Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



Worn Out Shoes
Neville said:


put on those red shoes and dance .. I just wanna watch you sway .. no touchin .. but this mistress T is very touching indeed ... Neville ❤️


August 8th, 2023 04:20

Worn Out Shoes
orchidee said:

Yep, KP goes out on nightly dances with Mr B. lol.

August 8th, 2023 04:09

Reflecting Upon One\'s Very Own Finale
orchidee said:

Is she human?! lol.

August 7th, 2023 13:01

Reflecting Upon One\'s Very Own Finale
orchidee said:

....not that I\'m a mysogynist though (woman-hater). it\'s just that I detest old trouts. lol.

August 7th, 2023 11:39

Reflecting Upon One\'s Very Own Finale
orchidee said:

Hope those worms have to wait a good while. They will taste KP and spit her out, saying \'What\'s all this botox muck?!\' lol.
If she goes before me, I will chuck her on the compost heap. lol.
I\'m sooooo horrible to her. Fido says to me \'Don\'t ya just love it though?\' lol.

August 7th, 2023 11:38

Reflecting Upon One\'s Very Own Finale
LIZ said:

I love this!!! Once we\'re gone there\'s nothing we can do. But we have now, and we can choose to live with intention. Whatever that looks like! Beautiful!

August 7th, 2023 11:19

Reflecting Upon One\'s Very Own Finale
AuburnScribbler said:

This is a beautiful poetic reminder, of the importance of individualism.

Brilliantly worded Teddy.15, and may all our finales sparkle, just as much as our journeys did.

Bravo, and I hope that all is well!

August 7th, 2023 11:08

Reflecting Upon One\'s Very Own Finale
Neville said:



I once knew a drunken prostitute who previously painted for a living and wrote some pretty amazing poetry .. They called her never say no Nancy and when I was homeless many years ago, she let me sleep on her sofa for a few nights .. She had a heart as big as a planet and I have written about her often over the years ... I very much like todays offering Teddy .. please excuse my waffle ... Neville ❤️


August 7th, 2023 10:48

Reflecting Upon One\'s Very Own Finale
Jerry Reynolds said:

A fine write, Teddy.

August 7th, 2023 08:23

Observing a Miracle
sorenbarrett said:

I once had a patient whose wife had died several years before. Yet every day he cooked his meal and set a place for her, served her plate, after cleared the table, washed the dishes and put them away just as if she were still there. A touching poem of missing someone that had been a part of one\'s life.

August 5th, 2023 17:49

Observing a Miracle
Neville said:



quite possibly the most moving post that I have read in a long time .. ❤️

August 5th, 2023 12:38

Observing a Miracle
MendedFences27 said:

An absolutely wonder poem of observation and imagination. \"As every gentleman does,\" establishes his identity as the forlorn lover, a classic figure that you use well. Your closing is equal to the task and adds a balance for the rreader. I simply loved this - Phil A.

August 5th, 2023 10:31

Observing a Miracle
Sunsetmet said:

This is a lovely cafe style piece line by line what meaning it has where you sit and smiles and thoughts come to mind spiritually a connection great gratitude and affection lovely written Teddy

August 5th, 2023 08:38

Observing a Miracle
orchidee said:

A fine write Teddy.
Argghhh, KP might stay with me forever! lol.

August 5th, 2023 06:33

Observing a Miracle
LIZ said:

When true love hits, even when
the loved one is gone, their love stays with us forever; and it can\'t help but shine through. At least that\'s what I got from this one! Very nice! ❤️

August 5th, 2023 05:26

Observing a Miracle
Bobby O said:

Yay the privilege of loss for
It proves we once held the most

August 5th, 2023 03:43

Observing a Miracle
Caring dove said:

And we all need those type of people .. those that help us smile 🙂

That’s sad about his wife but to feel like she’s with him .. ( in spirit atleast )

A nicely expressed writing , teddy



August 5th, 2023 03:32

Just a Dream I Had
Teddy.15 said:

Nice to meet you pop64, so very happy to know your thoughts. I actually loved writing this. Thank you. 💖

August 4th, 2023 11:43

Just a Dream I Had
Pop64 said:

The imagery and detail in this is amazing as you tell your story, your dream. A wonderful read!

August 4th, 2023 11:38

The day of New To You Belongs
Neville said:



sounds, feels and reads like a little bit of heaven .. Madagascar is on my wish list by the way ... ❤️

August 4th, 2023 07:30

The day of New To You Belongs
L. B. Mek said:

ohhh, paint me jealous what a picturesque view
so happy for you, that must have been ideal
\'a sight to see and to behold
to see this theatre light unfold\'
and grace our glass lives
peeking out from our rooflights
we embrace our new day
inhaling hope, breath taking flight
Brilliant!
thank you dear Poetess, what a perfect read
to get our weekend started right!
lol

August 4th, 2023 05:34

Just a Dream I Had
L. B. Mek said:

such a fun read, dear Poetess
you n elvis, share a few heated canvases..
lucky fella
decades dead and still
getting all the ladeis..
lol

August 4th, 2023 05:27

The Perfect Painting
L. B. Mek said:

within hues of a day\'s grace
I surmise meaning in my worth
am I too shades of brightness
contained in a pulse of blinding
hope
(see what you went and done did,
inspired me
to scribble me feeble poetic reply
lol)
thank you! wise Poet
I read and learn

August 4th, 2023 05:19

“Sommelier Full-Time Wanted”
L. B. Mek said:

congrats on your new job
..what?
what better qualifications could they ask for?
lol
(that picture 🤣)
thank you!

August 4th, 2023 05:14

The day of New To You Belongs
LIZ said:

A new day to enjoy life!! CHOICES! I\'m attracted to the moon though! 🌙 I prefer being up at night. Have a great day Teddy!! 💖

August 4th, 2023 03:06

The day of New To You Belongs
orchidee said:

A fine write Teddy.
Now me next poem: \'Another day of misery with KP\'. lol.
Not that I see her much in person - only in the papers, on TV, etc, etc.

August 4th, 2023 02:03

Just a Dream I Had
Goldfinch60 said:

Another ‘if only..’ Teddy.

Andy

August 4th, 2023 00:40

Just a Dream I Had
MendedFences27 said:

This is what Elvis is doing these days, traveling around filling women\'s dreams with thoughts of love and romance while being serenaded. He\'s the dream-troubadour.
A wonderful poem about a colorful dream, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

August 3rd, 2023 14:01

Just a Dream I Had
AuburnScribbler said:

A wonderful, picturesque and heartwarming piece of poetry here Teddy.15, and it\'s also a great homage to the King, even if it is a fantastical work.

Also, the accompanying visual, is a very nice piece of artwork.

Bravo, and I hope that all is well.





August 3rd, 2023 11:38

Just a Dream I Had
Caring dove said:

Great writing teddy love the mention of the lemonade lol 🙂

I
Once saw a Elvis impersonator .. a long time ago when I was volunteering in a charity shop ..

Seemed quite good ..

August 3rd, 2023 11:18



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