Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence



The Devils Kiss
sorenbarrett said:

A look at the dark side of what we call love but I feel is more passion. So well worded and rhymed this one flows on seductively. Nicely done

January 27th, 2025 05:18

The Devils Kiss
Soman Ragavan said:

Yes, beware, the devil can have a smiling face...

January 27th, 2025 04:57

The Devils Kiss
arqios said:

It is said that the devil comes to us like an angel of light and thus this cautionary verse brings thoughts of vigilance and care. A good way to start the week. Thanks ever so kindly. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

January 27th, 2025 03:07

Mary and Jack (Night of Passion)
Thad Wilk said:

Hahahahaร a! ๐Ÿ˜
What a sensualSational
poem and romantical
story I\'d say!! ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
Love surprise endings
this one blew me away!!๐Ÿคฃ
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

January 24th, 2025 18:08

Mary and Jack (Night of Passion)
Cassie58 said:

Tobani, this was such fun to read and quite different from your usual posts. Made me laugh out loud.

January 24th, 2025 16:50

Mary and Jack (Night of Passion)
David Wakeling said:

Oh dear leaving without finishng the job.Well written.We have all been there

January 24th, 2025 16:06

Mary and Jack (Night of Passion)
Thomas W Case said:

Fun stuff. Excellent.

January 24th, 2025 14:00

Mary and Jack (Night of Passion)
Bella Shepard said:

I\'d say more than a chuckle. Being of a certain age, I can see this as completely plausible. lol

January 24th, 2025 10:58

Mary and Jack (Night of Passion)
Tony36 said:

Love it

January 24th, 2025 10:56

Mary and Jack (Night of Passion)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

๐Ÿคฃ Oh brother. After that the dog will be sleeping in the bed and Jack outside! ๐Ÿคฃ Well done, my friend. This seriously made me laugh!

January 24th, 2025 09:05

Mary and Jack (Night of Passion)
Neville said:



Not only perfectly formed and likewise pleasing to the eye .. You provided one of those rare but great and satisfying chuckles that kind of lingers beyond the initial hit .. Neville

January 24th, 2025 08:50

Mary and Jack (Night of Passion)
arqios said:

The funny thing is I know a couple named Mary and Jack. Now it will be a giggle to see them โ€ฆ

January 24th, 2025 06:30

Mary and Jack (Night of Passion)
sorenbarrett said:

Coitus interruptus in humor form. Great imagery here and a fun read

January 24th, 2025 04:40

Mary and Jack (Night of Passion)
Michael Edwards said:

Thanks for my first laugh of the day - love it.

January 24th, 2025 03:30

On The Outside Looking In
Thad Wilk said:

A touching and
poignant poem
of love lost. ๐Ÿ˜ข
Strong feelings
and emotions,
expressed eloquently!! โ˜บ๏ธ
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

January 23rd, 2025 20:16

On The Outside Looking In
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

January 23rd, 2025 16:20

On The Outside Looking In
NinjaGirl said:

We\'re always on the outside looking in on others lives, I wonder who\'s looking at ours, who\'s envious of ours.

January 23rd, 2025 12:23

On The Outside Looking In
Neville said:



What\'s not to like or love .. Some things are just not meant to be .. no matter how much one might want them to be .. a lesson for everyone .. Neville

January 23rd, 2025 10:01

On The Outside Looking In
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow, heartbreaking. But also true love, no? Love not only receives, but gives. It not only keeps, but it also knows when to let go. Heartbreaking for the one who goes without in the end, but it is true love that dictates that. Very relatable and a wonderful write, Nataiella! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

January 23rd, 2025 08:32

On The Outside Looking In
John Prophet said:

Very nice piece of writing.
John

January 23rd, 2025 06:46

On The Outside Looking In
sorenbarrett said:

I hear love in this poem not passion but love. When one loves someone it is shown in wishing that person what is best for them not necessarily what we want. Very nicely done

January 23rd, 2025 04:51

On The Outside Looking In
arqios said:

Very relatable and quite lyrical. Now to sit and reminisce ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

January 23rd, 2025 04:17

Value of Gifts
Thad Wilk said:

Awesome poem,
thoughts and message too! ๐Ÿค”
Never judge a gift ๐ŸŽ
for its monetary value,
so true!!๐Ÿคฉ
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

January 22nd, 2025 22:36

Value of Gifts
David Wakeling said:

Yes gift giving is a complex procedure. So many gifts are unwanted or even re-gifted, This was clever. Made me think

January 22nd, 2025 19:30

Value of Gifts
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful.

January 22nd, 2025 13:00

Value of Gifts
Cassie58 said:

I thank you Tobani for the gift of your poetry. I have missed your postings recently. You have said so much here. It is always the thought that counts. Price etc, doesnโ€™t come into it. A fine write.

January 22nd, 2025 12:03

Value of Gifts
Tristan Robert Lange said:

A wonderful poem, well-written with a poignant message. Well done, my friend!!!

January 22nd, 2025 09:11

Value of Gifts
sorenbarrett said:

Nataiella a great message and also a good piece of advice set in poem. Lovely

January 22nd, 2025 09:08

Value of Gifts
arqios said:

Yes! The extension of the heart pertains to the source of all outwardly objects and gestures. So deep! ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

January 22nd, 2025 07:25

Angels Watching Over You
RSM0812 said:



January 21st, 2025 08:38



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