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You Get Out What You Put In
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sardonic wit, sharp humor, a foot to a jerk\'s ass..whatever you want to call this...it is masterfully brilliant in it\'s brevity, my friend. LOVE THIS! 🌹🙏 If I ever say this to anyone in real time, you will be cited! 🤣 \"Wise man Tobani says...\" or something to that effect! Again, brilliant!
March 29th, 2025 11:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sardonic wit, sharp humor, a foot to a jerk\'s ass..whatever you want to call this...it is masterfully brilliant in it\'s brevity, my friend. LOVE THIS! 🌹🙏 If I ever say this to anyone in real time, you will be cited! 🤣 \"Wise man Tobani says...\" or something to that effect! Again, brilliant!
March 29th, 2025 11:08
The Race
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth, good Sir. Begins to remind me of my late father\'s injunction to, \"enjoy the ride! The journey is half the fun of getting there...\" whether or not that is applicable. Beautifully rendered with a delightfully haunting poignancy. Thank go for sharing.
March 29th, 2025 10:08
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth, good Sir. Begins to remind me of my late father\'s injunction to, \"enjoy the ride! The journey is half the fun of getting there...\" whether or not that is applicable. Beautifully rendered with a delightfully haunting poignancy. Thank go for sharing.
March 29th, 2025 10:08
You Get Out What You Put In
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha, you\'re hilarious! Me still is uncertain about that, though, since methinks I\'ve put in a ton more than I\'ve recieved from the effort, however I\'m not dead as yet, so who knows. Delightful and sweetly rendered with a waltzing poignancy. Thank you for sharing! I love it.
March 29th, 2025 09:43
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha, you\'re hilarious! Me still is uncertain about that, though, since methinks I\'ve put in a ton more than I\'ve recieved from the effort, however I\'m not dead as yet, so who knows. Delightful and sweetly rendered with a waltzing poignancy. Thank you for sharing! I love it.
March 29th, 2025 09:43
You Get Out What You Put In
orchidee said:
Oh no! What did one put one\'s foot in? Don\'t tell me - it may be TMI (too Much Info). lol.
March 29th, 2025 03:19
orchidee said:
Oh no! What did one put one\'s foot in? Don\'t tell me - it may be TMI (too Much Info). lol.
March 29th, 2025 03:19
The Race
Goldfinch60 said:
Just keep moving forward Tobani and the race will end when life has been satisfied.
Andy
March 29th, 2025 02:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Just keep moving forward Tobani and the race will end when life has been satisfied.
Andy
March 29th, 2025 02:54
The Race
rebellion_in_sanity said:
So very true. Wish we could recall this simple wishdom everytime we fee dejected because we were not in control
March 28th, 2025 08:04
rebellion_in_sanity said:
So very true. Wish we could recall this simple wishdom everytime we fee dejected because we were not in control
March 28th, 2025 08:04
Devil By Your Side.
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. Love the last lines. Nicely done.
March 28th, 2025 08:03
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. Love the last lines. Nicely done.
March 28th, 2025 08:03
The Race
arqios said:
And how we finish always says more about us than how it is we began the race🙏🏻🕊️
March 28th, 2025 05:23
arqios said:
And how we finish always says more about us than how it is we began the race🙏🏻🕊️
March 28th, 2025 05:23
The Race
sorenbarrett said:
Another piece of poetic wisdom, short and to the point. Nicely done Tobani
March 28th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Another piece of poetic wisdom, short and to the point. Nicely done Tobani
March 28th, 2025 04:16
Devil By Your Side.
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Tobani. In our lives the devil does play its hand but in my life My Angel is always there to take me forward into a better place as I am sure your Angel does the same to you.
Andy
March 28th, 2025 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Tobani. In our lives the devil does play its hand but in my life My Angel is always there to take me forward into a better place as I am sure your Angel does the same to you.
Andy
March 28th, 2025 02:24
Devil By Your Side.
Damaso said:
Wow, so this is a true master of execution! Totally overwhelmed, that was too much for today. Excellent.
March 27th, 2025 13:12
Damaso said:
Wow, so this is a true master of execution! Totally overwhelmed, that was too much for today. Excellent.
March 27th, 2025 13:12
Devil By Your Side.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful poem, my friend. Truthfully, I have seen this happen in real time, Tobani. The person went to jail for murdering someone who abused them as a child. That person today is a public speaker and helping people like them find help and support in moving past their pain and suffering toward healing and making a positive impact. A powerful and important write. A must fave from me. 🖤🐦⬛🙏
March 27th, 2025 07:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful poem, my friend. Truthfully, I have seen this happen in real time, Tobani. The person went to jail for murdering someone who abused them as a child. That person today is a public speaker and helping people like them find help and support in moving past their pain and suffering toward healing and making a positive impact. A powerful and important write. A must fave from me. 🖤🐦⬛🙏
March 27th, 2025 07:56
Devil By Your Side.
arqios said:
I was just imagining the angel and the devil on the shoulder and here before me lay a complete-whole poem !🕊🙏🏻
March 27th, 2025 05:30
arqios said:
I was just imagining the angel and the devil on the shoulder and here before me lay a complete-whole poem !🕊🙏🏻
March 27th, 2025 05:30
Devil By Your Side.
sorenbarrett said:
Great write! Revenge is one of those drugs that leaves you feeling temporarily high only to fall into addiction and the ravishes of hate. Nicely written this poem switches off the pairing of devil and angel to provide a good balance nicely crafted
March 27th, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
Great write! Revenge is one of those drugs that leaves you feeling temporarily high only to fall into addiction and the ravishes of hate. Nicely written this poem switches off the pairing of devil and angel to provide a good balance nicely crafted
March 27th, 2025 04:07
Plot For Redevelopment
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine metaphor Tobani, sometimes life just cannot be fixed and we need to move on.
Andy
March 27th, 2025 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine metaphor Tobani, sometimes life just cannot be fixed and we need to move on.
Andy
March 27th, 2025 01:44
Today Is Tomorrows History.
NafisaSB said:
beautiful message worth following - thanks for sharing
March 26th, 2025 23:36
NafisaSB said:
beautiful message worth following - thanks for sharing
March 26th, 2025 23:36
Plot For Redevelopment
Cheeky Missy said:
Different style indeed! La. This is a very pretty and provocative number. Fascinating. Intriguingly rendered with rather exquisite imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy, it seems akin to a diamond with so many facets and angles I\'m left pondering. Thank you for sharing.
March 26th, 2025 11:04
Cheeky Missy said:
Different style indeed! La. This is a very pretty and provocative number. Fascinating. Intriguingly rendered with rather exquisite imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy, it seems akin to a diamond with so many facets and angles I\'m left pondering. Thank you for sharing.
March 26th, 2025 11:04
Plot For Redevelopment
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Always fun to expand one\'s footing and reach in the fertile soil of poetic exploration. I love this, Tobani. This, to me, represents all the developed areas in one\'s life that could use redevelopment. Of course, this poem could be read any number of ways from literal onward. Well done, on this, my friend! 🌹👏
March 26th, 2025 07:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Always fun to expand one\'s footing and reach in the fertile soil of poetic exploration. I love this, Tobani. This, to me, represents all the developed areas in one\'s life that could use redevelopment. Of course, this poem could be read any number of ways from literal onward. Well done, on this, my friend! 🌹👏
March 26th, 2025 07:22
Plot For Redevelopment
David Wakeling said:
Certainly a complex poem. Excelllent. You came to the right decision not to redevelop. Interesting poem.
March 26th, 2025 05:26
David Wakeling said:
Certainly a complex poem. Excelllent. You came to the right decision not to redevelop. Interesting poem.
March 26th, 2025 05:26
Plot For Redevelopment
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor of the undeveloped. So it is with life. Many plots of our character or potential talents lay undeveloped because we feel that it may take more effort or time than we are willing or able to devote. They lay undeveloped plots. Nice metaphor my friend
March 26th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor of the undeveloped. So it is with life. Many plots of our character or potential talents lay undeveloped because we feel that it may take more effort or time than we are willing or able to devote. They lay undeveloped plots. Nice metaphor my friend
March 26th, 2025 04:11
Plot For Redevelopment
arqios said:
Quite relevant and very interesting with your voice at its core🙏🏻🕊️
March 26th, 2025 03:10
arqios said:
Quite relevant and very interesting with your voice at its core🙏🏻🕊️
March 26th, 2025 03:10
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