Comments received on poems by 13LaurenD
I\'m Selfish
sorenbarrett said:
Determination, anger, resentment and resolve fill this poem. Nicely stated.
August 3rd, 2024 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
Determination, anger, resentment and resolve fill this poem. Nicely stated.
August 3rd, 2024 06:26
It\'s In Me
Mutley Ravishes said:
Nothing like turning the attention inwards!
Now, can I release people from all condemnation? (Very difficult. I caught myself shouting in anger today at a YouTube video! Oh well…)
July 30th, 2024 21:53
Mutley Ravishes said:
Nothing like turning the attention inwards!
Now, can I release people from all condemnation? (Very difficult. I caught myself shouting in anger today at a YouTube video! Oh well…)
July 30th, 2024 21:53
It\'s In Me
sorenbarrett said:
A good deal of self reflection in this piece. Well written
July 30th, 2024 19:54
sorenbarrett said:
A good deal of self reflection in this piece. Well written
July 30th, 2024 19:54
Maybe It\'s Not For Me
sorenbarrett said:
A great deal of existential questioning in this poem. It is not how much you are loved but how much you love that counts. It is only over this that you have control.
July 26th, 2024 20:49
sorenbarrett said:
A great deal of existential questioning in this poem. It is not how much you are loved but how much you love that counts. It is only over this that you have control.
July 26th, 2024 20:49
Moving On
pkgboy49 said:
Take a deep breath. You\'ve been through a lot . But you are strong . There\'s a light at the end of that dark tunnel . There\'s a lot of hope in your last 2 lines. You CAN move on. The pain will be gone , and stay gone . Inspiring and hopeful.
July 26th, 2024 05:36
pkgboy49 said:
Take a deep breath. You\'ve been through a lot . But you are strong . There\'s a light at the end of that dark tunnel . There\'s a lot of hope in your last 2 lines. You CAN move on. The pain will be gone , and stay gone . Inspiring and hopeful.
July 26th, 2024 05:36
Forget You
pkgboy49 said:
A dignified and justified anger. Don\'t we all want to scream at the sky ? We do ...
July 22nd, 2024 15:28
pkgboy49 said:
A dignified and justified anger. Don\'t we all want to scream at the sky ? We do ...
July 22nd, 2024 15:28
Don\'t You Dare
pkgboy49 said:
Such a strong and confident message delivered in such a gentle and offhanded way. You have a unique style. Like a signature .
July 20th, 2024 04:52
pkgboy49 said:
Such a strong and confident message delivered in such a gentle and offhanded way. You have a unique style. Like a signature .
July 20th, 2024 04:52
It\'s No Different
pkgboy49 said:
You truly do have a story to tell generations to come . You learn, you teach and you inspire . Great poem . Keep writing .
July 20th, 2024 04:43
pkgboy49 said:
You truly do have a story to tell generations to come . You learn, you teach and you inspire . Great poem . Keep writing .
July 20th, 2024 04:43
Don\'t You Dare
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Your poem deeply resonated with me. Its message of resilience and determination was exactly what I needed to hear. The vivid imagery and rhythmic flow beautifully capture the essence of perseverance. Thank you for sharing such an inspiring piece; it serves as a powerful reminder of our inner strength and the importance of never giving up. Keep writing – your words have a profound impact.
July 14th, 2024 20:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Your poem deeply resonated with me. Its message of resilience and determination was exactly what I needed to hear. The vivid imagery and rhythmic flow beautifully capture the essence of perseverance. Thank you for sharing such an inspiring piece; it serves as a powerful reminder of our inner strength and the importance of never giving up. Keep writing – your words have a profound impact.
July 14th, 2024 20:47
I\'m Scared
Mutley Ravishes said:
Good write, Lauren. I\'ll pass on a quote to you from Bob Gardener (The Freedom Specialist): \"in regard to being free of the clutches of your own history, the most direct route I\'ve found to do that is through the body - relaxing its instinctive reaction to being confronted with an unchangeable past.\" Why not check his work out?
July 9th, 2024 18:38
Mutley Ravishes said:
Good write, Lauren. I\'ll pass on a quote to you from Bob Gardener (The Freedom Specialist): \"in regard to being free of the clutches of your own history, the most direct route I\'ve found to do that is through the body - relaxing its instinctive reaction to being confronted with an unchangeable past.\" Why not check his work out?
July 9th, 2024 18:38
Changes
Cassie58 said:
Conquering the demons, getting through the battles makes a stronger you. You are on a journey, don’t give up. Your lines touched me.
June 29th, 2024 15:23
Cassie58 said:
Conquering the demons, getting through the battles makes a stronger you. You are on a journey, don’t give up. Your lines touched me.
June 29th, 2024 15:23
The Pieces
froya said:
Is to stay kind an actual way out?
…out of the dark place
we call a nightmare of doubt
Everyone says to be a bigger man
But sometimes it looks like another scam
A fraud that is useful for those on the top
Who make use of us
Who don’t know when to stop
I want to believe to be kind is a choice
One makes with love and warmth in their voice
This is the answer that always has price
The decision that’s made, not rolled by a dice.
So before honouring someone with an act of kindness
Make sure they are not possessed by mental blindness
June 23rd, 2024 11:06
froya said:
Is to stay kind an actual way out?
…out of the dark place
we call a nightmare of doubt
Everyone says to be a bigger man
But sometimes it looks like another scam
A fraud that is useful for those on the top
Who make use of us
Who don’t know when to stop
I want to believe to be kind is a choice
One makes with love and warmth in their voice
This is the answer that always has price
The decision that’s made, not rolled by a dice.
So before honouring someone with an act of kindness
Make sure they are not possessed by mental blindness
June 23rd, 2024 11:06
The Comeback
aDarkerMind said:
and every word you have written is both true and meaningful;
a very impressive write.
June 9th, 2024 09:05
aDarkerMind said:
and every word you have written is both true and meaningful;
a very impressive write.
June 9th, 2024 09:05
You Broke Me
Manslick said:
how could you pick up the pieces of you if you were no longer able to see?
See?
June 1st, 2024 21:54
Manslick said:
how could you pick up the pieces of you if you were no longer able to see?
See?
June 1st, 2024 21:54
You Broke Me
Doggerel Dave said:
A \'what makes you stronger\' moral message. Well said.
June 1st, 2024 18:07
Doggerel Dave said:
A \'what makes you stronger\' moral message. Well said.
June 1st, 2024 18:07
A New Chapter
pkgboy49 said:
\" I forgive you and I have nothing bad to say...\" . The ability to forgive makes you the better person in this failed relationship , and it\'s a major step in healing . Well written and with beautiful sentiments. We can all relate .
May 16th, 2024 08:08
pkgboy49 said:
\" I forgive you and I have nothing bad to say...\" . The ability to forgive makes you the better person in this failed relationship , and it\'s a major step in healing . Well written and with beautiful sentiments. We can all relate .
May 16th, 2024 08:08
One More Time
pkgboy49 said:
That\'s the spirit ..!! You can accomplish anything you set your mind to . Very inspirational poem .
May 11th, 2024 08:26
pkgboy49 said:
That\'s the spirit ..!! You can accomplish anything you set your mind to . Very inspirational poem .
May 11th, 2024 08:26
Focus
pkgboy49 said:
What an encouraging positive message.... full of suggestions and ideas for feeling accomplished and successful without relying on others . You are your own best counselor . Well done .
May 4th, 2024 07:16
pkgboy49 said:
What an encouraging positive message.... full of suggestions and ideas for feeling accomplished and successful without relying on others . You are your own best counselor . Well done .
May 4th, 2024 07:16
Life
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a statement.It seems very personal.I guess I am too dumb to know what prompted this.
April 13th, 2024 15:45
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a statement.It seems very personal.I guess I am too dumb to know what prompted this.
April 13th, 2024 15:45
The Past
pkgboy49 said:
The courage it takes to bare your heart , and the determination to change direction and try something new are very encouraging ...!
April 8th, 2024 05:10
pkgboy49 said:
The courage it takes to bare your heart , and the determination to change direction and try something new are very encouraging ...!
April 8th, 2024 05:10
Four Years
pkgboy49 said:
The litany . Interesting rhyme style and very original ...
April 5th, 2024 07:56
pkgboy49 said:
The litany . Interesting rhyme style and very original ...
April 5th, 2024 07:56
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