Comments received on poems by Cocamedo
A Promise Is A Promise
sorenbarrett said:
A statement of the other\'s value in rhyme. The value of another can not be overstated
August 28th, 2024 06:40
sorenbarrett said:
A statement of the other\'s value in rhyme. The value of another can not be overstated
August 28th, 2024 06:40
Come Home, My Love
Caring dove said:
Butterflies can be signs from angels .. nice writing )
August 28th, 2024 00:40
Caring dove said:
Butterflies can be signs from angels .. nice writing )
August 28th, 2024 00:40
Our Bridge
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written this melancholic piece is set in a dark place in the dark and despite the darkness of the poem itself it offers some light at the end.
August 22nd, 2024 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written this melancholic piece is set in a dark place in the dark and despite the darkness of the poem itself it offers some light at the end.
August 22nd, 2024 04:30
The Bench of Solace
Cassie58 said:
A very lonely poem reflecting on past love. Poignantly penned and touching to this reader.
August 21st, 2024 08:37
Cassie58 said:
A very lonely poem reflecting on past love. Poignantly penned and touching to this reader.
August 21st, 2024 08:37
The Bench of Solace
sorenbarrett said:
The poem a metaphor for lost love and loneliness is so well worded. Nicely done
August 21st, 2024 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
The poem a metaphor for lost love and loneliness is so well worded. Nicely done
August 21st, 2024 04:57
Empty
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and haunting in its shadow of what once was. A lovely dark read.
August 20th, 2024 05:24
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and haunting in its shadow of what once was. A lovely dark read.
August 20th, 2024 05:24
Empty
Cassie58 said:
Sadder than sad. A home without a heart. Poignantly penned.
August 20th, 2024 05:03
Cassie58 said:
Sadder than sad. A home without a heart. Poignantly penned.
August 20th, 2024 05:03
Brown Leather Jacket
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic, sadly sweet, very nicely written.
August 19th, 2024 05:51
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic, sadly sweet, very nicely written.
August 19th, 2024 05:51
Goodbye, Pops
sorenbarrett said:
A great first person form in this moving write. Fear of loss of someone valued and what the future will bring without them. Nicely done
August 16th, 2024 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
A great first person form in this moving write. Fear of loss of someone valued and what the future will bring without them. Nicely done
August 16th, 2024 04:51
The Sea
sorenbarrett said:
The need to take care of the ecosystem is something neglected by most. Even those that stand for it do not really. Nice write
August 15th, 2024 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
The need to take care of the ecosystem is something neglected by most. Even those that stand for it do not really. Nice write
August 15th, 2024 05:04
The Sea
Cassie58 said:
I like the use of extended metaphor here. Nicely penned. Laden with emotion and imagery.
August 15th, 2024 02:13
Cassie58 said:
I like the use of extended metaphor here. Nicely penned. Laden with emotion and imagery.
August 15th, 2024 02:13
Distractions
Bobby O said:
It advocates nicely for a genuine approach that just May harvest the aura of time invested with ego aside ot urges to dig in w best effort.
August 14th, 2024 10:23
Bobby O said:
It advocates nicely for a genuine approach that just May harvest the aura of time invested with ego aside ot urges to dig in w best effort.
August 14th, 2024 10:23
Distractions
sorenbarrett said:
Either the devil on the shoulder or my mother in my ear. Could be the same. A fun read.
August 14th, 2024 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
Either the devil on the shoulder or my mother in my ear. Could be the same. A fun read.
August 14th, 2024 06:14
Distractions
2781 said:
Reminds me of that cartoon, the one with a devil in one ear, and an angel in the other
August 14th, 2024 02:03
2781 said:
Reminds me of that cartoon, the one with a devil in one ear, and an angel in the other
August 14th, 2024 02:03
Calling Out
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written a search for the lost set in strong images and nicely worded
August 13th, 2024 05:41
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written a search for the lost set in strong images and nicely worded
August 13th, 2024 05:41
Castles Made of Sand
sorenbarrett said:
Best intentions do not guaranteed desired results. Sand castles are hard to insure. Nice write
August 12th, 2024 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
Best intentions do not guaranteed desired results. Sand castles are hard to insure. Nice write
August 12th, 2024 05:57
Mirage
Bobby O said:
It works nice in the literal and offers layers to surf as a symbolic metaphor.
August 11th, 2024 12:07
Bobby O said:
It works nice in the literal and offers layers to surf as a symbolic metaphor.
August 11th, 2024 12:07
Mirage
Cassie58 said:
A tale of retribution. Very nicely narrated. Wonderful imagery. Happy Sunday.
August 11th, 2024 02:42
Cassie58 said:
A tale of retribution. Very nicely narrated. Wonderful imagery. Happy Sunday.
August 11th, 2024 02:42
My Sweet Boy
sorenbarrett said:
To anyone with children of their own a most touching poem well written in good rhyme loved it.
August 10th, 2024 06:41
sorenbarrett said:
To anyone with children of their own a most touching poem well written in good rhyme loved it.
August 10th, 2024 06:41
The Beast Within
Dan Williams said:
Wow. I thought I was bitter. I guess we all have, or are, our beasts. Good job.
August 9th, 2024 23:56
Dan Williams said:
Wow. I thought I was bitter. I guess we all have, or are, our beasts. Good job.
August 9th, 2024 23:56
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