uniform
Cassie58 said:
I shudder whenever I think about the Holocaust. Six million lives lost, just because they were Jews. On a memorial site on Facebook, they post photographs of those young people that perished. I can not pass by without leaving a message to remember them by. Every single one. Your poem is a reminder , that we must never forget. History can repeat itself. The human species never learns lessons. I hope Wednesday brings happy for you Teddy. 💐
June 5th, 2024 04:07
Cassie58 said:
I shudder whenever I think about the Holocaust. Six million lives lost, just because they were Jews. On a memorial site on Facebook, they post photographs of those young people that perished. I can not pass by without leaving a message to remember them by. Every single one. Your poem is a reminder , that we must never forget. History can repeat itself. The human species never learns lessons. I hope Wednesday brings happy for you Teddy. 💐
June 5th, 2024 04:07
Stars
Goldfinch60 said:
The stars of love shine down on us all Teddy and may they always bring love and joy to us all.
An dy
June 5th, 2024 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
The stars of love shine down on us all Teddy and may they always bring love and joy to us all.
An dy
June 5th, 2024 01:13
British Politics in a Nutshell
Doggerel Dave said:
A little gem Teddy, shining with truth. Although the shit you chose as subject matter.........
Still much preferable to writing a long poem on daises - which, incidentally, I wish he would start pushing up......🤣
June 4th, 2024 20:15
Doggerel Dave said:
A little gem Teddy, shining with truth. Although the shit you chose as subject matter.........
Still much preferable to writing a long poem on daises - which, incidentally, I wish he would start pushing up......🤣
June 4th, 2024 20:15
British Politics in a Nutshell
aDarkerMind said:
well said Teddy;
a wet summer on it\'s way, some game called feetball on it\'s way, and a general infection!
or is it election?
cant wait.....!
June 4th, 2024 13:21
aDarkerMind said:
well said Teddy;
a wet summer on it\'s way, some game called feetball on it\'s way, and a general infection!
or is it election?
cant wait.....!
June 4th, 2024 13:21
British Politics in a Nutshell
sorenbarrett said:
I abstain from political judgement in that I hold all politicians abhorrent but loved the senyru as a piece of poetry
June 4th, 2024 12:37
sorenbarrett said:
I abstain from political judgement in that I hold all politicians abhorrent but loved the senyru as a piece of poetry
June 4th, 2024 12:37
Stars
sorenbarrett said:
Taken literally there are 7 planets excluding earth and the sun and the moon which could stand for the spheres of wonder but then you speak of constellations of which there are 88 visible from earth so I take this metaphorically. Orion the symbol of transition from life to death while the sauce pan I take to be the big dipper symbolizing the infinite, eternal giving guidance and enlightenment. Great images to \"light my heart\"
\"you’re so far away
yet always in my dreams
when the sun goes to bed
and moon shines her beams\"
takes on new meaning from a soul in darkness guided by Isis light of the night. Finished with a great ending
\"even on nights, that I’m sad and alone
you, my stars in paradise
shine down from beyond.\"
It shows that hope is present in this guiding light. Brilliant!
June 4th, 2024 12:32
sorenbarrett said:
Taken literally there are 7 planets excluding earth and the sun and the moon which could stand for the spheres of wonder but then you speak of constellations of which there are 88 visible from earth so I take this metaphorically. Orion the symbol of transition from life to death while the sauce pan I take to be the big dipper symbolizing the infinite, eternal giving guidance and enlightenment. Great images to \"light my heart\"
\"you’re so far away
yet always in my dreams
when the sun goes to bed
and moon shines her beams\"
takes on new meaning from a soul in darkness guided by Isis light of the night. Finished with a great ending
\"even on nights, that I’m sad and alone
you, my stars in paradise
shine down from beyond.\"
It shows that hope is present in this guiding light. Brilliant!
June 4th, 2024 12:32
British Politics in a Nutshell
Thomas W Case said:
Politics is a refuge for scoundrels. Great work.
June 4th, 2024 09:36
Thomas W Case said:
Politics is a refuge for scoundrels. Great work.
June 4th, 2024 09:36
British Politics in a Nutshell
Cassie58 said:
I have no time for politicians of any kind Teddy. A sad reflection on politics today. They lack integrity. Love the posted image of London. Have a good day. 💐
June 4th, 2024 06:45
Cassie58 said:
I have no time for politicians of any kind Teddy. A sad reflection on politics today. They lack integrity. Love the posted image of London. Have a good day. 💐
June 4th, 2024 06:45
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