Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence



I Don`t Have To Agree.
Goldfinch60 said:

Such very wise words Tobani.

Andy

June 22nd, 2025 01:15

Mammon`s Table.
NafisaSB said:

Absolutely true. You nailed it

June 21st, 2025 20:28

Do Not Be A Beaver.
NafisaSB said:

Great advice 👌

June 21st, 2025 20:27

I Don`t Have To Agree.
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

June 21st, 2025 17:57

I Don`t Have To Agree.
Doggerel Dave said:

Let’s get our definitions clear here, can we?
If that gun is real, then I would agree to anything.
If, however, that gun is a figure of speech known as a metaphor (very popular hereabouts) then I’m behind you (still a safer position whatever the context) one hundred percent……
A great attitude really and there’s not enough of it where I live and quite possibly the world, Tobani.👍
PS: Great write too.👍


June 21st, 2025 17:34

I Don`t Have To Agree.
orchidee said:

Me being daft - I played Russian Roulette incorrectly with someone. I loaded ALL BUT ONE chamber of the gun, and it was my turn to go first. Doh! lol.

June 21st, 2025 11:09

Live Life Like A Sponge (Senryu) Go On Read It , You Might Like It!!!.
NafisaSB said:

Yes it’s a good idea to absorb whatever would help us to expand
I would welcome the experience
Good write

June 21st, 2025 10:26

Live Life Like A Sponge (Senryu) Go On Read It , You Might Like It!!!.
Mutley Ravishes said:

I remember reading that when contraction reaches a point where it can\'t contract anymore it naturally starts to expand.
Great write.

June 21st, 2025 06:50

I Don`t Have To Agree.
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Truth! No two people can agree on everything...and I don\'t think lock-step agreeing is the point of relationships, let alone healthy relationships. Powerful poem, Natiella! 👏🌹

June 21st, 2025 06:37

I Don`t Have To Agree.
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, PL. The greatest lesson ever learned we learned in kindergarten. Share your toys. Don\'t hit. Hold hands when you cross the street. OH, how far we stray.

June 21st, 2025 05:59

I Don`t Have To Agree.
David Wakeling said:

For me this is a powerful poem about communication.You cannot communicate with someone if they hold a gun in your face. Very important poem.Made me think

June 21st, 2025 04:46

I Don`t Have To Agree.
sorenbarrett said:

Nataiella this poem speaks to me. Nicely stated it speaks to everybody\'s freedom not just one. I could never understand why it was so important to some people to convince everyone to their point of view. Let all have their own point of view what does it cost? Very nicely stated in poetic form.

June 21st, 2025 03:58

I Don`t Have To Agree.
arqios said:

We agree to disagree to live and let live and no harm is no foul🕊️🙏🏻

June 21st, 2025 02:41

Live Life Like A Sponge (Senryu) Go On Read It , You Might Like It!!!.
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Tobani, but my life has expanded for so long that the sponge is now leaking. LOL

Andy

June 21st, 2025 01:24

Live Life Like A Sponge (Senryu) Go On Read It , You Might Like It!!!.
Doggerel Dave said:

An image now filed under \'tools\' and incorporated into a part of me now. the senryu form has real truth sometimes.

Thanks Tobani.

June 20th, 2025 18:27

Live Life Like A Sponge (Senryu) Go On Read It , You Might Like It!!!.
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Not going to lie, I thought you were going to talk about a life living in a pineapple under the sea while in tighty whiteys. Ahoy, matey! All jokes aside, this is a most profound and truthful poem, my friend, and a fave. 🌹👏

June 20th, 2025 13:27


Do Not Be A Beaver.
Reynaldo Casison said:


Nice one Tobani

Insightful and witty

June 20th, 2025 06:07

Live Life Like A Sponge (Senryu) Go On Read It , You Might Like It!!!.
sorenbarrett said:

A good image presented Tobani absorbing does expand the mind and the acceptance of other culture\'s, religions, gender and differences in general. Very nice my friend

June 20th, 2025 05:09

Live Life Like A Sponge (Senryu) Go On Read It , You Might Like It!!!.
David Wakeling said:

Thats very clever.Well done.

June 20th, 2025 04:08

Live Life Like A Sponge (Senryu) Go On Read It , You Might Like It!!!.
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Clever metaphor—sponges teach us growth through openness!
Absorb, expand, and thrive—wise words to live by.

June 20th, 2025 03:19

Live Life Like A Sponge (Senryu) Go On Read It , You Might Like It!!!.
arqios said:

Expansion is seen as a blessed life🕊️🙏🏻

June 20th, 2025 03:11

Mammon`s Table.
Goldfinch60 said:

Feast away with us all Tobani.

Andy

June 20th, 2025 01:41

Mammon`s Table.
John Prophet said:

Nice piece of writing..
John

June 19th, 2025 18:05

Mammon`s Table.
MendedFences27 said:

Like this one, it\'s elusiveness and thoughtfulness all wrapped around a feasting table. Symbolism galore, from \"Mammon\'s table\" to \"Virgin soul\". Also let me say, we all need a break once in a while. The news can be depressive. - Phil A.

June 19th, 2025 11:57

Mammon`s Table.
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Oh, damn, this is profound truth set up as a foodies delight! LOL! Except this foodie is a vegetarian so: 🤮 Which is the exact response this poem demands, when mammon becomes our master and we become its slave. What a poem, most definitely a fave, my friend. 👏🌹

June 19th, 2025 08:41

Mammon`s Table.
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Tobani. Loved it.

June 19th, 2025 06:53

Mammon`s Table.
David Wakeling said:

Some good religious advice here. Very unique.

June 19th, 2025 04:22

Mammon`s Table.
sorenbarrett said:

Not much of a innards man, have eaten liver, tripe, kidney, and heart but never soul ,maybe sole although don\'t know if it was virgin. A most short but interesting write Tobani and now it has me thinking. Clever in the choice of parts listed for the fare on the menu.

June 19th, 2025 04:21

Mammon`s Table.
arqios said:

Oooh, foreboding, ominous and apocalyptic even🙏🏻🕊️

June 19th, 2025 02:29



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