Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



A Very Fine Romance
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good fun words Teddy.

Andy

February 18th, 2024 02:22

A Very Fine Romance
Doggerel Dave said:

So he didn\'t get a boner after all? No further comment - empathy only goes so far.....🤣

February 17th, 2024 23:57

A Very Fine Romance
Thomas W Case said:

Wow. This one id different for you. I love it.

February 17th, 2024 15:51

A Very Fine Romance
Jerry Reynolds said:

Oh yes, Teddy. You have a couple of good characters there. They could have a pint and wash their feet.

February 17th, 2024 10:36

A Very Fine Romance
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

lol 😂 I needed this today! Hopefully they are still together..

February 17th, 2024 10:10

A Very Fine Romance
Neville said:


and would you believe after all that he still preferred Bendy Wendy .. she was far more flexible and in lots of ways .. ❤️

February 17th, 2024 08:58

Indecent Proposal
sorenbarrett said:

Always a fan of Shakespeare and many of his lines, I have wondered how he had such an expansive vocabulary\' This poem rings true and I too have felt how wonderful it would be to be able to get a lesson or two from the greatest, but then it would be like Mozart trying to teach me piano, a waste of his time. Your meter carries one along this poem which is enhanced by the rhyme that is pleasing to the ear. Shakespeare did not always rhyme. Maybe you could teach him a thing or two. Lovely poem Teddy with a thought dear to the heart of many a poet.

February 17th, 2024 06:09

Fantasia
Neville said:



almost the same thing happened to me a while back .. I thought I was playing a sitar .. opened my eyes and was plucking a chicken .. ❤️



February 17th, 2024 03:52

Fantasia
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful fun words Teddy, did you mange to finish the piece of music?

Andy

https://youtu.be/dXa8my9pb5g?si=9QK7F4IqBt_yqDyv

February 17th, 2024 01:50

Fantasia
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work. Excellent.

February 17th, 2024 01:17

Fantasia
sorenbarrett said:

You had me. I myself was thinking of when I was playing piano. I never became all that proficient in that my teacher refused to teach me blues when I was a child. Then the end or your poem hit me and the title made sense and I realized I had been doing the same as I read it. Very nice

February 16th, 2024 15:25

Fantasia
Kieron said:

A great twist! Like it :)

February 16th, 2024 14:05

Fantasia
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good to read one of your poems Teddy. It has been some hard days. I need a good fantasy.

February 16th, 2024 09:38

Fantasia
Tom Dylan said:

Just fantastic! I\'d give this a standing ovation if I could. A great build up and the last line just nailed it! Brilliant!

February 16th, 2024 03:15

Fantasia
Parisab said:

Brava! Fatto a Firenze:)

February 16th, 2024 02:53

Rapture of my Heart
Thomas W Case said:

Sublime Teddy.

February 15th, 2024 16:36

No One Else Can See Them
sorenbarrett said:

Haunting. Yes I too at times find myself talking to such ghosts of people that I once knew and are no longer here. Lovely

February 15th, 2024 13:57

Rapture of my Heart
Bella Shepard said:

Simply elegant! Perfect picture, and perfect words. Happy Valentine\'s day dear Teddy!

February 14th, 2024 15:51

Rapture of my Heart
Doggerel Dave said:

Quite possibly a good enough excuse, Teddy...... 😇!!!

February 14th, 2024 07:23

Rapture of my Heart
Neville said:



I don\'t think it is just because at all .. I sense it is f ... 🌹x

February 14th, 2024 04:07

Rapture of my Heart
sorenbarrett said:

Yes I could tell this by the nature of your poems. A poem appropriate for the day. Tasteful, poignant, and timely.

February 14th, 2024 04:05

Rapture of my Heart
Tom Dylan said:

A short but powerful poem, Teddy. :-)

February 14th, 2024 03:17

Rapture of my Heart
Goldfinch60 said:

Such strong words Teddy, may that love be always so.

Andy

February 14th, 2024 02:52

Dante and I
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Teddy, those last three lines mean so much to me and my life at the moment.

Andy

February 14th, 2024 02:19

Dante and I
Thomas W Case said:

That is what love does. Brilliant, Teddy.

February 14th, 2024 00:11

Dante and I
Neville said:



Having read both his best known works albeit a long time ago now ..
I can see why and where and how you contracted such an infatuation .. remarkably well penned my friend ..🌹

February 13th, 2024 14:20

Dante and I
Doggerel Dave said:

I feel I should know Dante\'s work (which I don\'t) in order to fully appreciate the depth of your? passion here, Teddy. but in the meantime.....ooh aha.......

February 13th, 2024 07:12

Dante and I
sorenbarrett said:

Here the image of flames spreads from love to hell and even heaven where the image of burning in eternal glory comes to mind. This thread that unites this piece is like a wick in a candle conducting the reader from beginning to end. Brilliant !

February 13th, 2024 05:41

Dante and I
Tom Dylan said:

A really powerful poem, Teddy. Love the last lines.

February 13th, 2024 03:15

From The Underside Of The Wild Roses
Thomas W Case said:

So true. Great work Teddy.

February 12th, 2024 15:36



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