Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better
Dan Williams said:
Another all too frequent story, well told. Nice work.
December 16th, 2024 00:53
Dan Williams said:
Another all too frequent story, well told. Nice work.
December 16th, 2024 00:53
Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
a most poignant write!! 😢
Abuse is a horrible thing
for anyone to have to go through,!! 🙏
Thank you for sharing!!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 15th, 2024 18:09
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
a most poignant write!! 😢
Abuse is a horrible thing
for anyone to have to go through,!! 🙏
Thank you for sharing!!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 15th, 2024 18:09
Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better
Cassie58 said:
A heart breaking write Tobani. Your notes made it even sadder. To be separated from your sibling and in care must have been extremely painful for you. Sorry you had to experience this.
December 15th, 2024 14:00
Cassie58 said:
A heart breaking write Tobani. Your notes made it even sadder. To be separated from your sibling and in care must have been extremely painful for you. Sorry you had to experience this.
December 15th, 2024 14:00
Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Very touching, simple lines with high impact. Fantastic!
December 15th, 2024 09:57
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Very touching, simple lines with high impact. Fantastic!
December 15th, 2024 09:57
Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better
arqios said:
That is so touching. My story is the reverse where Mum got between myself and the flying belt and planks of wood.We we’re both battered and bruised at the end of that beating. I knew then at 6 what it meant for someone to take a bullet with my name on it. Bless you, friend.
December 15th, 2024 08:22
arqios said:
That is so touching. My story is the reverse where Mum got between myself and the flying belt and planks of wood.We we’re both battered and bruised at the end of that beating. I knew then at 6 what it meant for someone to take a bullet with my name on it. Bless you, friend.
December 15th, 2024 08:22
Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful, tragic, write my friend. I could feel every word in this and, I concur with Soren, this is a great write at any age, let alone 12. I am so sad that this was your sister and your experience. I pray that you and your sister\'s were able to stay in contact and close despite the separation. Well done, friend. Well done! 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 07:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful, tragic, write my friend. I could feel every word in this and, I concur with Soren, this is a great write at any age, let alone 12. I am so sad that this was your sister and your experience. I pray that you and your sister\'s were able to stay in contact and close despite the separation. Well done, friend. Well done! 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 07:35
Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better
Neville said:
This is so very ragged and real .. it read like a kick to the stomach .. such poetry needs to be out here for the world to see what really goes on behind closed borders, shutters and doors .. 💜
December 15th, 2024 05:14
Neville said:
This is so very ragged and real .. it read like a kick to the stomach .. such poetry needs to be out here for the world to see what really goes on behind closed borders, shutters and doors .. 💜
December 15th, 2024 05:14
Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better
sorenbarrett said:
A most exceptional write for a 12 year old. A wonderful write at any age. This poem pulls empathy from the reader for a woman and a child. It is terrible when children have to become parents to their parents. The role reversal may make for strong children but it leaves scars. The feels are in this poem and that makes it art
December 15th, 2024 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
A most exceptional write for a 12 year old. A wonderful write at any age. This poem pulls empathy from the reader for a woman and a child. It is terrible when children have to become parents to their parents. The role reversal may make for strong children but it leaves scars. The feels are in this poem and that makes it art
December 15th, 2024 04:07
Vlad and Donald
Thad Wilk said:
Donald ( Mr. President )
will resolve this horrible
war most assuredly!
And Ukraine will
once again live safe and free! 🙏
Great poem my friend!!! 😀
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 14th, 2024 21:35
Thad Wilk said:
Donald ( Mr. President )
will resolve this horrible
war most assuredly!
And Ukraine will
once again live safe and free! 🙏
Great poem my friend!!! 😀
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 14th, 2024 21:35
Vlad and Donald
Doggerel Dave said:
Open solid piece with some keen insight into the current situation: “While USA paid for bombs continue to fill the Arab skies” plus next line.
Taking a step or two back, I don’t believe Zelenskyy should ever have played footsie with NATO and the US. This led to perhaps feelings of insecurity on Putin’s part.
But his invasion was/is not excusable.
December 14th, 2024 17:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Open solid piece with some keen insight into the current situation: “While USA paid for bombs continue to fill the Arab skies” plus next line.
Taking a step or two back, I don’t believe Zelenskyy should ever have played footsie with NATO and the US. This led to perhaps feelings of insecurity on Putin’s part.
But his invasion was/is not excusable.
December 14th, 2024 17:46
New Years Resolution
Cassie58 said:
Enjoyed the read Tobani. I no longer make new year resolutions and these days one year is very much like the last. All good wishes.
December 14th, 2024 16:55
Cassie58 said:
Enjoyed the read Tobani. I no longer make new year resolutions and these days one year is very much like the last. All good wishes.
December 14th, 2024 16:55
Vlad and Donald
David Wakeling said:
Every circus must have a clown.Looks like we have two clowns; Donald Mc Donald and Vlad the impaler. I really hope Trump gets assassinated soon.Very powerful and important poem
December 14th, 2024 15:17
David Wakeling said:
Every circus must have a clown.Looks like we have two clowns; Donald Mc Donald and Vlad the impaler. I really hope Trump gets assassinated soon.Very powerful and important poem
December 14th, 2024 15:17
Vlad and Donald
Neville said:
I am glad we are on the same side .. I share your concerns & fear for the future too .. Neville 👍
December 14th, 2024 12:44
Neville said:
I am glad we are on the same side .. I share your concerns & fear for the future too .. Neville 👍
December 14th, 2024 12:44
Vlad and Donald
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vlad and Donald...a wonderfully true poem that will, sadly, have some people reacting defensively (though I can never get that, really. Why are people so insecure in their political stances? Like if you believe it, own it. 🤷♂️). All the same, my friend, you are certainly expressing a reality that this poet sees, acknowledges and resists. For anyone who truly appreciates the so-called \"free world\" and \"peace on earth and good will toward people\", there is no other way to view what is going on in Ukraine! Evil is what evil does...evil does what evil is. I digress. A wonderfully true and urgent poem, friend! Thank you for this! 🌹🌹👏👏 Faved because of its importance!
December 14th, 2024 10:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vlad and Donald...a wonderfully true poem that will, sadly, have some people reacting defensively (though I can never get that, really. Why are people so insecure in their political stances? Like if you believe it, own it. 🤷♂️). All the same, my friend, you are certainly expressing a reality that this poet sees, acknowledges and resists. For anyone who truly appreciates the so-called \"free world\" and \"peace on earth and good will toward people\", there is no other way to view what is going on in Ukraine! Evil is what evil does...evil does what evil is. I digress. A wonderfully true and urgent poem, friend! Thank you for this! 🌹🌹👏👏 Faved because of its importance!
December 14th, 2024 10:35
Dreams and Nighmares
Princesslove said:
Excellent write. I really love this
Well done!!!
December 14th, 2024 08:37
Princesslove said:
Excellent write. I really love this
Well done!!!
December 14th, 2024 08:37
Vlad and Donald
sorenbarrett said:
Greed for power, wealth, and dominion are the basis of humanity it is what makes capitalism work and has a long history in war, politics and even religion. Hope that things can change.
December 14th, 2024 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
Greed for power, wealth, and dominion are the basis of humanity it is what makes capitalism work and has a long history in war, politics and even religion. Hope that things can change.
December 14th, 2024 04:36
Vlad and Donald
rin said:
Politicians will probably do what they think is the best way to resolve this war.
December 14th, 2024 04:28
rin said:
Politicians will probably do what they think is the best way to resolve this war.
December 14th, 2024 04:28
New Years Resolution
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Yes it is going to be new year with same muck. Nicely articulated. Liked it very much
December 14th, 2024 02:33
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Yes it is going to be new year with same muck. Nicely articulated. Liked it very much
December 14th, 2024 02:33
New Years Resolution
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome read 👍
and I agree!
It\'s the same old
shit, each year to me! 😢
Thanks for sharing
penned superbly,!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 13th, 2024 23:08
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome read 👍
and I agree!
It\'s the same old
shit, each year to me! 😢
Thanks for sharing
penned superbly,!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 13th, 2024 23:08
New Years Resolution
Doggerel Dave said:
You writ it... I\'ve read it... I\'ve commented... you can now say \'thank you\'...
PS: Enjoyed......
December 13th, 2024 20:34
Doggerel Dave said:
You writ it... I\'ve read it... I\'ve commented... you can now say \'thank you\'...
PS: Enjoyed......
December 13th, 2024 20:34
New Years Resolution
rin said:
As long as I am myself, the same thing will be repeated. As long as I do the same thing over and over again, it proves that I am also who I am.
December 13th, 2024 15:57
rin said:
As long as I am myself, the same thing will be repeated. As long as I do the same thing over and over again, it proves that I am also who I am.
December 13th, 2024 15:57
New Years Resolution
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Agreed...I don\'t worry about it. No faux promises to fail at keeping for me! LOL! A wonderfully relatable write, Tobani! Truly enjoyed my friend! ❤️
December 13th, 2024 08:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Agreed...I don\'t worry about it. No faux promises to fail at keeping for me! LOL! A wonderfully relatable write, Tobani! Truly enjoyed my friend! ❤️
December 13th, 2024 08:12
New Years Resolution
Neville said:
I fear I am one of the latter ones .. well penned tho\' & regardless .. Neville 👍
December 13th, 2024 03:40
Neville said:
I fear I am one of the latter ones .. well penned tho\' & regardless .. Neville 👍
December 13th, 2024 03:40
M\"mmm !!!
Thad Wilk said:
Sounds like he\\she
is beating around
the bush in a way!¿
Get to the point
not all this delay!🤣
Great read, much enjoyed!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 12th, 2024 16:47
Thad Wilk said:
Sounds like he\\she
is beating around
the bush in a way!¿
Get to the point
not all this delay!🤣
Great read, much enjoyed!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 12th, 2024 16:47
M\"mmm !!!
Cassie58 said:
There’s alot of dithering here Tobani until the final No which is in larger type and more defined. A fun poem. Thank you.
December 12th, 2024 12:44
Cassie58 said:
There’s alot of dithering here Tobani until the final No which is in larger type and more defined. A fun poem. Thank you.
December 12th, 2024 12:44
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