Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
I Am Metaphor
arqios said:
Lovely images relating Metaphor, which is very liquid/fluid. Good stuff🙏🏻🕊
February 18th, 2025 04:09
arqios said:
Lovely images relating Metaphor, which is very liquid/fluid. Good stuff🙏🏻🕊
February 18th, 2025 04:09
Such A Beautiful Place
Goldfinch60 said:
The sounds and vistas within our minds are limitless Teddy.
Andy
February 18th, 2025 02:59
Goldfinch60 said:
The sounds and vistas within our minds are limitless Teddy.
Andy
February 18th, 2025 02:59
Such A Beautiful Place
MendedFences27 said:
Think only of the butterflies. Let the darkness be a black one. Keep the sunshine and music playing inside your heart.
A beautiful poem.- Phil A.
February 17th, 2025 20:19
MendedFences27 said:
Think only of the butterflies. Let the darkness be a black one. Keep the sunshine and music playing inside your heart.
A beautiful poem.- Phil A.
February 17th, 2025 20:19
Such A Beautiful Place
arqios said:
Prismatic and even kaleidoscopic reflection! Reshuffles the mind like resetting a Boggle game board 🙏🏻🕊
February 17th, 2025 18:41
arqios said:
Prismatic and even kaleidoscopic reflection! Reshuffles the mind like resetting a Boggle game board 🙏🏻🕊
February 17th, 2025 18:41
Such A Beautiful Place
sorenbarrett said:
Vision and hearing our two primary senses equate well. I know people who on drugs have heard color and seen color in music. This blend of the spectrum of colors and in sound from tranquility to chaos makes for a rich pallet and portrays life well. What makes this poem is the last line filled with the color black. it represents so many things as well from nothingness, to death, from evil, to formality and is seen as the sound of silence. This too may be anything from peace to finality and infinity. Black in pigments being the mixture of all colors and in light the absence of all. Not only a great write but a wonderful metaphor with endless possibilities.
February 17th, 2025 16:39
sorenbarrett said:
Vision and hearing our two primary senses equate well. I know people who on drugs have heard color and seen color in music. This blend of the spectrum of colors and in sound from tranquility to chaos makes for a rich pallet and portrays life well. What makes this poem is the last line filled with the color black. it represents so many things as well from nothingness, to death, from evil, to formality and is seen as the sound of silence. This too may be anything from peace to finality and infinity. Black in pigments being the mixture of all colors and in light the absence of all. Not only a great write but a wonderful metaphor with endless possibilities.
February 17th, 2025 16:39
Such A Beautiful Place
Cassie58 said:
The mind, beautiful corridors of possibilities that span the delights of nature and can transport you to heaven right down to a trip in the vaults of hell. Certainly a poem of reflection but can also project the reader forward. So much colour here, butterflies, I adore. You brought me sound too dear Teddy. Love your posted image. It compliments your words so very well and imagery here to remember. Perfectly lovely.
February 17th, 2025 15:25
Cassie58 said:
The mind, beautiful corridors of possibilities that span the delights of nature and can transport you to heaven right down to a trip in the vaults of hell. Certainly a poem of reflection but can also project the reader forward. So much colour here, butterflies, I adore. You brought me sound too dear Teddy. Love your posted image. It compliments your words so very well and imagery here to remember. Perfectly lovely.
February 17th, 2025 15:25
Imagining the Impossible
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy. Thanks for the smile. Perfect love dear poet. What’s that? Yes, certainly need to use the imagination here and stretch it too lol. We can all dream and hope just for a few niggles rather than carnage 😂. You have done well here with your brevity. Hope you have had a happy Monday. 🌹
February 17th, 2025 14:33
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy. Thanks for the smile. Perfect love dear poet. What’s that? Yes, certainly need to use the imagination here and stretch it too lol. We can all dream and hope just for a few niggles rather than carnage 😂. You have done well here with your brevity. Hope you have had a happy Monday. 🌹
February 17th, 2025 14:33
Imagining the Impossible
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Teddy and I have found it.
Andy
February 17th, 2025 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Teddy and I have found it.
Andy
February 17th, 2025 02:24
Imagining the Impossible
sorenbarrett said:
To true to laugh at. This is a wonderful write wrapping up a whole book into a paragraph. Wonderful and very clever
February 16th, 2025 14:08
sorenbarrett said:
To true to laugh at. This is a wonderful write wrapping up a whole book into a paragraph. Wonderful and very clever
February 16th, 2025 14:08
Shrink Satire
Cassie58 said:
That is what you call sod’s law from where I came from Teddy. So much here to pick apart. There are many people making a huge load of dosh at the expense of the misery of others. Solicitors are currently my number one yuk but there are so many others like the pharmaceutical industry. This is both a clever and amusing write. Happy Sunday. Time to stop visiting shrinks 😂🌹💜
February 16th, 2025 11:15
Cassie58 said:
That is what you call sod’s law from where I came from Teddy. So much here to pick apart. There are many people making a huge load of dosh at the expense of the misery of others. Solicitors are currently my number one yuk but there are so many others like the pharmaceutical industry. This is both a clever and amusing write. Happy Sunday. Time to stop visiting shrinks 😂🌹💜
February 16th, 2025 11:15
Shrink Satire
Goldfinch60 said:
You get the same idea with solicitors bills Teddy. LOL
Andy
February 16th, 2025 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
You get the same idea with solicitors bills Teddy. LOL
Andy
February 16th, 2025 02:52
Shrink Satire
Accidental Poet said:
My checking account is depleted, I must be getting better. Right? 🙄
February 16th, 2025 01:28
Accidental Poet said:
My checking account is depleted, I must be getting better. Right? 🙄
February 16th, 2025 01:28
Shrink Satire
MendedFences27 said:
I think they\'re called \" shrinks \" because of how a paycheck shrinks when you use their services. Your poem captures the futility of trying to mend a damaged mind. \" He presented his bill \"( est. 130 days X $100.00 = $ 13,000 ). No wonder! You drive home a very good point, i.e. the cost of medical and psych services. How could he drag it on for that amount of time and accomplish nothing? A very poignant poem on a subject very relevant to today. - Phil A.
February 15th, 2025 19:45
MendedFences27 said:
I think they\'re called \" shrinks \" because of how a paycheck shrinks when you use their services. Your poem captures the futility of trying to mend a damaged mind. \" He presented his bill \"( est. 130 days X $100.00 = $ 13,000 ). No wonder! You drive home a very good point, i.e. the cost of medical and psych services. How could he drag it on for that amount of time and accomplish nothing? A very poignant poem on a subject very relevant to today. - Phil A.
February 15th, 2025 19:45
Shrink Satire
Thomas W Case said:
You have a great sense of humor, dear Teddy. lol.
February 15th, 2025 18:27
Thomas W Case said:
You have a great sense of humor, dear Teddy. lol.
February 15th, 2025 18:27
Shrink Satire
arqios said:
A well crafted image of the advantage taken over someone else’s misery… a billion dollar industry nonetheless built on lived and ongoing misery
February 15th, 2025 18:23
arqios said:
A well crafted image of the advantage taken over someone else’s misery… a billion dollar industry nonetheless built on lived and ongoing misery
February 15th, 2025 18:23
Shrink Satire
sorenbarrett said:
Maybe that is an indication for the hypocritical oath. All health care workers know that job security lies in maintaining illness. A fun read.
February 15th, 2025 13:23
sorenbarrett said:
Maybe that is an indication for the hypocritical oath. All health care workers know that job security lies in maintaining illness. A fun read.
February 15th, 2025 13:23
Can Saints really Fly?
Accidental Poet said:
Teddy you always remind me how love is the greatest thing/emotion ever! 🌹😁👍
February 14th, 2025 09:40
Accidental Poet said:
Teddy you always remind me how love is the greatest thing/emotion ever! 🌹😁👍
February 14th, 2025 09:40
Can Saints really Fly?
arqios said:
Uncontainable, untameable, unframable… love it is…
February 14th, 2025 07:51
arqios said:
Uncontainable, untameable, unframable… love it is…
February 14th, 2025 07:51
Can Saints really Fly?
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy this I feel is one of if not your greatest write. It reads almost Shakespearian and rings with a sense of immortality in wording and in meaning. There is timeless wisdom here. On occasion I feel jealous of a poem that someone else has written and this is one such time.
February 14th, 2025 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy this I feel is one of if not your greatest write. It reads almost Shakespearian and rings with a sense of immortality in wording and in meaning. There is timeless wisdom here. On occasion I feel jealous of a poem that someone else has written and this is one such time.
February 14th, 2025 04:39
Can Saints really Fly?
Cassie58 said:
Happy Valentine’s Day Teddy. Beautiful poetry as usual, in your own unique style.
Your words a reminder:
Communication is key, and when you don’t have that, things start to fall apart. And of course it is the things you don’t say that you should have, that will be remembered most. And a heart that is shy, suffers most. And love up in the air is the pits. That is how your poem spoke to me this morning.
I hope you have something special planned for today, as we do. And have a grand weekend. ❤️🌹
February 14th, 2025 03:22
Cassie58 said:
Happy Valentine’s Day Teddy. Beautiful poetry as usual, in your own unique style.
Your words a reminder:
Communication is key, and when you don’t have that, things start to fall apart. And of course it is the things you don’t say that you should have, that will be remembered most. And a heart that is shy, suffers most. And love up in the air is the pits. That is how your poem spoke to me this morning.
I hope you have something special planned for today, as we do. And have a grand weekend. ❤️🌹
February 14th, 2025 03:22
Can Saints really Fly?
Goldfinch60 said:
But pure love comes to us Teddy as it has to me.
Andy
February 14th, 2025 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
But pure love comes to us Teddy as it has to me.
Andy
February 14th, 2025 02:52
Wild Horses
Caring dove said:
‘ il wrap him in a bow ‘
Lovely line
Nice poem teddy , liked it ))
February 13th, 2025 02:30
Caring dove said:
‘ il wrap him in a bow ‘
Lovely line
Nice poem teddy , liked it ))
February 13th, 2025 02:30
As Famous As Can Be
Accidental Poet said:
I know one female poet who is very famous among her peers here in MPS. 🌹😉
February 12th, 2025 08:34
Accidental Poet said:
I know one female poet who is very famous among her peers here in MPS. 🌹😉
February 12th, 2025 08:34
As Famous As Can Be
sorenbarrett said:
Nor would you want to be dead, briliance bled, unwritten poems that would go unread
Your demise would deprive future reader\'s eyes of many an unsung prize
Better to be alive than to take that dive so that your poems might bloom and thrive
Poems that are new always ring true and beside all this, I would miss you
A great poem of yours and a fun challenge as well
February 12th, 2025 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
Nor would you want to be dead, briliance bled, unwritten poems that would go unread
Your demise would deprive future reader\'s eyes of many an unsung prize
Better to be alive than to take that dive so that your poems might bloom and thrive
Poems that are new always ring true and beside all this, I would miss you
A great poem of yours and a fun challenge as well
February 12th, 2025 06:48
As Famous As Can Be
arqios said:
Beautiful words for a beautiful soul 🙏🏻🕊 R.I.P.
February 12th, 2025 05:48
arqios said:
Beautiful words for a beautiful soul 🙏🏻🕊 R.I.P.
February 12th, 2025 05:48
As Famous As Can Be
Distant View said:
Fame must be a double-edged sword! Never to have a moment\'s peace when out and about! People expecting you to give autographs all the time etc. I actually feel sorry for those who become very famous at a young age (many pop stars), and then fade from the scene whilst still quite young. No, I couldn\'t handle fame! Just as well, because I\'ll never be famous lol!
February 12th, 2025 05:45
Distant View said:
Fame must be a double-edged sword! Never to have a moment\'s peace when out and about! People expecting you to give autographs all the time etc. I actually feel sorry for those who become very famous at a young age (many pop stars), and then fade from the scene whilst still quite young. No, I couldn\'t handle fame! Just as well, because I\'ll never be famous lol!
February 12th, 2025 05:45
A Very Special Hummingbird
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy about a great poet.
Andy
February 12th, 2025 03:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy about a great poet.
Andy
February 12th, 2025 03:24
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