Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



Reflections of a Woman
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Oh, Teddy! I\'ve certainly had my share of those evenings, although these days the music is enough for me. LOL! I think we\'ve all had moments when we needed to have a good cry and then laugh at ourselves afterward. Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

October 13th, 2026 23:33

Reflections of a Woman
Tony Grannell said:

Dear, Teddy,

Rum and music a delicious cocktail and well worth the hangover. My predilection was guinness and some drunken companion reciting a Banjo Patterson poem before blacking out. I enjoyed these reflections of yours, wildish in ways but cheerful and harmless overall in the spirit and essence of music. A joy to read.

Fond regards,

Tony.

October 13th, 2026 14:41

Reflections of a Woman
Paul Bell said:

Is that big black round thing a CD.
Waking up with a sore head, those were the days.
Okay, that was yesterday.
Music was my first love.

October 13th, 2026 12:59

Reflections of a Woman
sorenbarrett said:

Alcohol hides it and music sooths it or sometimes magnifies it. I hope those times are past my friend.

October 13th, 2026 12:10

Drunk on Happiness
NafisaSB said:

So very happy to read this. Keep smiling, shining and spreading happiness and cheer 💕

October 13th, 2026 09:41

A Marvelous Mistake
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work, sweet Teddy. There’s an honest human contradiction at the heart of this, because a woman can be standing on the brink of marriage, raising a glass of prosecco, and still quietly confess that what she wants most is to be free. The questions that follow are the keeper for me, especially whether we can ever fly above the baggage we carry, because the poem recognizes that freedom isn’t simply escaping other people but learning what we’re carrying, why we carry it, and whether we’re finally ready to put some of it down.

October 13th, 2026 08:13

The Aftermath
Dan Williams said:

Amen.

October 12th, 2026 21:11

A Sweet Thought on Grief
Syd said:

You\'ve hit the nail on the head here Shirley. A great description of what grief is.

- Syd 🍄

October 12th, 2026 12:25

The Aftermath
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Oh, Teddy, this is heartbreaking. I\'ve seen what severe storms (internal and external weather) can do, and it never gets easier witnessing that kind of destruction. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

October 11th, 2026 23:21

The Aftermath
Tony Grannell said:

Dear, Teddy,

A storm itself can be horrifying but the aftermath can be so saddening to the point of tears. I could never conquer the haiku, what you have done in thirteen words would take me about eight stanzas and many months to describe. So, hats off to you - a perfect haiku.

Fond regards,

Tony.

October 11th, 2026 15:33

The Aftermath
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful. I feel this.

October 11th, 2026 08:36

The Aftermath
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

natures fury

October 11th, 2026 07:55

The Aftermath
sorenbarrett said:

A most beautiful haiku Teddy and with meaning.

October 11th, 2026 07:50

A Marvelous Mistake
Goldfinch60 said:

Life can be like that Teddy but in my life I have always been content with sharing it with the one I love.

Andy

October 11th, 2026 01:11

A Marvelous Mistake
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Teddy, I’ve felt alone in a room full of people…so I don’t automatically expect solitude to feel worse. Sometimes I’d welcome the breathing room. Great write, my dearest friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

October 10th, 2026 22:27

A Marvelous Mistake
Paul Bell said:

Some people just need partners.
Some need to be apart.
Some prefer animals to humans.
Some have broken hearts.
Freedom is doing what you please
The girl next door says so, and she\'s a tease.

October 10th, 2026 13:15

A Marvelous Mistake
Tony Grannell said:

Dear, Teddy,

A very interesting poem on freedom, a word often used buy never really understood. I suppose to be free from someone, something, some ordeal, event or worry, but to be totally free, I think is impossible, as in that old adage, free as a bird, well, birds are far from free, in constant search for food, fear of predators, raising young and so on. Sleep perhaps is freedom unbound, it\'s just a pity we are not consciousely there to enjoy it. lol. Well done, my friend.

Wishing you as much freedom as possible,

Tony.

October 10th, 2026 09:25

A Marvelous Mistake
sorenbarrett said:

Psychological and existential questions that no one wants the answers to posed in this poem. And why do they not want the answers, because they would lead to an admission no one wants to make and choices too damn hard. Soaked in a technological world of ease we are accustomed to entitlement, where criticism is our vent for minor frustrations that we have no answer for. Nicely done Teddy

October 10th, 2026 08:38

Drunk on Happiness
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Teddy, now that\'s the sort of intoxication I can get behind! 😂 And the best part? No hangover the following morning! Wishing you plenty more days that leave you grinning like that, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

October 9th, 2026 09:55

Drunk on Happiness
Syd said:

What a wonderful read for a Friday Shirley.

Glad to know you\'re in high spirits.

- Syd 🍄

October 9th, 2026 04:19

Drunk on Happiness
Tony Grannell said:

dear, Teddy,
Composed in a whirl of merriment, drunk on happiness. Chin, chin to joy!

Fond regards,

Tony.

October 8th, 2026 14:51

Drunk on Happiness
Paul Bell said:

This is me when the sun comes out, that big yellow thing Brits have to go abroad for.

October 8th, 2026 10:35

Drunk on Happiness
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely senryu Teddy it feels warm and satisfied

October 8th, 2026 08:27

Heart of Stone
Tristan Robert Lange said:

😂 Teddy, “could have been”? You’ve got graves, crying angels, ashes, evil, and everybody’s dead. I think you qualify! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

October 6th, 2026 22:52

Heart of Stone
Paul Bell said:

I know it\'s not, but it does have the halloween effect going on.
Losing your parents is a tough one, leaves a void that can\'t be filled.
Hope you\'re pushing through.

October 6th, 2026 09:48

Heart of Stone
Tony Grannell said:

Dear, Teddy,
It\'s the horror of grief that makes this poem so effective, as if composed in a graveyard on the \'grey stone beds\' of loss. Excellent and then some. My sincere condolences on the passing of your father.

Fond regards,

Tony.

October 6th, 2026 09:36

Heart of Stone
Thomas W Case said:

There’s a damn desolate grief here, where the strange image of wood refusing to burn makes the whole world feel wrong, as though even the rules of reality have collapsed along with everything the speaker knew. The ending is the keeper for me, because the strong pulse against the silence of everyone being gone leaves the speaker trapped inside a living body with nobody left to hear it. Excellent work, sweet Teddy.

October 6th, 2026 08:03

Heart of Stone
sorenbarrett said:

Grief cries from stone statues in this poem Teddy. A sad write and hope you are doing okay.

October 6th, 2026 03:40

Heart of Stone
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

Good write, enjoyed

October 6th, 2026 03:37

Squeezing the Lemons into Lemonade
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Teddy, I needed this reminder today. We may not get much say in what comes flying at us, but we do get some say in what happens next. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

October 5th, 2026 12:46

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