Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



Dante Alighieri
sorenbarrett said:

Although what those that don\'t understand the game would find boring, a defensive stand, it was quite a game. Through regular time, overtime and down to the last minute. A lovely write my friend have read Dante and his Divine Comedy and I often wonder which realm he occupies. Nicely written my friend

July 20th, 2026 03:58

Ravens Greatest Wisdom
Thomas W Case said:

Raven talks like a worn-down priest, no heaven to sellβ€”just truth you can carry.
Grief ain’t softened here, just faced head-on, like weather you learn to walk through. Beautiful work, sweet Teddy.

July 19th, 2026 07:03

Ravens Greatest Wisdom
Syd said:

Beautiful write Shirley. I agree with it too. Those we\'ve lost wouldn\'t want to see us sad.

- Syd xo

July 19th, 2026 06:53

Ravens Greatest Wisdom
sorenbarrett said:

A most lovely poem my friend. It speaks of death\'s separation from those we love and care about but it is only that a separation and if they did love us they would not want us to be sad but to think of all the good times had. I love your rhyming craftmanship in this work Teddy. It rolls off the tongue. It sends its message well. I never could understand people\'s fear of death, in that it is a natural process like birth, happening to all. It takes pain away from the one that dies and in that way is merciful. As you have mentioned the separation may be sad but why not focus on the moments we shared. Lovely and a fave

July 19th, 2026 06:40

Ravens Greatest Wisdom
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

good write my friend

July 19th, 2026 03:57

What Does True Love Mean To You?
Goldfinch60 said:

In love I have been very lucky during my life, I now have Mary who I love with such strength and desire.

Andy

July 19th, 2026 01:03

What Does True Love Mean To You?
sorenbarrett said:

A most important question Teddy the things you mentioned first may be important for romance or even passion but not for love in mind. The thing you mentioned last are more of a proof. To me love is caring about the well being of another more than yourself. Bad things may still happen and bad choices may be made but the intention is there and one is willing to put action behind it. Well written Teddy

July 18th, 2026 14:58

Dreams Are Funny Like That
Tristan Robert Lange said:

What a tender and bittersweet piece, Teddy. The dream offers love so vividly that waking becomes its own kind of loss...yet its beauty continues to echo afterward. Wonderful write, my dearest friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

July 17th, 2026 08:59

Dreams Are Funny Like That
arqios said:

Dreams are such great stuff that get into poems. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

July 17th, 2026 07:14

Dreams Are Funny Like That
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed such are dreams and is not life but a dream as well so short and full of the wonderful and the horrible from which one day we may awake. A lovely write my friend.

July 17th, 2026 03:41

England
arqios said:

A whole segment of the globe not happy at all; their hopes are now pinned on Spain by force majeure.

July 16th, 2026 19:36

England
Syd said:

I agree Shirley. They done really well, beaten by the better team unfortunately. I was believing we could have done it this time.

- Syd xo

July 16th, 2026 09:33

England
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Teddy, this is a fun little tribute. It captures both the disappointment of the tournament ending and the pride that remains regardless of the outcome. Nicely done, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

July 16th, 2026 08:21

England
sorenbarrett said:

Each country\'s pride has been evident in the event. A clever senryu my poetic friend. Nicely done

July 16th, 2026 03:31

Time To Part
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Teddy, this really hit me. There’s a quiet heartbreak here that reaches far beyond a sunset. It reminds us how quickly an ordinary moment can become something we never get back. Beautiful write, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

July 15th, 2026 22:40

Time To Part
Paul Bell said:

I think in the end the sun goes down on us all.
Hopefully he left his mark and the memories are good ones.

July 15th, 2026 11:00

Time To Part
sorenbarrett said:

No two sunsets alike and never sure we will see another at all. Life is short and storms get in the way. Well written my friend

July 15th, 2026 08:06

On self-love
NafisaSB said:

Truly worth reflecting upon and taking note

July 15th, 2026 06:01

On self-love
RSM0812 said:

A great lesson in this write. You can\'t love others until u love yourself.

July 12th, 2026 09:31

On self-love
rhmn_7 said:

A very universal message dear Teddy! Nice poem!

July 12th, 2026 07:27

On self-love
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Teddy, this is beautifully simple...and sometimes that\'s exactly what gives a poem its greatest strength. There\'s a quiet hope here that lingers after the last line. Wonderful write, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

July 11th, 2026 07:37

Generation X
Syd said:

Hi Shirley, you\'re bang on with this write. I somehow nearly missed it.

- Syd xo

July 11th, 2026 06:39

On self-love
Paul Bell said:

Yes, you\'ve got to start with yourself before moving onto others.
Though the divorce court said I moved onto others without mentioning it to the signifigant other.
It was an oversight on my part. lol

July 10th, 2026 14:20

On self-love
Syd said:

I wholeheartedly agree Shirley.

I hope you\'re keeping well.

- Syd xo

July 10th, 2026 11:15

On self-love
sorenbarrett said:

Deep wisdom in this short verse and a fave

July 10th, 2026 07:32

I Shall Love Me
Syd said:

There\'s certainly nothing wrong with having a little love for yourself Shirley.

- Syd xo

July 9th, 2026 12:42

I Shall Love Me
Demar Desu said:

🀟🏽

July 8th, 2026 21:45

I Shall Love Me
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Teddy, this really touched me. There\'s something deeply freeing about reaching the point where you stop chasing love that has to be earned and begin giving that same care to yourself. Powerful piece, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

July 8th, 2026 21:04

I Shall Love Me
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful message my friend one can never love out of obligation or pity only naturally and one must always love oneself first for with out loving oneself one can not love another. Well written and a fave

July 8th, 2026 19:58

Trumpism
Thomas W Case said:

And America lost. Good writing Teddy.

July 7th, 2026 07:54

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