Comments received on poems by Cocamedo
Distractions
sorenbarrett said:
Either the devil on the shoulder or my mother in my ear. Could be the same. A fun read.
August 14th, 2024 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
Either the devil on the shoulder or my mother in my ear. Could be the same. A fun read.
August 14th, 2024 06:14
Distractions
2781 said:
Reminds me of that cartoon, the one with a devil in one ear, and an angel in the other
August 14th, 2024 02:03
2781 said:
Reminds me of that cartoon, the one with a devil in one ear, and an angel in the other
August 14th, 2024 02:03
Calling Out
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written a search for the lost set in strong images and nicely worded
August 13th, 2024 05:41
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written a search for the lost set in strong images and nicely worded
August 13th, 2024 05:41
Castles Made of Sand
sorenbarrett said:
Best intentions do not guaranteed desired results. Sand castles are hard to insure. Nice write
August 12th, 2024 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
Best intentions do not guaranteed desired results. Sand castles are hard to insure. Nice write
August 12th, 2024 05:57
Mirage
Bobby O said:
It works nice in the literal and offers layers to surf as a symbolic metaphor.
August 11th, 2024 12:07
Bobby O said:
It works nice in the literal and offers layers to surf as a symbolic metaphor.
August 11th, 2024 12:07
Mirage
Cassie58 said:
A tale of retribution. Very nicely narrated. Wonderful imagery. Happy Sunday.
August 11th, 2024 02:42
Cassie58 said:
A tale of retribution. Very nicely narrated. Wonderful imagery. Happy Sunday.
August 11th, 2024 02:42
My Sweet Boy
sorenbarrett said:
To anyone with children of their own a most touching poem well written in good rhyme loved it.
August 10th, 2024 06:41
sorenbarrett said:
To anyone with children of their own a most touching poem well written in good rhyme loved it.
August 10th, 2024 06:41
The Beast Within
Dan Williams said:
Wow. I thought I was bitter. I guess we all have, or are, our beasts. Good job.
August 9th, 2024 23:56
Dan Williams said:
Wow. I thought I was bitter. I guess we all have, or are, our beasts. Good job.
August 9th, 2024 23:56
The Beast Within
sorenbarrett said:
This could be taken metaphorically as an internal struggle to overcome and be in control of oneself as opposed to the literal meaning of the words. This would make it positive in nature as opposed to negative. Nicely done
August 9th, 2024 05:41
sorenbarrett said:
This could be taken metaphorically as an internal struggle to overcome and be in control of oneself as opposed to the literal meaning of the words. This would make it positive in nature as opposed to negative. Nicely done
August 9th, 2024 05:41
The Beast Within
Mutley Ravishes said:
When fear catches the scent of transmutation it’s relentless pursuit begins to falter.
August 9th, 2024 05:39
Mutley Ravishes said:
When fear catches the scent of transmutation it’s relentless pursuit begins to falter.
August 9th, 2024 05:39
The Beast Within
Cassie58 said:
Negativity is such a curse. We all have it inside of us. The art, is keeping it at bay and allowing positivity to bring our sunshine. Fear can certainly darken our doorstep. A fine write Cocamedo. Happy Friday to you.
August 9th, 2024 02:30
Cassie58 said:
Negativity is such a curse. We all have it inside of us. The art, is keeping it at bay and allowing positivity to bring our sunshine. Fear can certainly darken our doorstep. A fine write Cocamedo. Happy Friday to you.
August 9th, 2024 02:30
God’s Gifts
sorenbarrett said:
A strong belief and faith in oneself is a great message in this poem. Loved it
August 8th, 2024 06:44
sorenbarrett said:
A strong belief and faith in oneself is a great message in this poem. Loved it
August 8th, 2024 06:44
God’s Gifts
jarcher54 said:
I appreciate the deep sincerity of your piece. I am not religious, but your little poetic journey from focusing on yourself to adoring your angel is touching and lovely.
August 8th, 2024 03:54
jarcher54 said:
I appreciate the deep sincerity of your piece. I am not religious, but your little poetic journey from focusing on yourself to adoring your angel is touching and lovely.
August 8th, 2024 03:54
The Porch Light is On
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor and the use of vivid images some of which are metaphors themselves. Very nicely written
August 7th, 2024 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor and the use of vivid images some of which are metaphors themselves. Very nicely written
August 7th, 2024 04:14
In the Dust
Sydney Zane said:
The puzzle unfinished, but no one is trying is the line that definitely hit me the hardest. Great work!
August 6th, 2024 09:47
Sydney Zane said:
The puzzle unfinished, but no one is trying is the line that definitely hit me the hardest. Great work!
August 6th, 2024 09:47
In the Dust
sorenbarrett said:
A great message. There is no past and no future only the present and I loved the last line a great image.
August 6th, 2024 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
A great message. There is no past and no future only the present and I loved the last line a great image.
August 6th, 2024 05:03
In the Dust
Bobby O said:
I read this twice just to gather the intensity that lives and dances with your words.
August 6th, 2024 00:34
Bobby O said:
I read this twice just to gather the intensity that lives and dances with your words.
August 6th, 2024 00:34
One Petal
sorenbarrett said:
Full of memories that bring nostalgia to anyone that has had a lengthy relationship. Very nicely written. I would like to see the flower that has that many petals.
August 5th, 2024 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
Full of memories that bring nostalgia to anyone that has had a lengthy relationship. Very nicely written. I would like to see the flower that has that many petals.
August 5th, 2024 07:03
One Petal
Bobby O said:
Clever metaphor that prompts and adds a human frailty to a very touching list.
August 5th, 2024 05:35
Bobby O said:
Clever metaphor that prompts and adds a human frailty to a very touching list.
August 5th, 2024 05:35
Tangled Up In You
Cassie58 said:
This poem is brimful of warm sentiment. I love it. So very nicely penned. Happy Saturday.
August 3rd, 2024 07:31
Cassie58 said:
This poem is brimful of warm sentiment. I love it. So very nicely penned. Happy Saturday.
August 3rd, 2024 07:31
Tangled Up In You
sorenbarrett said:
This piece is so nicely written with cute and fun memories that I feel from my past that is cheers the heart. When a poem touches my feels it is considered art by me.
August 3rd, 2024 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
This piece is so nicely written with cute and fun memories that I feel from my past that is cheers the heart. When a poem touches my feels it is considered art by me.
August 3rd, 2024 05:44
Pathway to More Pieces
sorenbarrett said:
Particularly love the first stanza that applies to more than love. Neatly written with good rhyme
August 2nd, 2024 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
Particularly love the first stanza that applies to more than love. Neatly written with good rhyme
August 2nd, 2024 05:16
Pathway to More Pieces
Cassie58 said:
Really enjoyed the sentiment in your stanzas. Penned beautifully. Happy Friday.
August 2nd, 2024 05:13
Cassie58 said:
Really enjoyed the sentiment in your stanzas. Penned beautifully. Happy Friday.
August 2nd, 2024 05:13
Parking Lot Thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
Sweet and cute this poem makes use of great imagery to create its mood. Nicely done.
August 1st, 2024 05:37
sorenbarrett said:
Sweet and cute this poem makes use of great imagery to create its mood. Nicely done.
August 1st, 2024 05:37
My Words, My Love, My Promise
sorenbarrett said:
A loving pledge put to rhyme and very nicely done.
July 31st, 2024 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
A loving pledge put to rhyme and very nicely done.
July 31st, 2024 06:03
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