Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
My Tapestry
sorenbarrett said:
I took this a couple of ways but the one I like best is that all life is the same in value and worth. We tend as humans to aggrandize ourselves above all other forms. Here anthropomorphized they are on the same level. I hope that at the end when you return to reality this is not lost. A fun and enjoyable write Teddy
June 6th, 2024 18:48
sorenbarrett said:
I took this a couple of ways but the one I like best is that all life is the same in value and worth. We tend as humans to aggrandize ourselves above all other forms. Here anthropomorphized they are on the same level. I hope that at the end when you return to reality this is not lost. A fun and enjoyable write Teddy
June 6th, 2024 18:48
My Tapestry
Cassie58 said:
Teddy, your words are uplifting and thankful. I enjoyed your journey. And Kew Gardens I know so very well. Have visited many times. So close to where I once lived as a child. My grandparents used to take me there. A lovely nostalgic post for ne. Hope your day has been a good one.
June 6th, 2024 11:28
Cassie58 said:
Teddy, your words are uplifting and thankful. I enjoyed your journey. And Kew Gardens I know so very well. Have visited many times. So close to where I once lived as a child. My grandparents used to take me there. A lovely nostalgic post for ne. Hope your day has been a good one.
June 6th, 2024 11:28
My Tapestry
aDarkerMind said:
how very true Teddy...and how lucky we are.
stunning;
June 6th, 2024 11:02
aDarkerMind said:
how very true Teddy...and how lucky we are.
stunning;
June 6th, 2024 11:02
My Tapestry
Thomas W Case said:
I love the joy and gratitude in this poem sweet Teddy.
June 6th, 2024 07:29
Thomas W Case said:
I love the joy and gratitude in this poem sweet Teddy.
June 6th, 2024 07:29
Sheep in Uniform
Goldfinch60 said:
An extremely raw period in life Teddy and something like that will neer be forgotten in our lives.
Andy
June 6th, 2024 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
An extremely raw period in life Teddy and something like that will neer be forgotten in our lives.
Andy
June 6th, 2024 01:43
Sheep in Uniform
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid and style true to a child writing it portrays a horrendous picture of loss in a world of pain and sadness. A tribute to a time many would wish to forget but none of us should. Nicely done Teddy
June 5th, 2024 17:22
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid and style true to a child writing it portrays a horrendous picture of loss in a world of pain and sadness. A tribute to a time many would wish to forget but none of us should. Nicely done Teddy
June 5th, 2024 17:22
Sheep in Uniform
aDarkerMind said:
as powerful as I have ever read from you Teddy;
a write that shows us how lucky we are.
June 5th, 2024 11:23
aDarkerMind said:
as powerful as I have ever read from you Teddy;
a write that shows us how lucky we are.
June 5th, 2024 11:23
Sheep in Uniform
Accidental Poet said:
Your heart is of gold
Your heart is sincere
She may be gone now
But she knows you are here
Feel her embrace
As she holds you tight
The words she leaves in your heart
Are your guiding light
May she live on in you
Share your smile everyday
For she believes in you
Because you have touched her this way 🌹
June 5th, 2024 07:58
Accidental Poet said:
Your heart is of gold
Your heart is sincere
She may be gone now
But she knows you are here
Feel her embrace
As she holds you tight
The words she leaves in your heart
Are your guiding light
May she live on in you
Share your smile everyday
For she believes in you
Because you have touched her this way 🌹
June 5th, 2024 07:58
Sheep in Uniform
Doggerel Dave said:
Jewish Museum, Berlin – same or similar feelings, although I was inundated with images after the war, as an adolescent which left me with nightmares which took a long time to abate.
Those sheep? Far too many still around, invested in nefarious causes today. (never understood why some women love a man in uniform…?)
This piece , I can see you put your heart and soul into; so while I could make some black humour around this Teddy, I’m not going to, and fully acknowledge the thought and pain you put into it. Take care.
June 5th, 2024 07:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Jewish Museum, Berlin – same or similar feelings, although I was inundated with images after the war, as an adolescent which left me with nightmares which took a long time to abate.
Those sheep? Far too many still around, invested in nefarious causes today. (never understood why some women love a man in uniform…?)
This piece , I can see you put your heart and soul into; so while I could make some black humour around this Teddy, I’m not going to, and fully acknowledge the thought and pain you put into it. Take care.
June 5th, 2024 07:42
Sheep in Uniform
peto said:
I once visited belsen Teddy
So understand these emotions
one of the most personal I\'ve seen from you
Hammer blow of a write
June 5th, 2024 06:31
peto said:
I once visited belsen Teddy
So understand these emotions
one of the most personal I\'ve seen from you
Hammer blow of a write
June 5th, 2024 06:31
Sheep in Uniform
Cassie58 said:
I shudder whenever I think about the Holocaust. Six million lives lost, just because they were Jews. On a memorial site on Facebook, they post photographs of those young people that perished. I can not pass by without leaving a message to remember them by. Every single one. Your poem is a reminder , that we must never forget. History can repeat itself. The human species never learns lessons. I hope Wednesday brings happy for you Teddy. 💐
June 5th, 2024 04:07
Cassie58 said:
I shudder whenever I think about the Holocaust. Six million lives lost, just because they were Jews. On a memorial site on Facebook, they post photographs of those young people that perished. I can not pass by without leaving a message to remember them by. Every single one. Your poem is a reminder , that we must never forget. History can repeat itself. The human species never learns lessons. I hope Wednesday brings happy for you Teddy. 💐
June 5th, 2024 04:07
Stars
Goldfinch60 said:
The stars of love shine down on us all Teddy and may they always bring love and joy to us all.
An dy
June 5th, 2024 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
The stars of love shine down on us all Teddy and may they always bring love and joy to us all.
An dy
June 5th, 2024 01:13
British Politics in a Nutshell
Doggerel Dave said:
A little gem Teddy, shining with truth. Although the shit you chose as subject matter.........
Still much preferable to writing a long poem on daises - which, incidentally, I wish he would start pushing up......🤣
June 4th, 2024 20:15
Doggerel Dave said:
A little gem Teddy, shining with truth. Although the shit you chose as subject matter.........
Still much preferable to writing a long poem on daises - which, incidentally, I wish he would start pushing up......🤣
June 4th, 2024 20:15
British Politics in a Nutshell
aDarkerMind said:
well said Teddy;
a wet summer on it\'s way, some game called feetball on it\'s way, and a general infection!
or is it election?
cant wait.....!
June 4th, 2024 13:21
aDarkerMind said:
well said Teddy;
a wet summer on it\'s way, some game called feetball on it\'s way, and a general infection!
or is it election?
cant wait.....!
June 4th, 2024 13:21
British Politics in a Nutshell
sorenbarrett said:
I abstain from political judgement in that I hold all politicians abhorrent but loved the senyru as a piece of poetry
June 4th, 2024 12:37
sorenbarrett said:
I abstain from political judgement in that I hold all politicians abhorrent but loved the senyru as a piece of poetry
June 4th, 2024 12:37
Stars
sorenbarrett said:
Taken literally there are 7 planets excluding earth and the sun and the moon which could stand for the spheres of wonder but then you speak of constellations of which there are 88 visible from earth so I take this metaphorically. Orion the symbol of transition from life to death while the sauce pan I take to be the big dipper symbolizing the infinite, eternal giving guidance and enlightenment. Great images to \"light my heart\"
\"you’re so far away
yet always in my dreams
when the sun goes to bed
and moon shines her beams\"
takes on new meaning from a soul in darkness guided by Isis light of the night. Finished with a great ending
\"even on nights, that I’m sad and alone
you, my stars in paradise
shine down from beyond.\"
It shows that hope is present in this guiding light. Brilliant!
June 4th, 2024 12:32
sorenbarrett said:
Taken literally there are 7 planets excluding earth and the sun and the moon which could stand for the spheres of wonder but then you speak of constellations of which there are 88 visible from earth so I take this metaphorically. Orion the symbol of transition from life to death while the sauce pan I take to be the big dipper symbolizing the infinite, eternal giving guidance and enlightenment. Great images to \"light my heart\"
\"you’re so far away
yet always in my dreams
when the sun goes to bed
and moon shines her beams\"
takes on new meaning from a soul in darkness guided by Isis light of the night. Finished with a great ending
\"even on nights, that I’m sad and alone
you, my stars in paradise
shine down from beyond.\"
It shows that hope is present in this guiding light. Brilliant!
June 4th, 2024 12:32
British Politics in a Nutshell
Thomas W Case said:
Politics is a refuge for scoundrels. Great work.
June 4th, 2024 09:36
Thomas W Case said:
Politics is a refuge for scoundrels. Great work.
June 4th, 2024 09:36
British Politics in a Nutshell
Cassie58 said:
I have no time for politicians of any kind Teddy. A sad reflection on politics today. They lack integrity. Love the posted image of London. Have a good day. 💐
June 4th, 2024 06:45
Cassie58 said:
I have no time for politicians of any kind Teddy. A sad reflection on politics today. They lack integrity. Love the posted image of London. Have a good day. 💐
June 4th, 2024 06:45
British Politics in a Nutshell
Teddy.15 said:
Maybe they do which is even worse, although I will say there isn\'t much to choose from I guess we have to try to vote for the best of the worst. lol sad but we have to be smart and work with what we have. 💙
June 4th, 2024 02:02
Teddy.15 said:
Maybe they do which is even worse, although I will say there isn\'t much to choose from I guess we have to try to vote for the best of the worst. lol sad but we have to be smart and work with what we have. 💙
June 4th, 2024 02:02
British Politics in a Nutshell
Accidental Poet said:
And here across the pond I know the feeling here as well. Morons in politics. 🙄
June 4th, 2024 01:48
Accidental Poet said:
And here across the pond I know the feeling here as well. Morons in politics. 🙄
June 4th, 2024 01:48
Stars
Cassie58 said:
Nothing like star gazing to connect us to our deepest emotions. An opportunity to lose ourselves in the quiet and kind night. Such beautiful expression dear Teddy. Love your posted image too.
June 3rd, 2024 23:04
Cassie58 said:
Nothing like star gazing to connect us to our deepest emotions. An opportunity to lose ourselves in the quiet and kind night. Such beautiful expression dear Teddy. Love your posted image too.
June 3rd, 2024 23:04
Stars
Doggerel Dave said:
Maybe don\'t come to the antipodes, Teddy - could be dangerous, You would sigh yourself into a million pieces..... or perhaps you would revel in the mystery and glory of it all....
The deep emotional aspect of your piece is not lost on me, by the way....
June 3rd, 2024 05:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Maybe don\'t come to the antipodes, Teddy - could be dangerous, You would sigh yourself into a million pieces..... or perhaps you would revel in the mystery and glory of it all....
The deep emotional aspect of your piece is not lost on me, by the way....
June 3rd, 2024 05:20
The Untimely Death of a Wonderful Soul
Accidental Poet said:
You speak the truth yet again Teddy. Faith in oneself and the light within always prevails. 🌹👍
June 3rd, 2024 03:05
Accidental Poet said:
You speak the truth yet again Teddy. Faith in oneself and the light within always prevails. 🌹👍
June 3rd, 2024 03:05
The Untimely Death of a Wonderful Soul
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Teddy, I often know that Angels are with me as they are with you.
Andy
June 3rd, 2024 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Teddy, I often know that Angels are with me as they are with you.
Andy
June 3rd, 2024 01:42
The Untimely Death of a Wonderful Soul
MendedFences27 said:
A strong voice for the light as opposed to the dark. Your conclusion is spot on.
As for me I\'m with you all the way. Give me hope, life and the light over despair, darkness, and death, anytime. Enjoyed this inspiring poem. - Phil A.
June 2nd, 2024 15:47
MendedFences27 said:
A strong voice for the light as opposed to the dark. Your conclusion is spot on.
As for me I\'m with you all the way. Give me hope, life and the light over despair, darkness, and death, anytime. Enjoyed this inspiring poem. - Phil A.
June 2nd, 2024 15:47
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