Comments received on poems by 13LaurenD
Your Story
Poetic Licence said:
A poem of faith and believing that all things happen for a reason and it will be ok in the end, enjoyed the read
July 22nd, 2025 01:06
Poetic Licence said:
A poem of faith and believing that all things happen for a reason and it will be ok in the end, enjoyed the read
July 22nd, 2025 01:06
Your Story
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of faith that all things happen for the best and so I believe because even if wrong it leaves me with hope and happiness. Is ignorance bliss? I believe so at least until you find out otherwise. A lovely write
July 21st, 2025 15:14
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of faith that all things happen for the best and so I believe because even if wrong it leaves me with hope and happiness. Is ignorance bliss? I believe so at least until you find out otherwise. A lovely write
July 21st, 2025 15:14
Until I Found You
pkgboy49 said:
The happiest thoughts in a while . Well written, tender and sensitive. I really like it.
July 19th, 2025 00:26
pkgboy49 said:
The happiest thoughts in a while . Well written, tender and sensitive. I really like it.
July 19th, 2025 00:26
Until I Found You
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love found that is more than a one way street. Nicely rhymed and worded it tells its tale well.
July 13th, 2025 13:49
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love found that is more than a one way street. Nicely rhymed and worded it tells its tale well.
July 13th, 2025 13:49
According To Plan
Poetic Licence said:
Taking you from the hurt, anger and pain of everything always going wrong, to then use those same things to build a better future, have more belief in themselves and be positive, lovely write
July 11th, 2025 00:09
Poetic Licence said:
Taking you from the hurt, anger and pain of everything always going wrong, to then use those same things to build a better future, have more belief in themselves and be positive, lovely write
July 11th, 2025 00:09
According To Plan
sorenbarrett said:
There is anger and hurt in this poem that drips out like water from a saturated sponge. It is well written and conveys its message well. It speaks powerfully. Nicely done
July 10th, 2025 16:13
sorenbarrett said:
There is anger and hurt in this poem that drips out like water from a saturated sponge. It is well written and conveys its message well. It speaks powerfully. Nicely done
July 10th, 2025 16:13
One Year
Poetic Licence said:
A cheetah never changes it\'s spots and what goes round comes round. A heartfelt write of deceit, betrayal, unfaithfulness and the blatant taking advantage of a caring person, nicely expressed and written in this write
June 22nd, 2025 19:50
Poetic Licence said:
A cheetah never changes it\'s spots and what goes round comes round. A heartfelt write of deceit, betrayal, unfaithfulness and the blatant taking advantage of a caring person, nicely expressed and written in this write
June 22nd, 2025 19:50
One Year
sorenbarrett said:
Deceit, treachery, cheating, betrayal call it what you may its all the same thing someone not ready for commitment and a poem well written in good rhyme and with good flow. Nicely done
June 22nd, 2025 13:58
sorenbarrett said:
Deceit, treachery, cheating, betrayal call it what you may its all the same thing someone not ready for commitment and a poem well written in good rhyme and with good flow. Nicely done
June 22nd, 2025 13:58
You Choose You
Poetic Licence said:
People don\'t like the word no when they are so used to hearing yes and they become reliant on that yes at the expense of the one always saying yes, everyone is entitled to there own life, there is a limit to what you can do and should do for others, a lovely write
April 7th, 2025 02:23
Poetic Licence said:
People don\'t like the word no when they are so used to hearing yes and they become reliant on that yes at the expense of the one always saying yes, everyone is entitled to there own life, there is a limit to what you can do and should do for others, a lovely write
April 7th, 2025 02:23
You Choose You
sorenbarrett said:
Saying no is a hard thing to do especially after a lifetime of saying yes. Setting boundaries is so important and much easier done in the beginning
April 6th, 2025 12:05
sorenbarrett said:
Saying no is a hard thing to do especially after a lifetime of saying yes. Setting boundaries is so important and much easier done in the beginning
April 6th, 2025 12:05
Hope
pkgboy49 said:
Romantic in an old fashioned way , like 19th century poems . Really nice ...
March 5th, 2025 18:55
pkgboy49 said:
Romantic in an old fashioned way , like 19th century poems . Really nice ...
March 5th, 2025 18:55
Hope
Cassie58 said:
Well penned Lauren. An uplifting read. Flows well. I enjoyed my visit. Thank you.
February 17th, 2025 14:39
Cassie58 said:
Well penned Lauren. An uplifting read. Flows well. I enjoyed my visit. Thank you.
February 17th, 2025 14:39
Hope
Poetic Licence said:
A very positive and uplifting write, if you choose to, you can heal and there is hope,well written poem
February 17th, 2025 14:20
Poetic Licence said:
A very positive and uplifting write, if you choose to, you can heal and there is hope,well written poem
February 17th, 2025 14:20
Hope
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of encouragement that speaks with power about the ability of the human soul to recover. Very nice
February 17th, 2025 13:45
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of encouragement that speaks with power about the ability of the human soul to recover. Very nice
February 17th, 2025 13:45
Aww, So Sad
Bobby O said:
Very powerful and vivid and I hope the message hits him deeply.
December 30th, 2024 18:42
Bobby O said:
Very powerful and vivid and I hope the message hits him deeply.
December 30th, 2024 18:42
Aww, So Sad
Poetic Licence said:
A very angry and powerful telling off to someone, but also layered with strength and determination that they are not beaten and will be a success in life, well written
December 30th, 2024 16:00
Poetic Licence said:
A very angry and powerful telling off to someone, but also layered with strength and determination that they are not beaten and will be a success in life, well written
December 30th, 2024 16:00
New Year, New Me
Narayan Gadagkar said:
Very well penned poem. The starting lines that impressed me
\" I am someone who doesn\'t usually believe in making new year\'s resolutions,
Because trying to change your life just because the clock turned does not seem like a plausible solution.\"
December 30th, 2024 02:07
Narayan Gadagkar said:
Very well penned poem. The starting lines that impressed me
\" I am someone who doesn\'t usually believe in making new year\'s resolutions,
Because trying to change your life just because the clock turned does not seem like a plausible solution.\"
December 30th, 2024 02:07
Who Cares
pkgboy49 said:
Well said . Living to impress others is a losing battle .
December 5th, 2024 21:18
pkgboy49 said:
Well said . Living to impress others is a losing battle .
December 5th, 2024 21:18
Give It A Chance
pkgboy49 said:
Such a well expressed sad and melancholy sentiment . With small word changes , it could be applied to other life situations. Waiting for healing in serious sickness..... Waiting to have that first child.... Life is often cruel and patience so elusive. But HOPE springs eternal . Very good writing.
November 9th, 2024 00:00
pkgboy49 said:
Such a well expressed sad and melancholy sentiment . With small word changes , it could be applied to other life situations. Waiting for healing in serious sickness..... Waiting to have that first child.... Life is often cruel and patience so elusive. But HOPE springs eternal . Very good writing.
November 9th, 2024 00:00
Give It A Chance
Demar Desu said:
What attracts you more personality or looks?
November 3rd, 2024 23:42
Demar Desu said:
What attracts you more personality or looks?
November 3rd, 2024 23:42
Fix It
pkgboy49 said:
Great example of determination and positivity . Set your eye on the prize and don\'t waver. Don\'t look to the left or the right just straight ahead. Focus on your goal like it was the only thing that mattered. Excellent and encouraging .
October 16th, 2024 22:21
pkgboy49 said:
Great example of determination and positivity . Set your eye on the prize and don\'t waver. Don\'t look to the left or the right just straight ahead. Focus on your goal like it was the only thing that mattered. Excellent and encouraging .
October 16th, 2024 22:21
Keep Going
2781 said:
Being confident of this very thing, that he who has begun a good work in you will preform it until the day of Jesus Christ.
September 9th, 2024 07:37
2781 said:
Being confident of this very thing, that he who has begun a good work in you will preform it until the day of Jesus Christ.
September 9th, 2024 07:37
Defeated
Cassie58 said:
Where we break we can grow stronger. This is a poem of resilience. Never give in. Nicely penned Lauren. Happy Saturday.
September 7th, 2024 08:59
Cassie58 said:
Where we break we can grow stronger. This is a poem of resilience. Never give in. Nicely penned Lauren. Happy Saturday.
September 7th, 2024 08:59
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