Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Caring dove said:

Great writing teddy šŸ™‚

A lot of beautiful words in this

Liked the read ))

I donā€™t often write about romance but maybe I should try

really like how you have mentioned a lot of nature in this .. and you have used the word ā€˜ thee ā€˜ it kind of has an old fashioned feel to this ..

Thanks for sharing šŸ™‚

June 28th, 2023 01:32

What Of Love?
Michael Edwards said:

Jeanne and I visited Verona and saw Aida - magical memories and - yes we saw the balcony. Poetically a real fine write to be proud of.

June 27th, 2023 15:03

What Of Love?
Caring dove said:

A lovely writing , teddy šŸ™‚ like the mention of nature in this

June 27th, 2023 13:58

What Of Love?
Neville said:


the image that heads this page reminds me of a famous balcony in Verona .. the fine words that sit beneath it .. remind me of just how much I love this art we share .. šŸŒ¹

June 27th, 2023 13:12

What Of Love?
orchidee said:

A fine write T.

June 27th, 2023 12:51

Summoning of a Gentle Spirit
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Dear Teddy,
Losing our loved ones is painful.
Cherishing the beautiful memories will ease our pain.
My heart is with you.

LaurašŸŒ»

June 27th, 2023 10:17

Summoning of a Gentle Spirit
LIZ said:

The pain of loss doesn\'t really go away does it? Not completely....the memory is still there. We can forget for a second, learn to live with it, but life has a cruel way of reminding us, and taking us right back to that place. Thank you for sharing!

June 26th, 2023 12:27

Summoning of a Gentle Spirit
Caring dove said:

Like the mention of the lake in this .. itā€™s sad tho .. when we feel so pained / grieved

June 26th, 2023 11:33

Summoning of a Gentle Spirit
Neville said:


Incredible ink Teddy .. be proud of this one my friend .. I know I would be and indeed, I am for you ... Neville

June 26th, 2023 11:22

Summoning of a Gentle Spirit
orchidee said:

Good write T.
But you can forget about me. I\'m never gentle to KP! She reminds me to go fishing - for trouts, old ones! heehee. I\'m cruel. lol.

June 26th, 2023 10:42

My Gentle Soul Can Surely Rest
Caring dove said:

I think we are very lucky if we have a lot of good amazing memories .. because I know that some people can struggle / hurt a lot in life .

I like your writing )) nicely expressed

The red shoes out of the wizard of oz lol .. great film

June 26th, 2023 03:43

My Gentle Soul Can Surely Rest
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!
(knock on those red shoes
and let yourself glide
to a reality that\'s sure to provide
meaning and worth
for each breath and scar, cherished
sincere)

June 26th, 2023 03:40

My Gentle Soul Can Surely Rest
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Dear Teddy,

ā€¦ā€˜the bad times I have gladly tossedā€™ā€¦

The bad times are the pastā€¦
where they will stay.
Your focus is the present to be enjoyed to the fullest ā£ļø

Laura šŸŒ»


June 25th, 2023 11:01

My Gentle Soul Can Surely Rest
Goldfinch60 said:

Those bad times are so inconsequential when you consider the good times in life Teddy.

Andy

June 25th, 2023 01:43

My Gentle Soul Can Surely Rest
Neville said:



its a real treat to read you again too .. now maybe at least one of us can rest easy .. ā¤ļø

June 25th, 2023 00:47

My Gentle Soul Can Surely Rest
orchidee said:

Good write T.
Me own gentle soul cannot rest, since KP. It\'s been shattered, damaged, irreparable. I\'m all in a heap emotionally! heehee.

June 24th, 2023 11:21

It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
L. B. Mek said:

\'No man presumes such tender gasp of breath

Such beauty could send my lungs to their death\'

\'Saved the sweet honey from beeā€™s who have stung

Dusk until dawn, to your love I have clung\'
Brilliant!!!
(hope you have a romantic weekend, dear Poetess)

June 23rd, 2023 03:03

A Gentlemanā€™s Secret
Poetic Dan said:

Nature gives each other no name! They just know who\'s a friend again and again! Love the feeling behind this and another pleasant read!
Have a wonderful day

June 22nd, 2023 06:53

It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Poetic Dan said:

Wow what a rhyme and so nice to read in the sunshine..I really should come back more for your special kind of vibe!
Thank you

June 22nd, 2023 06:50

It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Dear Teddy,

A beautifully written and illustrated gem of a poem. I enjoyed the read very much.

Grazie Mille. šŸ«¶šŸ»šŸ¤—

LaurašŸŒ»

June 20th, 2023 10:13

It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
orchidee said:

Next thing is - Is that Me, Myself, or I? lol.

June 20th, 2023 07:01

It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Accidental Poet said:

A masterpiece work of poetry my dear poetess. šŸ‘

June 20th, 2023 07:00

It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
orchidee said:

I is liking this poem. I is maybe not gramatically correct (lol) but there are times when we say \'I be.....\'
I talk some rubbish sometimes. lol.

June 20th, 2023 02:00

A Gentlemanā€™s Secret
L. B. Mek said:

the more intimate, a connection
the more we want to keep it, loose
unchanging, undefined, unrefined
just right, for us..
(I so relate, dear Poetess
a soothing read
we small pebbles
leaning on each other
swimming along
in our rivers of fate
mapping our legacies)

June 19th, 2023 02:05

A Gentlemanā€™s Secret
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Dear Teddy,
Thatā€™s amazing that you still donā€™t know his name. I imagine that bus ride must be more enjoyable while talking to your friend.
Thank you for sharing your your ā€œbus rideā€.

Buon weekend.

Laura šŸŒ»

June 17th, 2023 08:56

A Gentlemanā€™s Secret
Goldfinch60 said:

Some of us old codgers are nice Teddy. LOL

Andy

June 17th, 2023 01:49

A Gentlemanā€™s Secret
orchidee said:

So you sat next to me - you knows my name by now! lol.

June 16th, 2023 14:33

A Gentlemanā€™s Secret
Caring dove said:

Some people are so nice arenā€™t they ))

Nice writing , teddy ))

June 16th, 2023 12:13

Caged Bird
L. B. Mek said:

One of your very best! dear Poetess
(and that saying something)
thank you!
\'I must reject these tiresome thoughts
That savage my taunted mind
Reduce them to a petal of hope
With harmony entwined\'
Amen!

June 16th, 2023 02:39

Broken Mirror
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!
(oh how I missed your poetry
most cherished Poetess)
thank you!

June 16th, 2023 02:36



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