Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Lacrime
peto said:
Bloodshot and teary
Says more than a million words could
Deepest condolences
September 7th, 2023 16:34
peto said:
Bloodshot and teary
Says more than a million words could
Deepest condolences
September 7th, 2023 16:34
Lacrime
sorenbarrett said:
So true, each one as different as the print of the eye. Proof that short is best a powerful statement.
September 7th, 2023 14:59
sorenbarrett said:
So true, each one as different as the print of the eye. Proof that short is best a powerful statement.
September 7th, 2023 14:59
Lacrime
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Teddy, You pack into three lines the hopes, fears, happys, sads, pain, love, that are a lifetime. The eyes are truly the window of the soul, as you have so beautifully written! May your eyes always shine and your tears be those of joy!
September 7th, 2023 14:12
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Teddy, You pack into three lines the hopes, fears, happys, sads, pain, love, that are a lifetime. The eyes are truly the window of the soul, as you have so beautifully written! May your eyes always shine and your tears be those of joy!
September 7th, 2023 14:12
Lacrime
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Yep, as I look into KPs eyes, I see a botox story! lol.
September 7th, 2023 07:49
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Yep, as I look into KPs eyes, I see a botox story! lol.
September 7th, 2023 07:49
Lacrime
Doggerel Dave said:
Saw this as \"lachrymose\" and in the end wasn\'t far off the mark.....
September 7th, 2023 06:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Saw this as \"lachrymose\" and in the end wasn\'t far off the mark.....
September 7th, 2023 06:47
Lacrime
Neville said:
eye knew that my petit lacrimal duct ..
and I swear this is perfect ❤️
September 7th, 2023 04:31
Neville said:
eye knew that my petit lacrimal duct ..
and I swear this is perfect ❤️
September 7th, 2023 04:31
Lacrime
LIZ said:
Absolutely! And in my case....you have to dig deep to truly see it!!! Loved this one!!! 💖
September 7th, 2023 04:27
LIZ said:
Absolutely! And in my case....you have to dig deep to truly see it!!! Loved this one!!! 💖
September 7th, 2023 04:27
Invention of Laughter
Bella Shepard said:
Inventing the time machine could be a lot like Forrest Gump\'s box of chocolates \"You never know what you\'re going to get\". For myself, I\'d have to say the 60\"s, when I was young and on the cusp of discovering the world, and who I was in it. You pose a real philosophical quandry in a few short lines, for the twists and turns of life are never in plain sight. You\'ve made me think real hard my friend, and I think I\'ll take the rest of the day off to contemplate. lol
September 6th, 2023 14:07
Bella Shepard said:
Inventing the time machine could be a lot like Forrest Gump\'s box of chocolates \"You never know what you\'re going to get\". For myself, I\'d have to say the 60\"s, when I was young and on the cusp of discovering the world, and who I was in it. You pose a real philosophical quandry in a few short lines, for the twists and turns of life are never in plain sight. You\'ve made me think real hard my friend, and I think I\'ll take the rest of the day off to contemplate. lol
September 6th, 2023 14:07
Invention of Laughter
sorenbarrett said:
Liked the picture and the poem, short but to the point. My time machine is my dreams and it has been there for a long time.
September 6th, 2023 11:10
sorenbarrett said:
Liked the picture and the poem, short but to the point. My time machine is my dreams and it has been there for a long time.
September 6th, 2023 11:10
Invention of Laughter
orchidee said:
Good write Doctor, erm, Who - erm, Teddy!
September 6th, 2023 05:40
orchidee said:
Good write Doctor, erm, Who - erm, Teddy!
September 6th, 2023 05:40
Invention of Laughter
aDarkerMind said:
would it be ok to go back and change certain things? I wonder;
go back and share a drink with Dylan Thomas....yes;
go back and marry Sylvia Plath...yes;
what else I wonder;
September 6th, 2023 05:00
aDarkerMind said:
would it be ok to go back and change certain things? I wonder;
go back and share a drink with Dylan Thomas....yes;
go back and marry Sylvia Plath...yes;
what else I wonder;
September 6th, 2023 05:00
Invention of Laughter
Neville said:
funny that .. and there I was thinking it was just me ❤️
September 6th, 2023 04:40
Neville said:
funny that .. and there I was thinking it was just me ❤️
September 6th, 2023 04:40
Invention of Laughter
peto said:
I\'d go into the past an hour
Get back the time I\'ve already been thinking of this
You can be a torment Teddy lol
September 6th, 2023 04:21
peto said:
I\'d go into the past an hour
Get back the time I\'ve already been thinking of this
You can be a torment Teddy lol
September 6th, 2023 04:21
Invention of Laughter
LIZ said:
Ohhhh you\'re in the creative mind vibe! If the time machine looks like the one on the picture I\'m in! 😁 magical!! 💖
September 6th, 2023 03:00
LIZ said:
Ohhhh you\'re in the creative mind vibe! If the time machine looks like the one on the picture I\'m in! 😁 magical!! 💖
September 6th, 2023 03:00
Blank Sheet
Bella Shepard said:
OMG! \"keys from a past life that were once
finely tuned to perfection
now playing a blank sheet of music
I am silent
I am blind
I am lost.\"
You have found perfection in this piece, the poem entwined with this beautiful picture. You amaze me dear friend, over and over again.
September 5th, 2023 13:46
Bella Shepard said:
OMG! \"keys from a past life that were once
finely tuned to perfection
now playing a blank sheet of music
I am silent
I am blind
I am lost.\"
You have found perfection in this piece, the poem entwined with this beautiful picture. You amaze me dear friend, over and over again.
September 5th, 2023 13:46
Blank Sheet
Caring dove said:
Sad yet Beautiful words , teddy 🙂🌸 like the feel to this piece of writing .. like the mention of that piano
September 5th, 2023 08:05
Caring dove said:
Sad yet Beautiful words , teddy 🙂🌸 like the feel to this piece of writing .. like the mention of that piano
September 5th, 2023 08:05
Blank Sheet
Neville said:
Ah but thou art kintsugi .. a phoenix and my very dearest Teddy ❤️ so perfectly poemed .. Neville ❤️
September 5th, 2023 04:42
Neville said:
Ah but thou art kintsugi .. a phoenix and my very dearest Teddy ❤️ so perfectly poemed .. Neville ❤️
September 5th, 2023 04:42
Blank Sheet
orchidee said:
I never knew it was like this for us - you and me! 🤣
Do shut up Orchi, says Fido! lol.
September 5th, 2023 03:09
orchidee said:
I never knew it was like this for us - you and me! 🤣
Do shut up Orchi, says Fido! lol.
September 5th, 2023 03:09
Blank Sheet
LIZ said:
Beautifully broken! But you know, I\'ve learned that during that solo performance, insight comes in. So much comes to light....if we allow it!! Loved it! 💖
September 5th, 2023 02:33
LIZ said:
Beautifully broken! But you know, I\'ve learned that during that solo performance, insight comes in. So much comes to light....if we allow it!! Loved it! 💖
September 5th, 2023 02:33
Tiger Heart
Bella Shepard said:
Love is a feeling that combines so many different emotions, from high to low, which you express beautifully in this poem. Your tiger is definitely burning bright here. You also inspired me to read Blake\'s \"The Tyger\", and for that I also thank you.
September 4th, 2023 13:23
Bella Shepard said:
Love is a feeling that combines so many different emotions, from high to low, which you express beautifully in this poem. Your tiger is definitely burning bright here. You also inspired me to read Blake\'s \"The Tyger\", and for that I also thank you.
September 4th, 2023 13:23
Empty Sky
Parisab said:
You are still looking up in the sky for a certain airplane-your sentiments are as big as the sky today…
September 4th, 2023 12:52
Parisab said:
You are still looking up in the sky for a certain airplane-your sentiments are as big as the sky today…
September 4th, 2023 12:52
Tiger Heart
Accidental Poet said:
And may those stories adventures and memories put a smile on your face and in your heart. ☺️
September 4th, 2023 07:53
Accidental Poet said:
And may those stories adventures and memories put a smile on your face and in your heart. ☺️
September 4th, 2023 07:53
Tiger Heart
L. B. Mek said:
\'Tyger, Tyger burning Bright!\'
indeed our wise Poetess
roar loud n proud, leave behind
a fiercely defiant blaze
to inspire a generation of love..
such a great write
(ermm
kinda unrelated
but i git a box of Frosties cornflakes
this weekend, a nostalgic
treat
and yes, it still tastes
GrRReaTTttt)
😁
ahem.. \'thanks for putting up with me\'
hope you n yours
have a great week of holiday fun
stay safe
September 4th, 2023 03:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'Tyger, Tyger burning Bright!\'
indeed our wise Poetess
roar loud n proud, leave behind
a fiercely defiant blaze
to inspire a generation of love..
such a great write
(ermm
kinda unrelated
but i git a box of Frosties cornflakes
this weekend, a nostalgic
treat
and yes, it still tastes
GrRReaTTttt)
😁
ahem.. \'thanks for putting up with me\'
hope you n yours
have a great week of holiday fun
stay safe
September 4th, 2023 03:59
Empty Sky
L. B. Mek said:
(such a poignantly moody Poem
dear Poetess and please
forgive my dreary musings below kind friend
your ink inspires my honesty, a little too
effectively..
lol)
airports, are a cruel kind of gateway
to our muse of possibility and dreams
in an instant, we\'re sky high and free
and that very instant
we feel that cruel distance, singeing
that widening gap in our hearts...
(this is why i don\'t do goodbyes
I give everything i have
in the Time i\'m gifted with
the kind souls that enter my life
and when cruel fate comes around
I simply disappear
it has been this way all my life, a kindness
of sorts, since
i leave behind little but fragments
to remember me by)
but to me
every memory visits crystal clear
decades
after finality visits my cherished relationships..
but these wet eyes, realise
to feel this way, i must have loved so abundantly
and so gratefully, i shall carry these scarring
mementos
till that hurrah breath, grants a most finite
sigh of relief..
till then we reminisce and 🍻
September 4th, 2023 03:52
L. B. Mek said:
(such a poignantly moody Poem
dear Poetess and please
forgive my dreary musings below kind friend
your ink inspires my honesty, a little too
effectively..
lol)
airports, are a cruel kind of gateway
to our muse of possibility and dreams
in an instant, we\'re sky high and free
and that very instant
we feel that cruel distance, singeing
that widening gap in our hearts...
(this is why i don\'t do goodbyes
I give everything i have
in the Time i\'m gifted with
the kind souls that enter my life
and when cruel fate comes around
I simply disappear
it has been this way all my life, a kindness
of sorts, since
i leave behind little but fragments
to remember me by)
but to me
every memory visits crystal clear
decades
after finality visits my cherished relationships..
but these wet eyes, realise
to feel this way, i must have loved so abundantly
and so gratefully, i shall carry these scarring
mementos
till that hurrah breath, grants a most finite
sigh of relief..
till then we reminisce and 🍻
September 4th, 2023 03:52
Tiger Heart
Teddy.15 said:
William Blake\'s poem has had so much inspiration on me Tyger Tyger burning bright in the forest of the night. I am a tiger 🐅 lol 🤣
September 4th, 2023 02:35
Teddy.15 said:
William Blake\'s poem has had so much inspiration on me Tyger Tyger burning bright in the forest of the night. I am a tiger 🐅 lol 🤣
September 4th, 2023 02:35
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