Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Squeezing the Lemons into Lemonade
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said my friend although I love lemons for drink and seafood it must be used justiciously. Well said Teddy
October 5th, 2026 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said my friend although I love lemons for drink and seafood it must be used justiciously. Well said Teddy
October 5th, 2026 04:48
The Butterflies and I
Goldfinch60 said:
Those butterflies will always be with you Teddy.
Andy
October 5th, 2026 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Those butterflies will always be with you Teddy.
Andy
October 5th, 2026 01:02
The Butterflies and I
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, Teddy...that last thought hurt. There are so few words here, but there\'s an entire history of love and loss sitting behind them. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 5th, 2026 00:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, Teddy...that last thought hurt. There are so few words here, but there\'s an entire history of love and loss sitting behind them. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 5th, 2026 00:14
The Butterflies and I
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and most lovely. It speaks to me of the metamorphosis of life for which the butterfly is known. Well done Teddy
October 4th, 2026 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and most lovely. It speaks to me of the metamorphosis of life for which the butterfly is known. Well done Teddy
October 4th, 2026 12:57
A Sweet Thought on Grief
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Teddy,
When the tears dry to make way for beautiful memeroies and the new tears of joy - a strange and wonderful experience. A lovely, lovely poem, Teddy,
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
October 4th, 2026 05:12
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Teddy,
When the tears dry to make way for beautiful memeroies and the new tears of joy - a strange and wonderful experience. A lovely, lovely poem, Teddy,
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
October 4th, 2026 05:12
A Sweet Thought on Grief
MendedFences27 said:
This is truly great. It captures the sadness of a love lost and the quiet joy of love\'s remembrance. A wonderful poem. - Phil A.
October 3rd, 2026 12:35
MendedFences27 said:
This is truly great. It captures the sadness of a love lost and the quiet joy of love\'s remembrance. A wonderful poem. - Phil A.
October 3rd, 2026 12:35
A Sweet Thought on Grief
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Teddy, I have been there when Joyce, my wife, died and she is still with me in my heart sharing it with Mary.
Andy
October 3rd, 2026 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Teddy, I have been there when Joyce, my wife, died and she is still with me in my heart sharing it with Mary.
Andy
October 3rd, 2026 01:12
A Sweet Thought on Grief
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, I’ve always thought grief and love are tangled together in ways we never completely unravel. Sometimes the ache itself tells us just how much something mattered. You captured that gently here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 2nd, 2026 11:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, I’ve always thought grief and love are tangled together in ways we never completely unravel. Sometimes the ache itself tells us just how much something mattered. You captured that gently here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 2nd, 2026 11:16
A Sweet Thought on Grief
Paul Bell said:
Beautifully summed up, and no doubt you could add more.
Grief I suppose is the ultimate loss that shuts down life for a time.
It can also get you climbing mountains and running marathons for good causes.
October 2nd, 2026 05:07
Paul Bell said:
Beautifully summed up, and no doubt you could add more.
Grief I suppose is the ultimate loss that shuts down life for a time.
It can also get you climbing mountains and running marathons for good causes.
October 2nd, 2026 05:07
A Sweet Thought on Grief
sorenbarrett said:
What a lovely way of expressing it Teddy this is a fave
October 2nd, 2026 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
What a lovely way of expressing it Teddy this is a fave
October 2nd, 2026 03:58
Lady and the Raven
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Teddy,
A relentless struggle out of the throes of grief, a guilt striven path not easly traveled but with your determination and grit you\'ll breath in happiness again. Your poem is inspiring and fills the heart with hope. Well done indeed.
Wishing you much happiness,
Tony.
October 1st, 2026 15:44
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Teddy,
A relentless struggle out of the throes of grief, a guilt striven path not easly traveled but with your determination and grit you\'ll breath in happiness again. Your poem is inspiring and fills the heart with hope. Well done indeed.
Wishing you much happiness,
Tony.
October 1st, 2026 15:44
Lady and the Raven
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy...this one carries a lot of pain, but also a decision I personally know and respect. Not pretending the grief is gone, just refusing to let it take the rest of you with it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2026 09:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy...this one carries a lot of pain, but also a decision I personally know and respect. Not pretending the grief is gone, just refusing to let it take the rest of you with it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2026 09:47
Autumn\'s Encore
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this made me smile. Autumn really does get one last glorious show before everything goes bare. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2026 09:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this made me smile. Autumn really does get one last glorious show before everything goes bare. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2026 09:01
Lady and the Raven
sorenbarrett said:
This write is both a confession of grief and sadness and a declaration of strength to raise above it. A commitment to go on to the last breath. Nicely written my friend.
October 1st, 2026 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
This write is both a confession of grief and sadness and a declaration of strength to raise above it. A commitment to go on to the last breath. Nicely written my friend.
October 1st, 2026 03:56
Autumn\'s Encore
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Teddy,
A quirk of nature, how dying leaves can be so beautiful with their impressive array of colours and how beautifully you have expressed it. A petite gem.
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 30th, 2026 16:31
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Teddy,
A quirk of nature, how dying leaves can be so beautiful with their impressive array of colours and how beautifully you have expressed it. A petite gem.
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 30th, 2026 16:31
Autumn\'s Encore
sorenbarrett said:
A most seasonal haiku that speaks of the turning of the seasons most appropriate Teddy
September 30th, 2026 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
A most seasonal haiku that speaks of the turning of the seasons most appropriate Teddy
September 30th, 2026 05:21
Autumn\'s Encore
Paul Bell said:
Is it that time of the year when everyones leaves fly into my garden.
Did I upset nature somewhere down the line maybe.
Big bag waiting.
September 30th, 2026 04:48
Paul Bell said:
Is it that time of the year when everyones leaves fly into my garden.
Did I upset nature somewhere down the line maybe.
Big bag waiting.
September 30th, 2026 04:48
Swan Submerged
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Teddy,
The hallucinations associated with intence grief can be maddening to the point of sleepless nights. I sincerely hope you can vanquish the accursed serpent and find some source of normality. Your poetic description is horrifying as it is brilliant.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
September 29th, 2026 16:08
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Teddy,
The hallucinations associated with intence grief can be maddening to the point of sleepless nights. I sincerely hope you can vanquish the accursed serpent and find some source of normality. Your poetic description is horrifying as it is brilliant.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
September 29th, 2026 16:08
Swan Submerged
MendedFences27 said:
Nice write, Teddy. I always think that the way we remember ourselves is as distorted as the way we see ourselves. I try to live with what I have and not worry about yesterday but look forward to tomorrow. You had some great images in this one: \"snakes slithering inside me, I want my elegance, searching.
\'My grandmother always said, \'You ARE as young as you THINK\" Anyways, enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.
September 29th, 2026 15:24
MendedFences27 said:
Nice write, Teddy. I always think that the way we remember ourselves is as distorted as the way we see ourselves. I try to live with what I have and not worry about yesterday but look forward to tomorrow. You had some great images in this one: \"snakes slithering inside me, I want my elegance, searching.
\'My grandmother always said, \'You ARE as young as you THINK\" Anyways, enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.
September 29th, 2026 15:24
Swan Submerged
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, I really felt this one. There’s something frightening about looking for yourself and not recognizing what’s looking back. Wonderfuly write, dearest friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 28th, 2026 07:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, I really felt this one. There’s something frightening about looking for yourself and not recognizing what’s looking back. Wonderfuly write, dearest friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 28th, 2026 07:02
Swan Submerged
sorenbarrett said:
Fear of loss provokes strange images and apprehension spawning serpents of doubt. Nicely written my friend
September 28th, 2026 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
Fear of loss provokes strange images and apprehension spawning serpents of doubt. Nicely written my friend
September 28th, 2026 06:19
An Eternity of Chapters
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this made me smile. A great love story really does take a hell of a lot more than love alone…it takes choosing each other through all the ugly parts too. And that photo? Absolute attitude. You look like you always knew life was going to have to keep up with you. 😂 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 25th, 2026 22:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this made me smile. A great love story really does take a hell of a lot more than love alone…it takes choosing each other through all the ugly parts too. And that photo? Absolute attitude. You look like you always knew life was going to have to keep up with you. 😂 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 25th, 2026 22:26
An Eternity of Chapters
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Teddy,
A love story, like a game of snakes and ladders. Slithering down the back of the snake, \'together\', to climbing up the ladder, \'together\' one rung at a time until you reach the tavern. \"Two gin and tonics please with ice and lemon.\" \"Chin, chin, my love - so good so far!\" Until the next slippery serpent but we\'ll survive as all great lovers do - amen to that.
Wise words from you, Teddy and so true. Lovely to read your poems again.
Wishing you all the very best.
Fond regards,
Tony,
September 25th, 2026 17:39
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Teddy,
A love story, like a game of snakes and ladders. Slithering down the back of the snake, \'together\', to climbing up the ladder, \'together\' one rung at a time until you reach the tavern. \"Two gin and tonics please with ice and lemon.\" \"Chin, chin, my love - so good so far!\" Until the next slippery serpent but we\'ll survive as all great lovers do - amen to that.
Wise words from you, Teddy and so true. Lovely to read your poems again.
Wishing you all the very best.
Fond regards,
Tony,
September 25th, 2026 17:39
An Eternity of Chapters
sorenbarrett said:
The old saying was people can not eat love and it will soon starve on poverty. However I have known many that have nothing but love in this world so I don\'t think true love starves. Nicely done Teddy
September 25th, 2026 16:36
sorenbarrett said:
The old saying was people can not eat love and it will soon starve on poverty. However I have known many that have nothing but love in this world so I don\'t think true love starves. Nicely done Teddy
September 25th, 2026 16:36
A Sign From The Other Side
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful, sweet Teddy. There’s a damn tender grief in this, because the dream gives the speaker something death took away: one more ordinary evening with both parents together, complete with a bottle of Chianti and the simple happiness of serving them dinner. The ending is beautiful because the dream doesn’t erase the loss, it transforms it into peace, letting the speaker believe that somewhere beyond this life, his mother and father have found each other again.
September 20th, 2026 07:21
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful, sweet Teddy. There’s a damn tender grief in this, because the dream gives the speaker something death took away: one more ordinary evening with both parents together, complete with a bottle of Chianti and the simple happiness of serving them dinner. The ending is beautiful because the dream doesn’t erase the loss, it transforms it into peace, letting the speaker believe that somewhere beyond this life, his mother and father have found each other again.
September 20th, 2026 07:21
A Sign From The Other Side
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, Teddy...I got teary at the chianti, not going to lie. A beautifully moving poem, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 18th, 2026 09:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, Teddy...I got teary at the chianti, not going to lie. A beautifully moving poem, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 18th, 2026 09:43
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