Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Jack and Jill
David Wakeling said:
That couple Jack and Jill always up to some tricks.Good fun read mi amigo
June 7th, 2025 04:25
David Wakeling said:
That couple Jack and Jill always up to some tricks.Good fun read mi amigo
June 7th, 2025 04:25
Jack and Jill
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks for the fun Tobani when I was young my sister had a cat that hated my brother as much as he hated it. It would find his shoes and do its thing in them.
June 7th, 2025 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks for the fun Tobani when I was young my sister had a cat that hated my brother as much as he hated it. It would find his shoes and do its thing in them.
June 7th, 2025 03:47
Jolly Fun!!!
NafisaSB said:
Trying to visualize the scene- but what I see is Mary reaching for that roll - lol
Enjoyed the write
June 6th, 2025 12:10
NafisaSB said:
Trying to visualize the scene- but what I see is Mary reaching for that roll - lol
Enjoyed the write
June 6th, 2025 12:10
Your Heart Is Strong.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth! That which we refer to as \"the heart\" is really in our head! 🤣 Wonderful job on this. Profound, my friend! Hope your weekend rocks! 🌹👏
June 6th, 2025 06:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth! That which we refer to as \"the heart\" is really in our head! 🤣 Wonderful job on this. Profound, my friend! Hope your weekend rocks! 🌹👏
June 6th, 2025 06:40
Your Heart Is Strong.
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Mind power is the supreme power ...Mind is the software of the brain...Good in brevity!
June 6th, 2025 04:51
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Mind power is the supreme power ...Mind is the software of the brain...Good in brevity!
June 6th, 2025 04:51
Your Heart Is Strong.
David Wakeling said:
This is so true. If we look to our emotions we often get a better answer.The mind is often very selfish.A thoughtful piece. Well done
June 6th, 2025 04:08
David Wakeling said:
This is so true. If we look to our emotions we often get a better answer.The mind is often very selfish.A thoughtful piece. Well done
June 6th, 2025 04:08
Your Heart Is Strong.
sorenbarrett said:
I think you\'re right I\'ve been called feeble minded all my life lol A most motivational write Tobani a call to action and a placing of blame on something we have control over. Very nice in its brevity
June 6th, 2025 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
I think you\'re right I\'ve been called feeble minded all my life lol A most motivational write Tobani a call to action and a placing of blame on something we have control over. Very nice in its brevity
June 6th, 2025 03:47
They Told Me They Loved Me.
Goldfinch60 said:
Extremely sad words Tobani, if this is true your got through it and are here for us all.
Andy
June 6th, 2025 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Extremely sad words Tobani, if this is true your got through it and are here for us all.
Andy
June 6th, 2025 01:43
They Told Me They Loved Me.
Damaso said:
Well, teacher, I found your text that has brought me to tears, reliving moments marked by fire. Resentment was never the answer; it only leads to dying of poisoning. But the consequences of the scars of physical and psychological violence at an early age leave such deep scars that it\'s difficult to identify them once they have penetrated so deeply into your life. Today, I just want to be that adult I missed in those days. Incredible writing, Sir. Greetings.
June 5th, 2025 09:09
Damaso said:
Well, teacher, I found your text that has brought me to tears, reliving moments marked by fire. Resentment was never the answer; it only leads to dying of poisoning. But the consequences of the scars of physical and psychological violence at an early age leave such deep scars that it\'s difficult to identify them once they have penetrated so deeply into your life. Today, I just want to be that adult I missed in those days. Incredible writing, Sir. Greetings.
June 5th, 2025 09:09
They Told Me They Loved Me.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of sadness, a tragic story, painted in lines of questions that seem rhetorical. A hard read that pains the heart.
June 5th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of sadness, a tragic story, painted in lines of questions that seem rhetorical. A hard read that pains the heart.
June 5th, 2025 04:20
They Told Me They Loved Me.
David Wakeling said:
No-one deserves suffering and blame. It really sounds like a miserable up bringing. But the one clear thing is that you \"survived\" my friend. You survived. If you can survive parents like that you can survive anything. Congratulations on a very difficult poem to write. My childhood was similar so I can relate
June 5th, 2025 04:18
David Wakeling said:
No-one deserves suffering and blame. It really sounds like a miserable up bringing. But the one clear thing is that you \"survived\" my friend. You survived. If you can survive parents like that you can survive anything. Congratulations on a very difficult poem to write. My childhood was similar so I can relate
June 5th, 2025 04:18
False Impressions.
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth. Black Like Me proves that, the alleged attempt to see another angle what most of us forget is rather crucial. We can only offer empathy until we too have experienced whatever, seems to me. Gorgeous in tantalizingly eloquent brevity. Rendered beautifully with superb imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
June 4th, 2025 14:49
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth. Black Like Me proves that, the alleged attempt to see another angle what most of us forget is rather crucial. We can only offer empathy until we too have experienced whatever, seems to me. Gorgeous in tantalizingly eloquent brevity. Rendered beautifully with superb imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
June 4th, 2025 14:49
Head Battles The Heart.
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, you\'re too good! If only! \"...the heart is deceitful above all things and desperately wicked: who can know it?\"(Jeremiah 17:9). Oh, I can\'t find words to express how much I love, love, love this gorgeous number of yours!!! Exquisite and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, delightful, albeit bittersweet poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing, I love it!!!
June 4th, 2025 14:45
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, you\'re too good! If only! \"...the heart is deceitful above all things and desperately wicked: who can know it?\"(Jeremiah 17:9). Oh, I can\'t find words to express how much I love, love, love this gorgeous number of yours!!! Exquisite and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, delightful, albeit bittersweet poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing, I love it!!!
June 4th, 2025 14:45
False Impressions.
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words peel back layers, revealing truth beneath the surface. A powerful reminder that authenticity lives within, beyond any facade.
June 4th, 2025 11:46
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words peel back layers, revealing truth beneath the surface. A powerful reminder that authenticity lives within, beyond any facade.
June 4th, 2025 11:46
False Impressions.
David Wakeling said:
Yes this is so true.It is what is inside that matters. An enjoyable read compadre
June 4th, 2025 04:24
David Wakeling said:
Yes this is so true.It is what is inside that matters. An enjoyable read compadre
June 4th, 2025 04:24
False Impressions.
sorenbarrett said:
It has always been interesting to me why white people wish to be darker but discriminate darker skin and why darker people want to be lighter. A mind provoking read.
June 4th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
It has always been interesting to me why white people wish to be darker but discriminate darker skin and why darker people want to be lighter. A mind provoking read.
June 4th, 2025 04:18
Wise Man Say (11).
Jan bach said:
Loved it!! SO true, thought provoking which turns to fun - but still true !
Thank you.
Jan bach.
June 4th, 2025 03:46
Jan bach said:
Loved it!! SO true, thought provoking which turns to fun - but still true !
Thank you.
Jan bach.
June 4th, 2025 03:46
False Impressions.
arqios said:
We still often judge the outward appearance though. Good stuff🕊️🙏🏻
June 4th, 2025 03:03
arqios said:
We still often judge the outward appearance though. Good stuff🕊️🙏🏻
June 4th, 2025 03:03
Head Battles The Heart.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Tobani and so true but when head and heart are as one life is wonderful.
Andy
June 4th, 2025 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Tobani and so true but when head and heart are as one life is wonderful.
Andy
June 4th, 2025 01:13
Head Battles The Heart.
Damaso said:
What a beautiful piece. In my experience, nothing I\'ve ever done with my heart has ever been regretted, but the mind always speaks first, and with good arguments, even though they\'re usually just calculations. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
June 3rd, 2025 16:37
Damaso said:
What a beautiful piece. In my experience, nothing I\'ve ever done with my heart has ever been regretted, but the mind always speaks first, and with good arguments, even though they\'re usually just calculations. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
June 3rd, 2025 16:37
Head Battles The Heart.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The head and the heart, two vital to our existence, physically and philosophically. I have found many who neglect over the other, do so to their own peril. This poem, as I read it, is about the balancing act needed to keep both sides at bay. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
June 3rd, 2025 14:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The head and the heart, two vital to our existence, physically and philosophically. I have found many who neglect over the other, do so to their own peril. This poem, as I read it, is about the balancing act needed to keep both sides at bay. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
June 3rd, 2025 14:48
Head Battles The Heart.
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing work. Very well constructed. It puts the Head against the Head in an age-old battle. A person\'s feelings and a person\'s logic are shown in conflict at first but resolve that at the end. Well done
June 3rd, 2025 04:14
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing work. Very well constructed. It puts the Head against the Head in an age-old battle. A person\'s feelings and a person\'s logic are shown in conflict at first but resolve that at the end. Well done
June 3rd, 2025 04:14
Head Battles The Heart.
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the differences between logic and emotion and how they do not always agree. This time the head came out on top but it is not always so. A fun and very enjoyable read.
June 3rd, 2025 03:38
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the differences between logic and emotion and how they do not always agree. This time the head came out on top but it is not always so. A fun and very enjoyable read.
June 3rd, 2025 03:38
Natures S.O.S.
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Tobani, we are destroying our world through greed and selfishness.
Andy
June 3rd, 2025 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Tobani, we are destroying our world through greed and selfishness.
Andy
June 3rd, 2025 01:43
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