Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Broken Dreams.
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have those secret chambers in our minds Tobani.
Andy
May 21st, 2025 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have those secret chambers in our minds Tobani.
Andy
May 21st, 2025 00:51
Kindness and Compassion (2).
NafisaSB said:
oh yes- i hear you and agree with you completely
thanks for sharing this positive message
May 21st, 2025 00:24
NafisaSB said:
oh yes- i hear you and agree with you completely
thanks for sharing this positive message
May 21st, 2025 00:24
Kindness and Compassion (2).
RSM0812 said:
Great message. A little kindness goes a long way.
May 20th, 2025 08:28
RSM0812 said:
Great message. A little kindness goes a long way.
May 20th, 2025 08:28
Broken Dreams.
Salvia.S said:
Your poem is hauntingly beautiful! The imagery is vivid and evocative, and it effectively conveys a sense of longing and despair. Well done!!!
May 20th, 2025 06:34
Salvia.S said:
Your poem is hauntingly beautiful! The imagery is vivid and evocative, and it effectively conveys a sense of longing and despair. Well done!!!
May 20th, 2025 06:34
Broken Dreams.
sorenbarrett said:
Wisdom in verse feels prophetic in some way but poetic in every way. Loved it
May 20th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Wisdom in verse feels prophetic in some way but poetic in every way. Loved it
May 20th, 2025 04:09
Broken Dreams.
David Wakeling said:
Life is good at braking dreams.It almosts promises to let you down. A well constructed powerful poem
May 20th, 2025 04:08
David Wakeling said:
Life is good at braking dreams.It almosts promises to let you down. A well constructed powerful poem
May 20th, 2025 04:08
Broken Dreams.
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Such depth in so few lines—your poetry cuts straight to the soul. A powerful reflection on the fragility of hope.
May 20th, 2025 02:17
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Such depth in so few lines—your poetry cuts straight to the soul. A powerful reflection on the fragility of hope.
May 20th, 2025 02:17
Broken Dreams.
arqios said:
The words being forbidden struck a chord with me… at home we had only three responses allowed: 1- yes 2- no and 3- I don’t know. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 20th, 2025 02:15
arqios said:
The words being forbidden struck a chord with me… at home we had only three responses allowed: 1- yes 2- no and 3- I don’t know. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 20th, 2025 02:15
Kindness and Compassion (2).
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Tobani, it is from the heart and always should be.
Andy
May 20th, 2025 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Tobani, it is from the heart and always should be.
Andy
May 20th, 2025 01:18
Look In The Mirror.
NafisaSB said:
very pertinent question - the past has shaped me into what i am today - so what i see is what i have become
May 20th, 2025 00:47
NafisaSB said:
very pertinent question - the past has shaped me into what i am today - so what i see is what i have become
May 20th, 2025 00:47
Kindness and Compassion (2).
David Wakeling said:
Kindness and compassion are wonderful qualities.I enjoyed reading Well done
May 19th, 2025 04:39
David Wakeling said:
Kindness and compassion are wonderful qualities.I enjoyed reading Well done
May 19th, 2025 04:39
Kindness and Compassion (2).
sorenbarrett said:
So true kindness and compassion sent only for appearance sake is not what it pretends to be. In fact it can be quite cruel. A wise and well written poem in rhyme. Loved it
May 19th, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
So true kindness and compassion sent only for appearance sake is not what it pretends to be. In fact it can be quite cruel. A wise and well written poem in rhyme. Loved it
May 19th, 2025 04:37
Kindness and Compassion (2).
arqios said:
...straight, from the heart, clean through active compassion and empathy. Beautiful🤩🙏🏻🕊️
May 19th, 2025 02:25
arqios said:
...straight, from the heart, clean through active compassion and empathy. Beautiful🤩🙏🏻🕊️
May 19th, 2025 02:25
Wise Man Say (12)
Goldfinch60 said:
Some more great words of wisdom Tobani.
Andy
May 19th, 2025 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Some more great words of wisdom Tobani.
Andy
May 19th, 2025 01:26
Wise Man Say (12)
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Each stanza a gem, balancing depth and clarity—life’s lessons polished to perfection.
May 18th, 2025 14:28
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Each stanza a gem, balancing depth and clarity—life’s lessons polished to perfection.
May 18th, 2025 14:28
Wise Man Say (12)
Salvia.S said:
The wise sayings are impactful and relatable, offering valuable life lessons in a straightforward way. Nicely written!!!
May 18th, 2025 05:10
Salvia.S said:
The wise sayings are impactful and relatable, offering valuable life lessons in a straightforward way. Nicely written!!!
May 18th, 2025 05:10
Wise Man Say (12)
sorenbarrett said:
Been there on all of those another fun read Tobani look forward to my Sunday read of these. Have a great day
May 18th, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
Been there on all of those another fun read Tobani look forward to my Sunday read of these. Have a great day
May 18th, 2025 04:49
Wise Man Say (12)
David Wakeling said:
I like these words of wisdom. Amasing and fun
May 18th, 2025 04:40
David Wakeling said:
I like these words of wisdom. Amasing and fun
May 18th, 2025 04:40
Wise Man Say (12)
Poetic Licence said:
First off the block today and I thank you and hope you enjoy the rest of your day
May 18th, 2025 02:21
Poetic Licence said:
First off the block today and I thank you and hope you enjoy the rest of your day
May 18th, 2025 02:21
Wise Man Say (12)
arqios said:
Sunday must be afoot with wise sayings coming back round again! Very wise sayings indeed🙏🏻🕊️
May 18th, 2025 02:15
arqios said:
Sunday must be afoot with wise sayings coming back round again! Very wise sayings indeed🙏🏻🕊️
May 18th, 2025 02:15
Marys Revenge On Harry.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Tobani, but what happened when she go home - or would that be telling. LOL
Andy
May 18th, 2025 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Tobani, but what happened when she go home - or would that be telling. LOL
Andy
May 18th, 2025 01:47
Marys Revenge On Harry.
Jeremy Leach said:
Made me laugh. My imagination would have been in overdrive too.
May 18th, 2025 00:32
Jeremy Leach said:
Made me laugh. My imagination would have been in overdrive too.
May 18th, 2025 00:32
Look In The Mirror.
Cheeky Missy said:
I wonder. I only took selfies because I liked what I saw in the mirror, however the camera had different notions. Sometimes I wonder how on earth I ever thought I was attractive since it obviously is painfully false. Beautifully rendered conundrum with a haunting poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
May 17th, 2025 22:50
Cheeky Missy said:
I wonder. I only took selfies because I liked what I saw in the mirror, however the camera had different notions. Sometimes I wonder how on earth I ever thought I was attractive since it obviously is painfully false. Beautifully rendered conundrum with a haunting poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
May 17th, 2025 22:50
Would You Call Me God?.
Cheeky Missy said:
No. The most curious fact is that, \"...in Him we live, and move, and have our being; as certain also of your own poets have said, For we are also His offspring. Forasmuch then as we are the offspring of God, we ought not to think that the Godhead is like unto gold, or silver, or stone, graven by art and man\'s device. And the times of this ignorance God winked at; but now commandeth all men everywhere to repent: because He hath appointed a day, in which He will judge the world in righteousness by that man whom He hath ordained; whereof He hath given assurance unto all men, in that He hath raised Him from the dead.\" (Acts 17: 28-31) Having both given us the Scriptures and this world, \"...for the wrath of God is revealed from heaven against all ungodliness and unrighteousness of men, who hold the truth in unrighteousness; because that which may be known of God is manifest in them; for God hath shewed it unto them. For the invisible things of Him from the creation of the world are clearly seen, being understood by the things that are made, even His eternal power and Godhead; so that they are without excuse: because that, when they knew God, they glorified Him not as God, neither were thankful: but became vain in their imaginations, and their foolish heart was darkened.\" (Romans 1: 18-21) Just because evil men and seducers wax worse and worse, deceiving and being deceived, we\'re not justified in such blasphemy. You\'re understandably angered if such absurdity is what you\'ve been taught, but it\'s all false, as you vaguely realize. That said, this is excellently rendered with perfect imagery and a damning poignancy.
May 17th, 2025 22:44
Cheeky Missy said:
No. The most curious fact is that, \"...in Him we live, and move, and have our being; as certain also of your own poets have said, For we are also His offspring. Forasmuch then as we are the offspring of God, we ought not to think that the Godhead is like unto gold, or silver, or stone, graven by art and man\'s device. And the times of this ignorance God winked at; but now commandeth all men everywhere to repent: because He hath appointed a day, in which He will judge the world in righteousness by that man whom He hath ordained; whereof He hath given assurance unto all men, in that He hath raised Him from the dead.\" (Acts 17: 28-31) Having both given us the Scriptures and this world, \"...for the wrath of God is revealed from heaven against all ungodliness and unrighteousness of men, who hold the truth in unrighteousness; because that which may be known of God is manifest in them; for God hath shewed it unto them. For the invisible things of Him from the creation of the world are clearly seen, being understood by the things that are made, even His eternal power and Godhead; so that they are without excuse: because that, when they knew God, they glorified Him not as God, neither were thankful: but became vain in their imaginations, and their foolish heart was darkened.\" (Romans 1: 18-21) Just because evil men and seducers wax worse and worse, deceiving and being deceived, we\'re not justified in such blasphemy. You\'re understandably angered if such absurdity is what you\'ve been taught, but it\'s all false, as you vaguely realize. That said, this is excellently rendered with perfect imagery and a damning poignancy.
May 17th, 2025 22:44
Marys Revenge On Harry.
Cheeky Missy said:
This is akin to My Fair Lady realized. Poor Harry! Guess they\'d best leave the honey on the kitchen countertop next picnic since the bees are in season and Mary\'s man can\'t tell the difference between her sun tan lotion and the sweetener. You\'re too fun, though I can\'t side with her vengeful behavior. Beautifully rendered with excellent good humor, superb imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 17th, 2025 22:23
Cheeky Missy said:
This is akin to My Fair Lady realized. Poor Harry! Guess they\'d best leave the honey on the kitchen countertop next picnic since the bees are in season and Mary\'s man can\'t tell the difference between her sun tan lotion and the sweetener. You\'re too fun, though I can\'t side with her vengeful behavior. Beautifully rendered with excellent good humor, superb imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 17th, 2025 22:23
Marys Revenge On Harry.
arqios said:
That was pure enjoyment on Mary’s part! 🕊🙏🏻Perhaps Meghan will follow suit 🤫
May 17th, 2025 05:47
arqios said:
That was pure enjoyment on Mary’s part! 🕊🙏🏻Perhaps Meghan will follow suit 🤫
May 17th, 2025 05:47
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