Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Look In The Eye.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful poem, my friend. Brutal and powerful...and quite the metaphor. Well done! ๐น๐
May 12th, 2025 08:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful poem, my friend. Brutal and powerful...and quite the metaphor. Well done! ๐น๐
May 12th, 2025 08:44
Look In The Eye.
David Wakeling said:
A case of mistaken identity.Very clever with a twist.Enjoyed reading
May 12th, 2025 06:55
David Wakeling said:
A case of mistaken identity.Very clever with a twist.Enjoyed reading
May 12th, 2025 06:55
Look In The Eye.
MDStone said:
I thought I recognized that man. That familiar old cynical smile. That judgmental stare. Nicely done, PL. I really โreflectedโ on this one.
May 12th, 2025 05:39
MDStone said:
I thought I recognized that man. That familiar old cynical smile. That judgmental stare. Nicely done, PL. I really โreflectedโ on this one.
May 12th, 2025 05:39
Look In The Eye.
sorenbarrett said:
I always love the unexpected, this added the metaphor to give it double strength and power. To spice it up some rhyme and near rhyme, a dramatic setting and what more could you want? I love how well woven the metaphor is. That of self destruction that has no mercy. A definite fave
May 12th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
I always love the unexpected, this added the metaphor to give it double strength and power. To spice it up some rhyme and near rhyme, a dramatic setting and what more could you want? I love how well woven the metaphor is. That of self destruction that has no mercy. A definite fave
May 12th, 2025 04:10
Look In The Eye.
arqios said:
I\'ve seen that look before and I am glad that I was able to avert inevitable disaster. Profound read ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
May 12th, 2025 03:04
arqios said:
I\'ve seen that look before and I am glad that I was able to avert inevitable disaster. Profound read ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
May 12th, 2025 03:04
Look In The Eye.
Salvia.S said:
Your poem effectively conveys a dark and intense atmosphere, drawing the reader into the scene. The imagery is vivid and evocative. Well done!!!
May 12th, 2025 02:07
Salvia.S said:
Your poem effectively conveys a dark and intense atmosphere, drawing the reader into the scene. The imagery is vivid and evocative. Well done!!!
May 12th, 2025 02:07
Wise Man Say (11).
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Tobani.
\"Don\'t count the days,
Make the days count.\"
Andy
May 12th, 2025 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Tobani.
\"Don\'t count the days,
Make the days count.\"
Andy
May 12th, 2025 01:18
Wise Man Say (11).
John Prophet said:
โHonesty Is Not Always
The Best Policy.โ So very true! Great insights.
May 11th, 2025 21:21
John Prophet said:
โHonesty Is Not Always
The Best Policy.โ So very true! Great insights.
May 11th, 2025 21:21
Adventures of Mary and Harry (4)
YourUglyBoy said:
Harry is my spirit animal... I\'m a total Harry! Poor Harry oof!
May 11th, 2025 10:59
YourUglyBoy said:
Harry is my spirit animal... I\'m a total Harry! Poor Harry oof!
May 11th, 2025 10:59
Wise Man Say (11).
MendedFences27 said:
PL, lots of wisdom among the humor. And it\'s true, \"she already knows.\"
May 11th, 2025 09:56
MendedFences27 said:
PL, lots of wisdom among the humor. And it\'s true, \"she already knows.\"
May 11th, 2025 09:56
Wise Man Say (11).
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That last one is a mystery! ๐คฃ Round 11 rocked, my friend. Can\'t wait for round 12. And yes, honesty is not always the best policy. ๐คฃ Well done, my friend. The sun is rockin\' here today, so will do. Hope you enjoy the day as well. ๐น๐
May 11th, 2025 07:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That last one is a mystery! ๐คฃ Round 11 rocked, my friend. Can\'t wait for round 12. And yes, honesty is not always the best policy. ๐คฃ Well done, my friend. The sun is rockin\' here today, so will do. Hope you enjoy the day as well. ๐น๐
May 11th, 2025 07:39
Wise Man Say (11).
MDStone said:
What a fun read, Tobani! Yet filled with absolute wisdom. I canโt help but feel some gathered by the experience of the โhard way.โ I know for me they were.
May 11th, 2025 07:00
MDStone said:
What a fun read, Tobani! Yet filled with absolute wisdom. I canโt help but feel some gathered by the experience of the โhard way.โ I know for me they were.
May 11th, 2025 07:00
A Caring Smile.
Cheeky Missy said:
Very, very lovely and rather inspiring, a very pretty little number I\'m certain the purveyors of knicknacks should put and grave on all. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a rather tender poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
May 11th, 2025 06:28
Cheeky Missy said:
Very, very lovely and rather inspiring, a very pretty little number I\'m certain the purveyors of knicknacks should put and grave on all. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a rather tender poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
May 11th, 2025 06:28
Wise Man Say (11).
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too good. Morsel by morsel, this is a beauty, but of course, and honesty still is the best policy, if I may be pardoned for cheekily disagreeing there, she can just join the Kardashians if it does. Now the air is cleared, poor Meg must have my luck, sadly, as I never ever win anything. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a delightful poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
May 11th, 2025 06:16
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too good. Morsel by morsel, this is a beauty, but of course, and honesty still is the best policy, if I may be pardoned for cheekily disagreeing there, she can just join the Kardashians if it does. Now the air is cleared, poor Meg must have my luck, sadly, as I never ever win anything. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a delightful poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
May 11th, 2025 06:16
Wise Man Say (11).
Hollow Enigma said:
A great poem with alot of wisom to carry with. Thankyou very much.
May 11th, 2025 05:54
Hollow Enigma said:
A great poem with alot of wisom to carry with. Thankyou very much.
May 11th, 2025 05:54
Wise Man Say (11).
sorenbarrett said:
Always need a smile on a Sunday and this does the trick. Thank you Tobani for the smile.
May 11th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Always need a smile on a Sunday and this does the trick. Thank you Tobani for the smile.
May 11th, 2025 04:12
Adventures of Mary and Harry (4)
Goldfinch60 said:
Opps! Harry is in big trouble. Good fun write Tobani.
Andy
May 11th, 2025 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Opps! Harry is in big trouble. Good fun write Tobani.
Andy
May 11th, 2025 01:22
Adventures of Mary and Harry (4)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay! The hairy...erm...Harry and Mary Saga continues! This made my Saturday! Hope yours is rockin\' too! A fave for sure...hopin\' for more! ๐น๐
May 10th, 2025 15:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay! The hairy...erm...Harry and Mary Saga continues! This made my Saturday! Hope yours is rockin\' too! A fave for sure...hopin\' for more! ๐น๐
May 10th, 2025 15:23
A Caring Smile.
RSM0812 said:
A very warm sentiment. I really like it\'s love and positivity.
May 10th, 2025 06:20
RSM0812 said:
A very warm sentiment. I really like it\'s love and positivity.
May 10th, 2025 06:20
Adventures of Mary and Harry (4)
David Wakeling said:
A bitter sweet story of mistaken lotion near the ocean. A good fun read mi amigo
May 10th, 2025 04:38
David Wakeling said:
A bitter sweet story of mistaken lotion near the ocean. A good fun read mi amigo
May 10th, 2025 04:38
Adventures of Mary and Harry (4)
sorenbarrett said:
Rubbing honey on oneself or another when bees are present in not the best of ideas. A fun read Tobani
May 10th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Rubbing honey on oneself or another when bees are present in not the best of ideas. A fun read Tobani
May 10th, 2025 04:11
A Caring Smile.
NafisaSB said:
this is such a caring and beautiful verse
thanks for sharing - and inspiring us
May 10th, 2025 03:15
NafisaSB said:
this is such a caring and beautiful verse
thanks for sharing - and inspiring us
May 10th, 2025 03:15
Adventures of Mary and Harry (4)
arqios said:
What a pleasant start to the weekend! Most enjoyed๐๐ป๐๏ธ
May 10th, 2025 02:28
arqios said:
What a pleasant start to the weekend! Most enjoyed๐๐ป๐๏ธ
May 10th, 2025 02:28
A Caring Smile.
Goldfinch60 said:
Smiling at people is a great healer Tobani.
Andy
May 10th, 2025 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Smiling at people is a great healer Tobani.
Andy
May 10th, 2025 01:16
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