Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
A Sweet Thought on Grief
Syd said:
You\'ve hit the nail on the head here Shirley. A great description of what grief is.
- Syd 🍄
October 12th, 2026 12:25
Syd said:
You\'ve hit the nail on the head here Shirley. A great description of what grief is.
- Syd 🍄
October 12th, 2026 12:25
The Aftermath
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, Teddy, this is heartbreaking. I\'ve seen what severe storms (internal and external weather) can do, and it never gets easier witnessing that kind of destruction. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 11th, 2026 23:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, Teddy, this is heartbreaking. I\'ve seen what severe storms (internal and external weather) can do, and it never gets easier witnessing that kind of destruction. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 11th, 2026 23:21
The Aftermath
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Teddy,
A storm itself can be horrifying but the aftermath can be so saddening to the point of tears. I could never conquer the haiku, what you have done in thirteen words would take me about eight stanzas and many months to describe. So, hats off to you - a perfect haiku.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 11th, 2026 15:33
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Teddy,
A storm itself can be horrifying but the aftermath can be so saddening to the point of tears. I could never conquer the haiku, what you have done in thirteen words would take me about eight stanzas and many months to describe. So, hats off to you - a perfect haiku.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 11th, 2026 15:33
The Aftermath
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful haiku Teddy and with meaning.
October 11th, 2026 07:50
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful haiku Teddy and with meaning.
October 11th, 2026 07:50
A Marvelous Mistake
Goldfinch60 said:
Life can be like that Teddy but in my life I have always been content with sharing it with the one I love.
Andy
October 11th, 2026 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Life can be like that Teddy but in my life I have always been content with sharing it with the one I love.
Andy
October 11th, 2026 01:11
A Marvelous Mistake
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, I’ve felt alone in a room full of people…so I don’t automatically expect solitude to feel worse. Sometimes I’d welcome the breathing room. Great write, my dearest friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 10th, 2026 22:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, I’ve felt alone in a room full of people…so I don’t automatically expect solitude to feel worse. Sometimes I’d welcome the breathing room. Great write, my dearest friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 10th, 2026 22:27
A Marvelous Mistake
Paul Bell said:
Some people just need partners.
Some need to be apart.
Some prefer animals to humans.
Some have broken hearts.
Freedom is doing what you please
The girl next door says so, and she\'s a tease.
October 10th, 2026 13:15
Paul Bell said:
Some people just need partners.
Some need to be apart.
Some prefer animals to humans.
Some have broken hearts.
Freedom is doing what you please
The girl next door says so, and she\'s a tease.
October 10th, 2026 13:15
A Marvelous Mistake
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Teddy,
A very interesting poem on freedom, a word often used buy never really understood. I suppose to be free from someone, something, some ordeal, event or worry, but to be totally free, I think is impossible, as in that old adage, free as a bird, well, birds are far from free, in constant search for food, fear of predators, raising young and so on. Sleep perhaps is freedom unbound, it\'s just a pity we are not consciousely there to enjoy it. lol. Well done, my friend.
Wishing you as much freedom as possible,
Tony.
October 10th, 2026 09:25
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Teddy,
A very interesting poem on freedom, a word often used buy never really understood. I suppose to be free from someone, something, some ordeal, event or worry, but to be totally free, I think is impossible, as in that old adage, free as a bird, well, birds are far from free, in constant search for food, fear of predators, raising young and so on. Sleep perhaps is freedom unbound, it\'s just a pity we are not consciousely there to enjoy it. lol. Well done, my friend.
Wishing you as much freedom as possible,
Tony.
October 10th, 2026 09:25
A Marvelous Mistake
sorenbarrett said:
Psychological and existential questions that no one wants the answers to posed in this poem. And why do they not want the answers, because they would lead to an admission no one wants to make and choices too damn hard. Soaked in a technological world of ease we are accustomed to entitlement, where criticism is our vent for minor frustrations that we have no answer for. Nicely done Teddy
October 10th, 2026 08:38
sorenbarrett said:
Psychological and existential questions that no one wants the answers to posed in this poem. And why do they not want the answers, because they would lead to an admission no one wants to make and choices too damn hard. Soaked in a technological world of ease we are accustomed to entitlement, where criticism is our vent for minor frustrations that we have no answer for. Nicely done Teddy
October 10th, 2026 08:38
Drunk on Happiness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, now that\'s the sort of intoxication I can get behind! 😂 And the best part? No hangover the following morning! Wishing you plenty more days that leave you grinning like that, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 9th, 2026 09:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, now that\'s the sort of intoxication I can get behind! 😂 And the best part? No hangover the following morning! Wishing you plenty more days that leave you grinning like that, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 9th, 2026 09:55
Drunk on Happiness
Syd said:
What a wonderful read for a Friday Shirley.
Glad to know you\'re in high spirits.
- Syd 🍄
October 9th, 2026 04:19
Syd said:
What a wonderful read for a Friday Shirley.
Glad to know you\'re in high spirits.
- Syd 🍄
October 9th, 2026 04:19
Drunk on Happiness
Tony Grannell said:
dear, Teddy,
Composed in a whirl of merriment, drunk on happiness. Chin, chin to joy!
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 8th, 2026 14:51
Tony Grannell said:
dear, Teddy,
Composed in a whirl of merriment, drunk on happiness. Chin, chin to joy!
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 8th, 2026 14:51
Drunk on Happiness
Paul Bell said:
This is me when the sun comes out, that big yellow thing Brits have to go abroad for.
October 8th, 2026 10:35
Paul Bell said:
This is me when the sun comes out, that big yellow thing Brits have to go abroad for.
October 8th, 2026 10:35
Drunk on Happiness
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely senryu Teddy it feels warm and satisfied
October 8th, 2026 08:27
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely senryu Teddy it feels warm and satisfied
October 8th, 2026 08:27
Heart of Stone
Tristan Robert Lange said:
😂 Teddy, “could have been”? You’ve got graves, crying angels, ashes, evil, and everybody’s dead. I think you qualify! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 6th, 2026 22:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
😂 Teddy, “could have been”? You’ve got graves, crying angels, ashes, evil, and everybody’s dead. I think you qualify! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 6th, 2026 22:52
Heart of Stone
Paul Bell said:
I know it\'s not, but it does have the halloween effect going on.
Losing your parents is a tough one, leaves a void that can\'t be filled.
Hope you\'re pushing through.
October 6th, 2026 09:48
Paul Bell said:
I know it\'s not, but it does have the halloween effect going on.
Losing your parents is a tough one, leaves a void that can\'t be filled.
Hope you\'re pushing through.
October 6th, 2026 09:48
Heart of Stone
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Teddy,
It\'s the horror of grief that makes this poem so effective, as if composed in a graveyard on the \'grey stone beds\' of loss. Excellent and then some. My sincere condolences on the passing of your father.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 6th, 2026 09:36
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Teddy,
It\'s the horror of grief that makes this poem so effective, as if composed in a graveyard on the \'grey stone beds\' of loss. Excellent and then some. My sincere condolences on the passing of your father.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 6th, 2026 09:36
Heart of Stone
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn desolate grief here, where the strange image of wood refusing to burn makes the whole world feel wrong, as though even the rules of reality have collapsed along with everything the speaker knew. The ending is the keeper for me, because the strong pulse against the silence of everyone being gone leaves the speaker trapped inside a living body with nobody left to hear it. Excellent work, sweet Teddy.
October 6th, 2026 08:03
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn desolate grief here, where the strange image of wood refusing to burn makes the whole world feel wrong, as though even the rules of reality have collapsed along with everything the speaker knew. The ending is the keeper for me, because the strong pulse against the silence of everyone being gone leaves the speaker trapped inside a living body with nobody left to hear it. Excellent work, sweet Teddy.
October 6th, 2026 08:03
Heart of Stone
sorenbarrett said:
Grief cries from stone statues in this poem Teddy. A sad write and hope you are doing okay.
October 6th, 2026 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
Grief cries from stone statues in this poem Teddy. A sad write and hope you are doing okay.
October 6th, 2026 03:40
Squeezing the Lemons into Lemonade
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, I needed this reminder today. We may not get much say in what comes flying at us, but we do get some say in what happens next. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 5th, 2026 12:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, I needed this reminder today. We may not get much say in what comes flying at us, but we do get some say in what happens next. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 5th, 2026 12:46
A Sweet Thought on Grief
NafisaSB said:
This is such sweet sorrow 💅great description 💐
October 5th, 2026 12:42
NafisaSB said:
This is such sweet sorrow 💅great description 💐
October 5th, 2026 12:42
Squeezing the Lemons into Lemonade
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Teddy,
Manoeuvring through life in a lemon grove midst a zillion little yellow suns of citrus fruits, but all lemons are not the same. An unusual poem and the knowledge therein would quench any poet\'s thirst for wisdom. I love the unusual. Excellent!
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 5th, 2026 08:44
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Teddy,
Manoeuvring through life in a lemon grove midst a zillion little yellow suns of citrus fruits, but all lemons are not the same. An unusual poem and the knowledge therein would quench any poet\'s thirst for wisdom. I love the unusual. Excellent!
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 5th, 2026 08:44
Squeezing the Lemons into Lemonade
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good advice friend
October 5th, 2026 06:03
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good advice friend
October 5th, 2026 06:03
Squeezing the Lemons into Lemonade
Paul Bell said:
Yes, crashing into lemons can bring about a grave ending.
Having done a banana split on a date talking apples and oranges, I mentioned to her she had a great pear.
She blew me a raspberry from a six gun resulting in lemon meringue.
October 5th, 2026 04:55
Paul Bell said:
Yes, crashing into lemons can bring about a grave ending.
Having done a banana split on a date talking apples and oranges, I mentioned to her she had a great pear.
She blew me a raspberry from a six gun resulting in lemon meringue.
October 5th, 2026 04:55
Squeezing the Lemons into Lemonade
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said my friend although I love lemons for drink and seafood it must be used justiciously. Well said Teddy
October 5th, 2026 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said my friend although I love lemons for drink and seafood it must be used justiciously. Well said Teddy
October 5th, 2026 04:48
The Butterflies and I
Goldfinch60 said:
Those butterflies will always be with you Teddy.
Andy
October 5th, 2026 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Those butterflies will always be with you Teddy.
Andy
October 5th, 2026 01:02
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