Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Mammon`s Table.
MendedFences27 said:
Like this one, it\'s elusiveness and thoughtfulness all wrapped around a feasting table. Symbolism galore, from \"Mammon\'s table\" to \"Virgin soul\". Also let me say, we all need a break once in a while. The news can be depressive. - Phil A.
June 19th, 2025 11:57
MendedFences27 said:
Like this one, it\'s elusiveness and thoughtfulness all wrapped around a feasting table. Symbolism galore, from \"Mammon\'s table\" to \"Virgin soul\". Also let me say, we all need a break once in a while. The news can be depressive. - Phil A.
June 19th, 2025 11:57
Mammon`s Table.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, damn, this is profound truth set up as a foodies delight! LOL! Except this foodie is a vegetarian so: 🤮 Which is the exact response this poem demands, when mammon becomes our master and we become its slave. What a poem, most definitely a fave, my friend. 👏🌹
June 19th, 2025 08:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, damn, this is profound truth set up as a foodies delight! LOL! Except this foodie is a vegetarian so: 🤮 Which is the exact response this poem demands, when mammon becomes our master and we become its slave. What a poem, most definitely a fave, my friend. 👏🌹
June 19th, 2025 08:41
Mammon`s Table.
David Wakeling said:
Some good religious advice here. Very unique.
June 19th, 2025 04:22
David Wakeling said:
Some good religious advice here. Very unique.
June 19th, 2025 04:22
Mammon`s Table.
sorenbarrett said:
Not much of a innards man, have eaten liver, tripe, kidney, and heart but never soul ,maybe sole although don\'t know if it was virgin. A most short but interesting write Tobani and now it has me thinking. Clever in the choice of parts listed for the fare on the menu.
June 19th, 2025 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
Not much of a innards man, have eaten liver, tripe, kidney, and heart but never soul ,maybe sole although don\'t know if it was virgin. A most short but interesting write Tobani and now it has me thinking. Clever in the choice of parts listed for the fare on the menu.
June 19th, 2025 04:21
Mammon`s Table.
arqios said:
Oooh, foreboding, ominous and apocalyptic even🙏🏻🕊️
June 19th, 2025 02:29
arqios said:
Oooh, foreboding, ominous and apocalyptic even🙏🏻🕊️
June 19th, 2025 02:29
Do Not Be A Beaver.
Goldfinch60 said:
We must build bridges in our life Tobani.
Andy
June 19th, 2025 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
We must build bridges in our life Tobani.
Andy
June 19th, 2025 01:20
Do Not Be A Beaver.
Doggerel Dave said:
Thought this was personal advice directed at a civil engineer tasked with building another of them environmentally dubious constructions...........
June 18th, 2025 19:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Thought this was personal advice directed at a civil engineer tasked with building another of them environmentally dubious constructions...........
June 18th, 2025 19:29
Do Not Be A Beaver.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Unless you are ACTUALLY a beaver, I 150% concur! And if you are that actual beaver, please avoid the creek by my yard! LOL! But, all jokes aside, this is profoundly wise advice for us humans beavers to take! Cut out the beaver behavior, be a human! 🤣
June 18th, 2025 17:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Unless you are ACTUALLY a beaver, I 150% concur! And if you are that actual beaver, please avoid the creek by my yard! LOL! But, all jokes aside, this is profoundly wise advice for us humans beavers to take! Cut out the beaver behavior, be a human! 🤣
June 18th, 2025 17:08
Do Not Be A Beaver.
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Clever and concise—a poignant reminder to flow freely, not trap ourselves in endless cycles. Lovely metaphor!
June 18th, 2025 13:27
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Clever and concise—a poignant reminder to flow freely, not trap ourselves in endless cycles. Lovely metaphor!
June 18th, 2025 13:27
Do Not Be A Beaver.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Excellent write, PL. Excellent advice.
June 18th, 2025 07:56
Jerry Reynolds said:
Excellent write, PL. Excellent advice.
June 18th, 2025 07:56
Do Not Be A Beaver.
arqios said:
And for us the walls do come crashing down at the right time an with the right people and circumstance.🙏🏻🕊
June 18th, 2025 06:27
arqios said:
And for us the walls do come crashing down at the right time an with the right people and circumstance.🙏🏻🕊
June 18th, 2025 06:27
Do Not Be A Beaver.
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha! You\'re a riot. But there\'s an inextricably good reason they build those dams, ergo.... This is too fun. Thank you so, so very much for sharing.
June 18th, 2025 06:16
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha! You\'re a riot. But there\'s an inextricably good reason they build those dams, ergo.... This is too fun. Thank you so, so very much for sharing.
June 18th, 2025 06:16
Do Not Be A Beaver.
David Wakeling said:
yes I agree.Many people put up walls that block them getting to live life.Good advice here
June 18th, 2025 04:29
David Wakeling said:
yes I agree.Many people put up walls that block them getting to live life.Good advice here
June 18th, 2025 04:29
Do Not Be A Beaver.
sorenbarrett said:
A good message my friend dams in social, interpersonal, personal, financial, or even inner understanding. Nicely broad in few words.
June 18th, 2025 03:18
sorenbarrett said:
A good message my friend dams in social, interpersonal, personal, financial, or even inner understanding. Nicely broad in few words.
June 18th, 2025 03:18
Evicted From Hell.
Goldfinch60 said:
I believe that ANYBODY who hurts and abuses children should be hung by their balls from a bridge and the the crows eat them!!!!
Andy
June 18th, 2025 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
I believe that ANYBODY who hurts and abuses children should be hung by their balls from a bridge and the the crows eat them!!!!
Andy
June 18th, 2025 02:15
Evicted From Hell.
Damaso said:
Beautiful piece, sir, as always, a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing. Regards.
June 17th, 2025 08:56
Damaso said:
Beautiful piece, sir, as always, a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing. Regards.
June 17th, 2025 08:56
Evicted From Hell.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First, I just read up on Jimmy Savile. 😱😳🤬 Now, that I vented that out. This poem is brilliant and I love how you make purgatory LOWER than hell! That is great! Brilliant and deserving a fave! 🌹👏
June 17th, 2025 08:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First, I just read up on Jimmy Savile. 😱😳🤬 Now, that I vented that out. This poem is brilliant and I love how you make purgatory LOWER than hell! That is great! Brilliant and deserving a fave! 🌹👏
June 17th, 2025 08:14
Evicted From Hell.
David Wakeling said:
Wow sounds like he deserves his fate.A very raw and powerful poem.Well done
June 17th, 2025 04:19
David Wakeling said:
Wow sounds like he deserves his fate.A very raw and powerful poem.Well done
June 17th, 2025 04:19
Evicted From Hell.
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read about a not too fun topic and the rage that it instils in any parent and raises strong moral questions about age, consent, nature vs nurture, culture, punishment vs rehabilitation. A powerful write in humorous guise.
June 17th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read about a not too fun topic and the rage that it instils in any parent and raises strong moral questions about age, consent, nature vs nurture, culture, punishment vs rehabilitation. A powerful write in humorous guise.
June 17th, 2025 04:14
Evicted From Hell.
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I know people like that, good write, enjoyed
June 17th, 2025 02:30
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I know people like that, good write, enjoyed
June 17th, 2025 02:30
Perfect Life.
Goldfinch60 said:
If we reached perfection in our lives Tobani we would have nothing to look forward to. I have a good life but it is certainly not perfect.
Andy
June 17th, 2025 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
If we reached perfection in our lives Tobani we would have nothing to look forward to. I have a good life but it is certainly not perfect.
Andy
June 17th, 2025 01:03
Dads Jokes For Father\'s Day
NafisaSB said:
started a gloomy rainy day with a smile and a chuckle after reading the above - thanks for sharing
June 17th, 2025 00:18
NafisaSB said:
started a gloomy rainy day with a smile and a chuckle after reading the above - thanks for sharing
June 17th, 2025 00:18
Perfect Life.
arqios said:
A poem that remind us that our journey—our experiences, triumphs, and even mistakes—have meaning. That the struggles we face don’t make our life lesser; they make it real. And in reality, there is space for growth, connection, and the kind of authenticity that no illusion of perfection can ever provide. Yes, we are enough, just as we are. Excellent read.🙏🏻🕊️
June 16th, 2025 20:28
arqios said:
A poem that remind us that our journey—our experiences, triumphs, and even mistakes—have meaning. That the struggles we face don’t make our life lesser; they make it real. And in reality, there is space for growth, connection, and the kind of authenticity that no illusion of perfection can ever provide. Yes, we are enough, just as we are. Excellent read.🙏🏻🕊️
June 16th, 2025 20:28
Perfect Life.
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Truth echoes in your words—perfection is a myth, but authenticity is real. A brilliant unmasking of the lies we tell ourselves and others.
June 16th, 2025 20:12
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Truth echoes in your words—perfection is a myth, but authenticity is real. A brilliant unmasking of the lies we tell ourselves and others.
June 16th, 2025 20:12
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