Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Devil Plays the Fiddle
sorenbarrett said:
This brought images of my eldest daughter. She has done well in life but divulged to me lately that her greatest regret is that she didn\'t pursue ballet. She was built for it in size and shape and was told over and over by those in ballet that she had all it took.Loved the poem and its twist of the devil. Sometikes one must sell their soul to be great.
September 15th, 2024 12:53
sorenbarrett said:
This brought images of my eldest daughter. She has done well in life but divulged to me lately that her greatest regret is that she didn\'t pursue ballet. She was built for it in size and shape and was told over and over by those in ballet that she had all it took.Loved the poem and its twist of the devil. Sometikes one must sell their soul to be great.
September 15th, 2024 12:53
Devil Plays the Fiddle
Cassie58 said:
Such a contrast here dear Teddy, between the beautiful, delicate ballerina and that devil playing fiddle. Your lines evoked strong emotions here. A delight reading one of your older poems. I love the variety in your writing. You have such wonderful creativity of thinking. Hope you are having wonderful sunshine, as we are today. 🌹
September 15th, 2024 11:18
Cassie58 said:
Such a contrast here dear Teddy, between the beautiful, delicate ballerina and that devil playing fiddle. Your lines evoked strong emotions here. A delight reading one of your older poems. I love the variety in your writing. You have such wonderful creativity of thinking. Hope you are having wonderful sunshine, as we are today. 🌹
September 15th, 2024 11:18
Devil Plays the Fiddle
aDarkerMind said:
and share this fine write you must Teddy.
another one to savour and live with for a while.
beautifully written.
September 15th, 2024 06:39
aDarkerMind said:
and share this fine write you must Teddy.
another one to savour and live with for a while.
beautifully written.
September 15th, 2024 06:39
Devil Plays the Fiddle
Doggerel Dave said:
The devil would be in her feet and diet denial - the pain and torture involved in the production of such beauty...
First hand experience, Teddy?
September 15th, 2024 05:51
Doggerel Dave said:
The devil would be in her feet and diet denial - the pain and torture involved in the production of such beauty...
First hand experience, Teddy?
September 15th, 2024 05:51
Hold On Tight
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep holding on Teddy as I have all my long life, the thoughts in your heart and mind just keep strengthening you.
Andy
September 15th, 2024 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep holding on Teddy as I have all my long life, the thoughts in your heart and mind just keep strengthening you.
Andy
September 15th, 2024 01:19
Hold On Tight
Dan Williams said:
Highs and lows, agreed, but going so quickly from \"a little bumpier\" to
\"crushed or worse , dead\" seems a little harsh. But then life can be just like that I guess.
September 15th, 2024 00:26
Dan Williams said:
Highs and lows, agreed, but going so quickly from \"a little bumpier\" to
\"crushed or worse , dead\" seems a little harsh. But then life can be just like that I guess.
September 15th, 2024 00:26
Hold On Tight
Cassie58 said:
So true Teddy. Roller coaster life it is. I never much enjoyed fun fair rides but we have to deal with whatever comes our way. All things eventually pass. Have a glorious weekend dear poet 🌹
September 14th, 2024 12:29
Cassie58 said:
So true Teddy. Roller coaster life it is. I never much enjoyed fun fair rides but we have to deal with whatever comes our way. All things eventually pass. Have a glorious weekend dear poet 🌹
September 14th, 2024 12:29
Hold On Tight
MendedFences27 said:
I\'m never getting on a roller coaster again. Thanks a lot.
No seriously, this is a true description of life. A wonderful poem that reaches to teach of life\'s ups and downs. We all go along for the ride, but there are always those who insist on standing up, or not wearing their seat belt, and choose to go for a second ride. Not this kid. Much enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.
September 14th, 2024 09:30
MendedFences27 said:
I\'m never getting on a roller coaster again. Thanks a lot.
No seriously, this is a true description of life. A wonderful poem that reaches to teach of life\'s ups and downs. We all go along for the ride, but there are always those who insist on standing up, or not wearing their seat belt, and choose to go for a second ride. Not this kid. Much enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.
September 14th, 2024 09:30
Hold On Tight
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Teddy yes we have paid the price to ride so one might as well enjoy it. The ride is over soon enough.
September 14th, 2024 03:39
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Teddy yes we have paid the price to ride so one might as well enjoy it. The ride is over soon enough.
September 14th, 2024 03:39
Karmasutra
Dan Williams said:
Yes, sure, I had to look up Biryani. That, and bending like a pretzel? Wow.
September 14th, 2024 00:29
Dan Williams said:
Yes, sure, I had to look up Biryani. That, and bending like a pretzel? Wow.
September 14th, 2024 00:29
Karmasutra
Ladywithaquill said:
Bend like a Pretzel??? It\'s the most hilarious line ever!
September 13th, 2024 17:00
Ladywithaquill said:
Bend like a Pretzel??? It\'s the most hilarious line ever!
September 13th, 2024 17:00
Karmasutra
MendedFences27 said:
I believe the passion should last a bit longer than a lightning bolt, and pretzels can be fun. I have no idea about Biryani, but if it will stand still long enough, I\'m in. So now my Friday is awakened and I\'m praying for rain.
What a saucy poem. - Phil A.
September 13th, 2024 10:13
MendedFences27 said:
I believe the passion should last a bit longer than a lightning bolt, and pretzels can be fun. I have no idea about Biryani, but if it will stand still long enough, I\'m in. So now my Friday is awakened and I\'m praying for rain.
What a saucy poem. - Phil A.
September 13th, 2024 10:13
Karmasutra
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, I think I’ll have some of what you are eating. Did you know there is an Indian restaurant in Hammersmith called the Karmasutra? Biryani’s are on the menu. This is a hot and spicy fun write for the weekend. Love it. 😂🌹
September 13th, 2024 09:22
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, I think I’ll have some of what you are eating. Did you know there is an Indian restaurant in Hammersmith called the Karmasutra? Biryani’s are on the menu. This is a hot and spicy fun write for the weekend. Love it. 😂🌹
September 13th, 2024 09:22
Karmasutra
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m mercifully ignorant in that I\'m not even sure quite what a pretzel is.....😇!!!🙃
September 13th, 2024 06:00
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m mercifully ignorant in that I\'m not even sure quite what a pretzel is.....😇!!!🙃
September 13th, 2024 06:00
Karmasutra
sorenbarrett said:
Highly sensual Teddy in a very tasteful way. Short but quite sensuous. Loved it
September 13th, 2024 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
Highly sensual Teddy in a very tasteful way. Short but quite sensuous. Loved it
September 13th, 2024 04:57
Dreamers Quilt
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Teddy, Nature has a way of curing many troubles.
Andy
September 13th, 2024 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Teddy, Nature has a way of curing many troubles.
Andy
September 13th, 2024 01:52
Dreamers Quilt
Cheeky Missy said:
Were it merely a photo, it\'d be lovely, however, knowing tis Italy itself and taken by you, to boot, I cannot get my fill. Mum said rain was allus good for sleeping and ah, how you illustrate this charmingly to effect with an exquisite and irresistible sense of gaity. Superb. Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 12th, 2024 19:27
Cheeky Missy said:
Were it merely a photo, it\'d be lovely, however, knowing tis Italy itself and taken by you, to boot, I cannot get my fill. Mum said rain was allus good for sleeping and ah, how you illustrate this charmingly to effect with an exquisite and irresistible sense of gaity. Superb. Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 12th, 2024 19:27
Dreamers Quilt
Cassie58 said:
We have a sky light in our bedroom Teddy, so I know exactly what you mean here. That pitter patter certainly aids sleep. I like the thought that rainfall can cleanse all the bad dreams. A beautifully calming and visual poem. Have a happy Thursday. 🌹
September 12th, 2024 10:06
Cassie58 said:
We have a sky light in our bedroom Teddy, so I know exactly what you mean here. That pitter patter certainly aids sleep. I like the thought that rainfall can cleanse all the bad dreams. A beautifully calming and visual poem. Have a happy Thursday. 🌹
September 12th, 2024 10:06
Dreamers Quilt
Accidental Poet said:
As the rain pitter-patters on your skylight and you drift off in sleep, may your dreams of happiness flourish in the fields of love. 😉
September 12th, 2024 06:24
Accidental Poet said:
As the rain pitter-patters on your skylight and you drift off in sleep, may your dreams of happiness flourish in the fields of love. 😉
September 12th, 2024 06:24
Dreamers Quilt
sorenbarrett said:
The sound of falling rain on the roof is the best and induces slumberalmost instantaniously. Peaceful and calm are the feelings I get from this poem.
September 12th, 2024 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
The sound of falling rain on the roof is the best and induces slumberalmost instantaniously. Peaceful and calm are the feelings I get from this poem.
September 12th, 2024 05:29
When Everything Glows but Me
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that light is there in your life Teddy, I will give you a match to light that candle:
Andy
September 12th, 2024 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that light is there in your life Teddy, I will give you a match to light that candle:
Andy
September 12th, 2024 01:50
When Everything Glows but Me
Accidental Poet said:
The light you seek is within your own heart Teddy. Healing is never easy and fast. We heal in the knowing that those that have gone will always be remembered in our hearts. It\'s their light we see that heals us. 🌹
September 11th, 2024 21:46
Accidental Poet said:
The light you seek is within your own heart Teddy. Healing is never easy and fast. We heal in the knowing that those that have gone will always be remembered in our hearts. It\'s their light we see that heals us. 🌹
September 11th, 2024 21:46
When Everything Glows but Me
sorenbarrett said:
To find anything in the dark is difficult. If you are lucky enough to step on it or trip over it you may but otherwise you need light,. I hope you crack that shell and find the light.
September 11th, 2024 18:59
sorenbarrett said:
To find anything in the dark is difficult. If you are lucky enough to step on it or trip over it you may but otherwise you need light,. I hope you crack that shell and find the light.
September 11th, 2024 18:59
It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, abbaabbacdcdcd lost their way as rhymed couplets took the crown in a gorgeous piece I can\'t but LOVE. My, my, you took 3 years with blood and sweat? Aww, it\'s easier than that, by far.
It\'d definitely be a different creature if it wasn\'t this beauty. Treat the ideas like a horse whose reins you yield up while you flow with him wherever he wants to run, only guiding him gently here and there.
That aside, oh! But the passion so vibrantly thrilling through this like to bleed itself on the page is poignantly alive as the rhymed couplets chase the living thought down the page to its happy conclusion. Delightfully infused and detailed, I love it. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 15:15
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, abbaabbacdcdcd lost their way as rhymed couplets took the crown in a gorgeous piece I can\'t but LOVE. My, my, you took 3 years with blood and sweat? Aww, it\'s easier than that, by far.
It\'d definitely be a different creature if it wasn\'t this beauty. Treat the ideas like a horse whose reins you yield up while you flow with him wherever he wants to run, only guiding him gently here and there.
That aside, oh! But the passion so vibrantly thrilling through this like to bleed itself on the page is poignantly alive as the rhymed couplets chase the living thought down the page to its happy conclusion. Delightfully infused and detailed, I love it. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 15:15
When Everything Glows but Me
Cassie58 said:
Lost in yourself dear Teddy. In the depths of soul searching. When you get that far down, the only way is up. Keep searching for the light. Beautiful poetry dear poet. 🌹
September 11th, 2024 14:48
Cassie58 said:
Lost in yourself dear Teddy. In the depths of soul searching. When you get that far down, the only way is up. Keep searching for the light. Beautiful poetry dear poet. 🌹
September 11th, 2024 14:48
When Everything Glows but Me
Cheeky Missy said:
Stop digging down. If you won\'t brew and sip a heartening cuppa tea, then pull an espresso or brew a cup from your moka pot. It\'s easier than you realize. You will find yourself when you stop looking. Look up. Listen. It\'s all around you.
I love this beautiful tribute to dredging the depths of one\'s soul in search for what is either not there or else remains invisible until the candle splashes light on it. I love the aching poignancy and details. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 14:32
Cheeky Missy said:
Stop digging down. If you won\'t brew and sip a heartening cuppa tea, then pull an espresso or brew a cup from your moka pot. It\'s easier than you realize. You will find yourself when you stop looking. Look up. Listen. It\'s all around you.
I love this beautiful tribute to dredging the depths of one\'s soul in search for what is either not there or else remains invisible until the candle splashes light on it. I love the aching poignancy and details. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 14:32
In Silence and Disbelief
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy about an horrendous episode in history.
I was working that day in an open plan office with a dozen of us in there. That afternoon our normally busy \'phones did not ring at all.
Andy
September 11th, 2024 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy about an horrendous episode in history.
I was working that day in an open plan office with a dozen of us in there. That afternoon our normally busy \'phones did not ring at all.
Andy
September 11th, 2024 01:28
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