Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
The Voices Have Gone
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. Profound, vulnerable, raw, honest...and wise. Of course, coming from the author of the \"Wise Man Say\" series, that is not a surprise. Indeed. I believe we all hear voices...though not in the sense you are presenting here. Still, I can relate to this in a lot of ways. Truthfully, that is the hard thing about psych meds, whether it be for depression, anxiety, schizophrenia, or whatever, there\'s piece of \"you\" that goes away with the struggle or the \"voices\" or whatever is being \"treated.\" Some drugs more than others, but that is why it is so challenging for a lot of people to stay on their medication. I have found myself there in that struggle. Well done on this, my friend. A much needed write, Nataiella. Thank you for sharing! 🖤🕯️🧠🌫️🤍
April 1st, 2025 11:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. Profound, vulnerable, raw, honest...and wise. Of course, coming from the author of the \"Wise Man Say\" series, that is not a surprise. Indeed. I believe we all hear voices...though not in the sense you are presenting here. Still, I can relate to this in a lot of ways. Truthfully, that is the hard thing about psych meds, whether it be for depression, anxiety, schizophrenia, or whatever, there\'s piece of \"you\" that goes away with the struggle or the \"voices\" or whatever is being \"treated.\" Some drugs more than others, but that is why it is so challenging for a lot of people to stay on their medication. I have found myself there in that struggle. Well done on this, my friend. A much needed write, Nataiella. Thank you for sharing! 🖤🕯️🧠🌫️🤍
April 1st, 2025 11:15
The Voices Have Gone
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels/sounds like a psychosis - so where (many folks end up in hospital)....are you??
A neat write.
April 1st, 2025 05:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels/sounds like a psychosis - so where (many folks end up in hospital)....are you??
A neat write.
April 1st, 2025 05:13
The Voices Have Gone
sorenbarrett said:
When we grow accustomed to something no matter what we miss it. A most interesting poem of defining what is normal as opposed to what is good. And then we must ask good for who. Nicely done Tobani
April 1st, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
When we grow accustomed to something no matter what we miss it. A most interesting poem of defining what is normal as opposed to what is good. And then we must ask good for who. Nicely done Tobani
April 1st, 2025 04:27
The Voices Have Gone
arqios said:
I do know of these voices but I rarely hear them any longer. Other sounds seem to have taken more importance of late 🙏🏻🕊️
April 1st, 2025 03:52
arqios said:
I do know of these voices but I rarely hear them any longer. Other sounds seem to have taken more importance of late 🙏🏻🕊️
April 1st, 2025 03:52
Sold Your Soul To The Devil
hzugman said:
Nice description of the shortfalls of shortcuts. I really enjoyed this. Excellent poem.
March 31st, 2025 12:50
hzugman said:
Nice description of the shortfalls of shortcuts. I really enjoyed this. Excellent poem.
March 31st, 2025 12:50
You Get Out What You Put In
hzugman said:
Well said but I guess it depends on where you put your foot.
March 31st, 2025 11:46
hzugman said:
Well said but I guess it depends on where you put your foot.
March 31st, 2025 11:46
Sold Your Soul To The Devil
Salvia.S said:
A cautionary tale about the drak side of fame & the music industry. Well written!!
March 31st, 2025 07:41
Salvia.S said:
A cautionary tale about the drak side of fame & the music industry. Well written!!
March 31st, 2025 07:41
Aving A Laugh Wise Man Say (8)
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done. Really enjoyed. The line about the dog\'s breath made me smile.
March 31st, 2025 06:56
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done. Really enjoyed. The line about the dog\'s breath made me smile.
March 31st, 2025 06:56
Sold Your Soul To The Devil
Laguna said:
The devils deal is never worth it and it says a lot about the person who is willing to sign it. Great poem.
March 31st, 2025 06:31
Laguna said:
The devils deal is never worth it and it says a lot about the person who is willing to sign it. Great poem.
March 31st, 2025 06:31
Sold Your Soul To The Devil
sorenbarrett said:
Everything has its price. From the author note I know that this was intended for those that want quick fame and riches but as a metaphor it reaches far further. We all sell our souls for one thing or another. We make our choices as to what is important to us at the moment or in the foreseen future and often find that it is not all we thought it would be. Sacrifices of school for a job that doesn\'t exist or pays less, military service for a cause one doesn\'t support, a marriage to a partner we find not to be right. A lovely write that is quite pertinent
March 31st, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Everything has its price. From the author note I know that this was intended for those that want quick fame and riches but as a metaphor it reaches far further. We all sell our souls for one thing or another. We make our choices as to what is important to us at the moment or in the foreseen future and often find that it is not all we thought it would be. Sacrifices of school for a job that doesn\'t exist or pays less, military service for a cause one doesn\'t support, a marriage to a partner we find not to be right. A lovely write that is quite pertinent
March 31st, 2025 04:13
Aving A Laugh Wise Man Say (8)
Goldfinch60 said:
More good ones Tobanl especially the last one.
Andy
March 31st, 2025 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
More good ones Tobanl especially the last one.
Andy
March 31st, 2025 01:45
Aving A Laugh Wise Man Say (8)
E.J. Waling said:
Love all these sayings. Good read!
March 30th, 2025 18:44
E.J. Waling said:
Love all these sayings. Good read!
March 30th, 2025 18:44
Aving A Laugh Wise Man Say (8)
Neilton said:
Thank you for sharing such beautiful message! Enjoyed very much
March 30th, 2025 09:25
Neilton said:
Thank you for sharing such beautiful message! Enjoyed very much
March 30th, 2025 09:25
Aving A Laugh Wise Man Say (8)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great ones, my friend! You should publish these into a book. They are THAT good! Can\'t wait for more. And, oh, true story on a dog\'s breath. I\'ve experienced both breath and bite...breath is worse so long as it doesn\'t turn to a mauling! LOL! Well done! 🌹👏 Have a gorgeous Sunday!
March 30th, 2025 07:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great ones, my friend! You should publish these into a book. They are THAT good! Can\'t wait for more. And, oh, true story on a dog\'s breath. I\'ve experienced both breath and bite...breath is worse so long as it doesn\'t turn to a mauling! LOL! Well done! 🌹👏 Have a gorgeous Sunday!
March 30th, 2025 07:55
Aving A Laugh Wise Man Say (8)
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks for brightening the day with these pieces of smiles. Loved them
March 30th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks for brightening the day with these pieces of smiles. Loved them
March 30th, 2025 04:11
Aving A Laugh Wise Man Say (8)
arqios said:
Now this has become my Sunday rest and pot of cheer! 🙏🏻🕊
March 30th, 2025 02:47
arqios said:
Now this has become my Sunday rest and pot of cheer! 🙏🏻🕊
March 30th, 2025 02:47
You Get Out What You Put In
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope I do get my foot back Tobani, hopping through life is a challenge. 🤣😂🤣
Andy
March 30th, 2025 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope I do get my foot back Tobani, hopping through life is a challenge. 🤣😂🤣
Andy
March 30th, 2025 01:51
You Get Out What You Put In
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sardonic wit, sharp humor, a foot to a jerk\'s ass..whatever you want to call this...it is masterfully brilliant in it\'s brevity, my friend. LOVE THIS! 🌹🙏 If I ever say this to anyone in real time, you will be cited! 🤣 \"Wise man Tobani says...\" or something to that effect! Again, brilliant!
March 29th, 2025 11:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sardonic wit, sharp humor, a foot to a jerk\'s ass..whatever you want to call this...it is masterfully brilliant in it\'s brevity, my friend. LOVE THIS! 🌹🙏 If I ever say this to anyone in real time, you will be cited! 🤣 \"Wise man Tobani says...\" or something to that effect! Again, brilliant!
March 29th, 2025 11:08
The Race
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth, good Sir. Begins to remind me of my late father\'s injunction to, \"enjoy the ride! The journey is half the fun of getting there...\" whether or not that is applicable. Beautifully rendered with a delightfully haunting poignancy. Thank go for sharing.
March 29th, 2025 10:08
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth, good Sir. Begins to remind me of my late father\'s injunction to, \"enjoy the ride! The journey is half the fun of getting there...\" whether or not that is applicable. Beautifully rendered with a delightfully haunting poignancy. Thank go for sharing.
March 29th, 2025 10:08
You Get Out What You Put In
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha, you\'re hilarious! Me still is uncertain about that, though, since methinks I\'ve put in a ton more than I\'ve recieved from the effort, however I\'m not dead as yet, so who knows. Delightful and sweetly rendered with a waltzing poignancy. Thank you for sharing! I love it.
March 29th, 2025 09:43
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha, you\'re hilarious! Me still is uncertain about that, though, since methinks I\'ve put in a ton more than I\'ve recieved from the effort, however I\'m not dead as yet, so who knows. Delightful and sweetly rendered with a waltzing poignancy. Thank you for sharing! I love it.
March 29th, 2025 09:43
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