Comments received on poems by 13LaurenD
Break My Heart
peet said:
So beautiful. The pain of separating is unfathomable, particularly when you love someone dearly.
January 7th, 2024 12:11
peet said:
So beautiful. The pain of separating is unfathomable, particularly when you love someone dearly.
January 7th, 2024 12:11
New Year, New Me
pkgboy49 said:
Bold and inspiring in its honesty ,,It\'s going to be your best year ...!!
January 6th, 2024 09:06
pkgboy49 said:
Bold and inspiring in its honesty ,,It\'s going to be your best year ...!!
January 6th, 2024 09:06
New Year, New Me
Cassie58 said:
Such a positive outlook. You go girl. The new you. Cast off the negatives of yesterday and wear your new clothes. Happy new year Lauren.
January 1st, 2024 08:55
Cassie58 said:
Such a positive outlook. You go girl. The new you. Cast off the negatives of yesterday and wear your new clothes. Happy new year Lauren.
January 1st, 2024 08:55
Stronger
Bobby O said:
Much wisdom here. Impressive dichotomy of humble and brave. Throughout the piece I felt an insistence that proved uplifting. My props.
December 27th, 2023 00:21
Bobby O said:
Much wisdom here. Impressive dichotomy of humble and brave. Throughout the piece I felt an insistence that proved uplifting. My props.
December 27th, 2023 00:21
I Don\'t Care
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Great self realization.
November 5th, 2023 19:05
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Great self realization.
November 5th, 2023 19:05
You Mess With The Wrong One
ChrisLynđź•Š said:
I could feel the poem.. great one Lauren
October 30th, 2023 02:31
ChrisLynđź•Š said:
I could feel the poem.. great one Lauren
October 30th, 2023 02:31
I Wish I Could Hate You
ChrisLynđź•Š said:
Sometimes we chose not to listen to others but our heart.. but that’s where we go wrong . Nice poem.
October 13th, 2023 23:27
ChrisLynđź•Š said:
Sometimes we chose not to listen to others but our heart.. but that’s where we go wrong . Nice poem.
October 13th, 2023 23:27
What love is
David Wakeling said:
I have read 10 million \"failed\" relationship poems.This is perhaps the most \"wordy\". Still it is only one side of the story.What about the poor guy you drove mad with your unreasonable demands?
October 8th, 2023 16:37
David Wakeling said:
I have read 10 million \"failed\" relationship poems.This is perhaps the most \"wordy\". Still it is only one side of the story.What about the poor guy you drove mad with your unreasonable demands?
October 8th, 2023 16:37
Just Like That, We Have To Start All Over
Bobby O said:
Great motion that leads to a very satisfying finish. Lots of work and thought and it’s a winner
September 10th, 2023 14:57
Bobby O said:
Great motion that leads to a very satisfying finish. Lots of work and thought and it’s a winner
September 10th, 2023 14:57
I Forgive You
pkgboy49 said:
To err is human ............
To forgive......Divine.
What an excellent idea for a poem and what an unique approach. JF
September 8th, 2023 11:44
pkgboy49 said:
To err is human ............
To forgive......Divine.
What an excellent idea for a poem and what an unique approach. JF
September 8th, 2023 11:44
I Can Only Blame Myself
peto said:
Love is blind Lauren
Can only look the other way for so long
You will have that movie with a different character
This was only a trailer
The rhyme is superb
September 3rd, 2023 01:14
peto said:
Love is blind Lauren
Can only look the other way for so long
You will have that movie with a different character
This was only a trailer
The rhyme is superb
September 3rd, 2023 01:14
Life Is Precious
pkgboy49 said:
Sometimes someone else\'s difficulties will certainly awaken us to an awareness of our blessings. The poem shows a generous concern for the misfortunes of others. ,Something we need to be reminded of frequently to offer our help and our empathy.
August 20th, 2023 11:23
pkgboy49 said:
Sometimes someone else\'s difficulties will certainly awaken us to an awareness of our blessings. The poem shows a generous concern for the misfortunes of others. ,Something we need to be reminded of frequently to offer our help and our empathy.
August 20th, 2023 11:23
Just Try It One More time
2781 said:
Come to Me, all you who labor and are heavy laden, and I will give you rest. Take My yoke upon you and learn from Me, for I am gentle and lowly in heart, and you will find rest for your souls. For My yoke is easy and My burden is light.\"
July 17th, 2023 09:24
2781 said:
Come to Me, all you who labor and are heavy laden, and I will give you rest. Take My yoke upon you and learn from Me, for I am gentle and lowly in heart, and you will find rest for your souls. For My yoke is easy and My burden is light.\"
July 17th, 2023 09:24
Just Try It One More time
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Just try it one more time” by 13LaurenD
There seems to be despair and despondency in your poem. You must never give up hope. Life is worth living. The night is terrible and gives you dark ideas. But each morning that starts is full of promises. Stay cheerful and remember that your friends are on your side. Be happy ! Soman Ragavan. 17 July, 2023. //
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July 17th, 2023 06:04
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Just try it one more time” by 13LaurenD
There seems to be despair and despondency in your poem. You must never give up hope. Life is worth living. The night is terrible and gives you dark ideas. But each morning that starts is full of promises. Stay cheerful and remember that your friends are on your side. Be happy ! Soman Ragavan. 17 July, 2023. //
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July 17th, 2023 06:04
Just Try It One More time
L. B. Mek said:
more power to you!
just remember
while you\'re disappointing
those parasites
there may be those, who
you inspire
by sharing your defiance
stay strong!
I for one am a witness
to your worth
July 17th, 2023 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
more power to you!
just remember
while you\'re disappointing
those parasites
there may be those, who
you inspire
by sharing your defiance
stay strong!
I for one am a witness
to your worth
July 17th, 2023 05:34
Your On Your Own
LIZ said:
Beautifully sad! This was painful to read. Because I remember saying similar words myself. The emotional rollercoster! I hope your tribe arrives soon.
July 16th, 2023 12:59
LIZ said:
Beautifully sad! This was painful to read. Because I remember saying similar words myself. The emotional rollercoster! I hope your tribe arrives soon.
July 16th, 2023 12:59
Set Back
peto said:
No such thing as a failure Lauren
There is such a thing as a quitter
That\'s not you
What doesn\'t kill us makes us stronger
One step one day if necessary one minute at a time
Great delivery of your message with rhyme
July 9th, 2023 13:59
peto said:
No such thing as a failure Lauren
There is such a thing as a quitter
That\'s not you
What doesn\'t kill us makes us stronger
One step one day if necessary one minute at a time
Great delivery of your message with rhyme
July 9th, 2023 13:59
You Got This
peto said:
Brilliant Lauren
Keep them coming
The forgive myself line is vital
I once asked god to forgive me when I wouldn\'t forgive myself
What a cheek eh
Loving the recovery
You got it
July 4th, 2023 14:18
peto said:
Brilliant Lauren
Keep them coming
The forgive myself line is vital
I once asked god to forgive me when I wouldn\'t forgive myself
What a cheek eh
Loving the recovery
You got it
July 4th, 2023 14:18
Prison
jewelwrites55 said:
Your hard work is not in vain and your poem is beautiful. Knowing you want to better yourself is the first step. Thank you for sharing such a vulnerable poem. Stay as strong as you can and be kind to yourself on your journey.
July 3rd, 2023 14:19
jewelwrites55 said:
Your hard work is not in vain and your poem is beautiful. Knowing you want to better yourself is the first step. Thank you for sharing such a vulnerable poem. Stay as strong as you can and be kind to yourself on your journey.
July 3rd, 2023 14:19
Keep Moving Forward
peto said:
Feel it Lauren
Frothy emotional appeal seldom suffices
It takes one to know one
Not their fault
If you are taking self inventory as it appears you are
Keep writing and a lot
Dont listen to me or any other \"expert \"
About how it should be
Sack the snide
Take whatever works
Keep moving forward
June 30th, 2023 17:46
peto said:
Feel it Lauren
Frothy emotional appeal seldom suffices
It takes one to know one
Not their fault
If you are taking self inventory as it appears you are
Keep writing and a lot
Dont listen to me or any other \"expert \"
About how it should be
Sack the snide
Take whatever works
Keep moving forward
June 30th, 2023 17:46
Keep Moving Forward
David Wakeling said:
i tried to read this but it kept on going and going and going.I gave up.The message if there is one could be said in a fraction of the number of words.Verbose
June 30th, 2023 17:32
David Wakeling said:
i tried to read this but it kept on going and going and going.I gave up.The message if there is one could be said in a fraction of the number of words.Verbose
June 30th, 2023 17:32
Keep Going
Bobby O said:
In order to reach that glory ..:
Wishing they had stayed on your team,,,
I for sure certainly would have stayed.
I like the phrases and your use of cadenced rhyme. You go Girl!
June 23rd, 2023 23:51
Bobby O said:
In order to reach that glory ..:
Wishing they had stayed on your team,,,
I for sure certainly would have stayed.
I like the phrases and your use of cadenced rhyme. You go Girl!
June 23rd, 2023 23:51
Keep Going
peto said:
Nothing changes if nothing changes
To thine own self be true
Very positive writing
You appear to be on a journey of discovery
Enjoy every step
Cleverly placed rhyme to enhance
June 23rd, 2023 13:42
peto said:
Nothing changes if nothing changes
To thine own self be true
Very positive writing
You appear to be on a journey of discovery
Enjoy every step
Cleverly placed rhyme to enhance
June 23rd, 2023 13:42
Carry On
peto said:
Got a vibe you may be 5 days into recovery (85 days line)
Loved the strength coming from self searching
Well on your way
Glad you found this platform
Keep em coming
Enjoyed the rhyme also
June 18th, 2023 12:05
peto said:
Got a vibe you may be 5 days into recovery (85 days line)
Loved the strength coming from self searching
Well on your way
Glad you found this platform
Keep em coming
Enjoyed the rhyme also
June 18th, 2023 12:05
I\'m Happy To See That You\'re Okay
L. B. Mek said:
the one\'s who get destroyed
in a breakup
are the one\'s who loved the most
the one\'s, capable
of bravely, giving it everything
holding back nothing
and the one\'s, most likely
to find that \'love\', we all dream about
eventually
or at the very least, live their lives
free of regret
so, yeah
tears have our eyes looking like
basketballs
and everyone else, tells us we\'re
losing, by caring so much
after the fact
but, deep down
we know this grief period
is a reward for the sincerity
we imbue into everything we do
in life
(more power to your Truth, dear poet
stay strong!)
thanks for sharing
June 9th, 2023 03:11
L. B. Mek said:
the one\'s who get destroyed
in a breakup
are the one\'s who loved the most
the one\'s, capable
of bravely, giving it everything
holding back nothing
and the one\'s, most likely
to find that \'love\', we all dream about
eventually
or at the very least, live their lives
free of regret
so, yeah
tears have our eyes looking like
basketballs
and everyone else, tells us we\'re
losing, by caring so much
after the fact
but, deep down
we know this grief period
is a reward for the sincerity
we imbue into everything we do
in life
(more power to your Truth, dear poet
stay strong!)
thanks for sharing
June 9th, 2023 03:11
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