Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence



Lie In a Truth.
David Wakeling said:

I think it is hard to know what is real. So many different opinions.Good poem made me think

March 21st, 2025 04:53

Lie In a Truth.
sorenbarrett said:

In truth it may have never been born. A great play on words and woven wisdom and another way of looking at how we see the world. Nicely written.

March 21st, 2025 04:08

Lie In a Truth.
Caring dove said:

Some people tell you somethings true when it’s not .. as it’s just another lie . Sometimes clear when someone’s being honest , other times you might be able to tell if their not being truthful

March 21st, 2025 03:30

Lie In a Truth.
orchidee said:

A true write PL - or is it a lie?! heehee.

March 21st, 2025 03:14

Am I Alone.
Goldfinch60 said:

Open that window and door and walk into life with others Tobani. Clever thoughtful write.

Andy

March 21st, 2025 02:42

Am I Alone.
ChrisLyn🕊 said:

We have more conversations in our head than with real people! Good one

March 20th, 2025 10:38

Am I Alone.
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

March 20th, 2025 09:59

Am I Alone.
Tristan Robert Lange said:

First. WOW! I LOVE THE STRUCTURE! Sorry for YELLING that at you, but I love experimental poems and this was beautifully structured to feel very much like passing observations before the eyes and in the mind. Well done. Second, this is so my home. I relate to this so much. Alone, but not alone....Not alone, but alone. Thank you for this expression my friend! 🙏🌹👏

March 20th, 2025 09:03

Today Is Tomorrows History.
Tom Dylan said:

A thought-provoking write. Nicely done.

March 20th, 2025 08:33

Am I Alone.
Friendship said:

A very complex poem With a lot of mixed emotions yet we\'re never alone we always have Ourself and nature to rely on. Your poem seem to have a question if isolation really exist !

March 20th, 2025 07:46

Turmoil In a Crazy Mind
Poetic Dan said:

Wow that was powerful and a beautiful flow, my mind rested even if just for a mo.
Thank you

March 20th, 2025 07:00

Am I Alone.
John Prophet said:

I find being alone enjoyable. Free of drama, floating freely in my thoughts. Fertile ground for poetry.
Creative piece.


March 20th, 2025 06:15

Am I Alone.
Mutley Ravishes said:

Good question. I look forward to the day when I can see myself looking at myself through another\'s eyes!

March 20th, 2025 05:32

Am I Alone.
sorenbarrett said:

A point made that each term is by itself emphasizes the aloneness of it. There appears to be a pattern in the words which if I stretch may be the panes of a window. Creative. No we are not alone we always have ourselves, thoughts, and emotions.

March 20th, 2025 04:00

Am I Alone.
arqios said:

Alone in our togetherness, modern day angst, all with our private joys and fears🙏🏻🕊️

March 20th, 2025 03:21

Am I Alone.
Caring dove said:

We can feel very alone with our emotions thoughts and feelings .. and even around other people .. it can make one very sad .

I can feel very alone , sometimes when I’m around others .. isn’t a nice feeling

March 20th, 2025 03:21

Am I Alone.
David Wakeling said:

An amazing mind you have.Fascinating piece.

March 20th, 2025 03:10

Today Is Tomorrows History.
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true Tobani, do something unforgettable today to be remembered by all.

Andy

March 20th, 2025 02:20

Today Is Tomorrows History.
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work.

March 19th, 2025 16:35

Today Is Tomorrows History.
Neilton said:

Allow me to thank you for this poem! I needed it to remind me the importance of goodness since everyday life sometimes makes you forget it ! I loved your poem

March 19th, 2025 15:32

Today Is Tomorrows History.
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Amen! By and by amen! If people would heed this advice, the world would be utopia. Wonderful way to start the day. Thank you, my friend! 🌹👏

March 19th, 2025 08:38

Today Is Tomorrows History.
Salvia.S said:

A powerful reminder to make today count!

March 19th, 2025 07:45

Do Not Cut Corners
RSM0812 said:

Great advice. Lol

March 19th, 2025 07:03

Today Is Tomorrows History.
Friendship said:

Welll done,today\'s actions will become tomorrow\'s history, have a great day.

March 19th, 2025 07:03

Today Is Tomorrows History.
David Wakeling said:

Some wisdom here.I think the poem is excellent.Well done mi amigo

March 19th, 2025 05:20

My Mama`s Gone.
Tom Dylan said:

Such a powerful write.

March 19th, 2025 04:10

Today Is Tomorrows History.
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely play on words that becomes a play on thoughts that becomes good advice. Very nice T

March 19th, 2025 03:25

Value of Gifts
Caring dove said:

Gifts show people are thinking of you .. that’s true ..

Least someone has been kind enough to think to buy us a gift

A nice writing

March 19th, 2025 03:19

Today Is Tomorrows History.
orchidee said:

Good write PL.

March 19th, 2025 03:07

Today Is Tomorrows History.
arqios said:

Now that is an excellent outlook on life and the future 🙏🏻🕊️

March 19th, 2025 03:06



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