Am I Alone.
E.J. Waling said:

I find being alone enjoyable. Free of drama, floating freely in my thoughts. Fertile ground for poetry.
Creative piece.


March 20th, 2025 06:15

Am I Alone.
sorenbarrett said:

A point made that each term is by itself emphasizes the aloneness of it. There appears to be a pattern in the words which if I stretch may be the panes of a window. Creative. No we are not alone we always have ourselves, thoughts, and emotions.

March 20th, 2025 04:00

Am I Alone.
Caring dove said:

We can feel very alone with our emotions thoughts and feelings .. and even around other people .. it can make one very sad .

I can feel very alone , sometimes when I’m around others .. isn’t a nice feeling

March 20th, 2025 03:21

Today Is Tomorrows History.
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true Tobani, do something unforgettable today to be remembered by all.

Andy

March 20th, 2025 02:20

Today Is Tomorrows History.
Neilton said:

Allow me to thank you for this poem! I needed it to remind me the importance of goodness since everyday life sometimes makes you forget it ! I loved your poem

March 19th, 2025 15:32

Today Is Tomorrows History.
Salvia.S said:

A powerful reminder to make today count!

March 19th, 2025 07:45

Today Is Tomorrows History.
David Wakeling said:

Some wisdom here.I think the poem is excellent.Well done mi amigo

March 19th, 2025 05:20

Today Is Tomorrows History.
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely play on words that becomes a play on thoughts that becomes good advice. Very nice T

March 19th, 2025 03:25

Today Is Tomorrows History.
orchidee said:

Good write PL.

March 19th, 2025 03:07

My Mama`s Gone.
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a sad story Tobani, it happens so frequently, I have a friend who was abused for many years, she got rid of him eventually and I spent much time listening to her problems and helping all I could. She now has a new wonderful partner and they are wonderful together.

Andy

March 19th, 2025 02:27

My Mama`s Gone.
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

March 18th, 2025 09:23

My Mama`s Gone.
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Profoundly sad and terrible reality. Thank you sharing my friend! Excellent write. 🌹👏

March 18th, 2025 08:24

My Mama`s Gone.
sorenbarrett said:

Abuse an ugly monster that consumes both victim and perpetrator as well as many around it. A sad poem with a message that unfortunately those that need to hear it most will probably not hear. Well done

March 18th, 2025 04:08

My Mama`s Gone.
orchidee said:

Good write PL.

March 18th, 2025 03:52

As The Clouds Gently Roll On By
Simurgh said:

Wonderful poem Tobani, the insight of your poem is indeed true! I also feel this feeling at times...... I understand how you feel... The reflections of the poem made it a lyrical song as well!

Bravo! Good work with beautiful touch of poetic treasure, Tobani🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

With love and warm regards
Simurgh
A renowned poetic bard from India

March 18th, 2025 00:04