Comments received on poems by 13LaurenD
Think About It
Paul Bell said:
Never be afraid to fail, no failure, no success.
The first hurdle is always the hardest, after that you\'re on your way.
January 25th, 2026 14:22
Paul Bell said:
Never be afraid to fail, no failure, no success.
The first hurdle is always the hardest, after that you\'re on your way.
January 25th, 2026 14:22
The Smile
Paul Bell said:
How many people are like this.
The perception is, wish I was like them, but in reality they\'re going through hell.
Yet they still go on cos life dictates they do.
January 19th, 2026 11:35
Paul Bell said:
How many people are like this.
The perception is, wish I was like them, but in reality they\'re going through hell.
Yet they still go on cos life dictates they do.
January 19th, 2026 11:35
The Smile
sorenbarrett said:
Hiding one\'s feelings to keep others from pitying or hurting themselves may seem noble but in the long run will burst the dam and a flood will occur. Well penned
January 19th, 2026 10:01
sorenbarrett said:
Hiding one\'s feelings to keep others from pitying or hurting themselves may seem noble but in the long run will burst the dam and a flood will occur. Well penned
January 19th, 2026 10:01
The Smile
Friendship said:
A powerful poem, well written. Your poem is to shed light on the hidden struggles that individuals face, encouraging empathy and understanding for those who may not outwardly show their pain. It aims to validate the experiences of those who feel they must hide their true selves from the world.
January 19th, 2026 09:53
Friendship said:
A powerful poem, well written. Your poem is to shed light on the hidden struggles that individuals face, encouraging empathy and understanding for those who may not outwardly show their pain. It aims to validate the experiences of those who feel they must hide their true selves from the world.
January 19th, 2026 09:53
Just Keep Going
sorenbarrett said:
A most motivational poem that encourages to continue trying and working and that one is good enough to succeed. Very nicely written
November 29th, 2025 06:29
sorenbarrett said:
A most motivational poem that encourages to continue trying and working and that one is good enough to succeed. Very nicely written
November 29th, 2025 06:29
Just Keep Going
sorenbarrett said:
A tough write of a broken relationship that is recognized as never meant to be. A lovely write
November 28th, 2025 09:34
sorenbarrett said:
A tough write of a broken relationship that is recognized as never meant to be. A lovely write
November 28th, 2025 09:34
Just Keep Going
Paul Bell said:
God or love, maybe both.
Will temptation wanton his quest.
Was Eve a temptress.
I always think god is disappointed in man, he never makes the mark.
November 28th, 2025 09:15
Paul Bell said:
God or love, maybe both.
Will temptation wanton his quest.
Was Eve a temptress.
I always think god is disappointed in man, he never makes the mark.
November 28th, 2025 09:15
The Dream
sorenbarrett said:
Believe in oneself and not in what anybody else has to say. A good write
October 26th, 2025 16:09
sorenbarrett said:
Believe in oneself and not in what anybody else has to say. A good write
October 26th, 2025 16:09
The Monster
pkgboy49 said:
Really aggressive and powerful ..! You didn\'t hold back . ...but I choose to believe that the sweet girl is really still in there .
September 10th, 2025 22:14
pkgboy49 said:
Really aggressive and powerful ..! You didn\'t hold back . ...but I choose to believe that the sweet girl is really still in there .
September 10th, 2025 22:14
The Monster
NinjaGirl said:
Yes! Take back your power, and scream your truth.
September 9th, 2025 19:51
NinjaGirl said:
Yes! Take back your power, and scream your truth.
September 9th, 2025 19:51
The Monster
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of resentment and anger. Very emotionally powerful. Nicely done.
September 9th, 2025 19:33
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of resentment and anger. Very emotionally powerful. Nicely done.
September 9th, 2025 19:33
Silly Girl
pkgboy49 said:
All the normal thoughts and emotions of a woman in love made so abundantly clear. Having love to offer and expecting love in return is what makes the world go \'round, there\'s nothing silly about it., but what a great title. Feelings every woman can relate to so well expressed .. very well written ..!
August 31st, 2025 00:32
pkgboy49 said:
All the normal thoughts and emotions of a woman in love made so abundantly clear. Having love to offer and expecting love in return is what makes the world go \'round, there\'s nothing silly about it., but what a great title. Feelings every woman can relate to so well expressed .. very well written ..!
August 31st, 2025 00:32
Silly Girl
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic redirection and refocus from what one was chasing to what one should be chasing nicely worded.
August 26th, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic redirection and refocus from what one was chasing to what one should be chasing nicely worded.
August 26th, 2025 04:35
Your Story
Poetic Licence said:
A poem of faith and believing that all things happen for a reason and it will be ok in the end, enjoyed the read
July 22nd, 2025 01:06
Poetic Licence said:
A poem of faith and believing that all things happen for a reason and it will be ok in the end, enjoyed the read
July 22nd, 2025 01:06
Your Story
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of faith that all things happen for the best and so I believe because even if wrong it leaves me with hope and happiness. Is ignorance bliss? I believe so at least until you find out otherwise. A lovely write
July 21st, 2025 15:14
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of faith that all things happen for the best and so I believe because even if wrong it leaves me with hope and happiness. Is ignorance bliss? I believe so at least until you find out otherwise. A lovely write
July 21st, 2025 15:14
Until I Found You
pkgboy49 said:
The happiest thoughts in a while . Well written, tender and sensitive. I really like it.
July 19th, 2025 00:26
pkgboy49 said:
The happiest thoughts in a while . Well written, tender and sensitive. I really like it.
July 19th, 2025 00:26
Until I Found You
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love found that is more than a one way street. Nicely rhymed and worded it tells its tale well.
July 13th, 2025 13:49
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love found that is more than a one way street. Nicely rhymed and worded it tells its tale well.
July 13th, 2025 13:49
According To Plan
Poetic Licence said:
Taking you from the hurt, anger and pain of everything always going wrong, to then use those same things to build a better future, have more belief in themselves and be positive, lovely write
July 11th, 2025 00:09
Poetic Licence said:
Taking you from the hurt, anger and pain of everything always going wrong, to then use those same things to build a better future, have more belief in themselves and be positive, lovely write
July 11th, 2025 00:09
According To Plan
sorenbarrett said:
There is anger and hurt in this poem that drips out like water from a saturated sponge. It is well written and conveys its message well. It speaks powerfully. Nicely done
July 10th, 2025 16:13
sorenbarrett said:
There is anger and hurt in this poem that drips out like water from a saturated sponge. It is well written and conveys its message well. It speaks powerfully. Nicely done
July 10th, 2025 16:13
One Year
Poetic Licence said:
A cheetah never changes it\'s spots and what goes round comes round. A heartfelt write of deceit, betrayal, unfaithfulness and the blatant taking advantage of a caring person, nicely expressed and written in this write
June 22nd, 2025 19:50
Poetic Licence said:
A cheetah never changes it\'s spots and what goes round comes round. A heartfelt write of deceit, betrayal, unfaithfulness and the blatant taking advantage of a caring person, nicely expressed and written in this write
June 22nd, 2025 19:50
One Year
sorenbarrett said:
Deceit, treachery, cheating, betrayal call it what you may its all the same thing someone not ready for commitment and a poem well written in good rhyme and with good flow. Nicely done
June 22nd, 2025 13:58
sorenbarrett said:
Deceit, treachery, cheating, betrayal call it what you may its all the same thing someone not ready for commitment and a poem well written in good rhyme and with good flow. Nicely done
June 22nd, 2025 13:58
You Choose You
Poetic Licence said:
People don\'t like the word no when they are so used to hearing yes and they become reliant on that yes at the expense of the one always saying yes, everyone is entitled to there own life, there is a limit to what you can do and should do for others, a lovely write
April 7th, 2025 02:23
Poetic Licence said:
People don\'t like the word no when they are so used to hearing yes and they become reliant on that yes at the expense of the one always saying yes, everyone is entitled to there own life, there is a limit to what you can do and should do for others, a lovely write
April 7th, 2025 02:23
You Choose You
sorenbarrett said:
Saying no is a hard thing to do especially after a lifetime of saying yes. Setting boundaries is so important and much easier done in the beginning
April 6th, 2025 12:05
sorenbarrett said:
Saying no is a hard thing to do especially after a lifetime of saying yes. Setting boundaries is so important and much easier done in the beginning
April 6th, 2025 12:05
Hope
pkgboy49 said:
Romantic in an old fashioned way , like 19th century poems . Really nice ...
March 5th, 2025 18:55
pkgboy49 said:
Romantic in an old fashioned way , like 19th century poems . Really nice ...
March 5th, 2025 18:55
Hope
Cassie58 said:
Well penned Lauren. An uplifting read. Flows well. I enjoyed my visit. Thank you.
February 17th, 2025 14:39
Cassie58 said:
Well penned Lauren. An uplifting read. Flows well. I enjoyed my visit. Thank you.
February 17th, 2025 14:39
Hope
Poetic Licence said:
A very positive and uplifting write, if you choose to, you can heal and there is hope,well written poem
February 17th, 2025 14:20
Poetic Licence said:
A very positive and uplifting write, if you choose to, you can heal and there is hope,well written poem
February 17th, 2025 14:20
Hope
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of encouragement that speaks with power about the ability of the human soul to recover. Very nice
February 17th, 2025 13:45
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of encouragement that speaks with power about the ability of the human soul to recover. Very nice
February 17th, 2025 13:45
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