Comments received on poems by 13LaurenD
White Cars
Alan R said:
And one day I will be able to look at those white cars and feel absolutely nothing...
I am certain!
February 12th, 2024 13:17
Alan R said:
And one day I will be able to look at those white cars and feel absolutely nothing...
I am certain!
February 12th, 2024 13:17
I Didn\'t Deserve That
Thoughtless said:
It sounds like the arsonist liked to put out their own fires, metaphorically speaking.
February 5th, 2024 18:18
Thoughtless said:
It sounds like the arsonist liked to put out their own fires, metaphorically speaking.
February 5th, 2024 18:18
Fuck You
pkgboy49 said:
You really let them have it !! Now I hope you feel better for it . Seek peace however you may find it .
February 1st, 2024 19:34
pkgboy49 said:
You really let them have it !! Now I hope you feel better for it . Seek peace however you may find it .
February 1st, 2024 19:34
Fuck You
jarcher54 said:
Such a brilliant catalogue of insults, cheap shots, and boorish behavior... I love this!!
January 29th, 2024 22:19
jarcher54 said:
Such a brilliant catalogue of insults, cheap shots, and boorish behavior... I love this!!
January 29th, 2024 22:19
Fuck You
John said:
Very powerful poem, thanks for sharing, hopefully the tide turns for you, keep up the great poetry
January 29th, 2024 10:20
John said:
Very powerful poem, thanks for sharing, hopefully the tide turns for you, keep up the great poetry
January 29th, 2024 10:20
Fuck You
Lorenz said:
It\'s sometime very therapeutic to spit out your inner frustrations ,but does this have anything to do with poetic work ?
January 29th, 2024 09:43
Lorenz said:
It\'s sometime very therapeutic to spit out your inner frustrations ,but does this have anything to do with poetic work ?
January 29th, 2024 09:43
I Think You Know
pkgboy49 said:
Sounds like things are looking up. I\'m happy for you .
January 18th, 2024 21:33
pkgboy49 said:
Sounds like things are looking up. I\'m happy for you .
January 18th, 2024 21:33
I Think You Know
Accidental Poet said:
Sometimes love comes easily, sometimes not. And still, sometimes you just have to let love lead the way. I\'ve been doing so for 56 years. And I\'m still in love with her, since 10 years old. 😊
January 16th, 2024 09:42
Accidental Poet said:
Sometimes love comes easily, sometimes not. And still, sometimes you just have to let love lead the way. I\'ve been doing so for 56 years. And I\'m still in love with her, since 10 years old. 😊
January 16th, 2024 09:42
Break My Heart
peet said:
So beautiful. The pain of separating is unfathomable, particularly when you love someone dearly.
January 7th, 2024 12:11
peet said:
So beautiful. The pain of separating is unfathomable, particularly when you love someone dearly.
January 7th, 2024 12:11
New Year, New Me
pkgboy49 said:
Bold and inspiring in its honesty ,,It\'s going to be your best year ...!!
January 6th, 2024 09:06
pkgboy49 said:
Bold and inspiring in its honesty ,,It\'s going to be your best year ...!!
January 6th, 2024 09:06
New Year, New Me
Cassie58 said:
Such a positive outlook. You go girl. The new you. Cast off the negatives of yesterday and wear your new clothes. Happy new year Lauren.
January 1st, 2024 08:55
Cassie58 said:
Such a positive outlook. You go girl. The new you. Cast off the negatives of yesterday and wear your new clothes. Happy new year Lauren.
January 1st, 2024 08:55
Stronger
Bobby O said:
Much wisdom here. Impressive dichotomy of humble and brave. Throughout the piece I felt an insistence that proved uplifting. My props.
December 27th, 2023 00:21
Bobby O said:
Much wisdom here. Impressive dichotomy of humble and brave. Throughout the piece I felt an insistence that proved uplifting. My props.
December 27th, 2023 00:21
I Don\'t Care
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Great self realization.
November 5th, 2023 19:05
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Great self realization.
November 5th, 2023 19:05
You Mess With The Wrong One
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
I could feel the poem.. great one Lauren
October 30th, 2023 02:31
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
I could feel the poem.. great one Lauren
October 30th, 2023 02:31
I Wish I Could Hate You
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Sometimes we chose not to listen to others but our heart.. but that’s where we go wrong . Nice poem.
October 13th, 2023 23:27
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Sometimes we chose not to listen to others but our heart.. but that’s where we go wrong . Nice poem.
October 13th, 2023 23:27
What love is
David Wakeling said:
I have read 10 million \"failed\" relationship poems.This is perhaps the most \"wordy\". Still it is only one side of the story.What about the poor guy you drove mad with your unreasonable demands?
October 8th, 2023 16:37
David Wakeling said:
I have read 10 million \"failed\" relationship poems.This is perhaps the most \"wordy\". Still it is only one side of the story.What about the poor guy you drove mad with your unreasonable demands?
October 8th, 2023 16:37
Just Like That, We Have To Start All Over
Bobby O said:
Great motion that leads to a very satisfying finish. Lots of work and thought and it’s a winner
September 10th, 2023 14:57
Bobby O said:
Great motion that leads to a very satisfying finish. Lots of work and thought and it’s a winner
September 10th, 2023 14:57
I Forgive You
pkgboy49 said:
To err is human ............
To forgive......Divine.
What an excellent idea for a poem and what an unique approach. JF
September 8th, 2023 11:44
pkgboy49 said:
To err is human ............
To forgive......Divine.
What an excellent idea for a poem and what an unique approach. JF
September 8th, 2023 11:44
I Can Only Blame Myself
peto said:
Love is blind Lauren
Can only look the other way for so long
You will have that movie with a different character
This was only a trailer
The rhyme is superb
September 3rd, 2023 01:14
peto said:
Love is blind Lauren
Can only look the other way for so long
You will have that movie with a different character
This was only a trailer
The rhyme is superb
September 3rd, 2023 01:14
Life Is Precious
pkgboy49 said:
Sometimes someone else\'s difficulties will certainly awaken us to an awareness of our blessings. The poem shows a generous concern for the misfortunes of others. ,Something we need to be reminded of frequently to offer our help and our empathy.
August 20th, 2023 11:23
pkgboy49 said:
Sometimes someone else\'s difficulties will certainly awaken us to an awareness of our blessings. The poem shows a generous concern for the misfortunes of others. ,Something we need to be reminded of frequently to offer our help and our empathy.
August 20th, 2023 11:23
Just Try It One More time
2781 said:
Come to Me, all you who labor and are heavy laden, and I will give you rest. Take My yoke upon you and learn from Me, for I am gentle and lowly in heart, and you will find rest for your souls. For My yoke is easy and My burden is light.\"
July 17th, 2023 09:24
2781 said:
Come to Me, all you who labor and are heavy laden, and I will give you rest. Take My yoke upon you and learn from Me, for I am gentle and lowly in heart, and you will find rest for your souls. For My yoke is easy and My burden is light.\"
July 17th, 2023 09:24
Just Try It One More time
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Just try it one more time” by 13LaurenD
There seems to be despair and despondency in your poem. You must never give up hope. Life is worth living. The night is terrible and gives you dark ideas. But each morning that starts is full of promises. Stay cheerful and remember that your friends are on your side. Be happy ! Soman Ragavan. 17 July, 2023. //
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July 17th, 2023 06:04
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Just try it one more time” by 13LaurenD
There seems to be despair and despondency in your poem. You must never give up hope. Life is worth living. The night is terrible and gives you dark ideas. But each morning that starts is full of promises. Stay cheerful and remember that your friends are on your side. Be happy ! Soman Ragavan. 17 July, 2023. //
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July 17th, 2023 06:04
Just Try It One More time
L. B. Mek said:
more power to you!
just remember
while you\'re disappointing
those parasites
there may be those, who
you inspire
by sharing your defiance
stay strong!
I for one am a witness
to your worth
July 17th, 2023 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
more power to you!
just remember
while you\'re disappointing
those parasites
there may be those, who
you inspire
by sharing your defiance
stay strong!
I for one am a witness
to your worth
July 17th, 2023 05:34
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