Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
A Father\'s Pride
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem that twists in the middle and is so true. I have two daughters yet in tradition each when married had their boyfriend come and ask permission before becoming engaged. How else will a father get another man to swear honor, fidelity, financial responsibility to his daughter?
May 1st, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem that twists in the middle and is so true. I have two daughters yet in tradition each when married had their boyfriend come and ask permission before becoming engaged. How else will a father get another man to swear honor, fidelity, financial responsibility to his daughter?
May 1st, 2025 03:55
Why Does Romanticism have to be Absurd?
Goldfinch60 said:
Soulmates go on together to infinity and beyond Teddy.
Andy
April 30th, 2025 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Soulmates go on together to infinity and beyond Teddy.
Andy
April 30th, 2025 01:20
Why Does Romanticism have to be Absurd?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
If we operated on logic alone, what a foreign and cold world that would be. That said, for some, romanticism turns absurd well before death—let alone the idea of eternal union. For such, that might be its own version of hell! 🤣 This is a great write that made me both laugh and reflect. A definite fave, my friend. 🌹👏
April 29th, 2025 18:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
If we operated on logic alone, what a foreign and cold world that would be. That said, for some, romanticism turns absurd well before death—let alone the idea of eternal union. For such, that might be its own version of hell! 🤣 This is a great write that made me both laugh and reflect. A definite fave, my friend. 🌹👏
April 29th, 2025 18:38
Why Does Romanticism have to be Absurd?
Thomas W Case said:
Hysterical work. I love this. You capture the vibe well.
April 29th, 2025 10:57
Thomas W Case said:
Hysterical work. I love this. You capture the vibe well.
April 29th, 2025 10:57
Why Does Romanticism have to be Absurd?
sorenbarrett said:
Melodrama is the cornerstone of romance and what exaggeration better than love beyond life. But alas logic does not pervade in the land of emotion. A wonderful write Teddy
April 29th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
Melodrama is the cornerstone of romance and what exaggeration better than love beyond life. But alas logic does not pervade in the land of emotion. A wonderful write Teddy
April 29th, 2025 04:23
M Very Own Greek Philosophy
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Teddy, love cures so many problems, it is such a pity that love does not rule our world.
Andy
April 28th, 2025 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Teddy, love cures so many problems, it is such a pity that love does not rule our world.
Andy
April 28th, 2025 01:03
M Very Own Greek Philosophy
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant, sweet Teddy. Excellent work.
April 27th, 2025 22:50
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant, sweet Teddy. Excellent work.
April 27th, 2025 22:50
M Very Own Greek Philosophy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem immediately gave me the image of Kintsugi. A wonderful metaphor for relationships...and yes, even the bad ones can be good if it leads us to realize our own self-worth and empowers us to find true love. Very wise, my friend. A wonderful poem that spoke to me in my current season of life. Brava, Teddy. 🌹👏
April 27th, 2025 07:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem immediately gave me the image of Kintsugi. A wonderful metaphor for relationships...and yes, even the bad ones can be good if it leads us to realize our own self-worth and empowers us to find true love. Very wise, my friend. A wonderful poem that spoke to me in my current season of life. Brava, Teddy. 🌹👏
April 27th, 2025 07:41
M Very Own Greek Philosophy
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Teddy. You are, absolutely, correct. Jim got a cat I got a dog. Humans are as tricky as a monkey in a mile of grapevine.
April 27th, 2025 06:28
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Teddy. You are, absolutely, correct. Jim got a cat I got a dog. Humans are as tricky as a monkey in a mile of grapevine.
April 27th, 2025 06:28
M Very Own Greek Philosophy
sorenbarrett said:
All things in life have two sides and it is our choice which side we wish to focus on. A lovely write that makes its point well.
April 27th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
All things in life have two sides and it is our choice which side we wish to focus on. A lovely write that makes its point well.
April 27th, 2025 04:33
A Grand Photo of Matrimony
Goldfinch60 said:
But love is always there in its glory and wonder Teddy as I am sure it is with you, it certainly is with me.
Andy
April 27th, 2025 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
But love is always there in its glory and wonder Teddy as I am sure it is with you, it certainly is with me.
Andy
April 27th, 2025 01:16
A Grand Photo of Matrimony
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, the muse has spoken to you and hit home for me my friend! This must get a fave because it is the stark, cold truth and so well written, as you so consistently do. Well done, Teddy! 🌹👏
April 26th, 2025 12:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, the muse has spoken to you and hit home for me my friend! This must get a fave because it is the stark, cold truth and so well written, as you so consistently do. Well done, Teddy! 🌹👏
April 26th, 2025 12:31
A Grand Photo of Matrimony
Jerry Reynolds said:
Excellent write, Teddy, After 61 years I can attest to this poem.
April 26th, 2025 08:06
Jerry Reynolds said:
Excellent write, Teddy, After 61 years I can attest to this poem.
April 26th, 2025 08:06
A Grand Photo of Matrimony
sorenbarrett said:
It is in the variety and the extremity of such differences that the depth of love is measured. Someone once told me that a person can not love deeper than one hates. It makes sense that there must be balance. A wonderful write that many of us can identify with.
April 26th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
It is in the variety and the extremity of such differences that the depth of love is measured. Someone once told me that a person can not love deeper than one hates. It makes sense that there must be balance. A wonderful write that many of us can identify with.
April 26th, 2025 04:57
A Writer\'s Dream
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all meet in infinity Teddy and it will be wonderful.
Andy
April 26th, 2025 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all meet in infinity Teddy and it will be wonderful.
Andy
April 26th, 2025 01:14
A Writer\'s Dream
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful sweet Teddy. You paint this scene well.
April 25th, 2025 11:24
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful sweet Teddy. You paint this scene well.
April 25th, 2025 11:24
A Writer\'s Dream
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Teddy. Children of the universe we all are.
April 25th, 2025 08:12
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Teddy. Children of the universe we all are.
April 25th, 2025 08:12
A Writer\'s Dream
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the dream of all poets to peer into the unseen, to write of the unknown extremes of the infinite. Oh to write of where no footstep has fallen to tread the paths of the universe outside and inside to touch that that has never been touched. To express the pain of the damned and sorrow of the lost. What joy to dive to the depths of the human soul and mate with nature in a glorious song of love. A most beautiful poem of desire Teddy.
April 25th, 2025 07:02
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the dream of all poets to peer into the unseen, to write of the unknown extremes of the infinite. Oh to write of where no footstep has fallen to tread the paths of the universe outside and inside to touch that that has never been touched. To express the pain of the damned and sorrow of the lost. What joy to dive to the depths of the human soul and mate with nature in a glorious song of love. A most beautiful poem of desire Teddy.
April 25th, 2025 07:02
Triumph
sorenbarrett said:
Such a good message stated in such few words. I love the setup for the punch line it sounds good and looks good. Set up like two triangle one above the other
the bottom being the foundation. You said secret so I look to symbolism. Two to three to four to five words balanced on two and four words. I\'m reaching but the greater weight balanced on the lesser. When we feel like nothing it is a great weight when we are everything there is less weight. The triangle to me represents balance and that is what we have when we have everything. Certainly I have reached too far. A lovely write.
April 24th, 2025 17:58
sorenbarrett said:
Such a good message stated in such few words. I love the setup for the punch line it sounds good and looks good. Set up like two triangle one above the other
the bottom being the foundation. You said secret so I look to symbolism. Two to three to four to five words balanced on two and four words. I\'m reaching but the greater weight balanced on the lesser. When we feel like nothing it is a great weight when we are everything there is less weight. The triangle to me represents balance and that is what we have when we have everything. Certainly I have reached too far. A lovely write.
April 24th, 2025 17:58
Mind’s Great Ocean
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Teddy, I agree with what soren has said, causing harm to others is not the way to go.
Andy
April 24th, 2025 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Teddy, I agree with what soren has said, causing harm to others is not the way to go.
Andy
April 24th, 2025 01:20
Mind’s Great Ocean
Thoughtless said:
I don\'t understand such people. I\'m in my eighties, and believe the world is better when a kinder place. I enjoyed your composition.
April 23rd, 2025 15:53
Thoughtless said:
I don\'t understand such people. I\'m in my eighties, and believe the world is better when a kinder place. I enjoyed your composition.
April 23rd, 2025 15:53
Mind’s Great Ocean
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write about people that are sorry enough to have such anger, greed, or envy to cause harm to others. I feel sorry for them. Good write
April 23rd, 2025 12:27
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write about people that are sorry enough to have such anger, greed, or envy to cause harm to others. I feel sorry for them. Good write
April 23rd, 2025 12:27
When the Caged Bird is Set Free
Goldfinch60 said:
Love will always be my freedom Teddy, it has been all my life and I cannot see it being any other way. Good write.
Andy
April 23rd, 2025 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Love will always be my freedom Teddy, it has been all my life and I cannot see it being any other way. Good write.
Andy
April 23rd, 2025 01:46
Soul 2
NafisaSB said:
if the person is innately good, the aura is bound to be bright
may yours always shine...
April 22nd, 2025 23:44
NafisaSB said:
if the person is innately good, the aura is bound to be bright
may yours always shine...
April 22nd, 2025 23:44
When the Caged Bird is Set Free
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great read, Teddy. I have never been able to separate the two.
April 22nd, 2025 08:12
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great read, Teddy. I have never been able to separate the two.
April 22nd, 2025 08:12
When the Caged Bird is Set Free
sorenbarrett said:
Turning things on their head is a good way of mixing what is inside. Love the concept the word love is the common ingredient listed on the label of most bottled passions. A most fun read but also mind provoking once one got past the smile.
April 22nd, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Turning things on their head is a good way of mixing what is inside. Love the concept the word love is the common ingredient listed on the label of most bottled passions. A most fun read but also mind provoking once one got past the smile.
April 22nd, 2025 04:46
After my Sweet Moment of Hush
Goldfinch60 said:
That silence and beauty calms our mind Teddy so that we can move on in life.
Andy
April 22nd, 2025 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
That silence and beauty calms our mind Teddy so that we can move on in life.
Andy
April 22nd, 2025 01:14
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