Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
When The Sky Falls Down
Thomas W Case said:
Like Chicken Little, Sweet Teddy. lol. Brilliant work.
February 6th, 2025 10:27
Thomas W Case said:
Like Chicken Little, Sweet Teddy. lol. Brilliant work.
February 6th, 2025 10:27
Home
Goldfinch60 said:
But Spring always returns Teddy and is due very soon.
Andy
February 6th, 2025 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
But Spring always returns Teddy and is due very soon.
Andy
February 6th, 2025 02:48
Home
Cassie58 said:
I shall never again see another spring
Dear Teddy your winter imagery and description in this gorgeous poem is exquisite. I detected an air of melancholy.
Eventually, we will all return home. Your posted image is a fine match for your words. Been back here twice today to read this wonderful poem. Much kudos dear poet. ๐น๐๐น๐
February 5th, 2025 16:48
Cassie58 said:
I shall never again see another spring
Dear Teddy your winter imagery and description in this gorgeous poem is exquisite. I detected an air of melancholy.
Eventually, we will all return home. Your posted image is a fine match for your words. Been back here twice today to read this wonderful poem. Much kudos dear poet. ๐น๐๐น๐
February 5th, 2025 16:48
Home
arqios said:
Each season has their pros and cons, their beauty and their dark side. Your poem points to that quite beautifully.๐๐ป๐
February 5th, 2025 07:01
arqios said:
Each season has their pros and cons, their beauty and their dark side. Your poem points to that quite beautifully.๐๐ป๐
February 5th, 2025 07:01
Home
sorenbarrett said:
In the seasons of life we are all annuals. Lovely wording in this poem makes it feel classical in nature and gives it a sense of seriousness and weight wisdom. Yet the ending lines lift the burdon of finality and open the door to a return to familiarity. Brilliant!
February 5th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
In the seasons of life we are all annuals. Lovely wording in this poem makes it feel classical in nature and gives it a sense of seriousness and weight wisdom. Yet the ending lines lift the burdon of finality and open the door to a return to familiarity. Brilliant!
February 5th, 2025 04:28
Unjust
Cassie58 said:
So poignant dear Teddy. I am so sorry that one of your dearest friends has this terrible disease. It is hard for loved ones to witness the decline. Going through this with my aunt at the moment. Your authorโs note is heart breaking as is your senryu. Your friendโs sight being affected makes the whole situation more distressing for her. So sorry. ๐๐น๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ
February 4th, 2025 07:34
Cassie58 said:
So poignant dear Teddy. I am so sorry that one of your dearest friends has this terrible disease. It is hard for loved ones to witness the decline. Going through this with my aunt at the moment. Your authorโs note is heart breaking as is your senryu. Your friendโs sight being affected makes the whole situation more distressing for her. So sorry. ๐๐น๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ
February 4th, 2025 07:34
Unjust
Goldfinch60 said:
I know all about dementia Teddy, my wife had it and died from it five years ago. I would not wish it on anybody. I say to people that if you have not lived 24/7 with somebody who has it you have no ******* idea what it is like. When Joyce passed it was a release for both of us.
Andy
February 4th, 2025 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
I know all about dementia Teddy, my wife had it and died from it five years ago. I would not wish it on anybody. I say to people that if you have not lived 24/7 with somebody who has it you have no ******* idea what it is like. When Joyce passed it was a release for both of us.
Andy
February 4th, 2025 02:48
Unjust
Accidental Poet said:
As I myself have witnessed this happen to both my deceased adoptive parents and now my sister, I understand this hurt and pain of watching someone experience this awful disease. I wish only the best for you and your friend Teddy. ๐น๐ซ
February 3rd, 2025 12:35
Accidental Poet said:
As I myself have witnessed this happen to both my deceased adoptive parents and now my sister, I understand this hurt and pain of watching someone experience this awful disease. I wish only the best for you and your friend Teddy. ๐น๐ซ
February 3rd, 2025 12:35
Unjust
Thoughtless said:
How sad and true. I can relate. It does seem unjust, but unfortunately life is not fair. Your senryu encapsulates how a loved one disappears before passing.
February 3rd, 2025 12:04
Thoughtless said:
How sad and true. I can relate. It does seem unjust, but unfortunately life is not fair. Your senryu encapsulates how a loved one disappears before passing.
February 3rd, 2025 12:04
Unjust
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. This is heartbreaking. You write this with love and empathy, sweet Teddy.
February 3rd, 2025 10:50
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. This is heartbreaking. You write this with love and empathy, sweet Teddy.
February 3rd, 2025 10:50
Unjust
arqios said:
Close to my heart, lost several family due to dementia way before they died. Thank you for scribing this ๐๐ป๐
February 3rd, 2025 06:40
arqios said:
Close to my heart, lost several family due to dementia way before they died. Thank you for scribing this ๐๐ป๐
February 3rd, 2025 06:40
Unjust
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and touching all that we are is our memories and to loose them is to loose ourselves. My grandfather went blind in his later years and said that it was the worst loss not being able to read his paper or books that he adored. A poignant write my friend
February 3rd, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and touching all that we are is our memories and to loose them is to loose ourselves. My grandfather went blind in his later years and said that it was the worst loss not being able to read his paper or books that he adored. A poignant write my friend
February 3rd, 2025 03:54
Poetic Quotes
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, I am late responding, but read this post earlier today and now again. I wanted to come back and give your quotes the attention they deserve. So many wonderful ones to contemplate. I am going to print this out for further reference. Your strength, compassion, sense of fun and your positivity shine through. You have lived and learned and not only that you are a wife, a mother and a great poet. So pleased to have you as a friend as well. Kudos. ๐น๐๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ
February 2nd, 2025 14:54
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, I am late responding, but read this post earlier today and now again. I wanted to come back and give your quotes the attention they deserve. So many wonderful ones to contemplate. I am going to print this out for further reference. Your strength, compassion, sense of fun and your positivity shine through. You have lived and learned and not only that you are a wife, a mother and a great poet. So pleased to have you as a friend as well. Kudos. ๐น๐๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ
February 2nd, 2025 14:54
Poetic Quotes
Goldfinch60 said:
Good phrases Teddy.
\"Life isn\'t about waiting for the storm to pass; it\'s about learning to dance in the rain\"
Andy
February 2nd, 2025 02:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Good phrases Teddy.
\"Life isn\'t about waiting for the storm to pass; it\'s about learning to dance in the rain\"
Andy
February 2nd, 2025 02:57
Poetic Quotes
sorenbarrett said:
There is a lot to think about in this but the underlying theme seems to be believe in yourself and be yourself ignoring what others say but sensitive to who they are. Lovely Teddy a lot of good lines and wisdom in this write
February 1st, 2025 14:12
sorenbarrett said:
There is a lot to think about in this but the underlying theme seems to be believe in yourself and be yourself ignoring what others say but sensitive to who they are. Lovely Teddy a lot of good lines and wisdom in this write
February 1st, 2025 14:12
Contentment
Cassie58 said:
I smiled Teddy. I would say those who truly love me never understand me. If you have a few, you are doing better than me ๐๐น๐
February 1st, 2025 08:36
Cassie58 said:
I smiled Teddy. I would say those who truly love me never understand me. If you have a few, you are doing better than me ๐๐น๐
February 1st, 2025 08:36
A Fish Called Wonder
Cassie58 said:
A very caring write dear Teddy. Poor goldfish, well looked after yet so alone in a bowl. We have an aquarium with lots of fish. No lonely ones there. This is of course a strong metaphor here. I would say people need people and fish need fish:) Have very happy Saturday dear Teddy. ๐น๐
February 1st, 2025 08:28
Cassie58 said:
A very caring write dear Teddy. Poor goldfish, well looked after yet so alone in a bowl. We have an aquarium with lots of fish. No lonely ones there. This is of course a strong metaphor here. I would say people need people and fish need fish:) Have very happy Saturday dear Teddy. ๐น๐
February 1st, 2025 08:28
Contentment
sorenbarrett said:
Every piece is true I\'m sure. Nicely written Teddy
January 31st, 2025 16:53
sorenbarrett said:
Every piece is true I\'m sure. Nicely written Teddy
January 31st, 2025 16:53
A Fish Called Wonder
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy, we all need that somebody who we can talk to in our lives whether they can talk back or not.
Andy
https://youtu.be/nn8YubD01sk?si=ur5aSyrGJFvj7g8C
January 31st, 2025 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy, we all need that somebody who we can talk to in our lives whether they can talk back or not.
Andy
https://youtu.be/nn8YubD01sk?si=ur5aSyrGJFvj7g8C
January 31st, 2025 02:22
A Fish Called Wonder
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous thoughts and emtion. I love it, sweet Teddy.
January 30th, 2025 19:30
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous thoughts and emtion. I love it, sweet Teddy.
January 30th, 2025 19:30
A Fish Called Wonder
Accidental Poet said:
A friend is not defined by the species, but by the emotions transpired between two. ๐น๐
January 30th, 2025 10:21
Accidental Poet said:
A friend is not defined by the species, but by the emotions transpired between two. ๐น๐
January 30th, 2025 10:21
A Fish Called Wonder
sorenbarrett said:
And if people were goldfish? I know this is a literal story but I can\'t help but see a metaphor here as well. We all wonder these thoughts about those we care for. Will they miss us, will someone else care for them? How can you care for anything and not wonder what will happen to it when you are gone? Very nicely written my friend.
January 30th, 2025 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
And if people were goldfish? I know this is a literal story but I can\'t help but see a metaphor here as well. We all wonder these thoughts about those we care for. Will they miss us, will someone else care for them? How can you care for anything and not wonder what will happen to it when you are gone? Very nicely written my friend.
January 30th, 2025 04:36
A Fish Called Wonder
arqios said:
At first the title reminded me of a Jamie Lee Curtis/Kevin Kline/John Cleese film. But this poem actually plucks at the heartstrings, having had a litany of fish pets over the years. ๐๐ป๐๐๐ป๐
January 30th, 2025 03:55
arqios said:
At first the title reminded me of a Jamie Lee Curtis/Kevin Kline/John Cleese film. But this poem actually plucks at the heartstrings, having had a litany of fish pets over the years. ๐๐ป๐๐๐ป๐
January 30th, 2025 03:55
A Fish Called Wonder
Caring dove said:
Caring for a fish . Nice writing teddy .. ) we have cats that come in our house every day and itโs like they think itโs their home .. one of them has become very comfortable here
January 30th, 2025 03:40
Caring dove said:
Caring for a fish . Nice writing teddy .. ) we have cats that come in our house every day and itโs like they think itโs their home .. one of them has become very comfortable here
January 30th, 2025 03:40
An Ode to the Dreamer (Senryu)
NafisaSB said:
such a beautiful and awesome message
yes, we should all dare
January 29th, 2025 07:30
NafisaSB said:
such a beautiful and awesome message
yes, we should all dare
January 29th, 2025 07:30
The Burns in Me
Cassie58 said:
Well worth the celebrating Teddy. Went to a Burns night once. They piped the haggis in and we toasted it with whiskey. Fabulous evening and I know you would have loved the bagpipes. ๐น๐
January 27th, 2025 13:54
Cassie58 said:
Well worth the celebrating Teddy. Went to a Burns night once. They piped the haggis in and we toasted it with whiskey. Fabulous evening and I know you would have loved the bagpipes. ๐น๐
January 27th, 2025 13:54
The Eternal Miracle of a Poet
Cassie58 said:
Superb poetry dearest Teddy. Finely written and much admired. ๐น๐
January 27th, 2025 13:46
Cassie58 said:
Superb poetry dearest Teddy. Finely written and much admired. ๐น๐
January 27th, 2025 13:46
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