Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



Solitude
Neville said:



so many would be poets .. so little time for so many of them ..

January 30th, 2024 13:23

Solitude
spilleronsheet said:

This somehow created so much resonance as if something went in chorus…

January 30th, 2024 12:08

Solitude
Tom Dylan said:

A powerful poem, Teddy. I can really relate. I\'m not generally a sensitive guy but when it comes to my writing, any criticism can really sting. I am like an over-protective parent when it comes to my stories and poems. This was a great write.

January 30th, 2024 06:47

My Heaviest Suitcase Contains My Heart
sorenbarrett said:

Sad but hopeful words containing the wisdom we all need in a world of loss. To let go and be able to forgive oneself then others is one of the most difficult steps in climbing that \"mountain ever so high above the clouds\". A most beautiful message set in tender words.

January 29th, 2024 05:38

Where Time Really Does Stand Sill
Neville said:



I can relate to every single word .. but am surrounded by them .. I have a thing about old clocks & watches, my house tocks to me 24/7 and it is a source of much comfort .. well poemed Teddy .. its good to see what makes someone else tick .. Neville


January 29th, 2024 04:03

Where Time Really Does Stand Sill
Bella Shepard said:

This poem feels as if it is the beginning of a beautiful life story that your are telling, one that I wish would go on. Thank you for this sweet delight!

January 28th, 2024 16:35

Where Time Really Does Stand Sill
Thomas W Case said:

This is a beautiful scene, Teddy, I love it.

January 28th, 2024 12:35

Where Time Really Does Stand Sill
sorenbarrett said:

Time stands still in our minds once in a while although it seems to race at other times. Maybe time is just an invention of the human mind, other animals don\'t seem to worry about it. Thought provoking write Teddy.

January 28th, 2024 12:06

Where Time Really Does Stand Sill
John said:

Those moments are essential to escape the traffic of life, great write mate

January 28th, 2024 06:44

Never Really Gone
Neville said:



I am with you all the way .. and have been here before Teddy .. such heart-wrenching realities always hurt long and deep .. Neville

January 28th, 2024 04:22

Never Really Gone
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful emotive words Teddy, she will always be with you.

Andy

January 28th, 2024 02:46

Never Really Gone
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful Teddy, amazing work.

January 27th, 2024 22:02

Never Really Gone
sorenbarrett said:

What a touching and though sad wonderful vision of grief and loss. I loved so much how in the second stanza you personified grief as if it were a living being. And the finish of this piece was perfection as to how we incorporate those we love and they will always exist in us. Ten out of ten on this one

January 27th, 2024 09:42

So Let the Music Play
Cassie58 said:

When the saxaphone plays I am transported. A step nearer to heaven. Lovely poem Teddy and your posted image is a perfect match for your words. Have a beautiful weekend.

January 27th, 2024 03:51

So Let the Music Play
Goldfinch60 said:

So true Teddy, let the music flow.

Andy

https://youtu.be/Pk8ZQ4F5qh4?si=gSAAtrXlYhXgdWo-

January 27th, 2024 02:30

So Let the Music Play
Bella Shepard said:

Play it loud and strong dear Teddy, with great confidence. Beautiful pic, beautiful poem!

January 26th, 2024 14:21

So Let the Music Play
Teddy.15 said:



January 26th, 2024 12:42

So Let the Music Play
Thomas W Case said:

Love it. Fantastic work. Triumphant.

January 26th, 2024 10:18

So Let the Music Play
sorenbarrett said:

A most wonderful analogy. Music is the vibration that can take us from the seductive to the sublime. The devil may play his fiddle but the sax is so much more powerful.

January 26th, 2024 06:25

So Let the Music Play
Tom Dylan said:

Some great lines here. Love the great saxophone of one\'s soul. Just so well written.

January 26th, 2024 05:07

My Heaviest Suitcase Contains My Heart
Neville said:


How come I almost missed this ..

Quite literally, a literary stroke of pure genius ma\'am T .. Neville

January 25th, 2024 04:35

My Heaviest Suitcase Contains My Heart
Goldfinch60 said:

Forget the bad things in the past Teddy and just remember the good things as you move on into that new love that is there for you.

Andy

January 25th, 2024 02:24

My Heaviest Suitcase Contains My Heart
Thomas W Case said:

Simply beautiful, the perfect touch of transparency and vulnerability. Fantastic work.

January 24th, 2024 16:11

My Heaviest Suitcase Contains My Heart
Tom Dylan said:

A powerful poem, Teddy, wonderfully written.

January 24th, 2024 06:58

My Heaviest Suitcase Contains My Heart
Cassie58 said:

Beautifully penned poem Teddy. Regrets are painful, acceptance the first step on the pathway to healing. Letting go can eventually be a sweet release. Easy to say, far harder to do.

January 24th, 2024 06:29

Artist
Bella Shepard said:

Love is your pallate, your brush, your canvas, and you use it beautifully in this poem. The portrait reflects the depth and breadth and height, to steal a phrase, that your love can reach. Exquisite!

January 23rd, 2024 15:57

Artist
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful loving words Teddy.

Andy

January 23rd, 2024 02:21

Artist
Cassie58 said:

A love poem that warms the heart. Beautifully penned Teddy.

January 22nd, 2024 21:47

Artist
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work Teddy.

January 22nd, 2024 21:04

Bukowski’s Muse
Neville said:



with this, or to be even more precise, with these words, you have reached some kind of poetic zenith .. inchiostro sorprendente ma\'am ..

Neville

January 22nd, 2024 02:16



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