Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Marys Revenge On Harry.
David Wakeling said:
Good old Mary and Harry.They sure do get up to some fun times.Very enjoyable poem.Brilliant
May 17th, 2025 04:17
David Wakeling said:
Good old Mary and Harry.They sure do get up to some fun times.Very enjoyable poem.Brilliant
May 17th, 2025 04:17
Marys Revenge On Harry.
sorenbarrett said:
The difference between the sexes evidenced in this piece. Thanks for the smile Tobani
May 17th, 2025 03:34
sorenbarrett said:
The difference between the sexes evidenced in this piece. Thanks for the smile Tobani
May 17th, 2025 03:34
Look In The Mirror.
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Profound question - thanks for sharing
May 17th, 2025 03:29
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Profound question - thanks for sharing
May 17th, 2025 03:29
Would You Call Me God?.
Goldfinch60 said:
Your thought is so right Tobani. I used to be a Christian but whern myu wife suffered and died from dementia where was the Christian god. I came to the conclusion that organised religion is a farce, we all have our own beliefs in life and that is the way I now go with my positive ways.
Andy
May 17th, 2025 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Your thought is so right Tobani. I used to be a Christian but whern myu wife suffered and died from dementia where was the Christian god. I came to the conclusion that organised religion is a farce, we all have our own beliefs in life and that is the way I now go with my positive ways.
Andy
May 17th, 2025 02:05
In My Heart I Cry.
NafisaSB said:
such a soul searing and poignant message
beautiful
May 17th, 2025 00:13
NafisaSB said:
such a soul searing and poignant message
beautiful
May 17th, 2025 00:13
Would You Call Me God?.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Actually, I would call you human! 🤣 Ever notice gods turn out to be as bad, if not worse, than we are? Then again, maybe that is because we write about them...therefore they are really projections of ourselves with superpowers. For me, that does not discount God existing, but it does make me open to differing views because I am not sure there is one right answer. It shows how little we really know in the end...and that is humbling. Great poem, my friend. Can\'t say there\'s a good answer, but valid questions for sure. Well done on this! 🌹👏
May 16th, 2025 20:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Actually, I would call you human! 🤣 Ever notice gods turn out to be as bad, if not worse, than we are? Then again, maybe that is because we write about them...therefore they are really projections of ourselves with superpowers. For me, that does not discount God existing, but it does make me open to differing views because I am not sure there is one right answer. It shows how little we really know in the end...and that is humbling. Great poem, my friend. Can\'t say there\'s a good answer, but valid questions for sure. Well done on this! 🌹👏
May 16th, 2025 20:05
Would You Call Me God?.
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t mind taking it to \'em do ya!
I really find it hard to add to that. But that\'s the mindset of people who are religious. I, as an atheistic agnostic find it impossible to understand their position. However, it is obvious that many folks find comfort in their what i consider to be erroneous beliefs, and if those beliefs help get them through life, then....
But if at any time their beliefs impinge on my own rights then screw \'em....
And if you tell me to have a lovely weekend, I\'ll find ya and have a quiet word.....😇🙃
May 16th, 2025 06:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t mind taking it to \'em do ya!
I really find it hard to add to that. But that\'s the mindset of people who are religious. I, as an atheistic agnostic find it impossible to understand their position. However, it is obvious that many folks find comfort in their what i consider to be erroneous beliefs, and if those beliefs help get them through life, then....
But if at any time their beliefs impinge on my own rights then screw \'em....
And if you tell me to have a lovely weekend, I\'ll find ya and have a quiet word.....😇🙃
May 16th, 2025 06:22
Would You Call Me God?.
arqios said:
There are names we whisper with hope, placing faith in unseen hands. Yet silence lingers, wars rage, and prayers dissolve into emptiness If love is spoken but never felt, if mercy remains untouched, then devotion alone cannot lift the weight that suffering leaves behind. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 16th, 2025 04:43
arqios said:
There are names we whisper with hope, placing faith in unseen hands. Yet silence lingers, wars rage, and prayers dissolve into emptiness If love is spoken but never felt, if mercy remains untouched, then devotion alone cannot lift the weight that suffering leaves behind. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 16th, 2025 04:43
Would You Call Me God?.
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
A piercing critique of divine hypocrisy—your words unmask the silence of the claimed almighty. Power, not mercy, wears the crown in this bold revelation.
May 16th, 2025 04:23
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
A piercing critique of divine hypocrisy—your words unmask the silence of the claimed almighty. Power, not mercy, wears the crown in this bold revelation.
May 16th, 2025 04:23
Would You Call Me God?.
sorenbarrett said:
Harsh and to the point a powerful write that speaks with anger and disgust at what many see as God. Well constructed in question form it places the burden back on the reader to answer such questions that seemingly have only one answer. How can anyone worship such a god. But we do and have to ask why do we. Very nicely written.
May 16th, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
Harsh and to the point a powerful write that speaks with anger and disgust at what many see as God. Well constructed in question form it places the burden back on the reader to answer such questions that seemingly have only one answer. How can anyone worship such a god. But we do and have to ask why do we. Very nicely written.
May 16th, 2025 04:07
Look In The Mirror.
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done. A fine, thought-provoking write.
May 16th, 2025 03:52
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done. A fine, thought-provoking write.
May 16th, 2025 03:52
Would You Call Me God?.
David Wakeling said:
A great poem.Made me think about God and whether he exists.At what point of suffering does God help.Never in my case.
May 16th, 2025 03:45
David Wakeling said:
A great poem.Made me think about God and whether he exists.At what point of suffering does God help.Never in my case.
May 16th, 2025 03:45
Would You Call Me God?.
Victor Bolshov said:
Strong words. And very relatable. God is too often too inhumane, although they say we were made \"in the image and likeness\"
May 16th, 2025 02:40
Victor Bolshov said:
Strong words. And very relatable. God is too often too inhumane, although they say we were made \"in the image and likeness\"
May 16th, 2025 02:40
Look In The Mirror.
Goldfinch60 said:
You see the reverse of how others see you Tobani. LOL
Andy
May 16th, 2025 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
You see the reverse of how others see you Tobani. LOL
Andy
May 16th, 2025 01:44
Look In The Mirror.
Caring dove said:
Good poem . I think mirrors can be difficult to look into sometimes
I think they can show us how we might be feeling / what we don’t like etc
Sometimes I see a stranger in the mirror ..
May 15th, 2025 08:05
Caring dove said:
Good poem . I think mirrors can be difficult to look into sometimes
I think they can show us how we might be feeling / what we don’t like etc
Sometimes I see a stranger in the mirror ..
May 15th, 2025 08:05
Look In The Mirror.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
NO. Yes. Yes and No. Both/and, as well as neither, depending. My self-esteem and self-image has been a struggle for me all of my life. Powerful and probing poem that asks a tough, but important question. Wonderful job, my friend. 🌹👏
May 15th, 2025 07:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
NO. Yes. Yes and No. Both/and, as well as neither, depending. My self-esteem and self-image has been a struggle for me all of my life. Powerful and probing poem that asks a tough, but important question. Wonderful job, my friend. 🌹👏
May 15th, 2025 07:57
Look In The Mirror.
David Wakeling said:
An important and fundamental question for all of us. Well done
May 15th, 2025 04:29
David Wakeling said:
An important and fundamental question for all of us. Well done
May 15th, 2025 04:29
Look In The Mirror.
sorenbarrett said:
A most reflective write Tobani lol Never the less it has always bothered me that I see neither in that the image is changed left to right and I suppose that fraction of milli-milli second that it takes for the light to get from the mirror to my eye it is what I used to be. Always loved thought provoking poems and this was one cleverly done.
May 15th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
A most reflective write Tobani lol Never the less it has always bothered me that I see neither in that the image is changed left to right and I suppose that fraction of milli-milli second that it takes for the light to get from the mirror to my eye it is what I used to be. Always loved thought provoking poems and this was one cleverly done.
May 15th, 2025 04:29
Look In The Mirror.
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words reflect the timeless dance between past and present—deeply moving. A mirror indeed reveals more than the eye can see.
May 15th, 2025 03:48
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words reflect the timeless dance between past and present—deeply moving. A mirror indeed reveals more than the eye can see.
May 15th, 2025 03:48
In My Heart I Cry.
Goldfinch60 said:
We all wear masks in differing situations in our lives Tobani. May your heart be healed.
Andy
May 15th, 2025 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
We all wear masks in differing situations in our lives Tobani. May your heart be healed.
Andy
May 15th, 2025 01:22
In My Heart I Cry.
Dan Williams said:
Not sure if keeping all that grief suppressed is a good thing. Why no tears? You are allowed.
May 15th, 2025 00:52
Dan Williams said:
Not sure if keeping all that grief suppressed is a good thing. Why no tears? You are allowed.
May 15th, 2025 00:52
In My Heart I Cry.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My heart has been broken so many times, I think I have lost some the pieces. Man, this hits home again, Tobani! Great work, my friend! 🌹👏💔❤️🩹
May 14th, 2025 11:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My heart has been broken so many times, I think I have lost some the pieces. Man, this hits home again, Tobani! Great work, my friend! 🌹👏💔❤️🩹
May 14th, 2025 11:15
How Does it Feel?.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! A powerful poem, Natiella! You and I clearly had the same way of processing the shit we dealt with at school. Glad for it too. This one hit home for me, being someone who was brutally bullied. Thank you for sharing. 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 10:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! A powerful poem, Natiella! You and I clearly had the same way of processing the shit we dealt with at school. Glad for it too. This one hit home for me, being someone who was brutally bullied. Thank you for sharing. 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 10:46
In My Heart I Cry.
arqios said:
People most usually judge by appearances so we find it most useful to look the part on the surface level. Sad truth🕊️🙏🏻
May 14th, 2025 05:19
arqios said:
People most usually judge by appearances so we find it most useful to look the part on the surface level. Sad truth🕊️🙏🏻
May 14th, 2025 05:19
In My Heart I Cry.
David Wakeling said:
Well this is quite heart breaking. A mournful cry of a broken heart.Very powerful
May 14th, 2025 04:30
David Wakeling said:
Well this is quite heart breaking. A mournful cry of a broken heart.Very powerful
May 14th, 2025 04:30
In My Heart I Cry.
sorenbarrett said:
A broken heart can only be seen through its symptoms of tears, lethargy and facial features. Like a fever revealing an infection it needs attention. An excellent metaphor and nicely written.
May 14th, 2025 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
A broken heart can only be seen through its symptoms of tears, lethargy and facial features. Like a fever revealing an infection it needs attention. An excellent metaphor and nicely written.
May 14th, 2025 03:59
How Does it Feel?.
Goldfinch60 said:
There were some bully boys at my schools but they got there comeuppance in time. Good words and memories Tobani.
Andy
May 14th, 2025 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
There were some bully boys at my schools but they got there comeuppance in time. Good words and memories Tobani.
Andy
May 14th, 2025 01:23
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