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sorenbarrett said:
What a dream. When the muse not only is dead but if the book is blank then has never existed. It would be like a novelist waking up to find he had never written anything, or a composer to awaken finding he had never composed anything. I have had certain poems lost by a slip of a key before and that is bad enough. No wonder that the color is red. Very nicely written Teddy
February 21st, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
What a dream. When the muse not only is dead but if the book is blank then has never existed. It would be like a novelist waking up to find he had never written anything, or a composer to awaken finding he had never composed anything. I have had certain poems lost by a slip of a key before and that is bad enough. No wonder that the color is red. Very nicely written Teddy
February 21st, 2025 04:51
The Moon Appears and She is Blue
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Teddy, that moon sees all the horror that is in our world but is also lights up life\'s glory as well.
Andy
February 21st, 2025 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Teddy, that moon sees all the horror that is in our world but is also lights up life\'s glory as well.
Andy
February 21st, 2025 02:11
The Moon Appears and She is Blue
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful and sad. Tremendous writing, sweet Teddy. I felt this to my core.
February 20th, 2025 14:27
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful and sad. Tremendous writing, sweet Teddy. I felt this to my core.
February 20th, 2025 14:27
The Moon Appears and She is Blue
Cassie58 said:
The moon sees everything and has every reason to be blue. Every reason to shed tears of silver hue. Dear Teddy, I travelled to far off places, to lands I do not know and felt profound sadness and much mourning. 💜🌹
February 20th, 2025 07:16
Cassie58 said:
The moon sees everything and has every reason to be blue. Every reason to shed tears of silver hue. Dear Teddy, I travelled to far off places, to lands I do not know and felt profound sadness and much mourning. 💜🌹
February 20th, 2025 07:16
The Moon Appears and She is Blue
sorenbarrett said:
The poem sounds so romantic and wistful and the last line gives a feel of things that are out of reach now for a moment being within reach then the author note shatters all that and my mind goes reeling off into space and a darker image takes the place of romance and I see darkness wrapped in bows and colored wrapping paper with corpses inside. Where have you taken my mind Teddy. Then I read this again and I see where this has come from the black and grey the last poem, the goodbye, explosion of the universe, and of course the moon is blue, I too sad and such a vision. But where had my mind been before? Caught in past images of your poems always bright light hearted, romantic and at most angry this seems to be another side of you and I was caught in my past image. You took me off guard. See how previous prejudices can affect one\'s reading of a poem
February 20th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
The poem sounds so romantic and wistful and the last line gives a feel of things that are out of reach now for a moment being within reach then the author note shatters all that and my mind goes reeling off into space and a darker image takes the place of romance and I see darkness wrapped in bows and colored wrapping paper with corpses inside. Where have you taken my mind Teddy. Then I read this again and I see where this has come from the black and grey the last poem, the goodbye, explosion of the universe, and of course the moon is blue, I too sad and such a vision. But where had my mind been before? Caught in past images of your poems always bright light hearted, romantic and at most angry this seems to be another side of you and I was caught in my past image. You took me off guard. See how previous prejudices can affect one\'s reading of a poem
February 20th, 2025 04:42
The Moon Appears and She is Blue
arqios said:
A super nova poem that is quite rightly mourned by the moon 🌙🙏🏻🕊
February 20th, 2025 03:40
arqios said:
A super nova poem that is quite rightly mourned by the moon 🌙🙏🏻🕊
February 20th, 2025 03:40
Not Just Lightning
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love forever fall on us all Teddy.
Andy
February 20th, 2025 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love forever fall on us all Teddy.
Andy
February 20th, 2025 02:11
Not Just Lightning
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, I slowed your words right down and saw the imagery in spectacular slow motion. What an incredibly beautiful sight that was too. There’s a whole lot of sparkling love in this poem. Your posted image together with your poetry are inspirational. Gorgeous imagery. 💜🌹
February 19th, 2025 08:09
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, I slowed your words right down and saw the imagery in spectacular slow motion. What an incredibly beautiful sight that was too. There’s a whole lot of sparkling love in this poem. Your posted image together with your poetry are inspirational. Gorgeous imagery. 💜🌹
February 19th, 2025 08:09
Not Just Lightning
arqios said:
Like diamonds in the sky… whose beauty is in the sharing thereof 🙏🏻🕊
February 19th, 2025 05:40
arqios said:
Like diamonds in the sky… whose beauty is in the sharing thereof 🙏🏻🕊
February 19th, 2025 05:40
Not Just Lightning
sorenbarrett said:
Celestial fireworks. I love the introduction of words like diamond a symbol of fidelity and marriage, light as truth, black the absence of all light but the unity of all color as a dichotomy of loneliness and unity, meteor symbol of transformation and cosmic connection. You have woven them together to end in a thread of love. Very nice Teddy
February 19th, 2025 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
Celestial fireworks. I love the introduction of words like diamond a symbol of fidelity and marriage, light as truth, black the absence of all light but the unity of all color as a dichotomy of loneliness and unity, meteor symbol of transformation and cosmic connection. You have woven them together to end in a thread of love. Very nice Teddy
February 19th, 2025 05:02
I Am Metaphor
Cassie58 said:
Some beautiful lines here dear Teddy in this metaphor poem. Fabulous imagery and I enjoyed all your references to the natural environment.
I am the soft snow
floating down
in silence
That one is my favourite. Hope you have had a wonderful Tuesday.
🌹💜
February 18th, 2025 16:34
Cassie58 said:
Some beautiful lines here dear Teddy in this metaphor poem. Fabulous imagery and I enjoyed all your references to the natural environment.
I am the soft snow
floating down
in silence
That one is my favourite. Hope you have had a wonderful Tuesday.
🌹💜
February 18th, 2025 16:34
I Am Metaphor
MendedFences27 said:
As they asked Zuckerman, \" What is META for? \" Sorry just had to get rid of that one.
Your poem is a delight of metaphors, mainly of thigs in Nature, ocean, river, waterfall, wind, snow, rain. You are a poet of the Earth. Your poem is a joy to read and brightens my day. Loved it. - Phil A.
February 18th, 2025 12:27
MendedFences27 said:
As they asked Zuckerman, \" What is META for? \" Sorry just had to get rid of that one.
Your poem is a delight of metaphors, mainly of thigs in Nature, ocean, river, waterfall, wind, snow, rain. You are a poet of the Earth. Your poem is a joy to read and brightens my day. Loved it. - Phil A.
February 18th, 2025 12:27
I Am Metaphor
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. You are a metaphor for love and beauty and sweetness. Superb work, dear Teddy.
February 18th, 2025 11:28
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. You are a metaphor for love and beauty and sweetness. Superb work, dear Teddy.
February 18th, 2025 11:28
I Am Metaphor
aDarkerMind said:
I\'m the flow of the waterfall....
and the flow of poetry that keeps my heart beating.
another gem from my close friend teddy x
February 18th, 2025 10:36
aDarkerMind said:
I\'m the flow of the waterfall....
and the flow of poetry that keeps my heart beating.
another gem from my close friend teddy x
February 18th, 2025 10:36
Unjust
whats write for me said:
Alzheimer\'s and dementia is alarming and it is so difficult to watch our loved one\'s suffer through it, while we suffer watching it happen. My mother and my wife\'s father both suffered this fate and all we could do is watch as the stong people that they were wasted away.
February 18th, 2025 09:15
whats write for me said:
Alzheimer\'s and dementia is alarming and it is so difficult to watch our loved one\'s suffer through it, while we suffer watching it happen. My mother and my wife\'s father both suffered this fate and all we could do is watch as the stong people that they were wasted away.
February 18th, 2025 09:15
I Am Metaphor
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor but also true we are all things some closer in space than others but all related. Where does one item end and another begin? Things that seem so clear are blurred as we examine more closely or distance ourselves. A most beautiful and philosophical poem what are our relationships, where do they begin and where do they end? Brilliant!!
February 18th, 2025 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor but also true we are all things some closer in space than others but all related. Where does one item end and another begin? Things that seem so clear are blurred as we examine more closely or distance ourselves. A most beautiful and philosophical poem what are our relationships, where do they begin and where do they end? Brilliant!!
February 18th, 2025 05:16
I Am Metaphor
arqios said:
Lovely images relating Metaphor, which is very liquid/fluid. Good stuff🙏🏻🕊
February 18th, 2025 04:09
arqios said:
Lovely images relating Metaphor, which is very liquid/fluid. Good stuff🙏🏻🕊
February 18th, 2025 04:09
Such A Beautiful Place
Goldfinch60 said:
The sounds and vistas within our minds are limitless Teddy.
Andy
February 18th, 2025 02:59
Goldfinch60 said:
The sounds and vistas within our minds are limitless Teddy.
Andy
February 18th, 2025 02:59
Such A Beautiful Place
MendedFences27 said:
Think only of the butterflies. Let the darkness be a black one. Keep the sunshine and music playing inside your heart.
A beautiful poem.- Phil A.
February 17th, 2025 20:19
MendedFences27 said:
Think only of the butterflies. Let the darkness be a black one. Keep the sunshine and music playing inside your heart.
A beautiful poem.- Phil A.
February 17th, 2025 20:19
Such A Beautiful Place
arqios said:
Prismatic and even kaleidoscopic reflection! Reshuffles the mind like resetting a Boggle game board 🙏🏻🕊
February 17th, 2025 18:41
arqios said:
Prismatic and even kaleidoscopic reflection! Reshuffles the mind like resetting a Boggle game board 🙏🏻🕊
February 17th, 2025 18:41
Such A Beautiful Place
sorenbarrett said:
Vision and hearing our two primary senses equate well. I know people who on drugs have heard color and seen color in music. This blend of the spectrum of colors and in sound from tranquility to chaos makes for a rich pallet and portrays life well. What makes this poem is the last line filled with the color black. it represents so many things as well from nothingness, to death, from evil, to formality and is seen as the sound of silence. This too may be anything from peace to finality and infinity. Black in pigments being the mixture of all colors and in light the absence of all. Not only a great write but a wonderful metaphor with endless possibilities.
February 17th, 2025 16:39
sorenbarrett said:
Vision and hearing our two primary senses equate well. I know people who on drugs have heard color and seen color in music. This blend of the spectrum of colors and in sound from tranquility to chaos makes for a rich pallet and portrays life well. What makes this poem is the last line filled with the color black. it represents so many things as well from nothingness, to death, from evil, to formality and is seen as the sound of silence. This too may be anything from peace to finality and infinity. Black in pigments being the mixture of all colors and in light the absence of all. Not only a great write but a wonderful metaphor with endless possibilities.
February 17th, 2025 16:39
Such A Beautiful Place
Cassie58 said:
The mind, beautiful corridors of possibilities that span the delights of nature and can transport you to heaven right down to a trip in the vaults of hell. Certainly a poem of reflection but can also project the reader forward. So much colour here, butterflies, I adore. You brought me sound too dear Teddy. Love your posted image. It compliments your words so very well and imagery here to remember. Perfectly lovely.
February 17th, 2025 15:25
Cassie58 said:
The mind, beautiful corridors of possibilities that span the delights of nature and can transport you to heaven right down to a trip in the vaults of hell. Certainly a poem of reflection but can also project the reader forward. So much colour here, butterflies, I adore. You brought me sound too dear Teddy. Love your posted image. It compliments your words so very well and imagery here to remember. Perfectly lovely.
February 17th, 2025 15:25
Imagining the Impossible
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy. Thanks for the smile. Perfect love dear poet. What’s that? Yes, certainly need to use the imagination here and stretch it too lol. We can all dream and hope just for a few niggles rather than carnage 😂. You have done well here with your brevity. Hope you have had a happy Monday. 🌹
February 17th, 2025 14:33
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy. Thanks for the smile. Perfect love dear poet. What’s that? Yes, certainly need to use the imagination here and stretch it too lol. We can all dream and hope just for a few niggles rather than carnage 😂. You have done well here with your brevity. Hope you have had a happy Monday. 🌹
February 17th, 2025 14:33
Imagining the Impossible
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Teddy and I have found it.
Andy
February 17th, 2025 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Teddy and I have found it.
Andy
February 17th, 2025 02:24
Imagining the Impossible
sorenbarrett said:
To true to laugh at. This is a wonderful write wrapping up a whole book into a paragraph. Wonderful and very clever
February 16th, 2025 14:08
sorenbarrett said:
To true to laugh at. This is a wonderful write wrapping up a whole book into a paragraph. Wonderful and very clever
February 16th, 2025 14:08
Shrink Satire
Cassie58 said:
That is what you call sod’s law from where I came from Teddy. So much here to pick apart. There are many people making a huge load of dosh at the expense of the misery of others. Solicitors are currently my number one yuk but there are so many others like the pharmaceutical industry. This is both a clever and amusing write. Happy Sunday. Time to stop visiting shrinks 😂🌹💜
February 16th, 2025 11:15
Cassie58 said:
That is what you call sod’s law from where I came from Teddy. So much here to pick apart. There are many people making a huge load of dosh at the expense of the misery of others. Solicitors are currently my number one yuk but there are so many others like the pharmaceutical industry. This is both a clever and amusing write. Happy Sunday. Time to stop visiting shrinks 😂🌹💜
February 16th, 2025 11:15
Shrink Satire
Goldfinch60 said:
You get the same idea with solicitors bills Teddy. LOL
Andy
February 16th, 2025 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
You get the same idea with solicitors bills Teddy. LOL
Andy
February 16th, 2025 02:52
Shrink Satire
MendedFences27 said:
I think they\'re called \" shrinks \" because of how a paycheck shrinks when you use their services. Your poem captures the futility of trying to mend a damaged mind. \" He presented his bill \"( est. 130 days X $100.00 = $ 13,000 ). No wonder! You drive home a very good point, i.e. the cost of medical and psych services. How could he drag it on for that amount of time and accomplish nothing? A very poignant poem on a subject very relevant to today. - Phil A.
February 15th, 2025 19:45
MendedFences27 said:
I think they\'re called \" shrinks \" because of how a paycheck shrinks when you use their services. Your poem captures the futility of trying to mend a damaged mind. \" He presented his bill \"( est. 130 days X $100.00 = $ 13,000 ). No wonder! You drive home a very good point, i.e. the cost of medical and psych services. How could he drag it on for that amount of time and accomplish nothing? A very poignant poem on a subject very relevant to today. - Phil A.
February 15th, 2025 19:45
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