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Carry On
peto said:
Got a vibe you may be 5 days into recovery (85 days line)
Loved the strength coming from self searching
Well on your way
Glad you found this platform
Keep em coming
Enjoyed the rhyme also
June 18th, 2023 12:05
peto said:
Got a vibe you may be 5 days into recovery (85 days line)
Loved the strength coming from self searching
Well on your way
Glad you found this platform
Keep em coming
Enjoyed the rhyme also
June 18th, 2023 12:05
I\'m Happy To See That You\'re Okay
L. B. Mek said:
the one\'s who get destroyed
in a breakup
are the one\'s who loved the most
the one\'s, capable
of bravely, giving it everything
holding back nothing
and the one\'s, most likely
to find that \'love\', we all dream about
eventually
or at the very least, live their lives
free of regret
so, yeah
tears have our eyes looking like
basketballs
and everyone else, tells us we\'re
losing, by caring so much
after the fact
but, deep down
we know this grief period
is a reward for the sincerity
we imbue into everything we do
in life
(more power to your Truth, dear poet
stay strong!)
thanks for sharing
June 9th, 2023 03:11
L. B. Mek said:
the one\'s who get destroyed
in a breakup
are the one\'s who loved the most
the one\'s, capable
of bravely, giving it everything
holding back nothing
and the one\'s, most likely
to find that \'love\', we all dream about
eventually
or at the very least, live their lives
free of regret
so, yeah
tears have our eyes looking like
basketballs
and everyone else, tells us we\'re
losing, by caring so much
after the fact
but, deep down
we know this grief period
is a reward for the sincerity
we imbue into everything we do
in life
(more power to your Truth, dear poet
stay strong!)
thanks for sharing
June 9th, 2023 03:11
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