Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Noncence Geography
sorenbarrett said:
We all carry with us who we are and where we came from. A beautiful thought for a beautiful person.
February 12th, 2024 11:58
sorenbarrett said:
We all carry with us who we are and where we came from. A beautiful thought for a beautiful person.
February 12th, 2024 11:58
Showtime
Neville said:
Simply magic .. much like mother nature herself .. 🌹
February 12th, 2024 06:39
Neville said:
Simply magic .. much like mother nature herself .. 🌹
February 12th, 2024 06:39
Showtime
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words of Nature\'s beauty and wonder Teddy.
Andy
February 12th, 2024 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words of Nature\'s beauty and wonder Teddy.
Andy
February 12th, 2024 02:26
Showtime
Bella Shepard said:
Each stanza can beatifully stand alone, but when combined this poem is \"magic. Reading it evokes such a feeling of peace and wonder, it is picture perfect!
February 11th, 2024 15:35
Bella Shepard said:
Each stanza can beatifully stand alone, but when combined this poem is \"magic. Reading it evokes such a feeling of peace and wonder, it is picture perfect!
February 11th, 2024 15:35
Showtime
sorenbarrett said:
\"As evening sun lays his head
onto winter\'s frozen bed\" a magnificent line I wished i had thought of, followed below with
\"once more the moon, her head will tilt
and sun will rise from night-time’s quilt\"
A truly ingenious accompaniment to make a perfect completion. It is rare to have one such line in a poem but two in such resolving majesty in the same poem is transcendent indeed. Kudos for this masterpiece.
February 11th, 2024 07:08
sorenbarrett said:
\"As evening sun lays his head
onto winter\'s frozen bed\" a magnificent line I wished i had thought of, followed below with
\"once more the moon, her head will tilt
and sun will rise from night-time’s quilt\"
A truly ingenious accompaniment to make a perfect completion. It is rare to have one such line in a poem but two in such resolving majesty in the same poem is transcendent indeed. Kudos for this masterpiece.
February 11th, 2024 07:08
Leave Me Here To Dream (Song Lyrics)
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful emotive words Teddy thank you for sharing them.
Andy
February 11th, 2024 02:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful emotive words Teddy thank you for sharing them.
Andy
February 11th, 2024 02:30
Leave Me Here To Dream (Song Lyrics)
Neville said:
You are a rock goddess babe .. ❤️
February 10th, 2024 09:03
Neville said:
You are a rock goddess babe .. ❤️
February 10th, 2024 09:03
Leave Me Here To Dream (Song Lyrics)
sorenbarrett said:
\"I’m a stream without water
tears just don’t flow
the river I\'ve cried
it\'s emptied my soul\"
Anyone who has suffered this deeply can feel this verse. A sad and somewhat dark song (poem) it is very powerful. The chorus
\"I don\'t want to wake
leave me here to dream\"
is highly identifiable and I am sure that I have been there before.
February 10th, 2024 08:58
sorenbarrett said:
\"I’m a stream without water
tears just don’t flow
the river I\'ve cried
it\'s emptied my soul\"
Anyone who has suffered this deeply can feel this verse. A sad and somewhat dark song (poem) it is very powerful. The chorus
\"I don\'t want to wake
leave me here to dream\"
is highly identifiable and I am sure that I have been there before.
February 10th, 2024 08:58
Senryu to Opera
Bella Shepard said:
Oh, I love it! I read your lines and I\'m hearing \"O Mio Babbino Caro\". Bless you!
February 9th, 2024 16:04
Bella Shepard said:
Oh, I love it! I read your lines and I\'m hearing \"O Mio Babbino Caro\". Bless you!
February 9th, 2024 16:04
Senryu to Opera
Neville said:
this is like music to my mind .. almost zenryu in fact ... 💛
February 9th, 2024 13:38
Neville said:
this is like music to my mind .. almost zenryu in fact ... 💛
February 9th, 2024 13:38
Senryu to Opera
Doggerel Dave said:
For some reason this reminds me of Milan - such a contradiction....
February 9th, 2024 07:56
Doggerel Dave said:
For some reason this reminds me of Milan - such a contradiction....
February 9th, 2024 07:56
Senryu to Opera
Tom Dylan said:
A lovely little poem, Teddy. Happy Friday. :-)
February 9th, 2024 03:06
Tom Dylan said:
A lovely little poem, Teddy. Happy Friday. :-)
February 9th, 2024 03:06
Solitude
sorenbarrett said:
I often wonder how much of a poem is the poet. I write many that are not but most contain some part of me. The sadness in this poem rocks the core and urges me to shout out Do not give up, it is when the going is toughest that the peak of the mountain is near. It is out of struggles and pain that most good art is born. A lovely piece.
\"only she can hear the music
she stands alone to dance
writing poems and fables
in a poetry ridden trance\"
A wonderful stanza
February 8th, 2024 09:38
sorenbarrett said:
I often wonder how much of a poem is the poet. I write many that are not but most contain some part of me. The sadness in this poem rocks the core and urges me to shout out Do not give up, it is when the going is toughest that the peak of the mountain is near. It is out of struggles and pain that most good art is born. A lovely piece.
\"only she can hear the music
she stands alone to dance
writing poems and fables
in a poetry ridden trance\"
A wonderful stanza
February 8th, 2024 09:38
Butterflies are rare
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Teddy, may those butterflies come back to you.
Andy
February 8th, 2024 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Teddy, may those butterflies come back to you.
Andy
February 8th, 2024 02:28
Butterflies are rare
sorenbarrett said:
Not only rare but beautiful in color as they drop and raise. I find their different colors solace for the soul from the reads and yellows, whites and iridescent blues to ones that seem to try to communicate with numbers on their wings. A beautiful metaphor and poem.
February 7th, 2024 09:17
sorenbarrett said:
Not only rare but beautiful in color as they drop and raise. I find their different colors solace for the soul from the reads and yellows, whites and iridescent blues to ones that seem to try to communicate with numbers on their wings. A beautiful metaphor and poem.
February 7th, 2024 09:17
Butterflies are rare
Doggerel Dave said:
Upstairs somewhere you said you were a \'doomsday writer\', Teddy, I thought \'oh come on...\' My sense of humour must have momentarily left me.... Apologies...
A deeply romantic write.....
February 7th, 2024 07:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Upstairs somewhere you said you were a \'doomsday writer\', Teddy, I thought \'oh come on...\' My sense of humour must have momentarily left me.... Apologies...
A deeply romantic write.....
February 7th, 2024 07:03
Butterflies are rare
Neville said:
I enjoyed every single word, but as I reached the concluding line, I couldn\'t help but smile .. because I know for a fact that both butterflies and love are elusive & fragile and beautiful .. and .. ❤️
February 7th, 2024 06:16
Neville said:
I enjoyed every single word, but as I reached the concluding line, I couldn\'t help but smile .. because I know for a fact that both butterflies and love are elusive & fragile and beautiful .. and .. ❤️
February 7th, 2024 06:16
Butterflies are rare
Tom Dylan said:
A brilliant poem, just brilliant. The way it builds and builds to the last lines. Just fantastic.
February 7th, 2024 05:25
Tom Dylan said:
A brilliant poem, just brilliant. The way it builds and builds to the last lines. Just fantastic.
February 7th, 2024 05:25
The One Dreams are Made of
Goldfinch60 said:
Dream away Teddy, I am sure that Elvis would kiss you in his dreams as weill.
Andy
https://youtu.be/dsG5I3cuZmE?si=xmb3AMnsAea_Vz5r
February 7th, 2024 02:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Dream away Teddy, I am sure that Elvis would kiss you in his dreams as weill.
Andy
https://youtu.be/dsG5I3cuZmE?si=xmb3AMnsAea_Vz5r
February 7th, 2024 02:57
The One Dreams are Made of
Bella Shepard said:
Teddy, you had me \'goin here. I think I\'ll just believe it, cause it makes me smile all over. I love his ballads, and so do the ladies at the nursing home when we sing them together, we\'re of that age. Thank you for this beautiful fantasy, or was it?
February 6th, 2024 16:55
Bella Shepard said:
Teddy, you had me \'goin here. I think I\'ll just believe it, cause it makes me smile all over. I love his ballads, and so do the ladies at the nursing home when we sing them together, we\'re of that age. Thank you for this beautiful fantasy, or was it?
February 6th, 2024 16:55
The One Dreams are Made of
Thomas W Case said:
Very creative Teddy, now that would be an experience.
February 6th, 2024 12:07
Thomas W Case said:
Very creative Teddy, now that would be an experience.
February 6th, 2024 12:07
The One Dreams are Made of
Doggerel Dave said:
You tell a good yarn, Teddy. As I read with one side of my brain (never quite sure which side) the other was trying to summon dates, your age (your disclosure) and see if.. and then your very last line relieved me...and relief it woz...
February 6th, 2024 08:51
Doggerel Dave said:
You tell a good yarn, Teddy. As I read with one side of my brain (never quite sure which side) the other was trying to summon dates, your age (your disclosure) and see if.. and then your very last line relieved me...and relief it woz...
February 6th, 2024 08:51
The One Dreams are Made of
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams are wonderful things, the fuel of inspiration and drive that leads to accomplishments beyond what is otherwise possible. The are the healing salve for the soul. A wonderful imaginative write. Love Elvis songs and one that left us too soon.
February 6th, 2024 05:59
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams are wonderful things, the fuel of inspiration and drive that leads to accomplishments beyond what is otherwise possible. The are the healing salve for the soul. A wonderful imaginative write. Love Elvis songs and one that left us too soon.
February 6th, 2024 05:59
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