Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Ice-Slide
sorenbarrett said:
Made me giggle myself. I have never seen a penguin giggle but can imagin it and the rest all fits in. Great Haiku Teddy
October 24th, 2024 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
Made me giggle myself. I have never seen a penguin giggle but can imagin it and the rest all fits in. Great Haiku Teddy
October 24th, 2024 05:29
Poet
Goldfinch60 said:
e must all keep the faith in what we write Teddy,
Andy
October 24th, 2024 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
e must all keep the faith in what we write Teddy,
Andy
October 24th, 2024 01:11
Poet
NafisaSB said:
i agree with you - the poets and poems will live for eternity
October 23rd, 2024 23:57
NafisaSB said:
i agree with you - the poets and poems will live for eternity
October 23rd, 2024 23:57
Poet
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful Senryu,
thoughts and message too! 💯
Brilliantly composed
and ever so true!! ⭐⭐⭐
Thanks for sharing poetess!
Best wishes 🍀🤗🌹. Thad
October 23rd, 2024 15:59
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful Senryu,
thoughts and message too! 💯
Brilliantly composed
and ever so true!! ⭐⭐⭐
Thanks for sharing poetess!
Best wishes 🍀🤗🌹. Thad
October 23rd, 2024 15:59
Poet
arqios said:
I also believe this to be the main truth about poems and poetry! Good stuff. 👍🏻
October 23rd, 2024 05:40
arqios said:
I also believe this to be the main truth about poems and poetry! Good stuff. 👍🏻
October 23rd, 2024 05:40
Poet
sorenbarrett said:
You have outdone yourself on this one my friend. Written so neatly these two Senryu went unnoticed as such until I read your note. Highly uncommon to be able to read so fluently from one line to the next you did this in both cases. Furthermore the last incorporates a metaphor is poetic, is philosophical and gramatic a definate favorite. Lovely
October 23rd, 2024 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
You have outdone yourself on this one my friend. Written so neatly these two Senryu went unnoticed as such until I read your note. Highly uncommon to be able to read so fluently from one line to the next you did this in both cases. Furthermore the last incorporates a metaphor is poetic, is philosophical and gramatic a definate favorite. Lovely
October 23rd, 2024 05:08
Will I Ever Awaken?
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a sad dream Teddy but at least it was a dream and not reality like it is for so many in our world.
Andy
October 23rd, 2024 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a sad dream Teddy but at least it was a dream and not reality like it is for so many in our world.
Andy
October 23rd, 2024 01:18
Will I Ever Awaken?
Dan Williams said:
So much hurt over something so unnecessary. Well Done.
October 22nd, 2024 23:08
Dan Williams said:
So much hurt over something so unnecessary. Well Done.
October 22nd, 2024 23:08
Will I Ever Awaken?
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. Scary stuff Teddy. I hope you start having beautiful dreams.
October 22nd, 2024 14:50
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. Scary stuff Teddy. I hope you start having beautiful dreams.
October 22nd, 2024 14:50
Will I Ever Awaken?
aDarkerMind said:
about sums it up Teddy...
sitting behind locked doors!
as good as always my friend;
October 22nd, 2024 09:28
aDarkerMind said:
about sums it up Teddy...
sitting behind locked doors!
as good as always my friend;
October 22nd, 2024 09:28
Will I Ever Awaken?
sorenbarrett said:
So many focus on the terrors of war on the battle field yet so little focus on the terror in the heart of those behind who don\'t know the fate of their loved ones at war. This poem speaks to not only this of mothers and wives left behind The horrors of the mind far worse than the battlefield. So well put in so few words
October 22nd, 2024 05:46
sorenbarrett said:
So many focus on the terrors of war on the battle field yet so little focus on the terror in the heart of those behind who don\'t know the fate of their loved ones at war. This poem speaks to not only this of mothers and wives left behind The horrors of the mind far worse than the battlefield. So well put in so few words
October 22nd, 2024 05:46
Where Does The Love Go?
Thad Wilk said:
A very evocative poem,
thought provoking thank you!! 🤔
When that love dies,
so does a part of you too. 😢
Articulately penned poetess!!🍪
Thank you for sharing!! 😊
Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 Thad
October 21st, 2024 15:01
Thad Wilk said:
A very evocative poem,
thought provoking thank you!! 🤔
When that love dies,
so does a part of you too. 😢
Articulately penned poetess!!🍪
Thank you for sharing!! 😊
Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 Thad
October 21st, 2024 15:01
A Different Time, A Different Path
Caring dove said:
Sometimes certain things jn life are just meant to be … and maybe sometimes we know which way is best . nice writing , teddy ))
October 21st, 2024 07:31
Caring dove said:
Sometimes certain things jn life are just meant to be … and maybe sometimes we know which way is best . nice writing , teddy ))
October 21st, 2024 07:31
A Different Time, A Different Path
sorenbarrett said:
A taste of Frost on an autum morning. To learn form experience is the essence of life and growth and to value oneself is the cornerstone of valuing others. Lovely
October 21st, 2024 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
A taste of Frost on an autum morning. To learn form experience is the essence of life and growth and to value oneself is the cornerstone of valuing others. Lovely
October 21st, 2024 06:26
\"Boo\"
Thad Wilk said:
BOO!! 👻👿👻
A wonderfully cute
and refreshing write!! ✍️
Exhilarating awesomeness
and to read a frightful delight ! 👺
Thanks for sharing poetess!! 🎃
Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 Thad
October 20th, 2024 13:47
Thad Wilk said:
BOO!! 👻👿👻
A wonderfully cute
and refreshing write!! ✍️
Exhilarating awesomeness
and to read a frightful delight ! 👺
Thanks for sharing poetess!! 🎃
Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 Thad
October 20th, 2024 13:47
\"Boo\"
sorenbarrett said:
It is that season and I tove the playfulness in this piece. If only all relationships contained such a sense of playfulness life would be much easier. A fun read with underlying meaning.
October 20th, 2024 06:12
sorenbarrett said:
It is that season and I tove the playfulness in this piece. If only all relationships contained such a sense of playfulness life would be much easier. A fun read with underlying meaning.
October 20th, 2024 06:12
Where Does The Love Go?
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Teddy but in my case when my wife Joyce died in time I found love again with Mary. Love can be so wonderful.
Andy
October 19th, 2024 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Teddy but in my case when my wife Joyce died in time I found love again with Mary. Love can be so wonderful.
Andy
October 19th, 2024 01:50
Where Does The Love Go?
sorenbarrett said:
Darkness comes and memory fades but like an old tattoo still remains. Phantom pain is felt by amputees and when a love dies there is phantom pain for what was once there. You look and no arm, no love, but still the pain is there. A wonderful write Teddy
October 18th, 2024 15:15
sorenbarrett said:
Darkness comes and memory fades but like an old tattoo still remains. Phantom pain is felt by amputees and when a love dies there is phantom pain for what was once there. You look and no arm, no love, but still the pain is there. A wonderful write Teddy
October 18th, 2024 15:15
Born to be Cool
Goldfinch60 said:
I agree with what soren said, I am now seventy plus six years.
Andy
October 18th, 2024 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
I agree with what soren said, I am now seventy plus six years.
Andy
October 18th, 2024 01:22
Born to be Cool
Accidental Poet said:
Pink flowers don\'t shine nearly as beautiful as you. 🌹😉 Happy 50th,
October 17th, 2024 17:36
Accidental Poet said:
Pink flowers don\'t shine nearly as beautiful as you. 🌹😉 Happy 50th,
October 17th, 2024 17:36
Born to be Cool
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read and true. When you hit seventy you don\'t care about picures anymore.
October 17th, 2024 13:46
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read and true. When you hit seventy you don\'t care about picures anymore.
October 17th, 2024 13:46
Soul Dance
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful and passionate. What a glorious image, sweet Teddy.
October 17th, 2024 11:22
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful and passionate. What a glorious image, sweet Teddy.
October 17th, 2024 11:22
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