Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Look In The Eye.
NafisaSB said:
omg.. you have portrayed this so well, i can visualize the man committing the ultimate act brought about by \'cynical despair\'
wonderfully worded
May 14th, 2025 00:26
NafisaSB said:
omg.. you have portrayed this so well, i can visualize the man committing the ultimate act brought about by \'cynical despair\'
wonderfully worded
May 14th, 2025 00:26
How Does it Feel?.
sorenbarrett said:
A first person account of bullying on the receiving side and its effects speaks rawly in poetic form. Very nice
May 13th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
A first person account of bullying on the receiving side and its effects speaks rawly in poetic form. Very nice
May 13th, 2025 03:55
How Does it Feel?.
arqios said:
The wounds once sharp
now dull— not vanished,
but understood.
Strength came slow,
beneath each bruise,
in the silence where
fear could not last.
You sought power in fists—
I found it in walking away.
May 13th, 2025 02:51
arqios said:
The wounds once sharp
now dull— not vanished,
but understood.
Strength came slow,
beneath each bruise,
in the silence where
fear could not last.
You sought power in fists—
I found it in walking away.
May 13th, 2025 02:51
Wise Man Say (11).
NafisaSB said:
the wise man has nailed it in all the above situations
fantastic power of observation - wow
May 12th, 2025 23:53
NafisaSB said:
the wise man has nailed it in all the above situations
fantastic power of observation - wow
May 12th, 2025 23:53
Look In The Eye.
Cheeky Missy said:
Where in the world do you get these?! My la! How perfectly horrifying, macabre, ghastly, nightmarish! There\'s no hope of deliverance since the mirror is guilty, no human. Goodnight! What a chilling piece for Monday. Superbly rendered with excellent imagery and a terrifying poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 12th, 2025 18:41
Cheeky Missy said:
Where in the world do you get these?! My la! How perfectly horrifying, macabre, ghastly, nightmarish! There\'s no hope of deliverance since the mirror is guilty, no human. Goodnight! What a chilling piece for Monday. Superbly rendered with excellent imagery and a terrifying poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 12th, 2025 18:41
Look In The Eye.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful poem, my friend. Brutal and powerful...and quite the metaphor. Well done! 🌹👏
May 12th, 2025 08:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful poem, my friend. Brutal and powerful...and quite the metaphor. Well done! 🌹👏
May 12th, 2025 08:44
Look In The Eye.
David Wakeling said:
A case of mistaken identity.Very clever with a twist.Enjoyed reading
May 12th, 2025 06:55
David Wakeling said:
A case of mistaken identity.Very clever with a twist.Enjoyed reading
May 12th, 2025 06:55
Look In The Eye.
MDStone said:
I thought I recognized that man. That familiar old cynical smile. That judgmental stare. Nicely done, PL. I really “reflected” on this one.
May 12th, 2025 05:39
MDStone said:
I thought I recognized that man. That familiar old cynical smile. That judgmental stare. Nicely done, PL. I really “reflected” on this one.
May 12th, 2025 05:39
Look In The Eye.
sorenbarrett said:
I always love the unexpected, this added the metaphor to give it double strength and power. To spice it up some rhyme and near rhyme, a dramatic setting and what more could you want? I love how well woven the metaphor is. That of self destruction that has no mercy. A definite fave
May 12th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
I always love the unexpected, this added the metaphor to give it double strength and power. To spice it up some rhyme and near rhyme, a dramatic setting and what more could you want? I love how well woven the metaphor is. That of self destruction that has no mercy. A definite fave
May 12th, 2025 04:10
Look In The Eye.
arqios said:
I\'ve seen that look before and I am glad that I was able to avert inevitable disaster. Profound read 🙏🏻🕊️
May 12th, 2025 03:04
arqios said:
I\'ve seen that look before and I am glad that I was able to avert inevitable disaster. Profound read 🙏🏻🕊️
May 12th, 2025 03:04
Look In The Eye.
Salvia.S said:
Your poem effectively conveys a dark and intense atmosphere, drawing the reader into the scene. The imagery is vivid and evocative. Well done!!!
May 12th, 2025 02:07
Salvia.S said:
Your poem effectively conveys a dark and intense atmosphere, drawing the reader into the scene. The imagery is vivid and evocative. Well done!!!
May 12th, 2025 02:07
Wise Man Say (11).
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Tobani.
\"Don\'t count the days,
Make the days count.\"
Andy
May 12th, 2025 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Tobani.
\"Don\'t count the days,
Make the days count.\"
Andy
May 12th, 2025 01:18
Wise Man Say (11).
E.J. Waling said:
‘Honesty Is Not Always
The Best Policy.’ So very true! Great insights.
May 11th, 2025 21:21
E.J. Waling said:
‘Honesty Is Not Always
The Best Policy.’ So very true! Great insights.
May 11th, 2025 21:21
Adventures of Mary and Harry (4)
YourUglyBoy said:
Harry is my spirit animal... I\'m a total Harry! Poor Harry oof!
May 11th, 2025 10:59
YourUglyBoy said:
Harry is my spirit animal... I\'m a total Harry! Poor Harry oof!
May 11th, 2025 10:59
Wise Man Say (11).
MendedFences27 said:
PL, lots of wisdom among the humor. And it\'s true, \"she already knows.\"
May 11th, 2025 09:56
MendedFences27 said:
PL, lots of wisdom among the humor. And it\'s true, \"she already knows.\"
May 11th, 2025 09:56
Wise Man Say (11).
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That last one is a mystery! 🤣 Round 11 rocked, my friend. Can\'t wait for round 12. And yes, honesty is not always the best policy. 🤣 Well done, my friend. The sun is rockin\' here today, so will do. Hope you enjoy the day as well. 🌹👏
May 11th, 2025 07:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That last one is a mystery! 🤣 Round 11 rocked, my friend. Can\'t wait for round 12. And yes, honesty is not always the best policy. 🤣 Well done, my friend. The sun is rockin\' here today, so will do. Hope you enjoy the day as well. 🌹👏
May 11th, 2025 07:39
Wise Man Say (11).
MDStone said:
What a fun read, Tobani! Yet filled with absolute wisdom. I can’t help but feel some gathered by the experience of the “hard way.” I know for me they were.
May 11th, 2025 07:00
MDStone said:
What a fun read, Tobani! Yet filled with absolute wisdom. I can’t help but feel some gathered by the experience of the “hard way.” I know for me they were.
May 11th, 2025 07:00
A Caring Smile.
Cheeky Missy said:
Very, very lovely and rather inspiring, a very pretty little number I\'m certain the purveyors of knicknacks should put and grave on all. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a rather tender poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
May 11th, 2025 06:28
Cheeky Missy said:
Very, very lovely and rather inspiring, a very pretty little number I\'m certain the purveyors of knicknacks should put and grave on all. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a rather tender poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
May 11th, 2025 06:28
Wise Man Say (11).
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too good. Morsel by morsel, this is a beauty, but of course, and honesty still is the best policy, if I may be pardoned for cheekily disagreeing there, she can just join the Kardashians if it does. Now the air is cleared, poor Meg must have my luck, sadly, as I never ever win anything. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a delightful poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
May 11th, 2025 06:16
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too good. Morsel by morsel, this is a beauty, but of course, and honesty still is the best policy, if I may be pardoned for cheekily disagreeing there, she can just join the Kardashians if it does. Now the air is cleared, poor Meg must have my luck, sadly, as I never ever win anything. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a delightful poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
May 11th, 2025 06:16
Wise Man Say (11).
Hollow Enigma said:
A great poem with alot of wisom to carry with. Thankyou very much.
May 11th, 2025 05:54
Hollow Enigma said:
A great poem with alot of wisom to carry with. Thankyou very much.
May 11th, 2025 05:54
Wise Man Say (11).
sorenbarrett said:
Always need a smile on a Sunday and this does the trick. Thank you Tobani for the smile.
May 11th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Always need a smile on a Sunday and this does the trick. Thank you Tobani for the smile.
May 11th, 2025 04:12
Adventures of Mary and Harry (4)
Goldfinch60 said:
Opps! Harry is in big trouble. Good fun write Tobani.
Andy
May 11th, 2025 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Opps! Harry is in big trouble. Good fun write Tobani.
Andy
May 11th, 2025 01:22
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