An Old Fashioned Soul
sorenbarrett said:

What a simple world it would be if the smile was always guaranteed. Poetically romanticly sweet. Lovely!

October 29th, 2024 04:09

Sixty Minute Slumberbash
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic. I love it. That did happen to me at my bank with 3000 dollars, but the teller caught it before I could leave the bank. lol

October 26th, 2024 23:40

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MendedFences27 said:

To spend a million within an hour is near impossible. What would you buy? Where would you buy it from? How would you transfer the money? Not at all possible. Here\'s a challenge. ASSUME YOU HAVE THE MILLION IN YOUR ACCOUNT, TRY TO SPEND IT IN ONE WEEK, BUYING THINGS. (NO DONATIONS.)
Again, I think it cannot be done, unless you\'ve done it many times before and people are familiar with your spending habits.
Oh, about the poem, it made me think, and this is what I came up with. I had fun with your poem. - Phil A.

October 26th, 2024 14:24

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Tony36 said:

Excellent write Teddy

October 26th, 2024 07:41

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sorenbarrett said:

Ah yes such a nice dream because once the bank did deposit a good sum in my account that wasn\'t mine and then promptly debited it out. If I would have spent it I would have been left in deficit and aprehended by the local law as a crook. Got the poem Teddy made me smile, recall and sigh a sigh of relief.

October 26th, 2024 04:47

Fake ID
Accidental Poet said:

Whether in the dating scene or political, these masked monsters try to gain people\'s trust, And sadly some people fall for their lies only to find out too late of their misplaced trust. Some snakes slither in the darkest of intentions, but in the end get eaten up by the smartest of eagles. 😉👍

October 26th, 2024 03:49

Fake ID
Goldfinch60 said:

This is definitely not me Teddy, I am what I am and as I say if people do not like what they see in me it is not my problem it is theirs.

Andy

October 26th, 2024 00:56

Fake ID
MendedFences27 said:

He\'s a P.H.D. alright, A Pig-Headed D*+k. Just like in your photo. I guess this happens a lot in today\'s dating scene. It\'s good you posted this; it can serve as a warning to those who date in this manner. It was a powerful piece and the experience behind it makes it very believable. - Phil A.

October 25th, 2024 13:16

Fake ID
arqios said:

Sometimes society around us pushes us to weird extremes, some people do “flex” more than others just to fit in and stand out in the same breath.

October 25th, 2024 08:00

Ice-Slide
Goldfinch60 said:

Back in my days at school we made ice slides in the playground Teddy, probably not allowed nowadays.

Andy

October 25th, 2024 01:07

Ice-Slide
MendedFences27 said:

I think penguins are some of the funniest creatures alive. Your poem is a picture of some of their antics. And they waddle. - Phil A.

October 24th, 2024 11:04

Ice-Slide
sorenbarrett said:

Made me giggle myself. I have never seen a penguin giggle but can imagin it and the rest all fits in. Great Haiku Teddy

October 24th, 2024 05:29

Poet
NafisaSB said:

i agree with you - the poets and poems will live for eternity

October 23rd, 2024 23:57

Poet
Thomas W Case said:

So very true, sweet Teddy.

October 23rd, 2024 14:40

Poet
sorenbarrett said:

You have outdone yourself on this one my friend. Written so neatly these two Senryu went unnoticed as such until I read your note. Highly uncommon to be able to read so fluently from one line to the next you did this in both cases. Furthermore the last incorporates a metaphor is poetic, is philosophical and gramatic a definate favorite. Lovely

October 23rd, 2024 05:08