Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Fun in (Sun)Day
MDStone said:
Tobani,
Wise words indeed. Thank you for sharing. Enjoyed the read very much.
March 2nd, 2025 07:59
MDStone said:
Tobani,
Wise words indeed. Thank you for sharing. Enjoyed the read very much.
March 2nd, 2025 07:59
Fun in (Sun)Day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That last one. TRUTH! Well, they all are! Another wonderful series of proverbs from Wise Man. Always looking forward to more. 🌹👏
March 2nd, 2025 07:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That last one. TRUTH! Well, they all are! Another wonderful series of proverbs from Wise Man. Always looking forward to more. 🌹👏
March 2nd, 2025 07:18
Fun in (Sun)Day
sorenbarrett said:
Tobani these are actually all good advice. Another fun read on a Sunday. Loved then all
March 2nd, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
Tobani these are actually all good advice. Another fun read on a Sunday. Loved then all
March 2nd, 2025 04:34
Fun in (Sun)Day
cellinic said:
This poem triggers a long train of thoughts. best wishes
March 2nd, 2025 04:02
cellinic said:
This poem triggers a long train of thoughts. best wishes
March 2nd, 2025 04:02
Fun in (Sun)Day
arqios said:
Definitely will come to a volume wherein a book is compiled 🙏🏻🕊️
March 2nd, 2025 02:27
arqios said:
Definitely will come to a volume wherein a book is compiled 🙏🏻🕊️
March 2nd, 2025 02:27
Adventures of Mary and Harry (2)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This was a lot of fun, Tobani. I good follow up to your last go \'round with Mary and Harry. It felt a bit like the shell game, trying to figure out under whose shell Mary might appear! LOL! Well done, my friend! 😂👏🌹
March 1st, 2025 08:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This was a lot of fun, Tobani. I good follow up to your last go \'round with Mary and Harry. It felt a bit like the shell game, trying to figure out under whose shell Mary might appear! LOL! Well done, my friend! 😂👏🌹
March 1st, 2025 08:24
Adventures of Mary and Harry (2)
arqios said:
Now that’s the stuff of popular daytime drama 🎭 🙏🏻🕊
March 1st, 2025 06:42
arqios said:
Now that’s the stuff of popular daytime drama 🎭 🙏🏻🕊
March 1st, 2025 06:42
Adventures of Mary and Harry (2)
sorenbarrett said:
Words are like people they can be a lot of fun but difficult to work with. These brought a smile to the face and I thank you for that.
March 1st, 2025 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
Words are like people they can be a lot of fun but difficult to work with. These brought a smile to the face and I thank you for that.
March 1st, 2025 05:31
Adventures of Mary and Harry (2)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun writes Tobani.
Andy
March 1st, 2025 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun writes Tobani.
Andy
March 1st, 2025 02:53
To Be Alone
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a powerful poem Tobani, I hope all is well now.
Andy
March 1st, 2025 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a powerful poem Tobani, I hope all is well now.
Andy
March 1st, 2025 02:44
The Same Picture Frame
NafisaSB said:
a calm and soothing verse that makes me wish i could enjoy such days too
well written
February 28th, 2025 23:55
NafisaSB said:
a calm and soothing verse that makes me wish i could enjoy such days too
well written
February 28th, 2025 23:55
To Be Alone
Cheeky Missy said:
The wry smile whose sad eyes reflect from this ironic twist in concluding doesn\'t fail to garner affection since this tale cannot but resonate with many. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightful twist of humor with a haunting, damning poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing, dear Sir. I love it.
February 28th, 2025 12:06
Cheeky Missy said:
The wry smile whose sad eyes reflect from this ironic twist in concluding doesn\'t fail to garner affection since this tale cannot but resonate with many. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightful twist of humor with a haunting, damning poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing, dear Sir. I love it.
February 28th, 2025 12:06
To Be Alone
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love it. The truth of what we wish for and what we ultimately come to long for. That said, perhaps we want that in our older age because it is all we\'ve been accustomed to and, at that point, why bother? Not sure there is an answer as to why, but this poem rings really, really true to me. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
February 28th, 2025 07:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love it. The truth of what we wish for and what we ultimately come to long for. That said, perhaps we want that in our older age because it is all we\'ve been accustomed to and, at that point, why bother? Not sure there is an answer as to why, but this poem rings really, really true to me. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
February 28th, 2025 07:21
To Be Alone
Mutley Ravishes said:
I recall a story where the teller recalls a book case seeming to come alive after a session of meditation. That reminded me of a teacher telling me once that \"we\'re never really alone,\" with a twinkle in his eye.
Great write.
February 28th, 2025 06:59
Mutley Ravishes said:
I recall a story where the teller recalls a book case seeming to come alive after a session of meditation. That reminded me of a teacher telling me once that \"we\'re never really alone,\" with a twinkle in his eye.
Great write.
February 28th, 2025 06:59
To Be Alone
sorenbarrett said:
With so much struggle to be with others we all find in the end that we are all, everyone of us alone. No one can creep inside this shell or lay with our naked thoughts and be as one with us. We are ultimately alone. And that is okay. A wonderful write on the evolution of being alone.
February 28th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
With so much struggle to be with others we all find in the end that we are all, everyone of us alone. No one can creep inside this shell or lay with our naked thoughts and be as one with us. We are ultimately alone. And that is okay. A wonderful write on the evolution of being alone.
February 28th, 2025 04:28
If i Were Made Off Glass
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words would always be seen within you Tobani.
Andy
February 28th, 2025 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words would always be seen within you Tobani.
Andy
February 28th, 2025 02:46
If i Were Made Off Glass
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great question that causes each reader to reflect on how they look at and perceive others. Brilliant in its brevity, my friend. Well done on this! 🌹👏
February 27th, 2025 17:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great question that causes each reader to reflect on how they look at and perceive others. Brilliant in its brevity, my friend. Well done on this! 🌹👏
February 27th, 2025 17:54
If i Were Made Off Glass
Distant View said:
A playful poem! This made me smile, but it has a serious side to it too! Some people are more complicated than others -- some you can see right through, others are dark horses in deep waters!
February 27th, 2025 16:08
Distant View said:
A playful poem! This made me smile, but it has a serious side to it too! Some people are more complicated than others -- some you can see right through, others are dark horses in deep waters!
February 27th, 2025 16:08
If i Were Made Off Glass
David Wakeling said:
Raises an interesting question. We are travelling through the looking glass here
February 27th, 2025 15:03
David Wakeling said:
Raises an interesting question. We are travelling through the looking glass here
February 27th, 2025 15:03
If i Were Made Off Glass
Cheeky Missy said:
I wonder. Probably accidentally jostle and thereby shatter the glass, you know? Never see the real entity, just enjoy the fantasies it culls. Fascinating and pointedly rendered with excellent imagery and a teasing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 27th, 2025 11:17
Cheeky Missy said:
I wonder. Probably accidentally jostle and thereby shatter the glass, you know? Never see the real entity, just enjoy the fantasies it culls. Fascinating and pointedly rendered with excellent imagery and a teasing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 27th, 2025 11:17
If i Were Made Off Glass
sorenbarrett said:
Crystal clear this poem. A lovely thought to puzzle over. Many a time I have walked into a glass door not seeing it. Lovely
February 27th, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
Crystal clear this poem. A lovely thought to puzzle over. Many a time I have walked into a glass door not seeing it. Lovely
February 27th, 2025 04:37
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