Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Not of Dark but Light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That moment of offering him tea struck me, Teddy…intimate and strangely comforting. Poe may have given us a raven of shadow, unique to him, but yours shines differently…light-bearing, much like the way my own “raven” speaks uniquely in my work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Poe blessed us, didn’t he? He left us with, as the Demon Hunter song goes, more than bones. And so do we, fellow poet, leave more than bones behind to light the way for others. Beautiful work! 💜
August 30th, 2025 09:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That moment of offering him tea struck me, Teddy…intimate and strangely comforting. Poe may have given us a raven of shadow, unique to him, but yours shines differently…light-bearing, much like the way my own “raven” speaks uniquely in my work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Poe blessed us, didn’t he? He left us with, as the Demon Hunter song goes, more than bones. And so do we, fellow poet, leave more than bones behind to light the way for others. Beautiful work! 💜
August 30th, 2025 09:16
Not of Dark but Light
sorenbarrett said:
In this world of yin and yang blackness becomes light and ignorance become knowledge. Finding something comes from loosing something. A lovely write Teddy
August 30th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
In this world of yin and yang blackness becomes light and ignorance become knowledge. Finding something comes from loosing something. A lovely write Teddy
August 30th, 2025 04:09
Rose
arqios said:
Too short, can\'t begin to count the number of roses we\'ve enjoyed and lost to time!
August 29th, 2025 19:12
arqios said:
Too short, can\'t begin to count the number of roses we\'ve enjoyed and lost to time!
August 29th, 2025 19:12
Rose
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully done, Teddy. You’ve captured the fragility and grace of life itself in just a breath of verse…and wow, synchronicity between you and Soren today. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 29th, 2025 17:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully done, Teddy. You’ve captured the fragility and grace of life itself in just a breath of verse…and wow, synchronicity between you and Soren today. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 29th, 2025 17:54
Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write Teddy and I guess you and I were on the same pathway today both writing about roses. Well don my friend
August 29th, 2025 14:07
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write Teddy and I guess you and I were on the same pathway today both writing about roses. Well don my friend
August 29th, 2025 14:07
A Beautiful Life
sorenbarrett said:
Many messages in this my friend and it seems to me that the one that comes through the strongest to me is to be confident in oneself and in such be comfortable with oneself then no on can cause you fear. Nicely said Teddy
August 28th, 2025 14:52
sorenbarrett said:
Many messages in this my friend and it seems to me that the one that comes through the strongest to me is to be confident in oneself and in such be comfortable with oneself then no on can cause you fear. Nicely said Teddy
August 28th, 2025 14:52
Colours of the Great Oak
Goldfinch60 said:
Autumn is my favorite time of the year Teddy, Natures artwork becomes spectacular.
Andy
August 28th, 2025 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Autumn is my favorite time of the year Teddy, Natures artwork becomes spectacular.
Andy
August 28th, 2025 01:09
Colours of the Great Oak
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this reads with such warmth…like sitting in that very glow you describe. The transition feels tender rather than mournful, a gift of presence in every shade. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Glad to read this while sitting atop Little Round Top in Gettysburg, PA. Only about a 3 hr drive from where I live.The location has naught to do with your poem, but that I read it here. Your poems travel…see, my dear friend? Wonderful job!
August 27th, 2025 14:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this reads with such warmth…like sitting in that very glow you describe. The transition feels tender rather than mournful, a gift of presence in every shade. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Glad to read this while sitting atop Little Round Top in Gettysburg, PA. Only about a 3 hr drive from where I live.The location has naught to do with your poem, but that I read it here. Your poems travel…see, my dear friend? Wonderful job!
August 27th, 2025 14:07
Colours of the Great Oak
sorenbarrett said:
Reflecting on ones age and the fruits that have come from it be they leaves or seeds they all add color to what life has been. A most lovely write
August 27th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Reflecting on ones age and the fruits that have come from it be they leaves or seeds they all add color to what life has been. A most lovely write
August 27th, 2025 04:46
The Day I Found Me
NafisaSB said:
yes indeed you are - and may you sail contentedly on the lake of life till you reach the horizon where blessings await you
August 26th, 2025 23:51
NafisaSB said:
yes indeed you are - and may you sail contentedly on the lake of life till you reach the horizon where blessings await you
August 26th, 2025 23:51
A Hole Lot Of Light
Goldfinch60 said:
Light is always there for you Teddy.
Andy
August 25th, 2025 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Light is always there for you Teddy.
Andy
August 25th, 2025 01:20
A Hole Lot Of Light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, I loved this. The wordplay in the title makes the whole poem sing—sometimes even the holes we fall into blaze with light. That’s life, isn’t it? 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ So very well done, dear poet and friend!
August 24th, 2025 18:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, I loved this. The wordplay in the title makes the whole poem sing—sometimes even the holes we fall into blaze with light. That’s life, isn’t it? 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ So very well done, dear poet and friend!
August 24th, 2025 18:27
A Hole Lot Of Light
Jerry Reynolds said:
Fun write, Teddy. With a lot of truth hidden.
August 24th, 2025 08:08
Jerry Reynolds said:
Fun write, Teddy. With a lot of truth hidden.
August 24th, 2025 08:08
A Hole Lot Of Light
sorenbarrett said:
Love the word play in the title my friend in fact I like it a hole lot. I was picturing the hole in the hole to be a whole lot bigger to let light in. A most fun read Teddy that also is psychological and philosophical if one digs deep enough into that hole.
August 24th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
Love the word play in the title my friend in fact I like it a hole lot. I was picturing the hole in the hole to be a whole lot bigger to let light in. A most fun read Teddy that also is psychological and philosophical if one digs deep enough into that hole.
August 24th, 2025 04:57
Before It\'s Too Late
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Teddy, life is so dangerous for the young nowadays being led to places they should never go. Very understanding words.
Andy
August 24th, 2025 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Teddy, life is so dangerous for the young nowadays being led to places they should never go. Very understanding words.
Andy
August 24th, 2025 01:18
Before It\'s Too Late
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this, I felt the weight of what we’re up against. Like you, I remember simpler influences…now it’s profit machines shaping our children. You’ve spoken truth that needs to be heard, dear Teddy. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A must fave!
August 23rd, 2025 16:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this, I felt the weight of what we’re up against. Like you, I remember simpler influences…now it’s profit machines shaping our children. You’ve spoken truth that needs to be heard, dear Teddy. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A must fave!
August 23rd, 2025 16:39
Before It\'s Too Late
sorenbarrett said:
When a child rules were so strong that they were never said. My parents gave us total freedom to roam and return when we wished. As a teen I departed for several days into the mountains with a friend and nothing was said for they knew that I would keep the rules that were silently there. There was mutual trust on both ends. They didn\'t fear for my safety because they knew that I wouldn\'t do anything stupid even though I hitchhiked and rode boxcars they trusted me and I kept the rules. Times are different now. Good write
August 23rd, 2025 07:02
sorenbarrett said:
When a child rules were so strong that they were never said. My parents gave us total freedom to roam and return when we wished. As a teen I departed for several days into the mountains with a friend and nothing was said for they knew that I would keep the rules that were silently there. There was mutual trust on both ends. They didn\'t fear for my safety because they knew that I wouldn\'t do anything stupid even though I hitchhiked and rode boxcars they trusted me and I kept the rules. Times are different now. Good write
August 23rd, 2025 07:02
Before It\'s Too Late
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Teddy. When going back and going forward are both bad choices. You have to make a stand. Great reminder, Teddy.
August 23rd, 2025 06:39
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Teddy. When going back and going forward are both bad choices. You have to make a stand. Great reminder, Teddy.
August 23rd, 2025 06:39
The Day I Found Me
Goldfinch60 said:
I am a buzzard Teddy sailing in the sky.
Andy
August 23rd, 2025 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
I am a buzzard Teddy sailing in the sky.
Andy
August 23rd, 2025 01:21
The Day I Found Me
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great write, Teddy. A touchstone poem.
August 22nd, 2025 08:15
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great write, Teddy. A touchstone poem.
August 22nd, 2025 08:15
The Day I Found Me
arqios said:
Brings me back to my most favourite early childhood story, \"the ugly duckling.\" So resonant!
August 22nd, 2025 06:53
arqios said:
Brings me back to my most favourite early childhood story, \"the ugly duckling.\" So resonant!
August 22nd, 2025 06:53
The Day I Found Me
sorenbarrett said:
Deeper meaning lies in these few lines where knowing what you are is more important than how you got there. Just the being and knowing is sufficient. Lovely Teddy
August 22nd, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
Deeper meaning lies in these few lines where knowing what you are is more important than how you got there. Just the being and knowing is sufficient. Lovely Teddy
August 22nd, 2025 04:38
Taste Buds
Goldfinch60 said:
In my life I seem to have many happy endings nowadays Teddy as Mary is always there.
Andy
August 22nd, 2025 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
In my life I seem to have many happy endings nowadays Teddy as Mary is always there.
Andy
August 22nd, 2025 01:50
Taste Buds
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth. Poetic, poised, philosophical. A truly wonderful poem, my friend! As a certain Danish dude from nineteenth century Copenhagen once said, \"Subjectivity is truth.\") That was his Kierkegaardian way of saying, #TrueStory 🤣 Or something like that. 🙃
Seriously, though, what a wonderful poem that expresses the truth in brief, but powerful, truth. Well done, dearest poet and friend! 🌹💜
August 21st, 2025 13:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth. Poetic, poised, philosophical. A truly wonderful poem, my friend! As a certain Danish dude from nineteenth century Copenhagen once said, \"Subjectivity is truth.\") That was his Kierkegaardian way of saying, #TrueStory 🤣 Or something like that. 🙃
Seriously, though, what a wonderful poem that expresses the truth in brief, but powerful, truth. Well done, dearest poet and friend! 🌹💜
August 21st, 2025 13:16
Taste Buds
sorenbarrett said:
To each their own Teddy. Nicely stated. Not all fairytales end the way I would have written them.
August 21st, 2025 10:57
sorenbarrett said:
To each their own Teddy. Nicely stated. Not all fairytales end the way I would have written them.
August 21st, 2025 10:57
When Boredom is truly underrated
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope you didn\'t wake up the other people watching Teddy. LOL
Andy
August 21st, 2025 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope you didn\'t wake up the other people watching Teddy. LOL
Andy
August 21st, 2025 01:25
Raven Came He Came a\'Tapping
NafisaSB said:
so glad to know your muse is alive and kicking - and so inspirational. lovely verse - enjoyed reading it
August 20th, 2025 23:37
NafisaSB said:
so glad to know your muse is alive and kicking - and so inspirational. lovely verse - enjoyed reading it
August 20th, 2025 23:37
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