Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence



A Longing For Freedom
arqios said:

A very powerful readπŸ•ŠπŸ™πŸ»

May 7th, 2025 06:24

A Longing For Freedom
Cozy Wave$ said:

Hard

May 7th, 2025 04:57

A Longing For Freedom
Victor Bolshov said:

In my eyes, freedom here refers to resolving the inner conflict, ridding of a burden of the guilt, acceptance of one\'s self, seeing yourself for who you are. Invokes thought, good read!

May 7th, 2025 04:11

A Longing For Freedom
sorenbarrett said:

Good to hear from you again Tobani. A poem of internal state and concern over where it is at. Convincing and I don\'t believe that one\'s mental state is their fault. Whether you believe in neurotransmitters, God\'s creation or just predestination none imply blame. Good write my friend

May 7th, 2025 03:29

A Longing For Freedom
Poetic Licence said:

Thank you

May 7th, 2025 02:46

A Longing For Freedom
Demar Desu said:

Flows

May 7th, 2025 02:32

Kindness and Compassion Are Free.
Jan bach said:

I couldn\'t agree more. A smile to a stranger cost\'s nothing but it could come at just the exact moment when it\'s needed.
Thank you for a lovely poem.

Jan

May 5th, 2025 06:17

Thank You
Damaso said:

πŸ’”

May 4th, 2025 15:34

Kindness and Compassion Are Free.
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Very nice words and so relevant

May 4th, 2025 12:22

The Race
sunshine777 said:

Exactly πŸ’― 😊

May 3rd, 2025 16:30

Is Insanity Now Normality.
sunshine777 said:

Powerful, an I sure pray not

May 1st, 2025 20:01

Is Insanity Now Normality.
Jan bach said:

How true!
Love it.

Jan

May 1st, 2025 15:51

Jimmy The Bully Man
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

A message for all who are bullied. Well written

May 1st, 2025 13:20

Into The Spotlight.
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Great message

May 1st, 2025 10:20

Lie In a Truth.
NafisaSB said:

i am going by the theory that there is very little place for truth in the world of today, so your musings make a lot of sense to me
keep it up

April 27th, 2025 23:55

Smile
sunshine777 said:

Truth

April 27th, 2025 18:33

Smile
rmjhm.i said:

factss be like ------------->

April 27th, 2025 02:00

Is Insanity Now Normality.
Thoughtless said:

A good question.

April 25th, 2025 07:13

Into The Spotlight.
sunshine777 said:

That\'s honest

April 24th, 2025 12:41

Heart or Mind.
RSM0812 said:

That\'s a great sort of proverb. Can I ask if you wrote it or it\'s a quote?

April 23rd, 2025 06:34

Thank You
Goldfinch60 said:

I do hope these are just fine words Tobani and that you wll continue writing your fine words for us to read.

Andy

April 21st, 2025 01:46

Smile
NafisaSB said:

i try my best to remain smiling, but sometimes circumstances can be really trying - and that\'s when i should learn what you have written - to control the words that can hurt and leave a lasting mark
beautifully explained in a concise manner

April 20th, 2025 23:17

Thank You
Ezekiel Olayemi said:

Come back soon friend, the world of poetry await you.β™₯️


April 20th, 2025 16:18

Thank You
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Oh no, my friend! What will I do without our ongoing interactions, reading your wonderful poetry, hearing your insightful feedback? I truly appreciate you and look forward to our interactions, friend. They have blessed me and, reading your poem, it seems these interactions with this community have blessed you. If that is the case, then I trust you will return. We all need breaks and I can understand the need for that. If you look back at my publishing history on here since 2017, you\'ll see I took my share. 🀣 But here I still am. So, rather than goodbye, I\'ll say take care till next time, my friend! πŸ€—β€οΈπŸ‘ Be well.

April 20th, 2025 07:58

Thank You
David Wakeling said:

Some wonderful wisdom and advice here.Inspirational

April 20th, 2025 05:16

Thank You
teardrop said:

you could have written this from a page out of my book for I know the demons of depression all to well. I hope you\'re alright. I am often told I write so much about sorrow and pain. Which I do. What else am I to write about? When I write, I write for me for writing is my only release. I know of no other way. Also since I am wring to myself, I have np choice but to be honest. I can\'t lie to myself. Keep writing and don\'t stop. Believe me, I have notebooks of poetry I have never shared with anyone, yet plenty of relief has been felt by me just penning them, Again, I hope you\'re ok. Please don\'t leave, I just met you. thamk you for sharing a huge part of yourself with me.

April 20th, 2025 05:08

Thank You
sorenbarrett said:

A poem before a journey an odyssey fraught with perils. The poem reads well my friend and my heart goes with it. Some poems are too real and tender to be touched and this seems one. My hands are too rough for its surface. Wishing a rapid return missing your Sunday wise man says

April 20th, 2025 04:18

Thank You
arqios said:

Hope this isn’t goodbye. And our community is part of our strength πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

April 20th, 2025 03:13

Thank You
orchidee said:

Good write PL.

April 20th, 2025 02:20

Just a Waste of F------ Time
maydanae said:

Wow this was hard to read because I feel for younger you. It is never pleasant to feel like that and to have people in your life put those words in your head is really sad. I hope you are doing better in recent years. You are loved

April 19th, 2025 11:40



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