Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
To Be My Fathers Son
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine write Tobani, it is amazing how lives can be changed by one new step in the right direction.
Andy
February 20th, 2025 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine write Tobani, it is amazing how lives can be changed by one new step in the right direction.
Andy
February 20th, 2025 02:09
To Be My Fathers Son
Cassie58 said:
An interesting account of someone who turned their life round for the better. Most enjoyable Tobani. He had a rotten start. All good wishes.
February 19th, 2025 17:13
Cassie58 said:
An interesting account of someone who turned their life round for the better. Most enjoyable Tobani. He had a rotten start. All good wishes.
February 19th, 2025 17:13
To Be My Fathers Son
Michael Edwards said:
A real engaging write which held me to the end - a super piece.
February 19th, 2025 06:37
Michael Edwards said:
A real engaging write which held me to the end - a super piece.
February 19th, 2025 06:37
To Be My Fathers Son
arqios said:
I had a cousin who was once a chief of wharfies, they had it rough, those blokes and lads. But hailing from an island, they always had provisions even when sailing and flying were canceled due to the weather and such.
February 19th, 2025 05:35
arqios said:
I had a cousin who was once a chief of wharfies, they had it rough, those blokes and lads. But hailing from an island, they always had provisions even when sailing and flying were canceled due to the weather and such.
February 19th, 2025 05:35
To Be My Fathers Son
David Wakeling said:
Some raw honesty here. But always taking the right lesson from life\'s experience good and bad. Excellent hopeful poem
February 19th, 2025 05:24
David Wakeling said:
Some raw honesty here. But always taking the right lesson from life\'s experience good and bad. Excellent hopeful poem
February 19th, 2025 05:24
To Be My Fathers Son
sorenbarrett said:
Life of hard knocks. A great prodigal son type story that keeps the reader held by the story. Nicely done
February 19th, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
Life of hard knocks. A great prodigal son type story that keeps the reader held by the story. Nicely done
February 19th, 2025 04:54
Two People In One
Goldfinch60 said:
Our home is the two of us in one mind Tobani where love rules.
Andy
February 19th, 2025 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Our home is the two of us in one mind Tobani where love rules.
Andy
February 19th, 2025 02:27
Two People In One
Neville said:
Two minds that think alike in different ways or one undecided mind .. or a portrait of the unity of opposites .. ain’t we complex things eh’ .. Neville 🧠😎👍
February 18th, 2025 14:16
Neville said:
Two minds that think alike in different ways or one undecided mind .. or a portrait of the unity of opposites .. ain’t we complex things eh’ .. Neville 🧠😎👍
February 18th, 2025 14:16
Two People In One
Bloomingdale said:
Our home is a happy pleasurable place❤️
February 18th, 2025 10:05
Bloomingdale said:
Our home is a happy pleasurable place❤️
February 18th, 2025 10:05
The World Holds It`s Breath
Doggerel Dave said:
Faved. What could I possibly add?
February 18th, 2025 06:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Faved. What could I possibly add?
February 18th, 2025 06:40
Two People In One
sorenbarrett said:
Anyone who has lived with a borderline personality, a bipolar disorder, even a histrionic personality can feel this. Clever and nicely structured it sends its message powerfully. This deserves a fave
February 18th, 2025 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
Anyone who has lived with a borderline personality, a bipolar disorder, even a histrionic personality can feel this. Clever and nicely structured it sends its message powerfully. This deserves a fave
February 18th, 2025 05:09
Two People In One
arqios said:
Likened into one with multi personality challenges, a Jekyll and a Hyde. Very engaging 🙏🏻🕊
February 18th, 2025 04:11
arqios said:
Likened into one with multi personality challenges, a Jekyll and a Hyde. Very engaging 🙏🏻🕊
February 18th, 2025 04:11
The World Holds It`s Breath
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Tobani very well written, all he cares about is what is in it for him and not care about anybody else.
Andy
February 18th, 2025 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Tobani very well written, all he cares about is what is in it for him and not care about anybody else.
Andy
February 18th, 2025 02:49
The World Holds It`s Breath
MendedFences27 said:
Truth, and nothing but the truth. A well-spoken piece. I feel like it will all come crashing down on him soon. (You reap what you sow). I pray for it to be true. Well spoken, - Phil A.
February 17th, 2025 20:05
MendedFences27 said:
Truth, and nothing but the truth. A well-spoken piece. I feel like it will all come crashing down on him soon. (You reap what you sow). I pray for it to be true. Well spoken, - Phil A.
February 17th, 2025 20:05
The World Holds It`s Breath
John Prophet said:
At 72 I’ve been around the block a few times. There was a saying no so long ago that everyone was entitled to their opinion.
I lost friends and family in the last few years as they pushed me away because my opinion did not conform with theirs. Sad….
February 17th, 2025 19:04
John Prophet said:
At 72 I’ve been around the block a few times. There was a saying no so long ago that everyone was entitled to their opinion.
I lost friends and family in the last few years as they pushed me away because my opinion did not conform with theirs. Sad….
February 17th, 2025 19:04
The World Holds It`s Breath
Cassie58 said:
That’s quite an itch Tobani. An epic one and I congratulate you on your patience. So much content here and much to be worried about. We wait with bated breath. Hope your Monday has been good.
February 17th, 2025 14:18
Cassie58 said:
That’s quite an itch Tobani. An epic one and I congratulate you on your patience. So much content here and much to be worried about. We wait with bated breath. Hope your Monday has been good.
February 17th, 2025 14:18
The World Holds It`s Breath
Neville said:
Damn, this is about as true as it gets .. and darn near made me cry with frustration and anger .. Needed to be said tho\' .. nuff said .. Neville
February 17th, 2025 13:22
Neville said:
Damn, this is about as true as it gets .. and darn near made me cry with frustration and anger .. Needed to be said tho\' .. nuff said .. Neville
February 17th, 2025 13:22
The World Holds It`s Breath
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Write on! It makes me feel less alone! LOL! That itch will come back, no doubt! Agent Orange Menace will see to that. (Oops, did I say that out loud? 🤣) Well done, on this, though I wish it weren\'t so damn true. 🌹👏
February 17th, 2025 08:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Write on! It makes me feel less alone! LOL! That itch will come back, no doubt! Agent Orange Menace will see to that. (Oops, did I say that out loud? 🤣) Well done, on this, though I wish it weren\'t so damn true. 🌹👏
February 17th, 2025 08:19
The World Holds It`s Breath
David Wakeling said:
There is so much to unpack here. I think recent events have made us all get ready for bad things to happen. Let\'s face it wars are happening around the world so more could be coming.Let\'s hope things improve.An amazing poem
February 17th, 2025 05:38
David Wakeling said:
There is so much to unpack here. I think recent events have made us all get ready for bad things to happen. Let\'s face it wars are happening around the world so more could be coming.Let\'s hope things improve.An amazing poem
February 17th, 2025 05:38
The World Holds It`s Breath
sorenbarrett said:
Strong feelings something that America has not had in a long time. Wait and see if the bull shit that has been spread is a growth stimulant or too strong and burns the roots. When the horrific becomes humorous all we can do is laugh. Good and passionate write.
February 17th, 2025 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
Strong feelings something that America has not had in a long time. Wait and see if the bull shit that has been spread is a growth stimulant or too strong and burns the roots. When the horrific becomes humorous all we can do is laugh. Good and passionate write.
February 17th, 2025 05:10
The World Holds It`s Breath
Mutley Ravishes said:
Not holding my breath!
Taking the journey to the west!
February 17th, 2025 04:54
Mutley Ravishes said:
Not holding my breath!
Taking the journey to the west!
February 17th, 2025 04:54
My Bed For The Night
Parisab said:
Glad you listened as a way of helping-good write
February 17th, 2025 03:35
Parisab said:
Glad you listened as a way of helping-good write
February 17th, 2025 03:35
The World Holds It`s Breath
arqios said:
You held on for as long as you could. That’s all that can be asked of anyone 🙏🏻🕊️
February 17th, 2025 03:09
arqios said:
You held on for as long as you could. That’s all that can be asked of anyone 🙏🏻🕊️
February 17th, 2025 03:09
Just a Bit Of Fun
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Tobani.
\"Wise man say,
If you want the truth,
Don\'t listen to a Politician.\"
Andy
February 17th, 2025 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Tobani.
\"Wise man say,
If you want the truth,
Don\'t listen to a Politician.\"
Andy
February 17th, 2025 02:10
Just a Bit Of Fun
David Wakeling said:
This was fun and very clever.Enjoyed reading
February 16th, 2025 16:33
David Wakeling said:
This was fun and very clever.Enjoyed reading
February 16th, 2025 16:33
Just a Bit Of Fun
Cassie58 said:
You ARE a wise man with a great sense of humour Tobani. I like the gardening one especially :) Much fun reading.
February 16th, 2025 12:47
Cassie58 said:
You ARE a wise man with a great sense of humour Tobani. I like the gardening one especially :) Much fun reading.
February 16th, 2025 12:47
Yesterday Was
Cassie58 said:
This is a very touching poem Tobani. A reminder of the lonely people on Valentine’s Day, and there are many of them. I particularly enjoyed the structure and the repetition of some hearts, worked well. A favourite.
February 16th, 2025 12:27
Cassie58 said:
This is a very touching poem Tobani. A reminder of the lonely people on Valentine’s Day, and there are many of them. I particularly enjoyed the structure and the repetition of some hearts, worked well. A favourite.
February 16th, 2025 12:27
Just a Bit Of Fun
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I love the second edition of this. Well done, Tobani! I hope there will be more! 🌹👏
February 16th, 2025 10:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I love the second edition of this. Well done, Tobani! I hope there will be more! 🌹👏
February 16th, 2025 10:48
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