Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
An Impatient Bloom
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely said Teddy this seems to depict well your recent past with its losses and present state. Set in rhyme it leaves with a positive attitude. Well done
November 3rd, 2026 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely said Teddy this seems to depict well your recent past with its losses and present state. Set in rhyme it leaves with a positive attitude. Well done
November 3rd, 2026 04:24
Upon The Canvas of The Great Sky
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully sorrowful, Teddy...I want to find comfort in that promised reunion, but I keep thinking about the one waiting. This belongs among your Ravens. Fantastic write, my dearest friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 2nd, 2026 17:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully sorrowful, Teddy...I want to find comfort in that promised reunion, but I keep thinking about the one waiting. This belongs among your Ravens. Fantastic write, my dearest friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 2nd, 2026 17:57
Upon The Canvas of The Great Sky
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Teddy,
You compose with a palette of words to paint the sky with a beautiful poem of endearment, everlasting in spirit and remembrance. Lovely.
Fond regards,
Tony.
November 2nd, 2026 08:43
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Teddy,
You compose with a palette of words to paint the sky with a beautiful poem of endearment, everlasting in spirit and remembrance. Lovely.
Fond regards,
Tony.
November 2nd, 2026 08:43
Upon The Canvas of The Great Sky
Paul Bell said:
Love on earth.
Love in heaven.
Love on a Monday, and the sun is shining. Well done.
November 2nd, 2026 06:52
Paul Bell said:
Love on earth.
Love in heaven.
Love on a Monday, and the sun is shining. Well done.
November 2nd, 2026 06:52
Upon The Canvas of The Great Sky
sorenbarrett said:
All of the universe and creation a canvas painted but not completed, a poem unfinished awaiting us to add our stroke of brush and pen. Nicely written Teddy
November 2nd, 2026 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
All of the universe and creation a canvas painted but not completed, a poem unfinished awaiting us to add our stroke of brush and pen. Nicely written Teddy
November 2nd, 2026 04:44
A Beautiful Sorrow
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Teddy, see you there but not for a long time yet.
Andy
November 2nd, 2026 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Teddy, see you there but not for a long time yet.
Andy
November 2nd, 2026 02:11
A Beautiful Sorrow
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, Teddy, this one really got me. ❤️ There are people I\'d give anything to have just one more conversation with. Much love to you, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 1st, 2026 18:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, Teddy, this one really got me. ❤️ There are people I\'d give anything to have just one more conversation with. Much love to you, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 1st, 2026 18:41
A Beautiful Sorrow
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Teddy,
A vein of politeness runs throughout this poem giving it a kindly acceptance and understanding and yet sorrow holds sway with grief therein, between the lines, as it were. A beautiful sorrow.
Fond regards,
Tony.
November 1st, 2026 12:23
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Teddy,
A vein of politeness runs throughout this poem giving it a kindly acceptance and understanding and yet sorrow holds sway with grief therein, between the lines, as it were. A beautiful sorrow.
Fond regards,
Tony.
November 1st, 2026 12:23
Because Someday You too Will Be Just a Halloween Reminder
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Teddy,
This is as clever as it is excellent. It\'s why I always leave a window open. LOL Very well done indeed, par excellence, my friend.
Wishing you much happiness,
Tony,
November 1st, 2026 11:38
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Teddy,
This is as clever as it is excellent. It\'s why I always leave a window open. LOL Very well done indeed, par excellence, my friend.
Wishing you much happiness,
Tony,
November 1st, 2026 11:38
A Beautiful Sorrow
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a tender sadness here, softened by a gentle touch of humor, as the speaker imagines heaven as a place so peaceful that even the simplest human desire to make a phone call must be left behind. “The two people in my life / that I most want to speak too today / are no longer available” is the keeper for me, because its plainspoken opening carries the full weight of absence, and the playful explanation that follows only makes us more aware of how much those voices are missed.
November 1st, 2026 09:23
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a tender sadness here, softened by a gentle touch of humor, as the speaker imagines heaven as a place so peaceful that even the simplest human desire to make a phone call must be left behind. “The two people in my life / that I most want to speak too today / are no longer available” is the keeper for me, because its plainspoken opening carries the full weight of absence, and the playful explanation that follows only makes us more aware of how much those voices are missed.
November 1st, 2026 09:23
A Beautiful Sorrow
Paul Bell said:
I bet there\'s a million guys who would love to phone heaven.
Darling, where\'s my shirt, my shoes, screwdriver. How does the washing machine work.
This is why guys must die first.
November 1st, 2026 06:41
Paul Bell said:
I bet there\'s a million guys who would love to phone heaven.
Darling, where\'s my shirt, my shoes, screwdriver. How does the washing machine work.
This is why guys must die first.
November 1st, 2026 06:41
A Beautiful Sorrow
sorenbarrett said:
This poem presents what would seem an absurd image that may not be too far off mark. If I were to take the cell phone as a metaphor for technology I would ban it all from any image I have of heaven. Why would I want electric lights when I have the sun, moon and stars, why would I want a TV to take my attention away from what I love and why would I want a cell phone to speak to a loved one that I was already with. So limited in our earthly views we try to improve on what is already perfect. Loved it Teddy a fave for the thoughts it inspired.
November 1st, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
This poem presents what would seem an absurd image that may not be too far off mark. If I were to take the cell phone as a metaphor for technology I would ban it all from any image I have of heaven. Why would I want electric lights when I have the sun, moon and stars, why would I want a TV to take my attention away from what I love and why would I want a cell phone to speak to a loved one that I was already with. So limited in our earthly views we try to improve on what is already perfect. Loved it Teddy a fave for the thoughts it inspired.
November 1st, 2026 04:17
Because Someday You too Will Be Just a Halloween Reminder
NafisaSB said:
agree - let\'s live life fully..
November 1st, 2026 02:09
NafisaSB said:
agree - let\'s live life fully..
November 1st, 2026 02:09
Because Someday You too Will Be Just a Halloween Reminder
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn right, Teddy! There are poems to write, places to go, and trouble to get into...I’d better get on with it! Happy Halloween, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 31st, 2026 22:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn right, Teddy! There are poems to write, places to go, and trouble to get into...I’d better get on with it! Happy Halloween, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 31st, 2026 22:21
Because Someday You too Will Be Just a Halloween Reminder
arqios said:
Nice one! 🤩🕊️
October 31st, 2026 04:57
arqios said:
Nice one! 🤩🕊️
October 31st, 2026 04:57
Because Someday You too Will Be Just a Halloween Reminder
sorenbarrett said:
That would be just like the universe arriving late for an appointment with death. How embarrassing. Good write my friend
October 31st, 2026 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
That would be just like the universe arriving late for an appointment with death. How embarrassing. Good write my friend
October 31st, 2026 04:39
\"BOO\"
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Teddy,
A glass of Chianti the BOOble bath, how lovely is that - all is well with the world this halloween. Do enjoy the celebrations.
Fond, regards,
Tony.
October 30th, 2026 18:04
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Teddy,
A glass of Chianti the BOOble bath, how lovely is that - all is well with the world this halloween. Do enjoy the celebrations.
Fond, regards,
Tony.
October 30th, 2026 18:04
\"BOO\"
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You’ve found my weakness, Teddy… I’d stay in the haunted house just to hear the rest of the album. 🪩💃👸 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 30th, 2026 11:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You’ve found my weakness, Teddy… I’d stay in the haunted house just to hear the rest of the album. 🪩💃👸 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 30th, 2026 11:09
\"BOO\"
Paul Bell said:
Put the cleaver back in the drawer, you\'re not at Waterloo.
I\'ll be floating around, my boo against your boo.
October 30th, 2026 09:21
Paul Bell said:
Put the cleaver back in the drawer, you\'re not at Waterloo.
I\'ll be floating around, my boo against your boo.
October 30th, 2026 09:21
\"BOO\"
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and most seasonal this poem puts a bit of fun in the air and lightens the seasonal feel of monsters with a playful ghost. Loved it
October 30th, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and most seasonal this poem puts a bit of fun in the air and lightens the seasonal feel of monsters with a playful ghost. Loved it
October 30th, 2026 04:00
Because She Haunts My Dreams
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Visiting hours, Teddy. Your muse needs visiting hours. Preferably after coffee...says the one up at 2:19 a.m. slaving away at the beck and call of my...you guessed it...muse. 😂🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 30th, 2026 01:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Visiting hours, Teddy. Your muse needs visiting hours. Preferably after coffee...says the one up at 2:19 a.m. slaving away at the beck and call of my...you guessed it...muse. 😂🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 30th, 2026 01:19
Because She Haunts My Dreams
MendedFences27 said:
A muse that haunts our dreams? i believe we all have one. Sometimes it is gentle and other times shocking. just another form of ourselves. Sometimes mine wakes me up and i have to write what has been formed in my mind. Sometimes. I return to sleep and write about it the next morning. It sometimes is so shocking that i must write it down immediately.
A beautiful poem Teddy. I\'m sure it rings familiar to most of us here. whatever form it may take, Personally, I felt a strong connection to the concept as you described it. I honestly hope it never leaves. - Phil A.
October 29th, 2026 21:33
MendedFences27 said:
A muse that haunts our dreams? i believe we all have one. Sometimes it is gentle and other times shocking. just another form of ourselves. Sometimes mine wakes me up and i have to write what has been formed in my mind. Sometimes. I return to sleep and write about it the next morning. It sometimes is so shocking that i must write it down immediately.
A beautiful poem Teddy. I\'m sure it rings familiar to most of us here. whatever form it may take, Personally, I felt a strong connection to the concept as you described it. I honestly hope it never leaves. - Phil A.
October 29th, 2026 21:33
Because She Haunts My Dreams
Syd said:
Hi Shirley, as someone who occasionally suffers from night terrors I can somewhat relate to this. I hope your muse in the night brings you more good than bad things to write about.
- Syd 🍄
October 29th, 2026 06:37
Syd said:
Hi Shirley, as someone who occasionally suffers from night terrors I can somewhat relate to this. I hope your muse in the night brings you more good than bad things to write about.
- Syd 🍄
October 29th, 2026 06:37
Because She Haunts My Dreams
sorenbarrett said:
There are two sides to this the light and the dark just as day and night. The light of inspiration and the darkness of suffering. Insomnia is a terrible thing while dreams can be wonderful they can hold suffering as well. Nicely written \'Teddy I hope you sleep well.
October 29th, 2026 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
There are two sides to this the light and the dark just as day and night. The light of inspiration and the darkness of suffering. Insomnia is a terrible thing while dreams can be wonderful they can hold suffering as well. Nicely written \'Teddy I hope you sleep well.
October 29th, 2026 04:27
Because She Haunts My Dreams
rrodriguez said:
A fascinating piece. I love how you\'ve personified the muse as both a source of inspiration and torment. Honest, intimate, and beautifully expressed. I liked it!
October 29th, 2026 04:22
rrodriguez said:
A fascinating piece. I love how you\'ve personified the muse as both a source of inspiration and torment. Honest, intimate, and beautifully expressed. I liked it!
October 29th, 2026 04:22
Gypsy Soul
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, Teddy! This is deliciously dark, my dear! You know how much I adore a good Gothic tragedy, and you\'ve certainly indulged my darker sensibilities here. Loved it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 28th, 2026 16:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, Teddy! This is deliciously dark, my dear! You know how much I adore a good Gothic tragedy, and you\'ve certainly indulged my darker sensibilities here. Loved it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 28th, 2026 16:53
Gypsy Soul
sorenbarrett said:
I like the way this not only tells the story of a type of person but is an allegory for a type of person. It is descriptive in its stereotype of gypsies as fortune tellers and dress as well and it projects an image of a wanderer. Such wandering may well extend beyond the physical to the emotional and the heart. Here the person wishes to trade in this element and put down roots. Nicely written Teddy
October 28th, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
I like the way this not only tells the story of a type of person but is an allegory for a type of person. It is descriptive in its stereotype of gypsies as fortune tellers and dress as well and it projects an image of a wanderer. Such wandering may well extend beyond the physical to the emotional and the heart. Here the person wishes to trade in this element and put down roots. Nicely written Teddy
October 28th, 2026 04:14
Lost Soul
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, you know I love the spooky stuff…still, I’d want someone else in the room while I read this! Thoroughly unsettling. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 27th, 2026 20:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, you know I love the spooky stuff…still, I’d want someone else in the room while I read this! Thoroughly unsettling. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 27th, 2026 20:00
Lost Soul
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. There’s a wonderfully unsettling tension here between the certainty of the body’s experience and the mind’s desperate attempt to explain it away, as the creaking boards, sinking mattress, and sudden cold make the unseen visitor feel terrifyingly real. “what if it is merely the quiet echo of my own skin?” is the keeper for me, because it turns the fear inward at the last moment, leaving us caught between a possible haunting and the even stranger possibility that the presence we dread is something rising from within ourselves.
October 27th, 2026 08:42
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. There’s a wonderfully unsettling tension here between the certainty of the body’s experience and the mind’s desperate attempt to explain it away, as the creaking boards, sinking mattress, and sudden cold make the unseen visitor feel terrifyingly real. “what if it is merely the quiet echo of my own skin?” is the keeper for me, because it turns the fear inward at the last moment, leaving us caught between a possible haunting and the even stranger possibility that the presence we dread is something rising from within ourselves.
October 27th, 2026 08:42
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