Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
The Lies
Doggerel Dave said:
Whose \"ageing foolish heart\" was taken then? Aah....um.... could be... mine!
February 25th, 2025 18:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Whose \"ageing foolish heart\" was taken then? Aah....um.... could be... mine!
February 25th, 2025 18:14
Figment of Your Imagination
Doggerel Dave said:
That’s fine, Tobani. No one could refute the truth behind those four lines.
But since you have gone to the trouble of informing me, should you wish to be better understood, then it would be your responsibility to use language to make clear your position, your reality (however hard or impossible that might be). A good provocation - thanks👍
February 25th, 2025 18:02
Doggerel Dave said:
That’s fine, Tobani. No one could refute the truth behind those four lines.
But since you have gone to the trouble of informing me, should you wish to be better understood, then it would be your responsibility to use language to make clear your position, your reality (however hard or impossible that might be). A good provocation - thanks👍
February 25th, 2025 18:02
To Be My Fathers Son
Cheeky Missy said:
Exquisitely rendered with a haunting poignancy and imagery surpassing my wonted categorization. I love it! Thank you so very, very much for sharing!
February 25th, 2025 15:25
Cheeky Missy said:
Exquisitely rendered with a haunting poignancy and imagery surpassing my wonted categorization. I love it! Thank you so very, very much for sharing!
February 25th, 2025 15:25
The Same Picture Frame
Cheeky Missy said:
Wondering the same countless times, how winsomely you\'ve rendered this age-old question which is the reason Mum and I used to pour over the old photos, seeming to relive what only lasted for mere minutes. Superbly rendered with excellent imagery and an exquisite poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 25th, 2025 15:22
Cheeky Missy said:
Wondering the same countless times, how winsomely you\'ve rendered this age-old question which is the reason Mum and I used to pour over the old photos, seeming to relive what only lasted for mere minutes. Superbly rendered with excellent imagery and an exquisite poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 25th, 2025 15:22
I Can`t Hide It
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Initially intriguing, yet charmingly revealing in conclusion what it is, how exquisitely rendered with excellent imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. I love, love, LOVE this! Thank you very much for sharing!
February 25th, 2025 15:19
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Initially intriguing, yet charmingly revealing in conclusion what it is, how exquisitely rendered with excellent imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. I love, love, LOVE this! Thank you very much for sharing!
February 25th, 2025 15:19
Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
Cheeky Missy said:
Child sits at wise man\'s knees, starry-eyed, yet will the same ever manage to escape the snares tastefully rendered to save souls from the same? Excellently rendered with lovely imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 25th, 2025 15:16
Cheeky Missy said:
Child sits at wise man\'s knees, starry-eyed, yet will the same ever manage to escape the snares tastefully rendered to save souls from the same? Excellently rendered with lovely imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 25th, 2025 15:16
Figment of Your Imagination
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh my word! Likeas a dark chocolate morsel packing a punch you savour, how expertly rendered in fitting brevity. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 25th, 2025 15:11
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh my word! Likeas a dark chocolate morsel packing a punch you savour, how expertly rendered in fitting brevity. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 25th, 2025 15:11
The Lies
Cheeky Missy said:
La, how this culls to mind the mutitudinous references in the Scriptures to this very pitfall. How every last one of us falls prey before we realize what\'s afoot. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you very much for sharing!
February 25th, 2025 15:08
Cheeky Missy said:
La, how this culls to mind the mutitudinous references in the Scriptures to this very pitfall. How every last one of us falls prey before we realize what\'s afoot. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you very much for sharing!
February 25th, 2025 15:08
The Lies
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Brief but very effective. A brlliant use of word economy. You paint a true picture in this poem, Tobani. Faved!
February 25th, 2025 15:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Brief but very effective. A brlliant use of word economy. You paint a true picture in this poem, Tobani. Faved!
February 25th, 2025 15:06
The Lies
Neville said:
Show me a man who denies ever being led up the garden path by the flutter of eyelashes, or the sway of a hip & by Jove, I\'ll point out a liar .. we are but fools at the end of the day .. Neville
February 25th, 2025 13:55
Neville said:
Show me a man who denies ever being led up the garden path by the flutter of eyelashes, or the sway of a hip & by Jove, I\'ll point out a liar .. we are but fools at the end of the day .. Neville
February 25th, 2025 13:55
Figment of Your Imagination
whats write for me said:
Perception is in the eye of the beholder, wonderful weiting.
February 25th, 2025 13:38
whats write for me said:
Perception is in the eye of the beholder, wonderful weiting.
February 25th, 2025 13:38
The Lies
sorenbarrett said:
So much said in so few lines and more with such pleasing rhyme. This one deserves a fave
February 25th, 2025 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
So much said in so few lines and more with such pleasing rhyme. This one deserves a fave
February 25th, 2025 06:10
The Lies
arqios said:
I am sold out to this as I have encountered for myself eyes like those 🙏🏻🕊
February 25th, 2025 05:35
arqios said:
I am sold out to this as I have encountered for myself eyes like those 🙏🏻🕊
February 25th, 2025 05:35
Figment of Your Imagination
Goldfinch60 said:
Many perceptions are not always wrong Tobani.
Andy
February 25th, 2025 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Many perceptions are not always wrong Tobani.
Andy
February 25th, 2025 02:16
Figment of Your Imagination
RSM0812 said:
People only think they know you. They really don\'t.
February 24th, 2025 23:55
RSM0812 said:
People only think they know you. They really don\'t.
February 24th, 2025 23:55
Figment of Your Imagination
Bloomingdale said:
Simple and sends the message ❤️
February 24th, 2025 11:41
Bloomingdale said:
Simple and sends the message ❤️
February 24th, 2025 11:41
Figment of Your Imagination
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What can be said other than Truth 💯🌹👏 Well done on this brief little poetic reality check!
February 24th, 2025 11:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What can be said other than Truth 💯🌹👏 Well done on this brief little poetic reality check!
February 24th, 2025 11:38
Figment of Your Imagination
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed tis so. And my imagination is a figment itself. A truth well spoken.
February 24th, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed tis so. And my imagination is a figment itself. A truth well spoken.
February 24th, 2025 04:15
Figment of Your Imagination
arqios said:
Love this. It counters the idea of the objective second set of eyes 🙏🏻🕊️👀
February 24th, 2025 03:47
arqios said:
Love this. It counters the idea of the objective second set of eyes 🙏🏻🕊️👀
February 24th, 2025 03:47
Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
Goldfinch60 said:
Some true words there Tobani, fun write.
Andy
February 24th, 2025 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Some true words there Tobani, fun write.
Andy
February 24th, 2025 02:44
Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Loving this series, my friend. 🌹👏
February 23rd, 2025 22:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Loving this series, my friend. 🌹👏
February 23rd, 2025 22:29
Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
Neville said:
No aint that the bloomin truth .. wise men should take it easy on Sundays .. N
February 23rd, 2025 14:10
Neville said:
No aint that the bloomin truth .. wise men should take it easy on Sundays .. N
February 23rd, 2025 14:10
Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
sorenbarrett said:
Wisdom found here. It is in the trash that we find it and in sadness humor. I love these little gems they always give another look at things and add a smile. Nicely done
February 23rd, 2025 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
Wisdom found here. It is in the trash that we find it and in sadness humor. I love these little gems they always give another look at things and add a smile. Nicely done
February 23rd, 2025 05:44
Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
arqios said:
This series is becoming a regular delight here🙏🏻🕊️
February 23rd, 2025 03:51
arqios said:
This series is becoming a regular delight here🙏🏻🕊️
February 23rd, 2025 03:51
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