Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Lady of The Night (Out of Need)
Neville said:
This is terribly sad but ever so common and true .. I work a lot with sex workers (both male & female) & many have hearts of gold and would do anything to help someone else in need not to mention their own flesh and blood .. Excellent my friend .. Neville
December 6th, 2024 03:32
Neville said:
This is terribly sad but ever so common and true .. I work a lot with sex workers (both male & female) & many have hearts of gold and would do anything to help someone else in need not to mention their own flesh and blood .. Excellent my friend .. Neville
December 6th, 2024 03:32
Lady of The Night (Out of Need)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Putting yourself in other\'s shoes requires thoughtful intentionality and humility. That is so lacking in this world, but your poem shows it is not completely lacking. Indeed, this poem serves as a call to action to all who have open ears and hearts to hear and receive. Excellent poem Tobani! 🌹👏
December 6th, 2024 02:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Putting yourself in other\'s shoes requires thoughtful intentionality and humility. That is so lacking in this world, but your poem shows it is not completely lacking. Indeed, this poem serves as a call to action to all who have open ears and hearts to hear and receive. Excellent poem Tobani! 🌹👏
December 6th, 2024 02:25
Lady of The Night (Out of Need)
Cassie58 said:
Survival is everything. If you have a child to feed, you wouldn’t hesitate if you couldn’t find another way to bring in the bread. Don’t judge others, show some compassion. Tabani, you have narrated this situation skillfully. It is a dangerous situation to contemplate, but survival overrules everything else. Wonderfully composed.
December 6th, 2024 00:46
Cassie58 said:
Survival is everything. If you have a child to feed, you wouldn’t hesitate if you couldn’t find another way to bring in the bread. Don’t judge others, show some compassion. Tabani, you have narrated this situation skillfully. It is a dangerous situation to contemplate, but survival overrules everything else. Wonderfully composed.
December 6th, 2024 00:46
Creation of Life
Doggerel Dave said:
Well don\'t let me rain on your parade. However, for me our previous conversation still stands..
December 5th, 2024 19:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Well don\'t let me rain on your parade. However, for me our previous conversation still stands..
December 5th, 2024 19:33
Creation of Life
David Wakeling said:
They say never put all your eggs in one basket but hey what would I know. Good fun poem
December 5th, 2024 15:24
David Wakeling said:
They say never put all your eggs in one basket but hey what would I know. Good fun poem
December 5th, 2024 15:24
Creation of Life
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done, Tobni. For all the choices knocking Mom opened the door for the one to be you.
December 5th, 2024 10:58
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done, Tobni. For all the choices knocking Mom opened the door for the one to be you.
December 5th, 2024 10:58
Creation of Life
Neville said:
I think you have not only achieved your stated objective but you also took me on a very nostalgic journey back to Miss Weavers biology class back in the good old days .. Neville
December 5th, 2024 09:21
Neville said:
I think you have not only achieved your stated objective but you also took me on a very nostalgic journey back to Miss Weavers biology class back in the good old days .. Neville
December 5th, 2024 09:21
Creation of Life
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting journey. If it is a human one in all very few cases, it is only one sperm that wins the race. It is also an issue of luck as to which fallopian tube they take. Read about evolution as well and survival of the fittest which winds out overtime over luck
December 5th, 2024 08:28
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting journey. If it is a human one in all very few cases, it is only one sperm that wins the race. It is also an issue of luck as to which fallopian tube they take. Read about evolution as well and survival of the fittest which winds out overtime over luck
December 5th, 2024 08:28
Creation of Life
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth in poem! Wonderful write. It really captures the beauty and miracle of procreation! Against all odds...the joining together to make life. Beautiful job, Tobani! An easy fave for me! 🌹👏
December 5th, 2024 08:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth in poem! Wonderful write. It really captures the beauty and miracle of procreation! Against all odds...the joining together to make life. Beautiful job, Tobani! An easy fave for me! 🌹👏
December 5th, 2024 08:09
Creation of Life
arqios said:
Now that’s the story of my beginnings, a quite unplanned pregnancy on my mum’s part. My dad did the responsible thing and stayed, for a while and 4 children later moved on to more “love”-filled relationship. The waypoint out. It makes me realise how amazing that journey was, conception, having partaken but not having any memory of it.
December 5th, 2024 06:33
arqios said:
Now that’s the story of my beginnings, a quite unplanned pregnancy on my mum’s part. My dad did the responsible thing and stayed, for a while and 4 children later moved on to more “love”-filled relationship. The waypoint out. It makes me realise how amazing that journey was, conception, having partaken but not having any memory of it.
December 5th, 2024 06:33
She Says Goodbye
teardrop said:
I am a huge fan of rhyming poetry and yours was a pleasure to read. Loved the story it told and your rhyming did not feel forced but relaxed as your story unfolded. I am looking forward to reading more of your writtings....
December 2nd, 2024 13:57
teardrop said:
I am a huge fan of rhyming poetry and yours was a pleasure to read. Loved the story it told and your rhyming did not feel forced but relaxed as your story unfolded. I am looking forward to reading more of your writtings....
December 2nd, 2024 13:57
She Says Goodbye
Cassie58 said:
So very hard to let go. You have penned those emotions so well here. A heart felt write. Well done.
December 2nd, 2024 08:59
Cassie58 said:
So very hard to let go. You have penned those emotions so well here. A heart felt write. Well done.
December 2nd, 2024 08:59
She Says Goodbye
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It’s so hard to let go and say behind and you have expressed that so well in this poem! Well done! 🌹👏
December 1st, 2024 13:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It’s so hard to let go and say behind and you have expressed that so well in this poem! Well done! 🌹👏
December 1st, 2024 13:15
She Says Goodbye
arqios said:
Okay, so I double backed and went to the previous poem and our conversation about it. Boy, this feels like there is a bit of a step back moment, still emotional but more in control (sorry for this unencompassing word, ironic to its meaning, in this context) but still exudes the evocative expression.
December 1st, 2024 06:19
arqios said:
Okay, so I double backed and went to the previous poem and our conversation about it. Boy, this feels like there is a bit of a step back moment, still emotional but more in control (sorry for this unencompassing word, ironic to its meaning, in this context) but still exudes the evocative expression.
December 1st, 2024 06:19
She Says Goodbye
sorenbarrett said:
Saying goodbye as often a very difficult thing to do. We form attachments that are not easily broken. This poem emphasizes such feelings. Very nicely written.
December 1st, 2024 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
Saying goodbye as often a very difficult thing to do. We form attachments that are not easily broken. This poem emphasizes such feelings. Very nicely written.
December 1st, 2024 05:47
Hanging On by My Fingertips.
Cassie58 said:
Sad when love is on the downward slope. Can be retrieved with effort, but not everyone has the energy to invest in that outcome. Nicely penned composition. I enjoyed my visit.
November 29th, 2024 12:36
Cassie58 said:
Sad when love is on the downward slope. Can be retrieved with effort, but not everyone has the energy to invest in that outcome. Nicely penned composition. I enjoyed my visit.
November 29th, 2024 12:36
Hanging On by My Fingertips.
arqios said:
This is like that slow motion all happening at once scene where everything begins to take on a cutting edge clarity but we are unable to do anything about it. Ah, life… at least the poetry came out to log this moment in a life.
November 29th, 2024 06:32
arqios said:
This is like that slow motion all happening at once scene where everything begins to take on a cutting edge clarity but we are unable to do anything about it. Ah, life… at least the poetry came out to log this moment in a life.
November 29th, 2024 06:32
Hanging On by My Fingertips.
Doggerel Dave said:
Sad it sounds, but by now a distant memory. Glad to know you survived. I really don\'t think it necessary to lash yourself in this way.
Notifications show you commented on my poem, but for what is some technical reason probably, I have no access to it..... (I have few enough responses, I can\'t afford to miss one...😂)
November 29th, 2024 06:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Sad it sounds, but by now a distant memory. Glad to know you survived. I really don\'t think it necessary to lash yourself in this way.
Notifications show you commented on my poem, but for what is some technical reason probably, I have no access to it..... (I have few enough responses, I can\'t afford to miss one...😂)
November 29th, 2024 06:15
Hanging On by My Fingertips.
sorenbarrett said:
When relationships fade away, it is disturbing. This poem speaks to this, and I can feel the emotion in it. Nicely written.
November 29th, 2024 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
When relationships fade away, it is disturbing. This poem speaks to this, and I can feel the emotion in it. Nicely written.
November 29th, 2024 04:49
Hanging On by My Fingertips.
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Can it be saved? And how
November 29th, 2024 01:27
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Can it be saved? And how
November 29th, 2024 01:27
The Lunatics are On the Move
Cassie58 said:
Yes, the lunatics are on the move and the world becomes more dangerous by the day. Nuts isn’t it? Half the world hungry while billions is spent on war mongering. Makes you wanna jet off to Mars. Strong piece. I hear you.
November 28th, 2024 09:33
Cassie58 said:
Yes, the lunatics are on the move and the world becomes more dangerous by the day. Nuts isn’t it? Half the world hungry while billions is spent on war mongering. Makes you wanna jet off to Mars. Strong piece. I hear you.
November 28th, 2024 09:33
The Lunatics are On the Move
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for the comment, but i do not understand a word of it.
November 28th, 2024 06:02
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for the comment, but i do not understand a word of it.
November 28th, 2024 06:02
The Lunatics are On the Move
2781 said:
If thou sees the oppression of the poor, and violent perverting of judgement and justice in a province, marvel not at the matter: for he that is higher than the highest regardeth; and there be higher than they.
November 28th, 2024 05:51
2781 said:
If thou sees the oppression of the poor, and violent perverting of judgement and justice in a province, marvel not at the matter: for he that is higher than the highest regardeth; and there be higher than they.
November 28th, 2024 05:51
Fear Of Love.
Caring dove said:
A nicely expressed writing , and it’s true .. if we don’t like ourselves , we get insecure
November 22nd, 2024 03:25
Caring dove said:
A nicely expressed writing , and it’s true .. if we don’t like ourselves , we get insecure
November 22nd, 2024 03:25
Ukraine
Maplespal said:
At some point Humanity will realize the wars are wars against itself. Some day we will realize we are all on the same path. We are all Humans on the same ride, but for some reason think being divided represents what we are.
November 2nd, 2024 09:09
Maplespal said:
At some point Humanity will realize the wars are wars against itself. Some day we will realize we are all on the same path. We are all Humans on the same ride, but for some reason think being divided represents what we are.
November 2nd, 2024 09:09
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