Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence



Wise Man Say (10).
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Much wisdom here, but the latter...many unsolicited \"advisers\" need to heed. A fave from me friend. I look forward to these! 🌹👏

April 13th, 2025 07:31

Wise Man Say (10).
David Wakeling said:

Lots of un and wisdom here,Excellent

April 13th, 2025 05:32

Wise Man Say (10).
sorenbarrett said:

More great adages for a Sunday. Love it.

April 13th, 2025 04:22

Wise Man Say (10).
arqios said:

Ah is it 10 already! And still going strong🙏🏻🕊

April 13th, 2025 03:11

Wise Man Say (10).
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good writes PL. And - \'If at first you fail - give up! No use keep bashing head against brick wall.\' lol.

April 13th, 2025 02:57

Adventures of Mary and Harry (3)
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun words Tobani, it is not quite the same with my Mary, LOL.

Andy

April 13th, 2025 02:29

Adventures of Mary and Harry (3)
KTay said:

Hahaha! Love this!

April 12th, 2025 14:12

You Get Out What You Put In
rrodriguez said:

Cute and clever playfulness, with a touch of wit. I liked it!

April 12th, 2025 11:56

Adventures of Mary and Harry (3)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

LOL! These were totally fun...and funny! Well done, my friend. Enjoy the weekend. 🌹👏

April 12th, 2025 07:58

Adventures of Mary and Harry (3)
David Wakeling said:

This was a fun read.Excellent well done

April 12th, 2025 05:33

Adventures of Mary and Harry (3)
arqios said:

Real life can be so much more hilarious than fiction as exemplified in Harry and Mary’s adventures. I’m surmising number 4 is well on its way🙏🏻🕊

April 12th, 2025 05:28

Adventures of Mary and Harry (3)
teardrop said:

Hahaha I love it. Great write. Thank you for the chuckle!

April 12th, 2025 04:56

Adventures of Mary and Harry (3)
sorenbarrett said:

Poor Mary she never seems to catch a break. A fun read set in rhyme loved it my friend.

April 12th, 2025 04:22

Children Have Rights.
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Tobani, children should always be protected, love and encouraged in their lives. I cannot ever understand why people can hurt children!

Andy

April 12th, 2025 01:52

Children Have Rights.
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

April 11th, 2025 16:01

Children Have Rights.
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and poignant.

April 11th, 2025 14:50

The Success Of My Dreams.
spilleronsheet said:

And truth be told, many lives perished under the invisible burden of generations
Keep writing dear poet

April 11th, 2025 14:37

Into The Spotlight.
spilleronsheet said:

Lovely play of words with a depth…the very own chasing the spotlight yet encroached by its own might…well done dear poet

April 11th, 2025 14:35

Children Have Rights.
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This is so true, Tobani. No child asked to be born and those who have children owe them provisions, love and care. A bold, passionate, and needed write. Well done! 🌹👏

April 11th, 2025 07:45

Into The Spotlight.
Salvia.S said:

A haunting reminder that fame comes with a price....

April 11th, 2025 07:31

Children Have Rights.
arqios said:

Haha, that’s excellent… I was the product of a loving quickie, would you believe… but that’s a whole other story… I hope everyone understands that each human wherever they’re at in the life cycle has rights. Good stuff here🙏🏻🕊

April 11th, 2025 05:24

Children Have Rights.
David Wakeling said:

This is a wonderful piece of work. It highlights the rights of children and the responsibilities of adults, Very important work. Excellent

April 11th, 2025 05:23

Children Have Rights.
sorenbarrett said:

A most noble write Tobani one that I can sense you feel strongly about. Children are deeply dependent on their parents for survival and learning and they didn\'t ask to be here so it does behoove those that made that decision willingly or not to provide for them. Nicely said

April 11th, 2025 04:11

Kindness and Compassion Are Free.
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Tobani, I try to give those things all the time.

Andy

April 11th, 2025 01:26

Kindness and Compassion Are Free.
John Prophet said:

Unfortunately, many of us are too busy watching our backs.
Nice wrote.

April 10th, 2025 20:53

Kindness and Compassion Are Free.
Mutley Ravishes said:

Well said
Without it
We\'re better off dead

April 10th, 2025 20:14

Kindness and Compassion Are Free.
Reynaldo Casison said:

Nice one Tobani

Cool compassionate rhythms

April 10th, 2025 05:40

Kindness and Compassion Are Free.
David Wakeling said:

I wish people could practise kindness and compassion A great poem.

April 10th, 2025 05:17

Kindness and Compassion Are Free.
sorenbarrett said:

I would joke about this but the poem demands respect it is such a beautiful message sent in this poem that needs to be heard by all. Why is it so hard to give what is free? So well said Tobani.

April 10th, 2025 04:03

Kindness and Compassion Are Free.
Cheeky Missy said:

Funny, now you remind me of the latest notice over the interstate, I-55 with a line about not allowing frustration but letting calm rule [despite the idiots weaving through unexpectedly]. Yes, giving a friendly smile goes further where we\'re all in this together, the simple act a free one as you eloquently prove. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a warming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.

April 10th, 2025 02:10



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