Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Thanksgiving
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy I have heard of eating crow but this one takes the cake at Thanksgiving no less. A raven on the Thanksgiving table is a bad omen indeed, like a vulture sitting on one\'s roof. But then it might be just a portent of a muse awaiting an awakening for another poem. A bit of a haunting feeling awaiting the kaw of the crow.
December 3rd, 2025 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy I have heard of eating crow but this one takes the cake at Thanksgiving no less. A raven on the Thanksgiving table is a bad omen indeed, like a vulture sitting on one\'s roof. But then it might be just a portent of a muse awaiting an awakening for another poem. A bit of a haunting feeling awaiting the kaw of the crow.
December 3rd, 2025 05:26
Leave Me Here to Dream (song lyrics)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive song Teddy, such marvelous tribute to your friend. 🌹
Andy
December 1st, 2025 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive song Teddy, such marvelous tribute to your friend. 🌹
Andy
December 1st, 2025 02:21
Leave Me Here to Dream (song lyrics)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful lyrics and even more touching knowing the reason it was written. I could almost hear a melody while reading it. Sending you lots of love and warm vibes, my dearest friend! ❤️🩹🌹
November 30th, 2025 08:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful lyrics and even more touching knowing the reason it was written. I could almost hear a melody while reading it. Sending you lots of love and warm vibes, my dearest friend! ❤️🩹🌹
November 30th, 2025 08:41
Leave Me Here to Dream (song lyrics)
Thomas W Case said:
SO BEAUTIFUL AND TOUCHING.
November 30th, 2025 07:43
Thomas W Case said:
SO BEAUTIFUL AND TOUCHING.
November 30th, 2025 07:43
Leave Me Here to Dream (song lyrics)
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and touching it is the poetic plea of one who fears and suffers loss. A lover a friend and the call of the other for their company. Nicely written in verse and rhyme. Well done my friend.
November 30th, 2025 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and touching it is the poetic plea of one who fears and suffers loss. A lover a friend and the call of the other for their company. Nicely written in verse and rhyme. Well done my friend.
November 30th, 2025 05:03
A Magnificent Day
Bella Shepard said:
This is a gem my friend, who but the poet sees with such clarity. Reading it aloud it flows in beautiful rhyme, and the last 5 lines must each be spoken with a pause, each a beautiful reflection. Exquisite!
November 26th, 2025 15:57
Bella Shepard said:
This is a gem my friend, who but the poet sees with such clarity. Reading it aloud it flows in beautiful rhyme, and the last 5 lines must each be spoken with a pause, each a beautiful reflection. Exquisite!
November 26th, 2025 15:57
A Magnificent Day
Goldfinch60 said:
That wonder will always be with you Teddy.
Andy
November 26th, 2025 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
That wonder will always be with you Teddy.
Andy
November 26th, 2025 02:26
A Magnificent Day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, you turned a cultural fracture into a clean, steady lament… no shouting, just truth. The poem holds the weight of what’s been lost while keeping its feet on the ground. Love it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 25th, 2025 23:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, you turned a cultural fracture into a clean, steady lament… no shouting, just truth. The poem holds the weight of what’s been lost while keeping its feet on the ground. Love it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 25th, 2025 23:32
A Magnificent Day
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy I love this one. It is not only descriptive and full of nature but it speaks to me metaphorically That in our age no matter how bad life becomes that poetry makes it brighter. A most lovely and true statement
November 25th, 2025 17:04
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy I love this one. It is not only descriptive and full of nature but it speaks to me metaphorically That in our age no matter how bad life becomes that poetry makes it brighter. A most lovely and true statement
November 25th, 2025 17:04
Living Your Best Life
Goldfinch60 said:
May your dreams always become true Teddy.
Andy
November 21st, 2025 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
May your dreams always become true Teddy.
Andy
November 21st, 2025 02:17
Living Your Best Life
sorenbarrett said:
Very true Teddy a well and poetically stated truism. Nicely done Teddy
November 20th, 2025 14:14
sorenbarrett said:
Very true Teddy a well and poetically stated truism. Nicely done Teddy
November 20th, 2025 14:14
Modern Philosophy
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work. Love the thought of tango.
November 19th, 2025 09:36
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work. Love the thought of tango.
November 19th, 2025 09:36
The Weather Conditions for Today
Thomas W Case said:
It is a sad state. I was a nurse\'s aid for many years. I saw it a lot. Heart breaking. Compassionate work here in your poem.
November 17th, 2025 09:47
Thomas W Case said:
It is a sad state. I was a nurse\'s aid for many years. I saw it a lot. Heart breaking. Compassionate work here in your poem.
November 17th, 2025 09:47
Whispers
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. Voices are powerful. Great work, sweet Teddy.
November 13th, 2025 09:43
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. Voices are powerful. Great work, sweet Teddy.
November 13th, 2025 09:43
Whispers
Bella Shepard said:
Closets are made for holding things, often things we should have gotten rid of long ago but never had the courage to. And when the will is there to finally clean the closet, it will bring a sense of freedom from the baggage we\'ve hoarded. Beautifully written my dear Teddy!
November 11th, 2025 16:20
Bella Shepard said:
Closets are made for holding things, often things we should have gotten rid of long ago but never had the courage to. And when the will is there to finally clean the closet, it will bring a sense of freedom from the baggage we\'ve hoarded. Beautifully written my dear Teddy!
November 11th, 2025 16:20
Whispers
sorenbarrett said:
The first thing that comes to my mind are the voices of guilt that we all have and that we either shout down, argue down, or try to ignore. Something marvelous has to happen in order for them to go away. A most lovely write Teddy
November 11th, 2025 14:49
sorenbarrett said:
The first thing that comes to my mind are the voices of guilt that we all have and that we either shout down, argue down, or try to ignore. Something marvelous has to happen in order for them to go away. A most lovely write Teddy
November 11th, 2025 14:49
The Weather Conditions for Today
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Teddy. A fair description.
November 9th, 2025 09:03
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Teddy. A fair description.
November 9th, 2025 09:03
The Weather Conditions for Today
FrasMac said:
I\'m working beside a chap who isn\'t 60 years old yet, who is married to a dear wife twenty years his senior. Yes, she has dementia, and getting worse by the week. She also has osteo-perosis, and falls are really bad news. Between the pain and the dementia she still has good days when she\'s more like the girl he loves. So he keeps on, loving her. I am in awe of his faithfulness.
Thank you for the poem, the metaphor, the reminder that we only really have today with those we care about.
November 9th, 2025 02:17
FrasMac said:
I\'m working beside a chap who isn\'t 60 years old yet, who is married to a dear wife twenty years his senior. Yes, she has dementia, and getting worse by the week. She also has osteo-perosis, and falls are really bad news. Between the pain and the dementia she still has good days when she\'s more like the girl he loves. So he keeps on, loving her. I am in awe of his faithfulness.
Thank you for the poem, the metaphor, the reminder that we only really have today with those we care about.
November 9th, 2025 02:17
The Weather Conditions for Today
Goldfinch60 said:
I know all about dementia, my wife died from it and if people start talking about it I say that if you have not lived 24/7 with somebody who has dementia you haven\'t a F****** clue what it is life. She had it for about seen years before she died and I was with her almost all the time.
Sorry to go on Teddy, it is an invidious problem, there are 223 different types of dementia was what I was told by a medic.
Andy
November 9th, 2025 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
I know all about dementia, my wife died from it and if people start talking about it I say that if you have not lived 24/7 with somebody who has dementia you haven\'t a F****** clue what it is life. She had it for about seen years before she died and I was with her almost all the time.
Sorry to go on Teddy, it is an invidious problem, there are 223 different types of dementia was what I was told by a medic.
Andy
November 9th, 2025 02:10
The Weather Conditions for Today
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy this is a splendid metaphor that works so well. Dementia may come and go as cloudy days do and in latter stages may settle in permanently for a long winter. Very nicely done my friend.
November 8th, 2025 20:35
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy this is a splendid metaphor that works so well. Dementia may come and go as cloudy days do and in latter stages may settle in permanently for a long winter. Very nicely done my friend.
November 8th, 2025 20:35
Tree Soul
NafisaSB said:
beautiful poem.. loved the way you have talked about it, and its rebirth - but i beg to disagree - it\'s soul like ours may not be lost, but still live on, who knows?
November 4th, 2025 03:07
NafisaSB said:
beautiful poem.. loved the way you have talked about it, and its rebirth - but i beg to disagree - it\'s soul like ours may not be lost, but still live on, who knows?
November 4th, 2025 03:07
An Extraordinary Journey
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful poem of self reflection and contemplation, an amazing journey that you capture succintly and beautifully. Love the pic, it\'s you.
November 2nd, 2025 11:16
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful poem of self reflection and contemplation, an amazing journey that you capture succintly and beautifully. Love the pic, it\'s you.
November 2nd, 2025 11:16
An Extraordinary Journey
Goldfinch60 said:
You have now found that your soul is full of love and joy Teddy, well done.
Andy
November 2nd, 2025 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
You have now found that your soul is full of love and joy Teddy, well done.
Andy
November 2nd, 2025 02:21
An Extraordinary Journey
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And what a beautiful discovery that is, dearest Teddy! Glad you did and can totally relate! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 1st, 2025 20:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And what a beautiful discovery that is, dearest Teddy! Glad you did and can totally relate! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 1st, 2025 20:14
An Extraordinary Journey
sorenbarrett said:
Good one Teddy. I was born before GPS so I got lost a few time and had to ask for directions.
November 1st, 2025 19:41
sorenbarrett said:
Good one Teddy. I was born before GPS so I got lost a few time and had to ask for directions.
November 1st, 2025 19:41
Tree Soul
Goldfinch60 said:
But each time they die they arise again into their beautiful world Teddy.
Andy
November 1st, 2025 02:58
Goldfinch60 said:
But each time they die they arise again into their beautiful world Teddy.
Andy
November 1st, 2025 02:58
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