Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence



New Years Resolution
Neville said:



I fear I am one of the latter ones .. well penned tho\' & regardless .. Neville ๐Ÿ‘

December 13th, 2024 03:40

M\"mmm !!!
Thad Wilk said:

Sounds like he\\she
is beating around
the bush in a way!ยฟ
Get to the point
not all this delay!๐Ÿคฃ
Great read, much enjoyed!! ๐Ÿ‘
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ peace Thad

December 12th, 2024 16:47

M\"mmm !!!
Cassie58 said:

Thereโ€™s alot of dithering here Tobani until the final No which is in larger type and more defined. A fun poem. Thank you.

December 12th, 2024 12:44

M\"mmm !!!
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 12th, 2024 10:52

M\"mmm !!!
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Ahโ€ฆall the would be โ€œnosโ€ disguised in โ€œmaybesโ€โ€ฆleaving us hanging at the inevitable no to come. Great poem, Tobani! Masterful! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘ Faved!

December 12th, 2024 06:49

M\"mmm !!!
Neville said:



I think you are trying to buy time by referring to the bits at the far end of a bears arms .. ๐Ÿป๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ‘

December 12th, 2024 04:25

M\"mmm !!!
sorenbarrett said:

Certainly! What a fun read

December 12th, 2024 04:23

M\"mmm !!!
arqios said:

Sometimes we fill our communication with these words to buy more time to come up with a decision/s that we can live with.

December 12th, 2024 04:07

M\"mmm !!!
David Wakeling said:

Sounds like my girlfriend on a date. Always ends in NO.Just kidding

December 12th, 2024 03:55

Mothers Tears in There Eyes
arqios said:

Not many get a happy ending. Glad this one did!

December 12th, 2024 03:25

M\"mmm !!!
Cheeky Missy said:

Fascinating and fun, rather. A skeleton which flexes its joints and manages to wink at the reader, I like it. Thank you for sharing.

December 12th, 2024 01:55

M\"mmm !!!
cellinic said:

Nice and comprehensive!

December 12th, 2024 01:35

M\"mmm !!!
rin said:

These are words that often appear during machine translation. This shows that I often use it without realizing it.

December 12th, 2024 01:15

Mothers Tears in There Eyes
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful.

December 11th, 2024 22:05

Mothers Tears in There Eyes
Thad Wilk said:

A terrific poem,
John was one of the
lucky ones to return
alive, ๐Ÿ™ love a happy
ending, ๐Ÿ‘
Wonderfully woven
much enjoyed my friend!!
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

December 11th, 2024 21:10

Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head)
GenXer Shamrocker โ˜˜๏ธ said:

The bravery and courage it took to write this is admirable! You bring light to what is so dark and stigmatized. A good write!

December 11th, 2024 10:05

Mothers Tears in There Eyes
Neville said:



you write so well on a subject that many shy away from because it hurts so much to ponder upon the consequences of war in any great detail .. there are not often happy endings when it comes to war .. I am glad you went down that particular route .. Neville ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ‘

December 11th, 2024 09:46

Mothers Tears in There Eyes
cellinic said:

A very nice and deep work, thank you!

December 11th, 2024 08:03

Dreams and Nighmares
NafisaSB said:

a poignant and beautiful write - hope the nightmares end soon, and lovely dreams color your sleep

December 11th, 2024 06:55

Mothers Tears in There Eyes
Cassie58 said:

I have often put myself into the shoes of a mother seeing her son off to war. Unbearable sadness. When he comes home, joyful celebration and gratitude. And if he doesnโ€™t come home her hope is extinguished. She will grieve for the rest of her days. A thought provoking write Tobani. Have a good day.

December 11th, 2024 05:41

Mothers Tears in There Eyes
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wonderful poem, as was yesterdays. This poem really touches the heart! Well done, my friend! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

December 11th, 2024 05:29

Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head)
Dan Williams said:

Wow. This is almost a detailed menu of madness. I was in a psyche ward for a while where I learned that people who say that voices they claim to hear, which I previously dismissed, are very real. Nice work here.

December 11th, 2024 01:25

Mothers Tears in There Eyes
rin said:

I felt that the happy ending at the end was the author\'s wish. I read something good

December 11th, 2024 01:03

Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head)
Thad Wilk said:

Great poem and
emotions penned!! ๐Ÿ™
Dark and deep,
and eloquently
woven my friend!! ๐Ÿ‘
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

December 10th, 2024 22:16

Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head)
Mutley Ravishes said:

\"Thoughts are not the problem. Thinking you are the thoughts is the problem!\" Anon.
Well, lots of work to do! You are so right in identifying that most of the thoughts that arise are negative.

December 10th, 2024 18:27

Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head)
rawaneigh.99 said:

I think I might relate to this, excellent written

December 10th, 2024 14:37

Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head)
Jerry Reynolds said:

Fine write, Tobani. Well, you are never alone, and you always outnumber your critics by at least two to one.

December 10th, 2024 14:34

Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head)
Neville said:



its not hard to imagine how frustrating and possibly frightening these voices you experience are from your description of them .. whether they are friends or not probably depends on what they are variously saying and your thoughts on the matter .. I would be more than happy to receive a pm if you would like to discuss or explore any further than time or space currently permits .. just nod if you need to .. with kindest regards and with much respect also .. Neville

December 10th, 2024 13:37

Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head)
Cassie58 said:

I have a relative who at times hears voices, I know just how distressing that can be, especially if it is all negative talk. An informative and brave write Tobani. A good composition.

December 10th, 2024 12:43

We are not in Control (Ad Man)
sorenbarrett said:

The old addage that you can\'t give what you don\'t have no longer applies. Great write

December 10th, 2024 11:57



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