Comments received on poems by 13LaurenD
You Broke Me
Manslick said:
how could you pick up the pieces of you if you were no longer able to see?
See?
June 1st, 2024 21:54
Manslick said:
how could you pick up the pieces of you if you were no longer able to see?
See?
June 1st, 2024 21:54
You Broke Me
Doggerel Dave said:
A \'what makes you stronger\' moral message. Well said.
June 1st, 2024 18:07
Doggerel Dave said:
A \'what makes you stronger\' moral message. Well said.
June 1st, 2024 18:07
A New Chapter
pkgboy49 said:
\" I forgive you and I have nothing bad to say...\" . The ability to forgive makes you the better person in this failed relationship , and it\'s a major step in healing . Well written and with beautiful sentiments. We can all relate .
May 16th, 2024 08:08
pkgboy49 said:
\" I forgive you and I have nothing bad to say...\" . The ability to forgive makes you the better person in this failed relationship , and it\'s a major step in healing . Well written and with beautiful sentiments. We can all relate .
May 16th, 2024 08:08
One More Time
pkgboy49 said:
That\'s the spirit ..!! You can accomplish anything you set your mind to . Very inspirational poem .
May 11th, 2024 08:26
pkgboy49 said:
That\'s the spirit ..!! You can accomplish anything you set your mind to . Very inspirational poem .
May 11th, 2024 08:26
Focus
pkgboy49 said:
What an encouraging positive message.... full of suggestions and ideas for feeling accomplished and successful without relying on others . You are your own best counselor . Well done .
May 4th, 2024 07:16
pkgboy49 said:
What an encouraging positive message.... full of suggestions and ideas for feeling accomplished and successful without relying on others . You are your own best counselor . Well done .
May 4th, 2024 07:16
Life
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a statement.It seems very personal.I guess I am too dumb to know what prompted this.
April 13th, 2024 15:45
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a statement.It seems very personal.I guess I am too dumb to know what prompted this.
April 13th, 2024 15:45
The Past
pkgboy49 said:
The courage it takes to bare your heart , and the determination to change direction and try something new are very encouraging ...!
April 8th, 2024 05:10
pkgboy49 said:
The courage it takes to bare your heart , and the determination to change direction and try something new are very encouraging ...!
April 8th, 2024 05:10
Four Years
pkgboy49 said:
The litany . Interesting rhyme style and very original ...
April 5th, 2024 07:56
pkgboy49 said:
The litany . Interesting rhyme style and very original ...
April 5th, 2024 07:56
Last Night
Bobby O said:
Like when the director says “action” it came slice and I was so okay with your choices snd the small price paid visiting uncomfortable zone shall remind and reward of VERITAS.
The write was excellent, the bravery to share was resplendent, and the prognosis for soaring above with lucidity and optimism gratified me
March 27th, 2024 20:24
Bobby O said:
Like when the director says “action” it came slice and I was so okay with your choices snd the small price paid visiting uncomfortable zone shall remind and reward of VERITAS.
The write was excellent, the bravery to share was resplendent, and the prognosis for soaring above with lucidity and optimism gratified me
March 27th, 2024 20:24
Delete It
pkgboy49 said:
That feeling of being torn was so eloquently expressed. Some decisions are just so hard to make, putting them off seems like the most practical option at the moment . Great rhyme .
March 21st, 2024 17:52
pkgboy49 said:
That feeling of being torn was so eloquently expressed. Some decisions are just so hard to make, putting them off seems like the most practical option at the moment . Great rhyme .
March 21st, 2024 17:52
Finally
Bobby O said:
I like it. I absorb it more as a message to self and addressing him was a convenient strategy to format such a great progression of ideas. I can tell your really done and by definition that means the guy that is gone just doesn’t matter anymore in any kind of way.
March 21st, 2024 06:54
Bobby O said:
I like it. I absorb it more as a message to self and addressing him was a convenient strategy to format such a great progression of ideas. I can tell your really done and by definition that means the guy that is gone just doesn’t matter anymore in any kind of way.
March 21st, 2024 06:54
One Month
Bobby O said:
I love the way you expressed yourself with honesty and humility in your view reality. But it worries me I don’t know why he was the smart enough to stay but people who caused the problem a very rarely the people who resolve the problem. By that I mean , if you cajole him back with the possibility that your current bias won’t be strict enough to hold standards that he needs to meet. Delise the opening for her all over again and that is what worries me I don’t know you, but I’d like the way you write and so I think I know you and that would worry me if you gave him an easy in because your feelings are mushy or whatever better word you can think of . it is none of my business. so I apologize if I’ve offered too much opinion bottom line is I’d like the way you wrote the piece. Very cool.
March 6th, 2024 04:40
Bobby O said:
I love the way you expressed yourself with honesty and humility in your view reality. But it worries me I don’t know why he was the smart enough to stay but people who caused the problem a very rarely the people who resolve the problem. By that I mean , if you cajole him back with the possibility that your current bias won’t be strict enough to hold standards that he needs to meet. Delise the opening for her all over again and that is what worries me I don’t know you, but I’d like the way you write and so I think I know you and that would worry me if you gave him an easy in because your feelings are mushy or whatever better word you can think of . it is none of my business. so I apologize if I’ve offered too much opinion bottom line is I’d like the way you wrote the piece. Very cool.
March 6th, 2024 04:40
The Love I Deserve
Bobby O said:
It’s a-visit to sad and to authentic and to a past place valued such that a tinge of sarcasm almost pays an homage to a former closeness almost expressed in its own code. I really liked it.
March 6th, 2024 02:03
Bobby O said:
It’s a-visit to sad and to authentic and to a past place valued such that a tinge of sarcasm almost pays an homage to a former closeness almost expressed in its own code. I really liked it.
March 6th, 2024 02:03
The Love I Deserve
peto said:
Very emotional with stunning rhyme
Thoroughly enjoyed the read
March 5th, 2024 16:59
peto said:
Very emotional with stunning rhyme
Thoroughly enjoyed the read
March 5th, 2024 16:59
One Month
Cloie said:
This poem beautifully captures the raw emotions and complexities of heartbreak. The imagery and heartfelt expressions make it relatable to anyone who has experienced the pain of losing someone they love. It\'s a heartfelt expression of love, pain, and hope for reconciliation. Great work!
March 4th, 2024 12:38
Cloie said:
This poem beautifully captures the raw emotions and complexities of heartbreak. The imagery and heartfelt expressions make it relatable to anyone who has experienced the pain of losing someone they love. It\'s a heartfelt expression of love, pain, and hope for reconciliation. Great work!
March 4th, 2024 12:38
It Still Hurts
Cloie said:
Your path to healing is like a dance, with each step forward shining brightly despite setbacks. Keep shining, darlin\'! 🌟
February 28th, 2024 13:41
Cloie said:
Your path to healing is like a dance, with each step forward shining brightly despite setbacks. Keep shining, darlin\'! 🌟
February 28th, 2024 13:41
I Guess You Know
Meera Mere said:
\"But I have realized that with people like you, sometimes I need to play too,
To show you that I can do it just as good as you.\" Just nailed these lines. Your poem was seriously amazing.
February 27th, 2024 12:20
Meera Mere said:
\"But I have realized that with people like you, sometimes I need to play too,
To show you that I can do it just as good as you.\" Just nailed these lines. Your poem was seriously amazing.
February 27th, 2024 12:20
I Guess You Know
Neilton said:
That was impressive!You conveyed your feelings perfectly!!
February 27th, 2024 11:52
Neilton said:
That was impressive!You conveyed your feelings perfectly!!
February 27th, 2024 11:52
For The First Time In A While
Cassie58 said:
Life’s journey can certainly be a roller coaster of ups and downs. Lots of debris on the way that needs clearing. All sent to try us.if we are lucky we learn by our mistakes. I enjoyed reading you today Lauren.
February 26th, 2024 09:44
Cassie58 said:
Life’s journey can certainly be a roller coaster of ups and downs. Lots of debris on the way that needs clearing. All sent to try us.if we are lucky we learn by our mistakes. I enjoyed reading you today Lauren.
February 26th, 2024 09:44
Her
Bobby O said:
The quiz then the test and then he can find his arrogance confides with reward as he notes and misread your attention.
February 17th, 2024 04:51
Bobby O said:
The quiz then the test and then he can find his arrogance confides with reward as he notes and misread your attention.
February 17th, 2024 04:51
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