Comments received on poems by 13LaurenD
Give It A Chance
pkgboy49 said:
Such a well expressed sad and melancholy sentiment . With small word changes , it could be applied to other life situations. Waiting for healing in serious sickness..... Waiting to have that first child.... Life is often cruel and patience so elusive. But HOPE springs eternal . Very good writing.
November 9th, 2024 00:00
pkgboy49 said:
Such a well expressed sad and melancholy sentiment . With small word changes , it could be applied to other life situations. Waiting for healing in serious sickness..... Waiting to have that first child.... Life is often cruel and patience so elusive. But HOPE springs eternal . Very good writing.
November 9th, 2024 00:00
Give It A Chance
Demar Desu said:
What attracts you more personality or looks?
November 3rd, 2024 23:42
Demar Desu said:
What attracts you more personality or looks?
November 3rd, 2024 23:42
Fix It
pkgboy49 said:
Great example of determination and positivity . Set your eye on the prize and don\'t waver. Don\'t look to the left or the right just straight ahead. Focus on your goal like it was the only thing that mattered. Excellent and encouraging .
October 16th, 2024 22:21
pkgboy49 said:
Great example of determination and positivity . Set your eye on the prize and don\'t waver. Don\'t look to the left or the right just straight ahead. Focus on your goal like it was the only thing that mattered. Excellent and encouraging .
October 16th, 2024 22:21
Keep Going
2781 said:
Being confident of this very thing, that he who has begun a good work in you will preform it until the day of Jesus Christ.
September 9th, 2024 07:37
2781 said:
Being confident of this very thing, that he who has begun a good work in you will preform it until the day of Jesus Christ.
September 9th, 2024 07:37
Defeated
Cassie58 said:
Where we break we can grow stronger. This is a poem of resilience. Never give in. Nicely penned Lauren. Happy Saturday.
September 7th, 2024 08:59
Cassie58 said:
Where we break we can grow stronger. This is a poem of resilience. Never give in. Nicely penned Lauren. Happy Saturday.
September 7th, 2024 08:59
Right Person, Wrong Time
Thoughtless said:
Repeating the same process is called insanity. I think.
A good example of toxic behavior.
August 29th, 2024 14:27
Thoughtless said:
Repeating the same process is called insanity. I think.
A good example of toxic behavior.
August 29th, 2024 14:27
Done
Cheeky Missy said:
Alas, but I don\'t believe in karma... or Santa Claus or the Easter bunny, or...the list goes on ad infinitum. If I did--!!
August 26th, 2024 13:10
Cheeky Missy said:
Alas, but I don\'t believe in karma... or Santa Claus or the Easter bunny, or...the list goes on ad infinitum. If I did--!!
August 26th, 2024 13:10
Go For It
pkgboy49 said:
\"Glorious\" and \"Victorious\" truly a truckload of positivity. Good for you.
August 24th, 2024 08:02
pkgboy49 said:
\"Glorious\" and \"Victorious\" truly a truckload of positivity. Good for you.
August 24th, 2024 08:02
Accept It
pkgboy49 said:
Accepting the truth IS hard. Hard things make us strong. We need to be strong to face this hard world. But, not everyone is a jerk ....there\'s always hope .
August 24th, 2024 07:57
pkgboy49 said:
Accepting the truth IS hard. Hard things make us strong. We need to be strong to face this hard world. But, not everyone is a jerk ....there\'s always hope .
August 24th, 2024 07:57
Love
pkgboy49 said:
We feel the hurt . Your words are well chosen . Every human being can relate to the helplessness of rejection and the \'maybes\' involved.
August 24th, 2024 07:51
pkgboy49 said:
We feel the hurt . Your words are well chosen . Every human being can relate to the helplessness of rejection and the \'maybes\' involved.
August 24th, 2024 07:51
Burn The Bridge
pkgboy49 said:
Don\'t let liars change you . Don\'t let their evil make you less loving . They are darkness, you are light. Light can make darkness disappear. Darkness is not an entity, it is just the absence of light. Always remain \"the bigger person\", that is the real winner .
August 24th, 2024 07:45
pkgboy49 said:
Don\'t let liars change you . Don\'t let their evil make you less loving . They are darkness, you are light. Light can make darkness disappear. Darkness is not an entity, it is just the absence of light. Always remain \"the bigger person\", that is the real winner .
August 24th, 2024 07:45
It\'s In You
pkgboy49 said:
Courageous and very encouraging . That\'s the proper attitude for success . You are powerful .
August 24th, 2024 07:35
pkgboy49 said:
Courageous and very encouraging . That\'s the proper attitude for success . You are powerful .
August 24th, 2024 07:35
Love
sorenbarrett said:
Doubts, hesitations, wondering nicely expressed in this poem
August 22nd, 2024 16:11
sorenbarrett said:
Doubts, hesitations, wondering nicely expressed in this poem
August 22nd, 2024 16:11
Burn The Bridge
sorenbarrett said:
A good story but one of loss and sadness, Well written
August 21st, 2024 16:51
sorenbarrett said:
A good story but one of loss and sadness, Well written
August 21st, 2024 16:51
Burn The Bridge
Thoughtless said:
Good narrative. I too know about giving away parts of myself which were never returned.
Bad relationships. Well God did throw in a few jerks.
Nicely expressed.
August 21st, 2024 16:26
Thoughtless said:
Good narrative. I too know about giving away parts of myself which were never returned.
Bad relationships. Well God did throw in a few jerks.
Nicely expressed.
August 21st, 2024 16:26
It\'s In You
sorenbarrett said:
A good write about perseverance and sticking to it. A great message.
August 20th, 2024 08:10
sorenbarrett said:
A good write about perseverance and sticking to it. A great message.
August 20th, 2024 08:10
Go For It
sorenbarrett said:
perseverance, confidence and effort. a beautiful and inspiriting write.
August 19th, 2024 07:48
sorenbarrett said:
perseverance, confidence and effort. a beautiful and inspiriting write.
August 19th, 2024 07:48
Again?
Thoughtless said:
Unless you are prepared to receive what you go after, it will not come to you. You got this. Good write.
August 18th, 2024 08:06
Thoughtless said:
Unless you are prepared to receive what you go after, it will not come to you. You got this. Good write.
August 18th, 2024 08:06
I Don\'t Know What To Do
pkgboy49 said:
The hurt is real and very well expressed. It brings to mind similar feelings in the readers past that were long ago , tucked away with other deep and secret hurts . Effective in its sensitivity and well written .
August 16th, 2024 00:50
pkgboy49 said:
The hurt is real and very well expressed. It brings to mind similar feelings in the readers past that were long ago , tucked away with other deep and secret hurts . Effective in its sensitivity and well written .
August 16th, 2024 00:50
What I Want
sorenbarrett said:
Stand up for what is right and all will be right well written.
August 15th, 2024 09:58
sorenbarrett said:
Stand up for what is right and all will be right well written.
August 15th, 2024 09:58
What I Want
Thoughtless said:
It\'s a matter of self-assertion and not aggression. If one does not assert oneself, defends oneself, then all is lost. Nice composition.
August 15th, 2024 07:25
Thoughtless said:
It\'s a matter of self-assertion and not aggression. If one does not assert oneself, defends oneself, then all is lost. Nice composition.
August 15th, 2024 07:25
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