Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Imagining the Impossible
sorenbarrett said:
To true to laugh at. This is a wonderful write wrapping up a whole book into a paragraph. Wonderful and very clever
February 16th, 2025 14:08
sorenbarrett said:
To true to laugh at. This is a wonderful write wrapping up a whole book into a paragraph. Wonderful and very clever
February 16th, 2025 14:08
Shrink Satire
Cassie58 said:
That is what you call sod’s law from where I came from Teddy. So much here to pick apart. There are many people making a huge load of dosh at the expense of the misery of others. Solicitors are currently my number one yuk but there are so many others like the pharmaceutical industry. This is both a clever and amusing write. Happy Sunday. Time to stop visiting shrinks 😂🌹💜
February 16th, 2025 11:15
Cassie58 said:
That is what you call sod’s law from where I came from Teddy. So much here to pick apart. There are many people making a huge load of dosh at the expense of the misery of others. Solicitors are currently my number one yuk but there are so many others like the pharmaceutical industry. This is both a clever and amusing write. Happy Sunday. Time to stop visiting shrinks 😂🌹💜
February 16th, 2025 11:15
Shrink Satire
Goldfinch60 said:
You get the same idea with solicitors bills Teddy. LOL
Andy
February 16th, 2025 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
You get the same idea with solicitors bills Teddy. LOL
Andy
February 16th, 2025 02:52
Shrink Satire
MendedFences27 said:
I think they\'re called \" shrinks \" because of how a paycheck shrinks when you use their services. Your poem captures the futility of trying to mend a damaged mind. \" He presented his bill \"( est. 130 days X $100.00 = $ 13,000 ). No wonder! You drive home a very good point, i.e. the cost of medical and psych services. How could he drag it on for that amount of time and accomplish nothing? A very poignant poem on a subject very relevant to today. - Phil A.
February 15th, 2025 19:45
MendedFences27 said:
I think they\'re called \" shrinks \" because of how a paycheck shrinks when you use their services. Your poem captures the futility of trying to mend a damaged mind. \" He presented his bill \"( est. 130 days X $100.00 = $ 13,000 ). No wonder! You drive home a very good point, i.e. the cost of medical and psych services. How could he drag it on for that amount of time and accomplish nothing? A very poignant poem on a subject very relevant to today. - Phil A.
February 15th, 2025 19:45
Shrink Satire
Thomas W Case said:
You have a great sense of humor, dear Teddy. lol.
February 15th, 2025 18:27
Thomas W Case said:
You have a great sense of humor, dear Teddy. lol.
February 15th, 2025 18:27
Shrink Satire
arqios said:
A well crafted image of the advantage taken over someone else’s misery… a billion dollar industry nonetheless built on lived and ongoing misery
February 15th, 2025 18:23
arqios said:
A well crafted image of the advantage taken over someone else’s misery… a billion dollar industry nonetheless built on lived and ongoing misery
February 15th, 2025 18:23
Shrink Satire
sorenbarrett said:
Maybe that is an indication for the hypocritical oath. All health care workers know that job security lies in maintaining illness. A fun read.
February 15th, 2025 13:23
sorenbarrett said:
Maybe that is an indication for the hypocritical oath. All health care workers know that job security lies in maintaining illness. A fun read.
February 15th, 2025 13:23
Can Saints really Fly?
arqios said:
Uncontainable, untameable, unframable… love it is…
February 14th, 2025 07:51
arqios said:
Uncontainable, untameable, unframable… love it is…
February 14th, 2025 07:51
Can Saints really Fly?
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy this I feel is one of if not your greatest write. It reads almost Shakespearian and rings with a sense of immortality in wording and in meaning. There is timeless wisdom here. On occasion I feel jealous of a poem that someone else has written and this is one such time.
February 14th, 2025 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy this I feel is one of if not your greatest write. It reads almost Shakespearian and rings with a sense of immortality in wording and in meaning. There is timeless wisdom here. On occasion I feel jealous of a poem that someone else has written and this is one such time.
February 14th, 2025 04:39
Can Saints really Fly?
Cassie58 said:
Happy Valentine’s Day Teddy. Beautiful poetry as usual, in your own unique style.
Your words a reminder:
Communication is key, and when you don’t have that, things start to fall apart. And of course it is the things you don’t say that you should have, that will be remembered most. And a heart that is shy, suffers most. And love up in the air is the pits. That is how your poem spoke to me this morning.
I hope you have something special planned for today, as we do. And have a grand weekend. ❤️🌹
February 14th, 2025 03:22
Cassie58 said:
Happy Valentine’s Day Teddy. Beautiful poetry as usual, in your own unique style.
Your words a reminder:
Communication is key, and when you don’t have that, things start to fall apart. And of course it is the things you don’t say that you should have, that will be remembered most. And a heart that is shy, suffers most. And love up in the air is the pits. That is how your poem spoke to me this morning.
I hope you have something special planned for today, as we do. And have a grand weekend. ❤️🌹
February 14th, 2025 03:22
Can Saints really Fly?
Goldfinch60 said:
But pure love comes to us Teddy as it has to me.
Andy
February 14th, 2025 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
But pure love comes to us Teddy as it has to me.
Andy
February 14th, 2025 02:52
Wild Horses
Caring dove said:
‘ il wrap him in a bow ‘
Lovely line
Nice poem teddy , liked it ))
February 13th, 2025 02:30
Caring dove said:
‘ il wrap him in a bow ‘
Lovely line
Nice poem teddy , liked it ))
February 13th, 2025 02:30
As Famous As Can Be
sorenbarrett said:
Nor would you want to be dead, briliance bled, unwritten poems that would go unread
Your demise would deprive future reader\'s eyes of many an unsung prize
Better to be alive than to take that dive so that your poems might bloom and thrive
Poems that are new always ring true and beside all this, I would miss you
A great poem of yours and a fun challenge as well
February 12th, 2025 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
Nor would you want to be dead, briliance bled, unwritten poems that would go unread
Your demise would deprive future reader\'s eyes of many an unsung prize
Better to be alive than to take that dive so that your poems might bloom and thrive
Poems that are new always ring true and beside all this, I would miss you
A great poem of yours and a fun challenge as well
February 12th, 2025 06:48
As Famous As Can Be
arqios said:
Beautiful words for a beautiful soul 🙏🏻🕊 R.I.P.
February 12th, 2025 05:48
arqios said:
Beautiful words for a beautiful soul 🙏🏻🕊 R.I.P.
February 12th, 2025 05:48
As Famous As Can Be
Distant View said:
Fame must be a double-edged sword! Never to have a moment\'s peace when out and about! People expecting you to give autographs all the time etc. I actually feel sorry for those who become very famous at a young age (many pop stars), and then fade from the scene whilst still quite young. No, I couldn\'t handle fame! Just as well, because I\'ll never be famous lol!
February 12th, 2025 05:45
Distant View said:
Fame must be a double-edged sword! Never to have a moment\'s peace when out and about! People expecting you to give autographs all the time etc. I actually feel sorry for those who become very famous at a young age (many pop stars), and then fade from the scene whilst still quite young. No, I couldn\'t handle fame! Just as well, because I\'ll never be famous lol!
February 12th, 2025 05:45
A Very Special Hummingbird
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy about a great poet.
Andy
February 12th, 2025 03:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy about a great poet.
Andy
February 12th, 2025 03:24
A Very Special Hummingbird
Caring dove said:
Interested and well written poem , teddy )) yeah , I know she was ‘ depressed ‘
February 12th, 2025 01:56
Caring dove said:
Interested and well written poem , teddy )) yeah , I know she was ‘ depressed ‘
February 12th, 2025 01:56
A Very Special Hummingbird
aDarkerMind said:
Sylvia Plath....
a woman whose poetry I have loved and lived with for many a year.
and now, Teddy has wrritten a poem I am sure she would hold true to her heart,
as I will hold to mine.
close your eyes and listen to the applause....
very much deserved x
February 11th, 2025 11:15
aDarkerMind said:
Sylvia Plath....
a woman whose poetry I have loved and lived with for many a year.
and now, Teddy has wrritten a poem I am sure she would hold true to her heart,
as I will hold to mine.
close your eyes and listen to the applause....
very much deserved x
February 11th, 2025 11:15
A Very Special Hummingbird
Cassie58 said:
She was special Teddy. A huge talent. She had problems with her mental health that were exasperated by the crow she married. An excellent poet himself, but a lousy husband. She didn’t get the love she deserved, became unbalanced and had a tragic ending leaving behind two young children. She leaves a decent legacy , but it could have been so much more without Ted. You have portrayed her here sympathetically. She had a streak of genius in her. Great work yourself. I am a fan of you both.
February 11th, 2025 09:59
Cassie58 said:
She was special Teddy. A huge talent. She had problems with her mental health that were exasperated by the crow she married. An excellent poet himself, but a lousy husband. She didn’t get the love she deserved, became unbalanced and had a tragic ending leaving behind two young children. She leaves a decent legacy , but it could have been so much more without Ted. You have portrayed her here sympathetically. She had a streak of genius in her. Great work yourself. I am a fan of you both.
February 11th, 2025 09:59
A Very Special Hummingbird
arqios said:
An excellent angle on Sylvia. Enjoyed this thoroughly 🙏🏻🕊️
February 11th, 2025 05:22
arqios said:
An excellent angle on Sylvia. Enjoyed this thoroughly 🙏🏻🕊️
February 11th, 2025 05:22
A Very Special Hummingbird
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful tribute to another poet so well worded made me wonder her having chosen a crow and knowing you also have picked a crow or rather raven. Similarities here? And it ends as it begins with the closing of the eyes. Well done Teddy
February 11th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful tribute to another poet so well worded made me wonder her having chosen a crow and knowing you also have picked a crow or rather raven. Similarities here? And it ends as it begins with the closing of the eyes. Well done Teddy
February 11th, 2025 04:23
A Very Special Hummingbird
Distant View said:
Sylvia Plath was a tormented, but hugely talented poet and author. I visited her grave in Heptonstall several years ago (I live 17 miles from there). You paint a warm and compassionate picture with words here, Teddy! Sylvia certainly deserves to be remembered, and to be read!
February 11th, 2025 04:22
Distant View said:
Sylvia Plath was a tormented, but hugely talented poet and author. I visited her grave in Heptonstall several years ago (I live 17 miles from there). You paint a warm and compassionate picture with words here, Teddy! Sylvia certainly deserves to be remembered, and to be read!
February 11th, 2025 04:22
From The Underside of Our Great Love
Cassie58 said:
Tender words of love for a much adored darling. Beautiful poetry Teddy. A message not to mourn, but to live. A touching write. 🌹💜
February 10th, 2025 12:47
Cassie58 said:
Tender words of love for a much adored darling. Beautiful poetry Teddy. A message not to mourn, but to live. A touching write. 🌹💜
February 10th, 2025 12:47
From The Underside of Our Great Love
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful and sad, sweet Teddy.
February 10th, 2025 09:30
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful and sad, sweet Teddy.
February 10th, 2025 09:30
When The Sky Falls Down
27Jes said:
That certainly brought Chicken Licken home, many years since I shared it with my daughters and it certainly unnerved the youngest, then the Grandchildren felt the effects. As young people today tune into the bigger louder world they often seem to wonder will the sky fall in.
I never thought it would, my parents offered me so much, but I still went my way and I thought I led my own children, but they took there own route, all I know is we can trust, love and learn through our family cohesion.
February 10th, 2025 08:11
27Jes said:
That certainly brought Chicken Licken home, many years since I shared it with my daughters and it certainly unnerved the youngest, then the Grandchildren felt the effects. As young people today tune into the bigger louder world they often seem to wonder will the sky fall in.
I never thought it would, my parents offered me so much, but I still went my way and I thought I led my own children, but they took there own route, all I know is we can trust, love and learn through our family cohesion.
February 10th, 2025 08:11
From The Underside of Our Great Love
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful love lorn words Teddy but not yet eh? We have a meeting to arrange.
Andy
February 10th, 2025 03:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful love lorn words Teddy but not yet eh? We have a meeting to arrange.
Andy
February 10th, 2025 03:17
From The Underside of Our Great Love
arqios said:
Nothing like love to bring about anyone’s true colours! 🙏🏻🕊
February 10th, 2025 02:59
arqios said:
Nothing like love to bring about anyone’s true colours! 🙏🏻🕊
February 10th, 2025 02:59
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