Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence



Look In The Eye.
Neilton said:

Excellent poem! You convey a dark feeling

May 12th, 2025 10:32

Look In The Eye.
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Powerful poem, my friend. Brutal and powerful...and quite the metaphor. Well done! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

May 12th, 2025 08:44

Look In The Eye.
David Wakeling said:

A case of mistaken identity.Very clever with a twist.Enjoyed reading

May 12th, 2025 06:55

Look In The Eye.
MDStone said:

I thought I recognized that man. That familiar old cynical smile. That judgmental stare. Nicely done, PL. I really โ€œreflectedโ€ on this one.

May 12th, 2025 05:39

Look In The Eye.
sorenbarrett said:

I always love the unexpected, this added the metaphor to give it double strength and power. To spice it up some rhyme and near rhyme, a dramatic setting and what more could you want? I love how well woven the metaphor is. That of self destruction that has no mercy. A definite fave

May 12th, 2025 04:10

Look In The Eye.
arqios said:

I\'ve seen that look before and I am glad that I was able to avert inevitable disaster. Profound read ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

May 12th, 2025 03:04

Look In The Eye.
Salvia.S said:

Your poem effectively conveys a dark and intense atmosphere, drawing the reader into the scene. The imagery is vivid and evocative. Well done!!!

May 12th, 2025 02:07

Wise Man Say (11).
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun words Tobani.

\"Don\'t count the days,
Make the days count.\"

Andy

May 12th, 2025 01:18

Wise Man Say (11).
John Prophet said:

โ€˜Honesty Is Not Always
The Best Policy.โ€™ So very true! Great insights.

May 11th, 2025 21:21

Adventures of Mary and Harry (4)
YourUglyBoy said:

Harry is my spirit animal... I\'m a total Harry! Poor Harry oof!

May 11th, 2025 10:59

Wise Man Say (11).
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work.

May 11th, 2025 10:04

Wise Man Say (11).
MendedFences27 said:

PL, lots of wisdom among the humor. And it\'s true, \"she already knows.\"

May 11th, 2025 09:56

Wise Man Say (11).
Tristan Robert Lange said:

That last one is a mystery! ๐Ÿคฃ Round 11 rocked, my friend. Can\'t wait for round 12. And yes, honesty is not always the best policy. ๐Ÿคฃ Well done, my friend. The sun is rockin\' here today, so will do. Hope you enjoy the day as well. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

May 11th, 2025 07:39

Wise Man Say (11).
MDStone said:

What a fun read, Tobani! Yet filled with absolute wisdom. I canโ€™t help but feel some gathered by the experience of the โ€œhard way.โ€ I know for me they were.

May 11th, 2025 07:00

A Caring Smile.
Cheeky Missy said:

Very, very lovely and rather inspiring, a very pretty little number I\'m certain the purveyors of knicknacks should put and grave on all. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a rather tender poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.

May 11th, 2025 06:28

Wise Man Say (11).
Cheeky Missy said:

You\'re too good. Morsel by morsel, this is a beauty, but of course, and honesty still is the best policy, if I may be pardoned for cheekily disagreeing there, she can just join the Kardashians if it does. Now the air is cleared, poor Meg must have my luck, sadly, as I never ever win anything. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a delightful poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.

May 11th, 2025 06:16

Wise Man Say (11).
Hollow Enigma said:

A great poem with alot of wisom to carry with. Thankyou very much.

May 11th, 2025 05:54

Wise Man Say (11).
sorenbarrett said:

Always need a smile on a Sunday and this does the trick. Thank you Tobani for the smile.

May 11th, 2025 04:12

Wise Man Say (11).
David Wakeling said:

Some great wisdom here.Fun to read.

May 11th, 2025 03:57

Wise Man Say (11).
arqios said:

Most enjoyable ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

May 11th, 2025 02:35

Adventures of Mary and Harry (4)
Goldfinch60 said:

Opps! Harry is in big trouble. Good fun write Tobani.

Andy

May 11th, 2025 01:22

Adventures of Mary and Harry (4)
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

May 10th, 2025 17:42

Adventures of Mary and Harry (4)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Yay! The hairy...erm...Harry and Mary Saga continues! This made my Saturday! Hope yours is rockin\' too! A fave for sure...hopin\' for more! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

May 10th, 2025 15:23

A Caring Smile.
Kevin Hulme said:

So true. Well said.

May 10th, 2025 12:45

A Caring Smile.
RSM0812 said:

A very warm sentiment. I really like it\'s love and positivity.

May 10th, 2025 06:20

Adventures of Mary and Harry (4)
David Wakeling said:

A bitter sweet story of mistaken lotion near the ocean. A good fun read mi amigo

May 10th, 2025 04:38

Adventures of Mary and Harry (4)
sorenbarrett said:

Rubbing honey on oneself or another when bees are present in not the best of ideas. A fun read Tobani

May 10th, 2025 04:11

A Caring Smile.
NafisaSB said:

this is such a caring and beautiful verse
thanks for sharing - and inspiring us

May 10th, 2025 03:15

Adventures of Mary and Harry (4)
arqios said:

What a pleasant start to the weekend! Most enjoyed๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

May 10th, 2025 02:28

A Caring Smile.
Goldfinch60 said:

Smiling at people is a great healer Tobani.

Andy

May 10th, 2025 01:16



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