Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence



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rrodriguez said:

Insightful!

April 6th, 2025 15:16

Oh No Not More !!! Wise Man Say (9)
ChrisLynπŸ•Š said:

This real touched me, beautiful one

April 6th, 2025 11:43

To Be Alone
definitelymayank said:

Ahh such a lovely one, sad that I relate to it to some extent.

April 6th, 2025 11:42

Oh No Not More !!! Wise Man Say (9)
sorenbarrett said:

No don\'t assume you know the old saying. I have grown to enjoy your Sunday wise man say section it makes my day and I hope it don\'t go away. Have a great day.

April 6th, 2025 05:47

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rebellion_in_sanity said:

So true!

April 6th, 2025 05:01

Oh No Not More !!! Wise Man Say (9)
arqios said:

Oh yes! Indeed and 10 not far behind πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

April 6th, 2025 03:49

Is Insanity Now Normality.
NafisaSB said:

i think the answer is obvious - you have clarified it yourself indirectly
scary thought - wish things normalize one day soon

April 6th, 2025 02:32

Oh No Not More !!! Wise Man Say (9)
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write PL.

April 6th, 2025 02:17

Fun in (Sun)Day
Courtnie McKern said:

Wise man knows best! Nicely done

April 5th, 2025 12:12

Just a Waste of F------ Time
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a strong poem Tobani. I just cannot understand why people treat children like this.

Andy

April 5th, 2025 01:21

Just a Waste of F------ Time
sorenbarrett said:

The irony of what people say and do never ceases to amaze me. Being a scape goat does not make one a goat, unless one is a G.O.A.T. A touching write that shows that people use their own disabilities to create further disabilities in others. Tough read

April 4th, 2025 03:58

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Mutley Ravishes said:

How effing true! Sad, and funny.

April 4th, 2025 03:38

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arqios said:

It does speak volumes of itself- the one that spoke to me like that is now gone, 2 years this week. How timely πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

April 4th, 2025 02:57

Just a Waste of F------ Time
orchidee said:

You seen my poem - censored?! (not posted on here). It starts:
Ohhh, F, F, F, and F
And furthermore F, F, F, and F
And so on for 5,483 verses! Ooh!

April 4th, 2025 02:21

Jimmy The Bully Man
Goldfinch60 said:

There were bullies in school that got their comeuppance Tobani, strangely I became good friends with one after we left school, he was fine.

Andy

April 4th, 2025 01:10

Jimmy The Bully Man
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic. Yoy reap what you sow.

April 3rd, 2025 22:14

Jimmy The Bully Man
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Yesss! I love the fire in your childhood self and this describes a real life scene I was invovled in where I had to stand up to a bully. The result, the same...not the same exact action, mine a punch to the face...but the laying on the ground and not feeling so big and tough...yup. And bully no longer bullied me anymore. Only that particular one stopped, of course, and there were times I lost and/or was beat up by groups of kids. But in that one instance, I moved like a butterfly and stung like a bee. Well done on this, Nataiella. Thank you for posting this throwback and for its message. A fave from me.

April 3rd, 2025 11:43

Jimmy The Bully Man
sunshine777 said:

Good write, I hope Jimmy reads it

April 3rd, 2025 11:33

Jimmy The Bully Man
arqios said:

When you’re the underdog you learn to fight to survive πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

April 3rd, 2025 03:09

Jimmy The Bully Man
sorenbarrett said:

Standing up to a bully is more important than winning but winning helps. A good write my friend.

April 3rd, 2025 03:07

Jimmy The Bully Man
orchidee said:

Good write PL.

April 3rd, 2025 02:17

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Goldfinch60 said:

True words Tobani.

\"Smile, it confuses people.\"

Andy

April 3rd, 2025 01:42

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Cheeky Missy said:

Superb. Beautifully rendered in poignant brevity, how very haunting and thought-provoking. One of my brothers used to say folk were most honest when furious, but I dunno. Thank you for sharing.

April 2nd, 2025 17:04

The Voices Have Gone
Cheeky Missy said:

There\'s a subtle note of humor which I suppose is called sarcasm, but I prefer the chuckle you gave me. Fascinating reality delineated. Perhaps you\'d like my tinnitus for style? It drives me and has long, long driven me to keep music and other recordings perpetually in the background to distract me from the constant tinny whine. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.

April 2nd, 2025 17:01

Sold Your Soul To The Devil
Cheeky Missy said:

Damned with stars in their eyes, why, oh why are the Asians the ones whose music videos I\'ve seen detailing this painful reality as if it\'s no secret? Kit Marlowe\'s Dr. Faustus was the original from which I\'ve never fully recovered, and oh! How eloquently you wax herein, rendering the ghastly facts to effect in disarming style, complete with excellent imagery and a biting, macabre poignancy. Awesome! I love it. Thank you, thank you for sharing.

April 2nd, 2025 16:55

Figment of Your Imagination
Jan bach said:

How very true! Loved it !

April 2nd, 2025 11:47

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Truth. Faved! Well done, my friend. Much needed insight for a world too focused on itself to often notice or care. Well done! πŸ–€πŸ™πŸŒΉπŸ‘

April 2nd, 2025 08:27

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arqios said:

Both powerful properties and wielded at will or unconsciously πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

April 2nd, 2025 03:07

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sorenbarrett said:

Here is the balance and ours the choice which side to sit on. Lovely thought and well said

April 2nd, 2025 02:57

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orchidee said:

Good write PL.

April 2nd, 2025 02:30



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