Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Today Is Tomorrows History.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen! By and by amen! If people would heed this advice, the world would be utopia. Wonderful way to start the day. Thank you, my friend! 🌹👏
March 19th, 2025 08:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen! By and by amen! If people would heed this advice, the world would be utopia. Wonderful way to start the day. Thank you, my friend! 🌹👏
March 19th, 2025 08:38
Today Is Tomorrows History.
Salvia.S said:
A powerful reminder to make today count!
March 19th, 2025 07:45
Salvia.S said:
A powerful reminder to make today count!
March 19th, 2025 07:45
Today Is Tomorrows History.
Friendship said:
Welll done,today\'s actions will become tomorrow\'s history, have a great day.
March 19th, 2025 07:03
Friendship said:
Welll done,today\'s actions will become tomorrow\'s history, have a great day.
March 19th, 2025 07:03
Today Is Tomorrows History.
David Wakeling said:
Some wisdom here.I think the poem is excellent.Well done mi amigo
March 19th, 2025 05:20
David Wakeling said:
Some wisdom here.I think the poem is excellent.Well done mi amigo
March 19th, 2025 05:20
Today Is Tomorrows History.
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely play on words that becomes a play on thoughts that becomes good advice. Very nice T
March 19th, 2025 03:25
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely play on words that becomes a play on thoughts that becomes good advice. Very nice T
March 19th, 2025 03:25
Value of Gifts
Caring dove said:
Gifts show people are thinking of you .. that’s true ..
Least someone has been kind enough to think to buy us a gift
A nice writing
March 19th, 2025 03:19
Caring dove said:
Gifts show people are thinking of you .. that’s true ..
Least someone has been kind enough to think to buy us a gift
A nice writing
March 19th, 2025 03:19
Today Is Tomorrows History.
arqios said:
Now that is an excellent outlook on life and the future 🙏🏻🕊️
March 19th, 2025 03:06
arqios said:
Now that is an excellent outlook on life and the future 🙏🏻🕊️
March 19th, 2025 03:06
My Mama`s Gone.
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a sad story Tobani, it happens so frequently, I have a friend who was abused for many years, she got rid of him eventually and I spent much time listening to her problems and helping all I could. She now has a new wonderful partner and they are wonderful together.
Andy
March 19th, 2025 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a sad story Tobani, it happens so frequently, I have a friend who was abused for many years, she got rid of him eventually and I spent much time listening to her problems and helping all I could. She now has a new wonderful partner and they are wonderful together.
Andy
March 19th, 2025 02:27
My Mama`s Gone.
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A deep and very relatable write. Truthful and raw. Thank you
March 18th, 2025 11:53
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A deep and very relatable write. Truthful and raw. Thank you
March 18th, 2025 11:53
My Mama`s Gone.
Friendship said:
Well written,So sad , This poem is narrated by a child, reflecting their perspective on family dynamics, particularly the relationship between the child’s parents—primarily focusing on the mother and father.
March 18th, 2025 08:45
Friendship said:
Well written,So sad , This poem is narrated by a child, reflecting their perspective on family dynamics, particularly the relationship between the child’s parents—primarily focusing on the mother and father.
March 18th, 2025 08:45
Is Peace Just a Fantasy.
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write and I fear you are correct. A thought-provoking piece.
March 18th, 2025 08:25
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write and I fear you are correct. A thought-provoking piece.
March 18th, 2025 08:25
My Mama`s Gone.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profoundly sad and terrible reality. Thank you sharing my friend! Excellent write. 🌹👏
March 18th, 2025 08:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profoundly sad and terrible reality. Thank you sharing my friend! Excellent write. 🌹👏
March 18th, 2025 08:24
My Mama`s Gone.
David Wakeling said:
Very distrubing events here.Its always difficult when Parents are abusive.Sad to read really.
March 18th, 2025 05:23
David Wakeling said:
Very distrubing events here.Its always difficult when Parents are abusive.Sad to read really.
March 18th, 2025 05:23
My Mama`s Gone.
sorenbarrett said:
Abuse an ugly monster that consumes both victim and perpetrator as well as many around it. A sad poem with a message that unfortunately those that need to hear it most will probably not hear. Well done
March 18th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
Abuse an ugly monster that consumes both victim and perpetrator as well as many around it. A sad poem with a message that unfortunately those that need to hear it most will probably not hear. Well done
March 18th, 2025 04:08
My Mama`s Gone.
arqios said:
Quite close to home for me but with slight differences. Powerful read🙏🏻🕊️
March 18th, 2025 03:54
arqios said:
Quite close to home for me but with slight differences. Powerful read🙏🏻🕊️
March 18th, 2025 03:54
Is Peace Just a Fantasy.
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Tobani, why cannot we stop fighting!!!
Andy
March 18th, 2025 03:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Tobani, why cannot we stop fighting!!!
Andy
March 18th, 2025 03:35
As The Clouds Gently Roll On By
Simurgh said:
Wonderful poem Tobani, the insight of your poem is indeed true! I also feel this feeling at times...... I understand how you feel... The reflections of the poem made it a lyrical song as well!
Bravo! Good work with beautiful touch of poetic treasure, Tobani🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
With love and warm regards
Simurgh
A renowned poetic bard from India
March 18th, 2025 00:04
Simurgh said:
Wonderful poem Tobani, the insight of your poem is indeed true! I also feel this feeling at times...... I understand how you feel... The reflections of the poem made it a lyrical song as well!
Bravo! Good work with beautiful touch of poetic treasure, Tobani🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
With love and warm regards
Simurgh
A renowned poetic bard from India
March 18th, 2025 00:04
Wise Man Says (6) Have Fun On a Sunny Sunday
John Prophet said:
Usual excellence!
March 17th, 2025 17:42
John Prophet said:
Usual excellence!
March 17th, 2025 17:42
Fun On A Sunnier Sunday
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re hilarious. Dumbing down reality with a playful twist is just enough fun for a day of rest, forsooth. Delightfully rendered with excellent imagery and a seriously haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 17th, 2025 16:36
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re hilarious. Dumbing down reality with a playful twist is just enough fun for a day of rest, forsooth. Delightfully rendered with excellent imagery and a seriously haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 17th, 2025 16:36
Is Peace Just a Fantasy.
MR.apocalypse said:
i very much like this idea may i use it for my next poem
March 17th, 2025 16:04
MR.apocalypse said:
i very much like this idea may i use it for my next poem
March 17th, 2025 16:04
Is Peace Just a Fantasy.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
As things currently are...FOR SURE. And what does true peace look like? It seems to me everyone\'s idea of what peace exactly is differs, which then sets up conflict, ironically. At the same time, I do believe in and strive for peace. How complicated of me! 🤣 We humans really are complex, no? Anywho, wonderfully though-provoking write on this St. Patrick\'s Day friend. And, I do believe your poem fits with the day in this way: as St. Patrick peacefully spread his faith only for the church to take over behind him and undo much of what he set up and, to make matter\'s worse, the dude is only remembered for green beer and snakes. All of this to question, can peace really be attained, when one can work for peace only to have it completely undone in one fell swoop. Anywho, a very thought-provoking and wonderful write, TobanI! 🌹👏☘️🎩☘️
March 17th, 2025 13:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
As things currently are...FOR SURE. And what does true peace look like? It seems to me everyone\'s idea of what peace exactly is differs, which then sets up conflict, ironically. At the same time, I do believe in and strive for peace. How complicated of me! 🤣 We humans really are complex, no? Anywho, wonderfully though-provoking write on this St. Patrick\'s Day friend. And, I do believe your poem fits with the day in this way: as St. Patrick peacefully spread his faith only for the church to take over behind him and undo much of what he set up and, to make matter\'s worse, the dude is only remembered for green beer and snakes. All of this to question, can peace really be attained, when one can work for peace only to have it completely undone in one fell swoop. Anywho, a very thought-provoking and wonderful write, TobanI! 🌹👏☘️🎩☘️
March 17th, 2025 13:50
The Water.
Shantha Teldeniya said:
Without water, there is no life
Water makes our world so bright
Your poem is very nice.
March 17th, 2025 11:09
Shantha Teldeniya said:
Without water, there is no life
Water makes our world so bright
Your poem is very nice.
March 17th, 2025 11:09
Is Peace Just a Fantasy.
Caring dove said:
Maybe one day there will be more peace .. hope so anyway
March 17th, 2025 10:27
Caring dove said:
Maybe one day there will be more peace .. hope so anyway
March 17th, 2025 10:27
Wise Man Says (6) Have Fun On a Sunny Sunday
Tom Dylan said:
This made me smile. Loved the last line. Just nailed it.
March 17th, 2025 09:22
Tom Dylan said:
This made me smile. Loved the last line. Just nailed it.
March 17th, 2025 09:22
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