Comments received on poems by 13LaurenD
Burn The Bridge
Thoughtless said:
Good narrative. I too know about giving away parts of myself which were never returned.
Bad relationships. Well God did throw in a few jerks.
Nicely expressed.
August 21st, 2024 16:26
Thoughtless said:
Good narrative. I too know about giving away parts of myself which were never returned.
Bad relationships. Well God did throw in a few jerks.
Nicely expressed.
August 21st, 2024 16:26
It\'s In You
sorenbarrett said:
A good write about perseverance and sticking to it. A great message.
August 20th, 2024 08:10
sorenbarrett said:
A good write about perseverance and sticking to it. A great message.
August 20th, 2024 08:10
Go For It
sorenbarrett said:
perseverance, confidence and effort. a beautiful and inspiriting write.
August 19th, 2024 07:48
sorenbarrett said:
perseverance, confidence and effort. a beautiful and inspiriting write.
August 19th, 2024 07:48
Again?
Thoughtless said:
Unless you are prepared to receive what you go after, it will not come to you. You got this. Good write.
August 18th, 2024 08:06
Thoughtless said:
Unless you are prepared to receive what you go after, it will not come to you. You got this. Good write.
August 18th, 2024 08:06
I Don\'t Know What To Do
pkgboy49 said:
The hurt is real and very well expressed. It brings to mind similar feelings in the readers past that were long ago , tucked away with other deep and secret hurts . Effective in its sensitivity and well written .
August 16th, 2024 00:50
pkgboy49 said:
The hurt is real and very well expressed. It brings to mind similar feelings in the readers past that were long ago , tucked away with other deep and secret hurts . Effective in its sensitivity and well written .
August 16th, 2024 00:50
What I Want
sorenbarrett said:
Stand up for what is right and all will be right well written.
August 15th, 2024 09:58
sorenbarrett said:
Stand up for what is right and all will be right well written.
August 15th, 2024 09:58
What I Want
Thoughtless said:
It\'s a matter of self-assertion and not aggression. If one does not assert oneself, defends oneself, then all is lost. Nice composition.
August 15th, 2024 07:25
Thoughtless said:
It\'s a matter of self-assertion and not aggression. If one does not assert oneself, defends oneself, then all is lost. Nice composition.
August 15th, 2024 07:25
I Don\'t Know What To Do
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write of relationships that are not certain or maybe certain to fail. Best luck on what\'s to come
August 14th, 2024 11:24
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write of relationships that are not certain or maybe certain to fail. Best luck on what\'s to come
August 14th, 2024 11:24
I\'m Coming Back
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of perseverance nicely stated. Well said.
August 12th, 2024 19:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of perseverance nicely stated. Well said.
August 12th, 2024 19:43
The Light
sorenbarrett said:
Perseverance and determination is the key to victory. Stated in many ways it says that when the going gets tough the tough get going
August 7th, 2024 06:38
sorenbarrett said:
Perseverance and determination is the key to victory. Stated in many ways it says that when the going gets tough the tough get going
August 7th, 2024 06:38
Jokes On Me
pkgboy49 said:
I\'m so sorry it didn\'t work out. I know it hurts .....
August 5th, 2024 09:28
pkgboy49 said:
I\'m so sorry it didn\'t work out. I know it hurts .....
August 5th, 2024 09:28
Jokes On Me
Bobby O said:
I love the way most of the poem defines how you are aware and regret the circumstances but you humanize it perfectly with the last line. Not yet. Very cool and wise and I read it twice
August 5th, 2024 05:27
Bobby O said:
I love the way most of the poem defines how you are aware and regret the circumstances but you humanize it perfectly with the last line. Not yet. Very cool and wise and I read it twice
August 5th, 2024 05:27
Jokes On Me
sorenbarrett said:
Mixed emotions, things are never simple especially in love. Good write.
August 4th, 2024 13:53
sorenbarrett said:
Mixed emotions, things are never simple especially in love. Good write.
August 4th, 2024 13:53
I\'m Selfish
sorenbarrett said:
Determination, anger, resentment and resolve fill this poem. Nicely stated.
August 3rd, 2024 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
Determination, anger, resentment and resolve fill this poem. Nicely stated.
August 3rd, 2024 06:26
It\'s In Me
Mutley Ravishes said:
Nothing like turning the attention inwards!
Now, can I release people from all condemnation? (Very difficult. I caught myself shouting in anger today at a YouTube video! Oh well…)
July 30th, 2024 21:53
Mutley Ravishes said:
Nothing like turning the attention inwards!
Now, can I release people from all condemnation? (Very difficult. I caught myself shouting in anger today at a YouTube video! Oh well…)
July 30th, 2024 21:53
It\'s In Me
sorenbarrett said:
A good deal of self reflection in this piece. Well written
July 30th, 2024 19:54
sorenbarrett said:
A good deal of self reflection in this piece. Well written
July 30th, 2024 19:54
Maybe It\'s Not For Me
sorenbarrett said:
A great deal of existential questioning in this poem. It is not how much you are loved but how much you love that counts. It is only over this that you have control.
July 26th, 2024 20:49
sorenbarrett said:
A great deal of existential questioning in this poem. It is not how much you are loved but how much you love that counts. It is only over this that you have control.
July 26th, 2024 20:49
Moving On
pkgboy49 said:
Take a deep breath. You\'ve been through a lot . But you are strong . There\'s a light at the end of that dark tunnel . There\'s a lot of hope in your last 2 lines. You CAN move on. The pain will be gone , and stay gone . Inspiring and hopeful.
July 26th, 2024 05:36
pkgboy49 said:
Take a deep breath. You\'ve been through a lot . But you are strong . There\'s a light at the end of that dark tunnel . There\'s a lot of hope in your last 2 lines. You CAN move on. The pain will be gone , and stay gone . Inspiring and hopeful.
July 26th, 2024 05:36
Forget You
pkgboy49 said:
A dignified and justified anger. Don\'t we all want to scream at the sky ? We do ...
July 22nd, 2024 15:28
pkgboy49 said:
A dignified and justified anger. Don\'t we all want to scream at the sky ? We do ...
July 22nd, 2024 15:28
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