Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence



Figment of Your Imagination
RSM0812 said:

People only think they know you. They really don\'t.

February 24th, 2025 23:55

Figment of Your Imagination
Thomas W Case said:

Boom. You nailed it.

February 24th, 2025 12:05

Figment of Your Imagination
Bloomingdale said:

Simple and sends the message ❀️

February 24th, 2025 11:41

Figment of Your Imagination
Tristan Robert Lange said:

What can be said other than Truth πŸ’―πŸŒΉπŸ‘ Well done on this brief little poetic reality check!

February 24th, 2025 11:38

Figment of Your Imagination
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed tis so. And my imagination is a figment itself. A truth well spoken.

February 24th, 2025 04:15

Figment of Your Imagination
arqios said:

Love this. It counters the idea of the objective second set of eyes πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ‘€

February 24th, 2025 03:47

Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
Goldfinch60 said:

Some true words there Tobani, fun write.

Andy

February 24th, 2025 02:44

Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! Loving this series, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ‘

February 23rd, 2025 22:29

Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
hzugman said:

Very nicely done. Good read.

February 23rd, 2025 15:42

Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work.

February 23rd, 2025 15:41

Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
Neville said:



No aint that the bloomin truth .. wise men should take it easy on Sundays .. N

February 23rd, 2025 14:10

Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
John Prophet said:

Well said. John

February 23rd, 2025 07:10

Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
sorenbarrett said:

Wisdom found here. It is in the trash that we find it and in sadness humor. I love these little gems they always give another look at things and add a smile. Nicely done

February 23rd, 2025 05:44

Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
arqios said:

This series is becoming a regular delight hereπŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

February 23rd, 2025 03:51

The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun words Tobani. I hope Harry recovers.

Andy

February 23rd, 2025 02:48

The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
Tony36 said:

Love it

February 22nd, 2025 10:35

The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

A lot of fun. These are great! Happy weekend, my friend!

February 22nd, 2025 09:55

The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
arqios said:

Kinda wondering what happened to Jack… or is this another β€˜Mary’? Still a fun read as promised πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

February 22nd, 2025 06:02

The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
Mutley Ravishes said:

Harry has balls like balloons
He\'ll be appearing in
A South Park cartoon
Anytime soon!

Enjoyed the read!

February 22nd, 2025 05:39

The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
sorenbarrett said:

Poor Harry \'twas not merry because of hairy Mary. Hairy wished to tarry Mary was contrary kicked him in the berry which he was unable to parry. All I want to know is what happened to Larry and Rosemary. A fun read that brightened the day

February 22nd, 2025 04:55

The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
David Wakeling said:

Great fun.Brightened my day

February 22nd, 2025 04:51

I Can`t Hide It
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words Tobani, that anger can be destructive so it is better to keep it hidden.

Andy

February 22nd, 2025 02:55

I Can`t Hide It
faie said:

A very good poem about emotions and within.

February 21st, 2025 21:36

The Same Picture Frame
faie said:

A very good poem that identifies routine and aging.

February 21st, 2025 21:19

I Can`t Hide It
Salvia.S said:

This makes the readers curious until they read the last line. Powerful and well written!

February 21st, 2025 20:58

I Can`t Hide It
Tristan Robert Lange said:

The question for me is, why hide it? Of course, there are reasons for doing so, but i have only ever found that hiding my anger makes me even more angry. All the same, brilliant expression my friend. Thought-provoking and worth a fave! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

February 21st, 2025 11:13

I Can`t Hide It
2781 said:

Looks like you can\'t judge a book by its cover.

February 21st, 2025 09:08

I Can`t Hide It
Cassie58 said:

All revealed in the final line. Anger is not a pleasant emotion to deal with it. Most people experience it at differing levels. Some can hide it, others not do. I like the way you led us down the garden path to find the solution. Have a good day Tobani.

February 21st, 2025 07:30

I Can`t Hide It
Mutley Ravishes said:

I once read that when anger is purified it leads to clarity.
You kept me guessing what \"it\" is until the last line! Great write.

February 21st, 2025 07:26

I Can`t Hide It
David Wakeling said:

Anger is a cross to bare.Powerful poem

February 21st, 2025 06:14



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