Comments received on poems by Cocamedo
Your Book
2781 said:
But none saith, Where is God my maker, Who giveth songs in the night; Who teaches us more than the beasts the earth, and makes us wiser than the fowls of heaven?
May your ink never run dry.
September 9th, 2024 03:12
2781 said:
But none saith, Where is God my maker, Who giveth songs in the night; Who teaches us more than the beasts the earth, and makes us wiser than the fowls of heaven?
May your ink never run dry.
September 9th, 2024 03:12
Imperfect Perspective
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting poem. Well written with great metaphor and rhyme.
September 7th, 2024 07:27
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting poem. Well written with great metaphor and rhyme.
September 7th, 2024 07:27
Six Weeks and One Day
sorenbarrett said:
In reading this poem, I got a sense of the poet, musing with thoughts, floating through their head. These thoughts culminate in the desire and wish for another. A dreamy and wonderful field to this poem.
September 4th, 2024 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
In reading this poem, I got a sense of the poet, musing with thoughts, floating through their head. These thoughts culminate in the desire and wish for another. A dreamy and wonderful field to this poem.
September 4th, 2024 05:40
Dear Birth Mother
Cassie58 said:
A sad poem. I don’t think women give their babies up easily. I have read about some who have mourned their children all their lives. It is a blessing that you were raised by a good family. You are in such a difficult situation. I’m not sure what I would do. I think I would probably reach out and try to find out more. Yes, I think I would want to know more. That feeling of being abandoned must hurt though. You raised many thoughts with this poem. All best wishes.
September 4th, 2024 03:57
Cassie58 said:
A sad poem. I don’t think women give their babies up easily. I have read about some who have mourned their children all their lives. It is a blessing that you were raised by a good family. You are in such a difficult situation. I’m not sure what I would do. I think I would probably reach out and try to find out more. Yes, I think I would want to know more. That feeling of being abandoned must hurt though. You raised many thoughts with this poem. All best wishes.
September 4th, 2024 03:57
Six Weeks and One Day
Cheeky Missy said:
No. It\'s not wrong. And the time does indeed drag on longer than can be measured by mere marks on the calendar page. Yet truly, when whom your awaiting is finally here, it\'ll be well worth it, no?
September 3rd, 2024 20:38
Cheeky Missy said:
No. It\'s not wrong. And the time does indeed drag on longer than can be measured by mere marks on the calendar page. Yet truly, when whom your awaiting is finally here, it\'ll be well worth it, no?
September 3rd, 2024 20:38
A Promise Is A Promise
sorenbarrett said:
A statement of the other\'s value in rhyme. The value of another can not be overstated
August 28th, 2024 06:40
sorenbarrett said:
A statement of the other\'s value in rhyme. The value of another can not be overstated
August 28th, 2024 06:40
Come Home, My Love
Caring dove said:
Butterflies can be signs from angels .. nice writing )
August 28th, 2024 00:40
Caring dove said:
Butterflies can be signs from angels .. nice writing )
August 28th, 2024 00:40
Our Bridge
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written this melancholic piece is set in a dark place in the dark and despite the darkness of the poem itself it offers some light at the end.
August 22nd, 2024 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written this melancholic piece is set in a dark place in the dark and despite the darkness of the poem itself it offers some light at the end.
August 22nd, 2024 04:30
The Bench of Solace
Cassie58 said:
A very lonely poem reflecting on past love. Poignantly penned and touching to this reader.
August 21st, 2024 08:37
Cassie58 said:
A very lonely poem reflecting on past love. Poignantly penned and touching to this reader.
August 21st, 2024 08:37
The Bench of Solace
sorenbarrett said:
The poem a metaphor for lost love and loneliness is so well worded. Nicely done
August 21st, 2024 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
The poem a metaphor for lost love and loneliness is so well worded. Nicely done
August 21st, 2024 04:57
Empty
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and haunting in its shadow of what once was. A lovely dark read.
August 20th, 2024 05:24
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and haunting in its shadow of what once was. A lovely dark read.
August 20th, 2024 05:24
Empty
Cassie58 said:
Sadder than sad. A home without a heart. Poignantly penned.
August 20th, 2024 05:03
Cassie58 said:
Sadder than sad. A home without a heart. Poignantly penned.
August 20th, 2024 05:03
Brown Leather Jacket
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic, sadly sweet, very nicely written.
August 19th, 2024 05:51
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic, sadly sweet, very nicely written.
August 19th, 2024 05:51
Goodbye, Pops
sorenbarrett said:
A great first person form in this moving write. Fear of loss of someone valued and what the future will bring without them. Nicely done
August 16th, 2024 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
A great first person form in this moving write. Fear of loss of someone valued and what the future will bring without them. Nicely done
August 16th, 2024 04:51
The Sea
sorenbarrett said:
The need to take care of the ecosystem is something neglected by most. Even those that stand for it do not really. Nice write
August 15th, 2024 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
The need to take care of the ecosystem is something neglected by most. Even those that stand for it do not really. Nice write
August 15th, 2024 05:04
The Sea
Cassie58 said:
I like the use of extended metaphor here. Nicely penned. Laden with emotion and imagery.
August 15th, 2024 02:13
Cassie58 said:
I like the use of extended metaphor here. Nicely penned. Laden with emotion and imagery.
August 15th, 2024 02:13
Distractions
Bobby O said:
It advocates nicely for a genuine approach that just May harvest the aura of time invested with ego aside ot urges to dig in w best effort.
August 14th, 2024 10:23
Bobby O said:
It advocates nicely for a genuine approach that just May harvest the aura of time invested with ego aside ot urges to dig in w best effort.
August 14th, 2024 10:23
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