Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Perfumes of a Summer’s Day
Thomas W Case said:
Wouldn\'t that be fantastic? Great work, sweet Teddy.
April 20th, 2025 08:57
Thomas W Case said:
Wouldn\'t that be fantastic? Great work, sweet Teddy.
April 20th, 2025 08:57
Perfumes of a Summer’s Day
teardrop said:
That would be awesome but then what would us writers pen? Love your metaphor, Perfumes Of A Summer Day.
April 20th, 2025 04:31
teardrop said:
That would be awesome but then what would us writers pen? Love your metaphor, Perfumes Of A Summer Day.
April 20th, 2025 04:31
Perfumes of a Summer’s Day
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful analogy and metaphor that draws up fun images and serious thoughts. Some use bleach in their memory wash some use paint. I find that bleach deteriorates the fabric and paint makes it stiff when dried and sometimes rubs off on the skin. A most light hearted and upbeat poem with a serious meaning to it. That is what poetry is all about. Loved it.
April 20th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful analogy and metaphor that draws up fun images and serious thoughts. Some use bleach in their memory wash some use paint. I find that bleach deteriorates the fabric and paint makes it stiff when dried and sometimes rubs off on the skin. A most light hearted and upbeat poem with a serious meaning to it. That is what poetry is all about. Loved it.
April 20th, 2025 04:28
Soul 2
teardrop said:
Sounds like a beautiful soul. Thanks for the great read this morning.
April 19th, 2025 06:42
teardrop said:
Sounds like a beautiful soul. Thanks for the great read this morning.
April 19th, 2025 06:42
Soul 2
Goldfinch60 said:
Your soul is there to bring light to your life Teddy.
An dy
April 19th, 2025 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Your soul is there to bring light to your life Teddy.
An dy
April 19th, 2025 01:44
Soul 2
sorenbarrett said:
Dark or bright the soul is yours and in this piece it shines through. A brighter poem for a season that represents brightness and a return form the grave. Lovely my friend.
April 18th, 2025 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
Dark or bright the soul is yours and in this piece it shines through. A brighter poem for a season that represents brightness and a return form the grave. Lovely my friend.
April 18th, 2025 05:34
April\'s Senryu
NafisaSB said:
may the rainbows lead you to the pot of gold - short but sweet poem
April 8th, 2025 00:48
NafisaSB said:
may the rainbows lead you to the pot of gold - short but sweet poem
April 8th, 2025 00:48
Through Eyes of Light
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work, sweet Teddy. I felt this through and through. Excellent.
April 7th, 2025 18:12
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work, sweet Teddy. I felt this through and through. Excellent.
April 7th, 2025 18:12
Through Eyes of Light
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep dancing Teddy life is so wonderful.
Andy
April 6th, 2025 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep dancing Teddy life is so wonderful.
Andy
April 6th, 2025 01:24
Through Eyes of Light
sorenbarrett said:
I here the challenge here, meet your greatest difficulties face to face and dare to dance with them. A lovely metaphor carefully chosen. Where many would say fight dance is much better not only poetically but in philosophical metaphor as well. A Sun Tzu maneuver. Loved the poem Teddy.
April 5th, 2025 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
I here the challenge here, meet your greatest difficulties face to face and dare to dance with them. A lovely metaphor carefully chosen. Where many would say fight dance is much better not only poetically but in philosophical metaphor as well. A Sun Tzu maneuver. Loved the poem Teddy.
April 5th, 2025 05:09
Spring\'s Wish
Goldfinch60 said:
Those peaceful moments are so important in our lives Teddy but I could not live without colour in my life.
Andy
April 5th, 2025 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Those peaceful moments are so important in our lives Teddy but I could not live without colour in my life.
Andy
April 5th, 2025 01:28
Spring\'s Wish
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense in this poem of being overwhelmed by colors and stimulation of the world around us and desiring solitude, isolation from all those things that overstimulate the mind. I have been there as well and sometimes just closing ones eyes and ears is not enough. A poem well expressed.
April 4th, 2025 15:42
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense in this poem of being overwhelmed by colors and stimulation of the world around us and desiring solitude, isolation from all those things that overstimulate the mind. I have been there as well and sometimes just closing ones eyes and ears is not enough. A poem well expressed.
April 4th, 2025 15:42
Secrets of the Great Fig
Goldfinch60 said:
Thoughtful words Teddy, we all have our ways of finding the way in life.
Andy
April 4th, 2025 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Thoughtful words Teddy, we all have our ways of finding the way in life.
Andy
April 4th, 2025 01:12
April\'s Senryu
spilleronsheet said:
The much awaited senryu, and the cherry on cake, the click….adds to my imagination…dark and light really entwined….
April 3rd, 2025 15:09
spilleronsheet said:
The much awaited senryu, and the cherry on cake, the click….adds to my imagination…dark and light really entwined….
April 3rd, 2025 15:09
Painted Sky
spilleronsheet said:
I truly match your vibe…I don’t like yellow…but yet I can’t stop to agree the majestic charm it holds….and the click so superb dear Teddy….
April 3rd, 2025 14:43
spilleronsheet said:
I truly match your vibe…I don’t like yellow…but yet I can’t stop to agree the majestic charm it holds….and the click so superb dear Teddy….
April 3rd, 2025 14:43
Secrets of the Great Fig
spilleronsheet said:
Indeed a great reflection and splendid metaphor dearest Teddy…I can see many of us, including my emotions on the roots of tree….simply superb
April 3rd, 2025 14:40
spilleronsheet said:
Indeed a great reflection and splendid metaphor dearest Teddy…I can see many of us, including my emotions on the roots of tree….simply superb
April 3rd, 2025 14:40
Secrets of the Great Fig
sorenbarrett said:
Love your images in this poem. The metaphor is also splendid and I can feel its roots moving through the top soil of my thoughts. Loved it Teddy
April 3rd, 2025 03:11
sorenbarrett said:
Love your images in this poem. The metaphor is also splendid and I can feel its roots moving through the top soil of my thoughts. Loved it Teddy
April 3rd, 2025 03:11
Painted Sky
Goldfinch60 said:
Yellow in the sky brings light into your heart and mind Teddy.
Andy
April 3rd, 2025 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Yellow in the sky brings light into your heart and mind Teddy.
Andy
April 3rd, 2025 01:51
Painted Sky
sorenbarrett said:
A most personal and wonderful reveal. Yellow is not my favorite color as well but I love it when I\'m trying to start a fire, at sunrise, when I see the yolks of my eggs. Nicely written
April 2nd, 2025 12:34
sorenbarrett said:
A most personal and wonderful reveal. Yellow is not my favorite color as well but I love it when I\'m trying to start a fire, at sunrise, when I see the yolks of my eggs. Nicely written
April 2nd, 2025 12:34
April\'s Senryu
Goldfinch60 said:
May thta light always be in your life Teddy.
Andy
April 2nd, 2025 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
May thta light always be in your life Teddy.
Andy
April 2nd, 2025 01:24
April\'s Senryu
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice Haiku my friend good to have you back.
April 1st, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice Haiku my friend good to have you back.
April 1st, 2025 04:09
Senryu (An Ode to Soulmates)
NafisaSB said:
more power to your emotions - all the best
March 23rd, 2025 23:49
NafisaSB said:
more power to your emotions - all the best
March 23rd, 2025 23:49
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