Comments received on poems by 13LaurenD
One Month
Bobby O said:
I love the way you expressed yourself with honesty and humility in your view reality. But it worries me I don’t know why he was the smart enough to stay but people who caused the problem a very rarely the people who resolve the problem. By that I mean , if you cajole him back with the possibility that your current bias won’t be strict enough to hold standards that he needs to meet. Delise the opening for her all over again and that is what worries me I don’t know you, but I’d like the way you write and so I think I know you and that would worry me if you gave him an easy in because your feelings are mushy or whatever better word you can think of . it is none of my business. so I apologize if I’ve offered too much opinion bottom line is I’d like the way you wrote the piece. Very cool.
March 6th, 2024 04:40
Bobby O said:
I love the way you expressed yourself with honesty and humility in your view reality. But it worries me I don’t know why he was the smart enough to stay but people who caused the problem a very rarely the people who resolve the problem. By that I mean , if you cajole him back with the possibility that your current bias won’t be strict enough to hold standards that he needs to meet. Delise the opening for her all over again and that is what worries me I don’t know you, but I’d like the way you write and so I think I know you and that would worry me if you gave him an easy in because your feelings are mushy or whatever better word you can think of . it is none of my business. so I apologize if I’ve offered too much opinion bottom line is I’d like the way you wrote the piece. Very cool.
March 6th, 2024 04:40
The Love I Deserve
Bobby O said:
It’s a-visit to sad and to authentic and to a past place valued such that a tinge of sarcasm almost pays an homage to a former closeness almost expressed in its own code. I really liked it.
March 6th, 2024 02:03
Bobby O said:
It’s a-visit to sad and to authentic and to a past place valued such that a tinge of sarcasm almost pays an homage to a former closeness almost expressed in its own code. I really liked it.
March 6th, 2024 02:03
The Love I Deserve
peto said:
Very emotional with stunning rhyme
Thoroughly enjoyed the read
March 5th, 2024 16:59
peto said:
Very emotional with stunning rhyme
Thoroughly enjoyed the read
March 5th, 2024 16:59
One Month
Cloie said:
This poem beautifully captures the raw emotions and complexities of heartbreak. The imagery and heartfelt expressions make it relatable to anyone who has experienced the pain of losing someone they love. It\'s a heartfelt expression of love, pain, and hope for reconciliation. Great work!
March 4th, 2024 12:38
Cloie said:
This poem beautifully captures the raw emotions and complexities of heartbreak. The imagery and heartfelt expressions make it relatable to anyone who has experienced the pain of losing someone they love. It\'s a heartfelt expression of love, pain, and hope for reconciliation. Great work!
March 4th, 2024 12:38
It Still Hurts
Cloie said:
Your path to healing is like a dance, with each step forward shining brightly despite setbacks. Keep shining, darlin\'! 🌟
February 28th, 2024 13:41
Cloie said:
Your path to healing is like a dance, with each step forward shining brightly despite setbacks. Keep shining, darlin\'! 🌟
February 28th, 2024 13:41
I Guess You Know
Meera Mere said:
\"But I have realized that with people like you, sometimes I need to play too,
To show you that I can do it just as good as you.\" Just nailed these lines. Your poem was seriously amazing.
February 27th, 2024 12:20
Meera Mere said:
\"But I have realized that with people like you, sometimes I need to play too,
To show you that I can do it just as good as you.\" Just nailed these lines. Your poem was seriously amazing.
February 27th, 2024 12:20
I Guess You Know
Neilton said:
That was impressive!You conveyed your feelings perfectly!!
February 27th, 2024 11:52
Neilton said:
That was impressive!You conveyed your feelings perfectly!!
February 27th, 2024 11:52
For The First Time In A While
Cassie58 said:
Life’s journey can certainly be a roller coaster of ups and downs. Lots of debris on the way that needs clearing. All sent to try us.if we are lucky we learn by our mistakes. I enjoyed reading you today Lauren.
February 26th, 2024 09:44
Cassie58 said:
Life’s journey can certainly be a roller coaster of ups and downs. Lots of debris on the way that needs clearing. All sent to try us.if we are lucky we learn by our mistakes. I enjoyed reading you today Lauren.
February 26th, 2024 09:44
Her
Bobby O said:
The quiz then the test and then he can find his arrogance confides with reward as he notes and misread your attention.
February 17th, 2024 04:51
Bobby O said:
The quiz then the test and then he can find his arrogance confides with reward as he notes and misread your attention.
February 17th, 2024 04:51
White Cars
Alan R said:
And one day I will be able to look at those white cars and feel absolutely nothing...
I am certain!
February 12th, 2024 13:17
Alan R said:
And one day I will be able to look at those white cars and feel absolutely nothing...
I am certain!
February 12th, 2024 13:17
I Didn\'t Deserve That
Thoughtless said:
It sounds like the arsonist liked to put out their own fires, metaphorically speaking.
February 5th, 2024 18:18
Thoughtless said:
It sounds like the arsonist liked to put out their own fires, metaphorically speaking.
February 5th, 2024 18:18
Fuck You
pkgboy49 said:
You really let them have it !! Now I hope you feel better for it . Seek peace however you may find it .
February 1st, 2024 19:34
pkgboy49 said:
You really let them have it !! Now I hope you feel better for it . Seek peace however you may find it .
February 1st, 2024 19:34
Fuck You
jarcher54 said:
Such a brilliant catalogue of insults, cheap shots, and boorish behavior... I love this!!
January 29th, 2024 22:19
jarcher54 said:
Such a brilliant catalogue of insults, cheap shots, and boorish behavior... I love this!!
January 29th, 2024 22:19
Fuck You
John said:
Very powerful poem, thanks for sharing, hopefully the tide turns for you, keep up the great poetry
January 29th, 2024 10:20
John said:
Very powerful poem, thanks for sharing, hopefully the tide turns for you, keep up the great poetry
January 29th, 2024 10:20
Fuck You
Lorenz said:
It\'s sometime very therapeutic to spit out your inner frustrations ,but does this have anything to do with poetic work ?
January 29th, 2024 09:43
Lorenz said:
It\'s sometime very therapeutic to spit out your inner frustrations ,but does this have anything to do with poetic work ?
January 29th, 2024 09:43
I Think You Know
pkgboy49 said:
Sounds like things are looking up. I\'m happy for you .
January 18th, 2024 21:33
pkgboy49 said:
Sounds like things are looking up. I\'m happy for you .
January 18th, 2024 21:33
I Think You Know
Accidental Poet said:
Sometimes love comes easily, sometimes not. And still, sometimes you just have to let love lead the way. I\'ve been doing so for 56 years. And I\'m still in love with her, since 10 years old. 😊
January 16th, 2024 09:42
Accidental Poet said:
Sometimes love comes easily, sometimes not. And still, sometimes you just have to let love lead the way. I\'ve been doing so for 56 years. And I\'m still in love with her, since 10 years old. 😊
January 16th, 2024 09:42
Break My Heart
peet said:
So beautiful. The pain of separating is unfathomable, particularly when you love someone dearly.
January 7th, 2024 12:11
peet said:
So beautiful. The pain of separating is unfathomable, particularly when you love someone dearly.
January 7th, 2024 12:11
New Year, New Me
pkgboy49 said:
Bold and inspiring in its honesty ,,It\'s going to be your best year ...!!
January 6th, 2024 09:06
pkgboy49 said:
Bold and inspiring in its honesty ,,It\'s going to be your best year ...!!
January 6th, 2024 09:06
New Year, New Me
Cassie58 said:
Such a positive outlook. You go girl. The new you. Cast off the negatives of yesterday and wear your new clothes. Happy new year Lauren.
January 1st, 2024 08:55
Cassie58 said:
Such a positive outlook. You go girl. The new you. Cast off the negatives of yesterday and wear your new clothes. Happy new year Lauren.
January 1st, 2024 08:55
Stronger
Bobby O said:
Much wisdom here. Impressive dichotomy of humble and brave. Throughout the piece I felt an insistence that proved uplifting. My props.
December 27th, 2023 00:21
Bobby O said:
Much wisdom here. Impressive dichotomy of humble and brave. Throughout the piece I felt an insistence that proved uplifting. My props.
December 27th, 2023 00:21
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