Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



From where the wild roses grow
sorenbarrett said:

How did I miss gem? There is just enough mystery and puzzle in these lines to grip the attention of the reader and bury him in that soil beneath the roses. This is one of my favorites of yours

February 27th, 2024 03:55

Party Animal
sorenbarrett said:

I have to say I have never been there myself. Wonderful wording and images. Provoking thoughts.

February 26th, 2024 20:47

It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Bella Shepard said:

I confess I know little of this form of poetry, but the words Dear Teddy, are exquisite. If this be the food of love, then write on , and on, and on. Once again you introduce to something I want to learn more about. Thank you!!

February 26th, 2024 09:49

It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Goldfinch60 said:

Such wonderful loving words Teddy.

Andy

February 26th, 2024 02:21

It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Thomas W Case said:

So powerful and scenic. Great work.

February 25th, 2024 16:48

It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Parisab said:

To praise ones essence in the hard labor of a sonnet, is so brave and lovely. Job well done! I hope to take a walk somewhere in the old world and sit and attempt one soon.

February 25th, 2024 11:17

Party Animal
rhmn_7 said:

That\'s what you call rising from the ashes. Nice poem!

February 25th, 2024 09:04

It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
rhmn_7 said:

Now that is a love worth living over and over again.

February 25th, 2024 07:59

It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Cassie58 said:

Dear Teddy, now this is a sonnet to top all sonnets. I know how difficult they are to compose because I have dabbled myself. You have given your readers a love poem here of incredible depth and beauty. I can’t praise it enough. 🌹

February 25th, 2024 07:28

It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Cloie said:

Your poem beautifully expresses a deep and passionate love, comparing it to the intensity of the sun and the beauty of nature. The imagery of fiery eyes and golden locks evokes a sense of awe and admiration. The poem also touches on the theme of forgiveness and the importance of cherishing each day. The final lines convey a sense of eternal love and devotion, promising to continue loving even in the face of darkness.

February 25th, 2024 06:09

It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Neville said:



Perfectly executed Teddy .. I must again confess you are far braver than I .. and for some sad reason, you made me think about our dear old Dusk Arising .. 🌹

February 25th, 2024 05:52

It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Doggerel Dave said:

As Soren so rightly points out, You are up there with, I\'ll say, the bard of Stratford-upon-Avon, Teddy.
And this coming from someone with a general antipathy for love poetry.....

February 25th, 2024 05:09

It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
sorenbarrett said:

Teddy this holds such a classical feel. I hear Browning in this somehow. Romantic to the core. I love this one. So many good lines from the first stanza on.
\"Dusk until dawn, to your love I have clung
Dreaming of a world that sing songs unsung
I, who dies in the forest of your heart
It’s I whom will die in the forest dark\"
There is deep meaning in these lines of obsession and facing the cold of being ignored or rejected.

February 25th, 2024 04:59

Party Animal
Goldfinch60 said:

Intriguingly thoughtful words Teddy.

Andy

February 25th, 2024 02:07

Party Animal
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work, Teddy.

February 24th, 2024 21:37

Party Animal
Doggerel Dave said:

I do believe you may have made a typo here, Teddy.
I\'m pretty sure it\'s \'cobblers\', as I believe you are far too canny for that......

February 24th, 2024 18:17

Party Animal
Neville said:



and you said you would be in by ten ..

February 24th, 2024 15:14

Party Animal
Cassie58 said:

A fun poem Teddy which brought back some memories of times gone by. Happy Saturday to you.

February 24th, 2024 14:57

Party Animal
Thoughtless said:

You might like the series Hazbin in Hell. Who knows? I know about burning midnight oil, though.
Exhaustion, whew! Know that feeling. Especially when I used to read by kerosene lamp.

February 24th, 2024 14:49

The Greatest Love Album Ever Written
sorenbarrett said:

\"a broken heart only needs
that one last sip
just enough to numb
the excruciating pain
that comes with loss
whilst giving company to my brokenness\"
A great stanza here. Identifiable for anyone that has suffered loss of any type. Loved it.

February 24th, 2024 08:52

Breakfast Surprise
Neville said:


near makes a fella want to masticate 🌹

February 24th, 2024 03:03

Breakfast Surprise
Goldfinch60 said:

What a big egg for breakfast this morning Teddy. LOL

Andy

February 24th, 2024 02:42

Breakfast Surprise
Bella Shepard said:

I\'m dying to know, scrambled or fried. Poor Humpty, but lucky utensils. Love the poem, love the pic, love the poet!

February 23rd, 2024 15:24

Breakfast Surprise
sorenbarrett said:

Appetizing. but I thought that the dish had run away with the spoon. Did the spoon come back for an encore performance? A most fun read Teddy

February 23rd, 2024 05:01

Breakfast Surprise
Tom Dylan said:

Haha.. fantastic, Teddy.

February 23rd, 2024 04:59

From where the wild roses grow
Garth Rakumakoe said:

Loaded with meaning and poetic mastery... A heavy piece, delivered just right!

February 23rd, 2024 04:41

Maniac
sorenbarrett said:

Seductive, alluring, haunting in a way, I hear a sirens call. Short but so powerfully packed with imagery leading one\'s imagination expanding on the original work filling in what is not said. A true sign of a wonderful work that lingers long after the read is done. Kudos for the courage to write on a risque\' topic with such class and skill.

February 22nd, 2024 13:17

Maniac
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work Teddy. I\'ve met a few. Lol

February 22nd, 2024 11:21

Maniac
Doggerel Dave said:

Pass. I\'ve never been fond of a pretzel as the last one was followed by an extraordinary large dental bill after I got my indigestion under control, (half a box of antiacid tablets it took) and I really can\'t afford another and I\'m trying to loose weight so the bendy bit isn\'t going to work for me, plus the thought of her dirty feet is a little teensy bit of a turn off and.........

February 22nd, 2024 07:53

Maniac
Neville said:


do you have her co-ordinates by any chance .. am askin for a friend .. 🌹

February 22nd, 2024 04:41



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