Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence



Love and Hate
RSM0812 said:

Love and hate are the same side of a coin. Emotions caught in verse. Really good read. Thanks. Hopefully love wins over hate and separate when the coin is flipped.

January 9th, 2025 07:44

Love and Hate
sorenbarrett said:

It is said that the one that can not hate you can not love you. So true such strong emotions in the jealousy of love and the pity of hate take on new meaning. Strong emotions are chemical explosions often difficult to discern the difference. A wonderful write that is deeply philosophical and scientific at the same time. All put in great rhyme a wonderful poem

January 9th, 2025 06:07

Love and Hate
Poetic Licence said:

Thank you for your feedback, much appreciated, what did the last mean?

January 9th, 2025 02:57

Love and Hate
arqios said:

So true! You can’t have one without the other. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠπŸ‘πŸ» Now to walk away and rethink this.

January 9th, 2025 02:55

Which Did You Choose
Thad Wilk said:

With one eye πŸ‘οΈ good I would see! πŸ‘
One ear πŸ‘‚ I would hear only good.
One heart, stil i\'d choose the same. πŸ€”
Awesome poem, mind blowing
my friend!🀩
Thanks for sharing! πŸ‘
Best regards ✌️ Thad

January 8th, 2025 19:44

Which Did You Choose
Brian Otucho said:

Marvelous, you can\'t choose both at once but only one

January 8th, 2025 09:48

Which Did You Choose
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Bravo! Profound, pognant, and this will ALWAYS be timely. Well done! πŸŒΉπŸŒΉπŸ‘πŸ‘ You get the double rose and clap on this, dear Tobani!

January 8th, 2025 08:14

Which Did You Choose
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 8th, 2025 07:48

Which Did You Choose
arqios said:

Bam πŸ’₯ that was a one -two combo, so nice to be set up in such poetic manner!

January 8th, 2025 07:18

Which Did You Choose
sorenbarrett said:

With two eyes is see both evil and good, with two ears I hear both evil and good with one heart I may choose only one and it is all or nothing a great message you send and a great illustration you make.

January 8th, 2025 04:33

Hope in Those Smiling Eyes
Dan Williams said:

Sadly, this might all too likely come to pass. What a poor job we humans have done, what a good job you have done detailing it. Nice work.

January 8th, 2025 01:09

Hope in Those Smiling Eyes
Thad Wilk said:

Wow! 😳
A powerful and
poignant poem 😒
of the horrors of
war and how it changed
the hope in those,
once smiling eyes..
Outstanding imagery
throughout,
terrific presentation! πŸ‘
Best regards ✌️ Thad



January 7th, 2025 20:48

Hope in Those Smiling Eyes
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful.

January 7th, 2025 19:02

Hope in Those Smiling Eyes
RSM0812 said:

That\'s sad. Really emotionally impactful.

January 7th, 2025 16:01

Hope in Those Smiling Eyes
Tristan Robert Lange said:

War is awful and its consequences are so far reaching. A wonderful and poignant poem that describes the horror of war. Wonderful write, my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

January 7th, 2025 15:19

Hope in Those Smiling Eyes
xqw said:

Damn, this has such intense emotional weight. It feels really raw and honest. Loss is such a painful experience it\'s hard to put it into words, but your poem reflects it really well

January 7th, 2025 10:26

Hope in Those Smiling Eyes
arqios said:

War is never a good thing, both victor and vanquished loss a great deal, for me it’s always a Pyrrhic victory. And no one can tell me otherwise, the amount of lives, property, resources and peace that we had lost as a family alone are not and possibly will never be compensated by the so called resulting benefits gained. It’s just not worth it in the end.

January 7th, 2025 06:42

Hope in Those Smiling Eyes
David Wakeling said:

Sadly it is the world we live in.War is always somewhere.Hope is all we can cling to

January 7th, 2025 05:22

Hope in Those Smiling Eyes
rin said:

In the case of this poem, I think that it is a creation that can find hope in the main character.

January 7th, 2025 04:47

Hope in Those Smiling Eyes
sorenbarrett said:

The human condition is a social one and one of our fears is being alone. War and death threaten this and this poem portrays that fear. Nicely written

January 7th, 2025 04:17

Are The Words Still Healing
Thad Wilk said:

A captivating poem
and questionnaire i\'d say! πŸ€”
Very thought provoking
the words are still
healing day by day! πŸ‘πŸ€©
Much enjoyed thank you!! ☺️
Best regards ✌️ Thad

January 5th, 2025 23:37

My Heart Still Beats The Same
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Feelings of being isolated and being misunderstood are universal and resonated with me immediately. Lovely poem, enjoyed the read thoroughly

January 5th, 2025 09:01

Are The Words Still Healing
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This poem probes deep thought and self-reflection. A most wonderful, wise write Tobani! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

January 5th, 2025 07:58

Are The Words Still Healing
arqios said:

The word on words and our emotional journey, in a rhythmic and contemplative flow. Good use of repetition.

January 5th, 2025 05:28

Are The Words Still Healing
sorenbarrett said:

A most intersting format that makes good sense for the theme of the poem. Each question in a type of duality not answered but implied in a gentle way. Very nice it seemes quite eastern in its approach to teaching

January 5th, 2025 04:58

Are The Words Still Healing
rin said:

I read and asked myself questions one by one. I think it\'s a good poem.

January 5th, 2025 04:38

My Heart Still Beats The Same
Thad Wilk said:

A very poignant 😒
poem, some children
can be very cruel, in school! 🏫
Can result in very
terrible consequences in the end! 😞
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

January 4th, 2025 21:42

My Heart Still Beats The Same
Thomas W Case said:

Beauty.

January 4th, 2025 19:24

My Heart Still Beats The Same
David Wakeling said:

Sticks and stones will break your bones but your heart still beats the same. Rise above. Wonderful poem

January 4th, 2025 15:16

My Heart Still Beats The Same
Cassie58 said:

Children can be so cruel. I can remember being ridiculed because I looked like a stick insect. It hurt at the time, but I do believe I grew in strength as a result of those experiences. A touching write dear Tobani, which resonated with me.

January 4th, 2025 11:25



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